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kai baar...... -
22nd July 2004, 11:57 AM
paras...... or mere sabhi dost,
waise to meri yah poorani rachna hai... or jyada tar sabhi ne padhhi hai... fir bhi aaj paras ke kahne par wahi rachna. paras, tumne kaha k aaj kuchh likho... par aaj nahi likh paaungi.. par yah rachna saal pahlay aaj hi k din likhi thhi.... isi liye yahi sahi... kuchh to anusandhhan hai.... kai baar.......... kai baar aisa bhi hota hai khushi ke sath ghum bhi hota hai. sara din aap bhid main raho, aur apne aapko akela paao. kai baar aisa bhi hota hai. kai baar aisa bhi hota hai haste haste aankh bhar aaye aur achanak dard chhalak jaaye, jo baat chhoopani ho sabse wahi baat labaon par aa jaye. kai baar aisa bhi hota hai. kai baar aisa bhi hota hai din bhar nazar main talaash rahe aur shaam bhi yuuhi biit jaaye raat achanak oose dil ke karib paao kai baar aisa bhi hota hai. kai baar aisa bhi hota hai zindgi bhar intzaar karo aur intzaar hi zindgi ban jaaye achanak jab samne paao or kayamat ka din ban jaaye kai baar aisa bhi hota hai. |
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22nd July 2004, 12:12 PM
kai baar aisa bhi hota hai
zindgi bhar intzaar karo aur intzaar hi zindgi ban jaaye achanak jab samne paao or kayamat ka din ban jaaye kai baar aisa bhi hota hai Meena jee... aapne mujhe natmastak kar diya...bahut khuub zindagi ko pehchana hai...hum jo baat cheet kar rahe thhe theek uspe hee yeh rachna huyi...aur aapne mere kehne se post kee...main aapki abhaari hoon...aur doston ko bhi itni pyaari rachna padhne ko milegi... bus you are something...aapne zindagi ke chote badhe sab pehlooun pe kuch na kuch kaha hai...bahut saral shabdon mein gehraayi ko naapa hai...yeh hunar bahut kam logon mein hota hai...yoonhi pyaar barsaati rehna hum pyaar ke pyaase raahiyon pe... aapki paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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Aapke rachna ko salam |
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Aapke rachna ko salam -
22nd July 2004, 12:32 PM
Meena Ji
Bahut hi khoobsoorat akshron main apney Zindagi ko piroya hay.Sari kavita kabiley tareef hay.Bahut sundar likha hay. Sach likha hay apney Aisa bhi hota hay............ kai baar aisa bhi hota hai haste haste aankh bhar aaye aur achanak dard chhalak jaaye, Muskurate rahiye Once again a very sweet poem u have written. |
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22nd July 2004, 12:35 PM
meena ji,
maine aapki yah rachana pahale nahi padhi... aur aaj jab ese padha to rachana ke pichhe bane bimb hi dikhayi deta raha.. laga hi nahi ki main shabd padh raha hoon laga ki samane sab kuchh ghatit hote dekh raha hoon. likhati rahiye.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Ek baar fir ..bahut khoob |
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Ek baar fir ..bahut khoob -
22nd July 2004, 08:18 PM
Meena ji...aapki is kai baar ka dhyaaN jab bhi aata hai to...atak sa jaata hooN..in alfaazoN me....
Or badi baat ye lagti hai ke aapko ise sajaane ki jaroorat bhi nahi padi...bas aapne likha or wo khud-b-khud saj gai. Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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22nd July 2004, 10:46 PM
Didi,
Kai baar nahi har baar aisa hi hota hai.. Hasna chaahun to aankhon mein aansoon paaon.. Bhari mehfil mein bhi khud ko tanha paaon.. Dil ki baat duniya se ab aur chupa na paaon... Sadiyon se kar hun, aur intzaar ab kar na paaon.. Na jaane woh vakt kab aayega, jab unhe apne saamne paaon.. Bahut acha laga diiii Lekin kai baar nahi.. har baar aisa hi hota hai.. ~Aapki Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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23rd July 2004, 11:45 AM
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wah wah kai baar aisa bhi hota hai jinhe hum sab se karib mante ho wahi dhoka de jaye. |
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Wah Meenaji |
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Wah Meenaji -
23rd July 2004, 12:20 PM
Bahut hi khub likha he aapne,bahut hi achche alfaz me bayan kiya he.
