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23rd May 2009, 04:16 PM
Parbaton se takrane ka hunar janta huN maY
Aabsharon sa utarne ka hunar janta huN maY dekh mere dil mein sabar ke paimane kitne hai Musibaton se guzarne ka hunar janta huN maY Kya jaano tum ke is dil mein khalish kis baat ki Tookdon se sawarne ka hunar Janta huN maY Karle kitne bhi koshishe mujhe badnaam karne ki Daagdaron se nikharne ka hunar janta huN maY Mat soch ke har pal main toot ker bikhar raha huN Khushbuon se bikharne ka hunar janta huN maY Mat rok mujhe In nigahon mein doob jaane de Samandaron se terne ka hunar janta huN maY Dekhi hai veerano se bhi aabad hone ki Kwahish Ujad jane se basarne ka hunar janta huN maY 
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23rd May 2009, 04:55 PM
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23rd May 2009, 10:15 PM
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Meri is rachna ko padhne aur sarahne ka bahut bahut shukriya.... And aisi bhi koi tariif ki zaruraat nahi dost ke tumko alfaaz dhundne Pade.... aapka yehi replly bahut hai mere liye.. And thanks again dost.. Yunhi sath banaye rakhana...
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23rd May 2009, 10:26 PM
Wah wah wah...
 mere bhai.. kya likha hai.. Teri Hindi wali lines dekh ke..tere ko hindi me daad deta huN. dost teri yeh rachana..ek naye aayam ki or tera ek naya kadam hai. yuh hi khayaloo ki justjoo me, aapne khwaboo ko sawarooo unhe ek naya roop deke,, yuh hi prastoot karte rahoo.. Meri aur se tumhe...rep ++  -- Omi Quote:
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24th May 2009, 05:07 AM
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ek khubsoorat ghazal per daad Sameer ji tusi gr8 ho ghazal mujhe bahot bahot .................pasand aayi khus rahiye Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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24th May 2009, 06:17 AM
hi sameer ji...
aapki yeh ghazal dil ko chu c gaye ... khooba kaha aapne ..... likhte raheye... take care ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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Waise mujhe urdu aati bhi nahi  Bhai main har rachana mein bus yehi khayal rakhata hun ke mujhe urdu nahi aati aisa kisi ko na lage.... meri kavita en jyadatar ishq per hi hoti hai per phir bhi koi usme chupi hindi ko samajh nahi pata per bhai tumne kaise meri hindi ko samjh gaye... Wel thanks for your appriciation... and yunhi apna sath banaye rakhana dost.....
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24th May 2009, 04:47 PM
aab maiN kisi Queen Victoria ke yaha England me to paida nahi hua tha ki teri typical hindi naa samjh pau..
Indian huN.. Hindi ka har shabd achee se jaNta huN.. tuh kaisi bhi hindi likhe.. hum samjh lenge ree.. Ji jaroor janab... sath yuh hi banaye rakhenge.. bas log hume saQ se naa dekhe.. hahahahah.. keep writting Bro.. cyaa Quote:
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24th May 2009, 05:58 PM
Sameer...........bahut accha likha hai aapne, muje aapki es shayri mein sabse acchi baat yeh lagi ki khud mein yakeeN hai aapko.....aur agar khud par yakeeN ho to kuch bhi na-mumkin nahi hai....sab kuch mumkin hai...yeh yakeeN bana rahe....aur aap apni manzil par pahuNcho.
duao.n ke saath diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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25th May 2009, 03:40 PM
Bohat Khoob Khwaish Ji...
Har Shabd Jaise Jeena Sikha RAhi Ho.. Bohat Khoob... 
