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Ghazal - Ek patThar ko yuuN Khuda karke -
4th June 2004, 11:59 PM
Aziizaan-e-mehfil
Arsa-e-taveel ke baa'd haazir ho raha huuN. Kaam ki masruufiyaat aur chand haalaat ne kuch kehne aur is mehfil meN ziyadah waqt dene ka mauqa hi nahiiN diya. Baharhaal maa'zrat chaahte hue ye halki-phulki si ghazal pesh kar raha huuN. Apni aaraa se zaruur nawaziyega. ---------------------------------------------- GHAZAL Ek patThar ko yuuN Khuda karke Kya milaa aisa tajarba karke Dard baRhta gaya davaa karke Lmaha-lamha, zara-zara karke Ban gayii baddua Khushi wo hi Jis ko maanga kiye dua karke ZaKhm khaaye baRe-baRe hamne Uss sey choti sii ilteja karke Zindagi aazmaye jii bharke Hum bhi nikle haiN hosla karke Raaste meN yaqiiN mila lekin Wo bhi jaata raha dagha karke Sirf yaadeN hi humne paayii haiN Bhool jaane ka faisla karke Usski raahoN ka ruKh agar karna ZaKhm khaane ka hosla karke Yaad rakhna bhalaii auroN ki Bhuul jaana magar bahala karke Khaaksaar Praveen Saxena manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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30th October 2014, 06:08 PM
Praveen saahab, aadaab aur namaste
voh pehle dinoN ki yaad aa gayi aapki yeh khoobsuurat Ghazal paDh kar tam'aam ash'aar behadd pasaNd aaye daad "Tikaa" lijiye mohtaram rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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31st October 2014, 12:03 AM
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muje hairaani ho rhi hai yeh dekh kar ki etni umda gazal par etne saaloN tak kisi ki nazar hi nahi gye, bahut hi kamaal ka likha hai aapne, dilli mubarakbaad kabool kijiye. Shukriya Maikash ji, aapki vajha se aaj ham es poetry ko pad paaye hai.  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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6th November 2014, 07:05 PM
Dear Praveen ji,
Bahut khub likha hai aapne.. padh ke bada hi sukun mila..aise likhate rahein.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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7th November 2014, 08:23 PM
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nacheez ki daad qubool farmaayein YunHi is bazm ko roshan karte rahiYeGaa.. Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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