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22nd May 2010, 10:25 AM
Namaskaar Dosto.n,
Mera SDC pariwar ke sath bahut purana rishta to nahi hai par haan,bahut gehra rishta jarur hai,isliye yaha.n maujud sabhi sadasyo.n se bhi main khud ko juDa hua mehsus karti hoon. Jaisa ke aap sabhi jaantee hi haiN ke main mainly hindi poetry likhti hoon. Par maiN ab apne Papa ki ek adhoori Khwahish puri karna chahti hoon. Vo humesha chahte the maiN Novel likhu.N...Unke samne aisa nahi.n kar payii par ab karna chahti hu. Kya aapko lagta hai ke maiN likh sakti hoon? And, please please guide me for the same. Your suggestions,critiques all are welcomed.Please Reply what you Think. Regards, Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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22nd May 2010, 11:59 AM
hindi me upanyas likhna ho to best person sdc par guide karne ke liye naresh mehra sahab hai....aap inse juruur contact kijiye kyuki vo published upanyaaskaar hai reputed publications se....
aur bahut milansaaar vyakti hai...aapko jururr help karenge... |
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22nd May 2010, 12:36 PM
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khaaksaar ke liye itnaa bada viigyaapan.... ! yeh sab aapka badaapan hai...zidd sahab !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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22nd May 2010, 01:17 PM
Ritu Ji...... Jitni mujhe upaniyaas ke baarme samajh aur jaankari hai...uske tehat help zarur kar sakta hu....zidd sahab ne toh kuch jiyada bada upaniyaaskaar bana diya....aisa bilkul nahi hai....
Upaniyaas ke liye.....badi ekaagartaa ki zarurat hoti hai..... kahaani ke bade roop ko upaniyaas kehte hai....pehle kahaani ke subject ka chunaav kare.....phir paatr iisthaan ghaataaon sambandhon ko silsilewaar aur ghoomaav deke jodhna hota hai........taaki padhne waale ki jigyaasa aakhir tak bani rahen.... likhne se pehle kuch acche lekhko ke upaniyaas padhiye...kahaani ko kaise shuru aur ant kiya jata hai....kiyonki upaniyaas ki shuruaat aur ant bahut maayne rakhta hai.... kuch abhiyaas hone ke baad kahaani ke paatr hi kahaani ko aage badhaate jaate hai.....isthaan aur ghatnaao ka chitran bhi acche se karna aana chaahiye...rishton ko samajhate hue .....unki samvaad shaili se kahaani bhatakni nahi chaahiye aur rukni bhi nahi chaahiye....balki aage badhti nazar aana hi likhakak ki kalakaari hai .... aise toh isme bahut saari baate hai....aap likhna shuru kariye...jaha mushkil aaye ....puchhte rahiyega..... yeh kuch basic hai .....inko dhiyaan me rakhke likhiyega.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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22nd May 2010, 03:34 PM
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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22nd May 2010, 04:35 PM
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(Ab Adat daal lijiye "sir" ki...) mujhe apka reply paDh ker bahut accha laga,aur puri ummeed hai ke aap ke sehyog se kuch to likh hi paungi. Par,Kunaal bhai ne ek aur behes chhed di hai,iska to hissa apko bhi ban=na chahiye. apke reply ka intjar rahega.. Apki Student Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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22nd May 2010, 04:57 PM
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Aur Main koi nai behas nahi ched raha huN sathiyoN.. mujhe bhai in behas vehas se door hi rakhiye ..  main kisi behas ka koi hissa nahi huN .. bas ek swasht baatcheet ke taur pe maine jo likha use waise hi leN aap sab .. ye meri prarthna hai aap se ...Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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22nd May 2010, 05:06 PM
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yeh kya prarthna vagarah ki kya jarurat? Ab aap meri post me.n baal ki khaal nikaal rahe the to maine socha aap akele aisa kyo.n kare.n.... let others also enjoy... Ab apki jaisi marzi......Maine to pura mauka diya tha...  And,yes I take my words back...(although,its impossible!) I'll try to write THE BEST if naresh jee will help me... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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22nd May 2010, 05:19 PM
baal ki khaal kya..........sdc ke kuch members( myself included )...baal me se ek brand new khalaa tak nikal sakte hai.......