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25th May 2009, 04:02 PM
Dear,
bahut khub likha aapne.. hunar ki baat bahut achchhi lagi..bas yuN hi likhate rahiye... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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26th May 2009, 11:05 AM
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Ujaar zindagi hai aur rakhta hun aabaad hone ki kwahish viraaniyoen se basarne ka hunar jaanta hun maY ek achi koshish rahi..lekin gar aap meri baat ka bura na maane to yeh kehna chaahta hun ki aapka hunar jaanta hun maY aur yeh kaavish aapke hunar se ru-ba-roo nahi karaati..Sameer ji aap mere dost hai aur ek dost ki haisiyat se hi maine apni do kauri ki raaey di hai..maiN koi expert nahin hun...gar koi bhi baat buri lagi ho to dil pe naa lena.. aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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27th May 2009, 03:00 PM
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aapko hamari koshish pasand aayi mano hamari koshish kamyab hui.. aage bhi aapka sath bana rahe yehi ummid... duaoN ke sath.. Ijazat dijiye..
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27th May 2009, 03:06 PM
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aapko hamari gazal pasand aayi, aur aapne hounsal afzai ki tahe dilse shukraguzar huN.. Jii koshish jaari hai... apna sath banaye rakhiye.. Khush rahiye..
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27th May 2009, 03:10 PM
sameer
Man'na padega ke tum itne saare hunar jante ho!! Good job... Purvi  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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27th May 2009, 03:12 PM
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Aapki hounsla afzai ka behad shukra guzar huN... Haan khud mein kafi yakin hai mujhe isliye hi yeh creation ho gayi... Aameen aisa hi ho mera yakin kuch ek namunkin ko bhi munkin kar de to mujhe sabse jyada khushi hogi... Allah mere yakeen ko barqarar rakhe...... DuaoN ka shukriya apna sath banaye rakhiye aur aapne replly se hounsla badhate rahiye... Khush rahiye...
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28th May 2009, 02:54 PM
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aapka replly dekhker achcha laga aur ummid hai aur aage bhi aapka sath milta rahenga.. Thanks you very much.. God Bless You..
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28th May 2009, 02:57 PM
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Yeh aapka naam hai bada pyara hai, Akela, Tanha achche meanings hai.. Jee koshish jaari hai.. Apna sath banaye rakhiye aur apni rai se nawazte rahiye.. Khush rahiye pe Akant mein nahi... Mehfil mein
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28th May 2009, 03:05 PM
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28th May 2009, 03:13 PM
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aapka replly apni post per dekh khushi hui janab ko jo fursat to mili... Haan main continuity ko rakhana chahata tha per bhai isse jyada mere zahen mein alfaz nahi aa raha the so rukna hi pada... Maine makhte ke liye aur bhi dusra likha hai per woh thoda late zahen mein aaya.. Aapne bhi sahi kaha hai... Maqta dekhiye... Kya chu payengi muflisi bhi tere daman ko Kwahish GurbatoN se ubharne ka hunar Janta HuN maY Bhai aap jaise doston ki badolat hi to mehfil mein hai agar aap logon ki rai aur salah nahi mili to yeh Sameer ki Kwahish adhuri hi reh jayengii.. Aapke rai aur replly ka the dil se shukriya Yunhi aapna sath banaye rakhiye... Khush rahiye..
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29th May 2009, 03:00 PM
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Arey, Pura ek hafta laga hai gazal ko complate karne ke liye... Phir bhi gadbad ho gayi.....  Jii aapka bahut bahut shukriya Gazal ko pasand karne ke liye.... Achcha kya reh gaya zara bataiyenga... Mujhe kuch sikhane milenga.... Galti mauf naa karen galtiyan poit out kare to behter hoga............... Arey Bhai main koi shayar nahi per aap logon ka yunhi sath bana raha to Shayad jald hi ban jaunga...
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29th May 2009, 06:30 PM
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bahut khoob SAMEER............khas karke upar ke do aashar bahut khoob hai....ehsaas achche hai....keep writing dear...  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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30th May 2009, 02:22 PM
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Aisa kuch Nahi Hai Dii......... Agar in HunaroN ko ahsaas ki Nazar se aap samjhi hai to Yeh sab Hunar mujh mein hai... aur sab mein hai isme koi shak nahi... Thanks a Lot.... aage bhi aapka sath bana rahe bus yehi dua..
