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jhedi chat te tarle paundi si
sanu aakhan naal nachundi si sadhe dil da kamla haal kude jadho yaad kithe teri aundi si... teri aakhan da hun ki kahiye kad dil te chalye jaadu na teri ek nazar jad dil te payi tere buhe leke aundi si..... sari duniya sanu bhul gayi aaj ja ke paanj ek saal huye teri yaad da kamliye ki dasiye sanu aaj vi aa tadpaundi si..... o nikkiya nikkiya gallan vi jive saadhi jind wich vasiya ne tu chat te ghere pa pa ke sade chit nu jind dhakaundi si... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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16th August 2002, 03:35 AM
SSA ji :-)
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9th December 2005, 07:45 PM
bhaiya bahut mehnat lagi mujhko in punjabi sheron ko samajhne me
   ,par bhaiya sach vivran bahut hi khoobsurat hai.umeed hai aap bas aise hi likhte rahoge.aapka LUCKY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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9th December 2005, 07:50 PM
anu ji...ek aur badhiya kalaam aapka padhke dil ko sukoon mila.......halanki meri punjabi itni acchi nahi hai par aapke ehsaas padhne itne mushkil bhi na lage....accha likkha hai aapne...meri tareef kubool kariyega..apna khyaal rakhiyega.
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10th December 2005, 08:40 PM
bhaiya mujhe punjabi nahi aati.. mere kahane ka matlab hai ki hindi anuwaad kar dijiye..
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10th December 2005, 08:45 PM
ji Anu ji
plz translate in hindi jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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Helo anu ji...vada sona lagya tuwada e punjabi kalaam dil halka ho gaya ji...bade dina baad tuwada punjabi kalaam padan tai milya je...asi vi chande sige ki do laina asi v add kar daiye..dekhde ha.n koshish kar k...
jhedi chat te tarle paundi si sanu aakhan naal nachundi si sadhe dil da kamla haal kude jadho yaad kithe teri aundi si... - main v teri heer si... jo tap-tap chhata aundi si... apne dil d hatho nachdi si.. fir tenu ankha to nachwandi si... jado yaad teri mainu aundi si.. teri aakhan da hun ki kahiye kad dil te chalye jaadu na teri ek nazar jad dil te payi tere buhe leke aundi si..... - teri nazra to bachan layi.. asi raat nu rab to banwaya si.. pata nai siga main kamli nu.. k shabnam vargi ankh..ooos bahayegi.. sari duniya sanu bhul gayi aaj ja ke paanj ek saal huye teri yaad da kamliye ki dasiye sanu aaj vi aa tadpaundi si..... - chaand tu saanu bhul jaave.. per assi kithhe tenu bhulna si... dekh teriya yaada vich.. asi taare ban sang rehnde ha.n.. o nikkiya nikkiya gallan vi jive saadhi jind wich vasiya ne tu chat te ghere pa pa ke sade chit nu jind dhakaundi si... ok...bye...take care.. gam-e-lashkar |
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13th December 2005, 11:40 AM
Anu...
