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ab ke savan jam ke barse - 1st August 2010, 04:56 PM
badlon ne jhoom ke kaha
lo savan aa gya
kaali ghataen ga uthi
aaha ye savan aa gya
kusum munh utha ke bole
parwar digar shukria
rim jim fuharain barsengi
vada karain ye badrian
mitti ki sondhi khushbu se
mahak uthegi ye dhra
her saans me jashan 2
her ang me nasha 2
kaise khushi se naach uthi hain
baalkon ki tollian
hain ye aaj kitni mitthi
panchion ki bollian
hasrton ne karwatain li
man bhi gunguna utha
ab ke savan jam ke varse
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1st August 2010, 07:18 PM
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badlon ne jhoom ke kaha
lo savan aa gya
kaali ghataen ga uthi
aaha ye savan aa gya
kusum munh utha ke bole
parwar digar shukria
rim jim fuharain barsengi
vada karain ye badrian
mitti ki sondhi khushbu se
mahak uthegi ye dhra
her saans me jashan 2
her ang me nasha 2
kaise khushi se naach uthi hain
baalkon ki tollian
hain ye aaj kitni mitthi
panchion ki bollian
hasrton ne karwatain li
man bhi gunguna utha
ab ke savan jam ke varse
vishwash rang la utha
bahut khoob rashmi ji.................

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Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
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6th August 2010, 02:48 PM
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bahut khoob rashmi ji.................
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reshmi very well said keep it up

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reshmi very well said keep it up

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badlon ne jhoom ke kaha
lo savan aa gya
kaali ghataen ga uthi
aaha ye savan aa gya
kusum munh utha ke bole
parwar digar shukria
rim jim fuharain barsengi
vada karain ye badrian
mitti ki sondhi khushbu se
mahak uthegi ye dhra
her saans me jashan 2
her ang me nasha 2
kaise khushi se naach uthi hain
baalkon ki tollian
hain ye aaj kitni mitthi
panchion ki bollian
hasrton ne karwatain li
man bhi gunguna utha
ab ke savan jam ke varse
vishwash rang la utha
Aapki rachna ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe...dil se daad !

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kamaal ki sajeev rachna hai. kavita ko padhte hue apke dwara racha gaya sara mahoul apne ird gird ghoomta mahsoos hota hai. vatt kadh ditte rss. bhai bahut khus hua.

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8th August 2010, 09:51 PM
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kamaal ki sajeev rachna hai. kavita ko padhte hue apke dwara racha gaya sara mahoul apne ird gird ghoomta mahsoos hota hai. vatt kadh ditte rss. bhai bahut khus hua.
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Good post. Thanks for sharing............

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wow...............bahut khoob.

Rashmi jiii, aaj aapki kavita padkar bahut anand aaya, ek to bahar barish ho rahi hai, rim-jim gire sawan aur opper se aapki kavita.....bahut bahut bahuttttttttt khoobsurat mahol bana aapki kavita padne ka....good work.

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badlon ne jhoom ke kaha
lo savan aa gya
kaali ghataen ga uthi
aaha ye savan aa gya
kusum munh utha ke bole
parwar digar shukria
rim jim fuharain barsengi
vada karain ye badrian
mitti ki sondhi khushbu se
mahak uthegi ye dhra
her saans me jashan 2
her ang me nasha 2
kaise khushi se naach uthi hain
baalkon ki tollian
hain ye aaj kitni mitthi
panchion ki bollian
hasrton ne karwatain li
man bhi gunguna utha
ab ke savan jam ke varse
vishwash rang la utha
rashmi jee
radhe radhe

jab bahar baarish ho rahi ho tab isko padhne me aur jyada anand aata hai aur is samay khoob tej baarish ho rahi hai
bahut achha lag raha hai sawan me sawan ke baare me padhna
aiise hi likhti rahen
duaon ke saath

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Aapki rachna ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage mujhe...dil se daad !

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wow...............bahut khoob.

Rashmi jiii, aaj aapki kavita padkar bahut anand aaya, ek to bahar barish ho rahi hai, rim-jim gire sawan aur opper se aapki kavita.....bahut bahut bahuttttttttt khoobsurat mahol bana aapki kavita padne ka....good work.

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radhe radhe

jab bahar baarish ho rahi ho tab isko padhne me aur jyada anand aata hai aur is samay khoob tej baarish ho rahi hai
bahut achha lag raha hai sawan me sawan ke baare me padhna
aiise hi likhti rahen
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