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31st May 2009, 04:41 PM
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Bahut dino baad aapko SDC per dekh achcha laga.. Ahsaas ko ahsaas achche lage shukriya................. Per aap bhi kuch kaam nahi hai... Koshish jaari hai...... Ummid hai aage bhi aapka saath bana rahenga...
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4th June 2009, 09:53 PM
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Yunhi sath banaye rakhana... Izzat nawazish ka shukriya.... Khush raho ...
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5th June 2009, 05:36 PM
bohat khoob janab pasand aya apka likha likhte rahiye.
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6th June 2009, 02:27 PM
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Hamarii koshish ko padhne aur sarhane ka bahut bahut shukriya... Ummid hai aage bhi aapka sath milta rahenga....
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30th June 2009, 06:24 PM
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maufi chahunga aapko main tab tafsira nahi de paya... Actually main aapka replly hi nahi samjha tha........... Waise bhi log mujhe tube kehte hai jo der se jalti hai.. chaliye aab tafsira de deta huN......... Aap to bade shayar hai Bus thode se ahsaas se samjhiye shayad aasani se samjh jayenge............ Parbaton se takrane ka hunar janta huN maY Aabsharon sa utarne ka hunar janta huN maY Parbat ( kisi bhi bade admise) takrane ka hunar janta hun may Aabshar jo kitni bhi uperse utre to bhi apna waqar nahi khote... usi tarha ka waqar rakhata huN may... dekh mere dil mein sabar ke paimane kitne hai Musibaton se guzarne ka hunar janta huN maY Yahan to kuch samjhane ki zarurat hi nahi....... It's normal Kya jaano tum ke is dil mein khalish kis baat ki Tookdon se sawarne ka hunar Janta huN maY Yahan batana chahunga may tukdon se sawarne ka hunar janta hun phir bhi mere dil mein kisi aur baat ka dard hai, woh yeh ke main aab phir tukdon mein bikharna nahi chahta......... Karle kitne bhi koshishe mujhe badnaam karne ki Daagdaron se nikharne ka hunar janta huN maY Shayad yahan bhi kuch safai dene ki zarurat nahi hogi...Yahan daagdaro nikharne ka hunar main un daagdar logon ke saath rehne ke baad hi sikha huN... Mat soch ke har pal main toot ker bikhar raha huN Khushbuon se bikharne ka hunar janta huN maY Hmm aap yahan confuse the .... aap jante hai khushbu bikharti to hai but tukdon mein baant ker nahi eksaa bikharti hai.. Yahan main aapne us yaar se keh raha hun apne us chahane wale se keh raha hun ke tum yeh mat socho ke main toot ker bikhar raha hun first line mein bikharne ke matlab tukdon mein bikharna hai.. phir second line mein khushbu sa bikharna jo tukdon mein nahi bikharti.. Mat rok mujhe In nigahon mein doob jaane de Samandaron se terne ka hunar janta huN maY Yahan koi safaai dene ki shayad zarurat nahi hai... Dekhi hai veerano se bhi aabad hone ki Kwahish Ujad jane se basarne ka hunar janta huN maY Maqte mein thodi gadbad hui hai jis per main aapki rai se sehmat huN............ Bus may bee now no daubts in your mind........... Hope your are satisfied from it........... Be happy ... God bless you...
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19th August 2010, 02:59 PM
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ji very nice creation......................... Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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19th August 2010, 03:37 PM
sameer ji kabil e tareef hai ye ahsaas... dil se daad
Karle kitne bhi koshishe mujhe badnaam karne ki Daagdaron se nikharne ka hunar janta huN maY 07666027379,09041116001,09876442643, 09417142513,09914097007,09625494246 Mail: parveenkomal@parveenkomal.com www.parveenkomal.com/blog { BURA NA SUNENGE BURA NA DEKHENGE BURA NA BOLENGE ACHHA LIKHENGE,KOI BURA KAHEGA TO KHUD KO TATOLENGE }  Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de }QadeerToopchi{ |
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22nd August 2010, 07:22 PM
behad khoobsoorat ahsaas dil sa daad
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