kii kavaan hun...aina pyaara kalaam likhiya ae...pher gam-e-lashkar pyaare ne kinna sohna usnoo age vadaaya ai...dil noo padh ke bahut sukoon miliyaa...aiwain hee dono likhde raho te mehfil sajaande raho... teri aakhan da hun ki kahiye kad dil te chalye jaadu na teri ek nazar jad dil te payi tere buhe leke aundi si..... bus jaan hi kad layi... teri nazra to bachan layi.. asi raat nu rab to banwaya si.. pata nai siga main kamli nu.. k shabnam vargi ankh..ooos bahayegi.. raat nu rab to banwaya si...waah gam-e-lashkar ji kinna sohna manzar aithe pesh kita ai tussi...bahut hi mazza aaya padhke... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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13th December 2005, 11:05 PM
hi mast ji,
tumhe parhna hamensha achha lagta hai par punjabi itni nahi aati mujhe...lol. Can someone please translate in hindi... |
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14th December 2005, 09:35 AM
shukriya doston,
tussa saryaa na hum humha ke bande da saath ditaa bahut change lagyaa... neelo ji, lucky bhai, farhana ji, garima behan, kuhulika ji, gam-e-lashkar ji, meri sakhi, Parul ji..aap sabne itna pyaar dikhaya hai bas kya kahun..bahut puraana likhe kalaam pe aakar aap sab ne yaaden Tazzaa kar di.. aaj to nahi par promise raha ki kal ise transalate zaroor karungaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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16th December 2005, 09:45 AM
Jaisa ki aap sabse kaha tha ki ise translate karunGaa to haazir hoon..thodi her pher ki hai maine kyunki hindi mein bhi chahta hoon iska flow waisa hi rahe so maaf kijiYeGaa
jhedi chat te tarle paundi si sanu aakhan naal nachundi si sadhe dil da kamla haal kude jadho yaad kithe teri aundi si... jo chat par intezaar karti thi aankhon se dil pe vaar karti thi is dil ka haal sunaata hoon teri yaad mein jab kho jaata hoon teri aakhan da hun ki kahiye kad dil te chalye jaadu na teri ek nazar jad dil te payi tere buhe leke aundi si..... teri aankhon ki kya baat kahun jab dil pe jaadu chalta hai teri ek nazar humdum mere tere dar par dil aa thamta hai sari duniya sanu bhul gayi aaj ja ke paanj ek saal huye teri yaad da kamliye ki dasiye sanu aaj vi aa tadpaundi si..... aab duniya ko jaa bhulaa hoon barson ki baat sunaati thi teri yaad soniye aisi thi mujhe aab bhi aa tadpaati thi o nikkiya nikkiya gallan vi jive saadhi jind wich vasiya ne tu chat te ghere pa pa ke sade chit nu jind dhakaundi si... kuch choti choti baatein thi jo dil mein utra karti thi jaise tu apne halke pairon se mere dil ko dhadkaati thi koshish ki hai puri tarah anuvaad karne ki kahi chook gaya hoon to maafi chahta hoon -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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16th December 2005, 10:36 AM
Hi Bhaiya.. bahoot achha laga aapki ye rachna padhkar..
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Bahut Cha Lagi aapki punjabi ki kavita hume.....kuch lines meri taraf se
Teriya Galan CHangiyan Lagdiyan Si Tere Baajon Ae Aakhiya Vagdiyan Si Tera Hi Suru HUnda Si Mere Dil Te Kadi Tenu Vekh vekh Nazar Meri Hasdi Si Tere Naa Di Mehndi Ki Aankhan HUn Tere Pyaar Vaang Ghudi Chadd Di Si Aaunda Si Maja Bada Minu Kheta Vich Tenu Roti Khawandi Te Kadi Ladh DI Si |
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very nice nd sweet...
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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thanks sandhya and khulika aaj bahut arse baad nazar padi....kuch puraane qisse, kuch baatein yaad aa gayi
Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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superb!!!!!!!!
pehle kyoN nai paDhi bada afsos ho reha veereya, jeonda reh, rab tarrakkiyaaN bakhshe rab raakha is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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rab raakha Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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bohut sundar aur sache ehsaas.........
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh nazm mast jee
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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shayri dil di awaaz hundi aa te sir chaR ke boldi aa, je she'r dil diyaaN tehaN choN nikkle hon taaN akkhraN vichoN likhan waale di rooh nazar aauNdi aa, jehDi ke mainu tuhaade is qalaam ch nazar aayi stay true to your self and your poetry, please rab tuhaane sabna nu raazi te khush rakkhe baccheyaaN nu nimaane da pyaar dena jee rab raakha is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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oye hoye kya kehne...bahut majja aaya Anu aapki yeh nazam padkar, aisi aur bhi yaadeN share karo....bahut accha lagega
bhagwaan aap dono ko khush rakhe .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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Anu...kuch waqt se bahut busy chal rha tha ghar pariwaar mein, ab thodi fursat milli hai to hazir hu aur SDC par to hamesha rhuNgi chahe kam ya jayada aauN par aati rhuNgi hamesha aur rhi baat mere pyar ki to wo har pal sdc ke saath aur aapke saath hai......Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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