ab ke savan jam ke barse -
1st August 2010, 04:56 PM
badlon ne jhoom ke kaha
lo savan aa gya
kaali ghataen ga uthi
aaha ye savan aa gya
kusum munh utha ke bole
parwar digar shukria
rim jim fuharain barsengi
vada karain ye badrian
mitti ki sondhi khushbu se
mahak uthegi ye dhra
her saans me jashan 2
her ang me nasha 2
kaise khushi se naach uthi hain
baalkon ki tollian
hain ye aaj kitni mitthi
panchion ki bollian
hasrton ne karwatain li
man bhi gunguna utha
ab ke savan jam ke varse
vishwash rang la utha
badlon ne jhoom ke kaha
lo savan aa gya
kaali ghataen ga uthi
aaha ye savan aa gya
kusum munh utha ke bole
parwar digar shukria
rim jim fuharain barsengi
vada karain ye badrian
mitti ki sondhi khushbu se
mahak uthegi ye dhra
her saans me jashan 2
her ang me nasha 2
kaise khushi se naach uthi hain
baalkon ki tollian
hain ye aaj kitni mitthi
panchion ki bollian
hasrton ne karwatain li
man bhi gunguna utha
ab ke savan jam ke varse
vishwash rang la utha
bahut khoob rashmi ji.................
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Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
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badlon ne jhoom ke kaha lo savan aa gya kaali ghataen ga uthi aaha ye savan aa gya kusum munh utha ke bole parwar digar shukria rim jim fuharain barsengi vada karain ye badrian mitti ki sondhi khushbu se mahak uthegi ye dhra her saans me jashan 2 her ang me nasha 2 kaise khushi se naach uthi hain baalkon ki tollian hain ye aaj kitni mitthi panchion ki bollian hasrton ne karwatain li man bhi gunguna utha ab ke savan jam ke varse vishwash rang la utha
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badlon ne jhoom ke kaha
lo savan aa gya
kaali ghataen ga uthi
aaha ye savan aa gya
kusum munh utha ke bole
parwar digar shukria
rim jim fuharain barsengi
vada karain ye badrian
mitti ki sondhi khushbu se
mahak uthegi ye dhra
her saans me jashan 2
her ang me nasha 2
kaise khushi se naach uthi hain
baalkon ki tollian
hain ye aaj kitni mitthi
panchion ki bollian
hasrton ne karwatain li
man bhi gunguna utha
ab ke savan jam ke varse
vishwash rang la utha
rashmi jee
radhe radhe
jab bahar baarish ho rahi ho tab isko padhne me aur jyada anand aata hai aur is samay khoob tej baarish ho rahi hai
bahut achha lag raha hai sawan me sawan ke baare me padhna
aiise hi likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna
Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
Rashmi jiii, aaj aapki kavita padkar bahut anand aaya, ek to bahar barish ho rahi hai, rim-jim gire sawan aur opper se aapki kavita.....bahut bahut bahuttttttttt khoobsurat mahol bana aapki kavita padne ka....good work.
aapki dost
Sunita
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Last edited by Rashmi sharma; 13th August 2010 at 10:32 PM..
jab bahar baarish ho rahi ho tab isko padhne me aur jyada anand aata hai aur is samay khoob tej baarish ho rahi hai
bahut achha lag raha hai sawan me sawan ke baare me padhna
aiise hi likhti rahen
duaon ke saath
shukria rajinder ji , meri ye rachna aapkeliye sawan ki rimjim fuharen leke aai .vehad shukargujar hoon ji