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22nd May 2010, 05:24 PM
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Take Care... God Bless You Apki Dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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22nd May 2010, 05:33 PM
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aapka likha jitna bhi maine padha hai.....likhne ki acchi shamtaa hai aap me....ab tak apki likhi kavita geet ghazal nazm jo bhi maine padhi hai....bahut accha likhti rahi hai....jaisa sunita ji ne kaha hai....kuch bhi kaam ko insaan mann me thaan le ki mujhe karna hai ......aadha kaam toh tabhi pura ho jaata hai... baaki uskaa karm puraa kar deta hai..... mujhe maalum nahi ....aapne pehle kabhi kahaaniya ya laghu kathaaye likhi hai...aisa kuch likhne ka abhiyaas hai ki nahi.....agar hai toh upaniyaas likhna koi badi baat nahi hai....aap zarur apne pitaa ji ki yeh khwaaish puri kar sakti hai....mujhe yakeen hai....aapki yeh tamanna unke aashirwaad se zarur puri hogi..... Aap kunaal ji ki chiinta na kare....aap toh unhe mere se bhi pehle ki jaanti hai....jitna accha woh likhte hai....usse bhi behtar insaan hai....woh sach ki ladaai ladte hai....kuch log yeh baat .... jaante nahi hai....isliye kabhi kabhi ....woh baat behas ka muddaa ban jaati hai.... rahi meri baat....jo bhi isse babasta iilm mere paas hai....aap ke sehyog ke liye aata rahunga.... khush rahen... apna khayal rakhen.... duaaon ke saath.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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24th May 2010, 10:14 AM
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Aapka reply paDh kar khushi hui.Ab lagta hai,ke akeli nahi hoon. Aj socha hai toh ek din jaruur kuch accha likh paungi... Maine chote chote articles,criticism vagarah likhe hain,par laghu kathaye.N ya kahaniya.N likhne ki himmmat abhi nahi ki hai. Mujhe lagta hai shayad maiN apni baat ko poetry ke jariye jyada acchi tarah se rakh sakti hooN....par ek puri kitab/Novel poetry ke jariye agar likhi jaye to shayad aj ke daur me.N log use utna pasaNd nahi kareNge jitna ke prose paDhna... Aisa mujhe lagta hai. apni ra'ii jaruur dijiyega. Shukriya. God Bless You, Aapki Dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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25th May 2010, 04:47 AM
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aapne theek kaha hai.....poetry ke zariye... aap jiyada acche se apni bhawnaayen viyakt kar sakti hai.....kiyonki aapka lekhan iska abhiyast hai...vaise bhi mera maannaa hai...jo baat do line ke sheyr me viyakt ho jaati hai.....kabhi kabhi woh puri kahaani bhi viyakt nahi kar paati....aise hi kavita me hai....main samjhta hu.....aaj Novel ...kahaani se jiyada paathak sheyro shayri aur kavita ke hai.....yeh T-20 ki tarha hai....wahi samaey ki kami.... Choonki aapko apne Pitaa Ji ki khwaaish ko pura karna hai....yeh khwaaish hi unka aashirwaad hai....mujhe yakeen hai...aap ka nishchaey hi ......prernna ban jayega.....aur aap iss kaam ko safalta purwak kar lengi...aisa mujhe vishwas hai.....aur yakeen bhi....! Ishwaar aapko kaamiyaab banaey.....humesha khush rahen... apna theek se khayal rakhen.... duaaon ke saath..... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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25th May 2010, 12:58 PM
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Convincing baat kehne ke liye shukriya. Jaldi hi aapse PM ke through detail me.N baat karuNgi. apna khyal rakhiye, God Bless You Apki Dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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22nd May 2010, 12:56 PM
Ritu jee:
namaste! maiN bhee zidd saaHeb kee baatoN se sehmat huuN.. aapko NareSh jee se baat karni chaahiye.. we aapki madad Zaruur kareNge..! KhuSh raheN! aapka ~ Dhaval |
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22nd May 2010, 03:54 PM
Saare galat jawaab arre bhai unhone poocha hai ki wo likh sakti hai ya nahi .. ye bataiye unhe .. waise ye sawaal hi galat hai ya jawaab saare ... kuch samajh nahi aata
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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22nd May 2010, 04:30 PM
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aadhi baat to aapki bilkul sahi hai....mera pehla question hi yahi tha...ke aap logo ki ra'ii me.n main likh sakti hoon ke nahi..? agar apko lagta hai ke main likh sakti hoon to guide kariye. Par humare SDC members mujh per itna bharosa karte haiN ke seedhe guidance mil raha hai mujhe... Aur, aapko malum hai maine apne mentor bhi dhooNdh liye haiN....humare "naresh Mehra ji"... Naresh Sir,mana mat kariyega ab.... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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22nd May 2010, 04:21 PM
