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Dil ki hasrat...........( Ghayel ) -
16th September 2010, 03:39 PM
Ek nayee aag phir lagi hai abhi Dil ki hasrat koi jali hai abhi Kaun kehta hai door woh humse Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi Waqt_e_sajda khayaal aaya hai Dil me khwaish koi buri hai abhi Logh khud me dafan bhi hote hai Dil me chahat kaiee dabi hai abhi Jaisi marzi teri guzari hai Jaisi kal thi zindagi hai abhi Teri surat hai chand si lekin Teri seerat kaha bhali hai abhi  Sajid Ghayel Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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16th September 2010, 05:52 PM
Kaun kehta hai door woh humse
Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi Kaun kehta hai door woh humse Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi Good One...... Sajid Bhai ! Very Nice Creation... dil se daad hazir hai... aise hi behtar kalaam ke saath aate rahen aage bhi... khush rahen... duaaon ke saath...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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16th September 2010, 06:22 PM
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yeh khoob rahaa Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं |
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17th September 2010, 05:37 PM
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ghayal sahab.....kin lafzo me aapki taareef karu....samajh nahi aa rah hai..... itna kamaal ki beherbandi ki hai...ki hai ..ki lab sil gaye.....khushi se seeTee bhi nahi bajaa paa raha hu.....agar mera ghar ground floor par hota to zarur khushi ke maare apne balcony se kuud jata..... ek syllable bhi apke meter me bharti ka nahi hai..... poori ghazal me sirf aur sirf ek misre me bahut bahot mamuli meter laDkhdaya hai..vo hai Jaisi kal thi (___)zindagi hai abhi...bus yaha ek chota harf/lafz ki zarurat hai aaj wakai itni khushi hui hai ki bayaa na kar paa raha hu.... aaj ek naya saajid sahab ka janm huaa hai.... aapki fikr hamesha bemisaal rahi hai....isliye aap GFFC ke malik hai ab apke paas tecnic bhi hai aur urdu aapki maadri zabaan to hai hi.... mujhe poora yakeeen hai ki ek din ham sabko kahenge ki saajid sahab to hamaare dost hai ...aap itne famous ho jayenge...aap dekhna bus lage rahiyega ab...ab koi bebeher ghazal nahi sunana....aaj ke baad ise ek challenge hi samjh lijiye khudse..... bhale 10 din ka gap aa jaaye...... my salute to you sir regards |
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21st September 2010, 10:52 PM
Kaun kehta hai door woh humse Ek sadaa phir wahi suni hai abhi Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi BOHAT KHOOB SAJID SAHAB............. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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21st September 2010, 11:08 PM
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sajid bhai radhe radhe bahut khoob.......dil se daad........ duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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22nd September 2010, 08:09 PM
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mujhe behad khushi hui aapka ye qalaam padh kar.... har sher dil meiN utar gaya hai...bahut khoob bhai...keep it up... daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...  Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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22nd September 2010, 08:23 PM
Sajid,
wahhhhhhhh.... bahut khoob dost.... har ek sher kaabil-e-tarif hai... aapke ye ehsaas mere dil me utar gaye... dil se daad hazir hai.... yuhi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye.... rep+++++++++++++ added  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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Main shayar to nahin.....
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24th September 2010, 06:51 PM
Humse mayoos woh bhi rehte hai
Jinse rishta koi nahi hai abhi Teri surat hai chand si lekin Teri seerat kaha bhali hai abhi ye lines bahut pyaari laggein .... sajid bhai ..bahut hee khoobsoorati se byaan kiya hai aapne... dil se daad deta hoon... reps.++++++++++ added एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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9th October 2010, 04:53 PM
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Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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11th March 2011, 02:38 AM
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Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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11th March 2011, 09:50 AM
Sajid bhai, ummeed hai khairiyat se honge....
aaj aapke is kalaam pe nazar gayeee, sabse pahle kahna chahunga pahla misra padhte hi mujhe ek ghazal ki yaad aa gai..... Dil me ek laher si uthi hai abhi, koi taaza hawaa chali hai abhi..... Fir poori ghazal padhta gaya to kahin se ye na laga ki ye kalaam kuch aur hai, yoon laga wahi ghazal chalti jaa rahi hai aur isme naye sher add hue jaa rahe hain... beherbandi ki tareef zidd saahab kar chuke hain, ab hame itni aqqal to hai nahi behar ki, lekin ise padhte waqt kahin aisa na laga ke rythem toot raha hai... bahot khoob kalaam, bahot sacchee koshish........ AAge bhi intezaar rahega aise nagmoN ka...... apna khayaal rakhiyega. shaad.... |
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