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aap mein vo baat thi -
7th November 2006, 04:32 PM
kahan kisi aur kee itni aukaat thi
aapne katl kiya, aap mein vo baat thi aap hee to jaanti dil kee ek ek baat thi aapne chot dee,aap mein vo baat thi aap the saath to jindagi bhi saath thi aapne chood diya, aap mein vo baat thi humne diya dil sambhaal kar rakhne kee baat thi aapne tod diya ,aap mein vo baat thi aap kahe to din aap kahe to raat thi aapne kaha raat,aap mein vo baat thi jalta tha pyaar ka chiraag roshne bhi saath thi aapne bujha diya ,aap mein vo baat thi do kadam chale the ,aur do kadam kee baat thi aapne badali raah,aap mein vo baat thi kadamon mein aapke mere dil meri saugaat thi aapne kuchal diya ,aap mein vo baat thi एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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7th November 2006, 09:04 PM
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aru ji buhut acha laga parrh ker "aap main woh baat thi" aap hee to jaanti dil kee ek ek baat thi aapne chot dee,aap mein vo baat thi ye sher buhut hi acha laga keep it up |
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9th November 2006, 04:34 PM
thanx moona jee ,aapko aaacha laga jaankar khushi huee, aise hee haunsla afzai karterahiye ,
thx once more एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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9th November 2006, 11:05 PM
waah !
kyaa baat kahi hai.... dil ko choo gayi. bahut badhiya arvind ji.... bahut hi badhiya. ghazal ka matla khas taur pe pasand aaya. aap ne katl kiyaa... aap me woh baat thi... subhaan allah. Regards, Ziyaad. |
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4th May 2012, 09:05 PM
thanx ziyaad jee, aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya. Sorry for late reply.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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28th May 2012, 01:12 PM
Arvindji....
Beautifully expressed...... real facts when someone is truly in luv...... Bahut achi lagi... thanks for sharing..... I really liked ur custom lines "uske liye vo jindagi ke kuch pal the mere liye vo kuch pal hee jindagi the". Suno… Aie… Zindagi….. Is bar jate jate…. Jara milti jana…… |
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30th May 2012, 12:56 PM
aru ji good lines.. keep writing
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7th July 2012, 11:19 PM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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10th August 2012, 12:47 PM
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एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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10th August 2012, 08:44 PM
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................................................ path par kaante bahut hain tere par manjil par jaana too.ne dar na jatilata se jeewan ki isko saral banana too.ne pasat na hone paye honsle khud ka sahas khud hi juta le 
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10th August 2012, 09:59 PM
very nice aru ji................................................ ...............
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13th August 2012, 10:00 AM
salaam aru saheb,
kahan kisi aur kee itni aukaat thi aapne katl kiya, aap mein vo baat thi yeh lines bahut khub... umdaa kalam ... umeed hai aap aise hi likhte rahe... yun toh raho main aksar dost mil jaya karte hai, har dost aise joh ghum se saath diyaa karte hai... some kind of battle. " 220-151-7878 |
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5th October 2012, 11:25 PM
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Bahut achi lines hai ...har pankti ka arth dil ko chu dene wala hain.Aise hi likhte rahiye Aapki dost, Saloni  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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18th October 2012, 10:45 AM
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Aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya. एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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18th December 2012, 10:45 PM
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Wah!.....bohat khoob arvind ji..... Baat baat me bohat kuch keh diya aapne....kya baat hai.....:-) Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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19th January 2013, 09:56 PM
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19th January 2013, 10:57 PM
very nice Arvind bhai....................................
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7th April 2014, 01:25 PM
Do kadam saath chale aur do kadam ki baat thi ,
aapne badli rah ,aap mein.vo baat thi. Arvind ji kya kahun ...apka dard mehsoos kar raha hun ... Teer gahra laga hai mere see mein kabhi , lahu bhi tapka nahi per zigar chalni ho.gaya. kuch aisa hi laga mujhe aapke kalaam ko per ke .. yun kab tak bewajah rulaoge is kadar humko , ab tau hichkiyon ne siskiyon ka saath chor diya hai. Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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8th April 2014, 10:06 AM
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bahot hi khub qalaam hai........... Dil se daad qbul kariye............... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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17th July 2014, 09:27 PM
OTE=aadeil;458191]Arvindjee,
bahot hi khub qalaam hai........... Dil se daad qbul kariye...............[/QUOTE] Thanx aadil jee................................... एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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18th July 2014, 01:07 AM
Wahh.. Arvind Ji,,
Boht khooob.... Mehfil ki raunaq ko younhi barqarar rakhiye ga,, DuaooN k saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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