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 Kunal its simple.........Ritu ke likhe upar ke teen sawal ka jawab doo.... |
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22nd May 2010, 04:32 PM
Dear Ritu...............Zidd jii ne aapko bilkul sahi sujao diya hai, aur Naresh jii ne aapko bahut details mein samjaya hai, aap unse pm mein bhi contact kar sakti hai aur unse khul kar baat kar sakti hai apne sawaal ke regarding
aap likh sakti haiN koi bhi kaam impossible nahi hota...sab kuch possible hai, bas lagan aur housla hona chahiye. god bless u dear .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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22nd May 2010, 04:43 PM
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Its a dream and i want to live it... Aap sab sath denge to sab possible ho jayega. God Bless you Apki choti, Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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22nd May 2010, 06:24 PM
Hi Ritu, hope you are fine!
Well, if you want to write novel, just start. Everything else you will learn. Waiting to read your novel. Hope my words are convincing. If not, please reply. Best wishes! Mann |
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24th May 2010, 10:21 AM
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I got atleast one reader of mine.... thank you so much mann jee. par ab jaisa bhi ho.................apko paDhna paDega...soch lijiye.....  sath hi, hosla baDhane ke liye dil se bahut bahut shukriya.... yun hi sath dete rahiyega. Duao.N ke sath Aapki dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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28th May 2010, 06:38 PM
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24th May 2010, 03:25 PM
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Ritu jee radhe radhe kriti koi bhi ho likhne ke liye man me utsaah aur lagan jaroori hai aur apne papa ki ichha ko poora karna ek bahut bada kaam hai meri nazar me shayog to thakurjee apne aap dete hai unse badas sahyogi koi nahi bas unpar vishwaas kar ke apne kaary ki aage badao jaroor safal hogi aisa mera vishwaas hai duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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24th May 2010, 04:21 PM
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ye ek visisth astrologer hai....ye apko bata sakte hai ki apki novel koi publish bhi karega ki nahi............ |
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 haNsiye haNsiye...khoob haNsiye........... Koi nahi mila toh aap hi publish kar dijiyega....... aurr vaise bhi mujhe astrology me.N interest aur bharosa dono.n hi nahi.N hai.... maiN karm-priya insaN hooN. so...ishk jee ki duaye.N hi kaafi hain........ aap bataiye, publisher ban jayeNge kya? Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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25th May 2010, 12:30 PM
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Utsaah baDhane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya..... Khush Rahiye God Bless You Apki Dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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25th May 2010, 07:28 AM
Dear Ritu jee,
Namastey!! Kaise hain aap? jitna meine aapki kavitayon ko padha hain... mujhe lagta hain aap bhi aacha likh sakti hai ... jaise ki sunita didi ne kaha hain Nothing is impossible... always be positive aur mann ki posiblity ko dekho doubt se nahi ... sky is the limit dear so I would wish you all the best ... !!!! Looking fwd for the Novel Khush rahey,.. duaaon ke saath aapki dost, mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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25th May 2010, 01:09 PM
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Mana ke mera SDC par kuch dino.N se aana nahi.N hua tha par iska matlab yeh thoDe ke aap humse baat karna hi bhool jaye.n?? yeh "jee" kaha.N se aa gaya ke "ritu ke aage.......?? isse apne pass hi rakhiyega next time... Aur itna sara encourage karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya God Bless You Aapki dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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