kai baar aisa bhi hota hai zindgi bhar intzaar karo aur intzaar hi zindgi ban jaaye achanak jab samne paao or kayamat ka din ban jaaye kai baar aisa bhi hota hai. Kash esi kayamat her baar aaye,aapki yeh rachna dil ko chu gayi. Love Mukesh |
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23rd July 2004, 01:43 PM
Meena Di,
So this was the special rquest by Paras.. This one is really very beutiful... Bahut hi sundar aur saral likha hai aapne... Isi tarah likhti rahein  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th July 2004, 09:14 AM
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paras, is tarah taarif karogi to bedil aa kar kahega ke, ' maa ! aapko chane ke Jhad par chadhaya ja raha hai. lol tumhe meri rachna pasand aayi...... shukria. meena |
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Re: Aapke rachna ko salam |
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Re: Aapke rachna ko salam -
27th July 2004, 09:17 AM
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sukanya, dil se tumhara shukriaa... tumhe rachna pasand aayi...... haan aisa huaa thha isi liye yah ahesaas ka janam huaa thha. meena |
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Re: hello -
27th July 2004, 09:18 AM
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akant dost, chalo jo ghata wahi tasweer meri kalam bana paayi or tum iise dekh paaye... shukriaa. meena |
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Re: Ek baar fir ..bahut khoob -
27th July 2004, 09:21 AM
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mere chaand, haan... jaanti hu.. tumne ise kai baar saraha hai.. haan... jo ghat gaya maine likh diya... sachaai thhi isi liye saji lagi tumhe... sachhai kisi bhi roop maie ho... dard bhari ya khushi bhari... par sachhai ki apni jagah hoti hi hai ... maan ko anjaane maie bhi chhu hi jaati hai. tumhari meena |
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27th July 2004, 09:23 AM
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priya, sabr karo jara sa.......ab woh din door nahi hai.. fir tum jaroor kahogi k ab har baar aisa nahi hota. lol di |
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27th July 2004, 09:25 AM
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mita, maie kuchh alag kahungi yaha par................. kai baar aisa bhi hota hai jo humaare nahi thhe ... oonhe humne apna maan liya dhoka oonhone nahi diya khud humne dil se khaya meena |
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Re: Wah Meenaji -
27th July 2004, 09:26 AM
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mukesh, aapko rachna pasand aayi.... aapka shukria jo aapne ise saraha. meena |
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27th July 2004, 09:30 AM
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pulkit, haan....... oos din paras ki chah thhi ke maie koi rachna pash karu... par aisa ho nahi raha thha k maie kuchh likh paati... to 2 saal pahlay oosi din jo rachna likhi thhi wahi pash kar di... aakhir saal alag thha taarikh to wahi thhi... so anusandhaan jood gaya. lol tumhari di |
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27th July 2004, 10:43 AM
Ye thread hum kaise miss kar gaye??
 Hume yaad hai jab tumne ise pehli baar post kiya tha.. tab bhi pasand aaya tha aur ab bhi.. pata nahi tab reply kiya tha ya nahi, magar ab karte hain.. Zindagi aksar aisa bhi hota, jo na kabhi socha tha, wo ho jaata hai.. aur jo soch kar safar par nikle the, wo nahi hota.. bohat achha likha hai tumne.. khaaskar aakhri sher.. Yunhi likhti raho.. |
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27th July 2004, 11:02 AM
Meena dost
Aap ki yeh khoobsurat nazm hazb-e-mamool behad khoobsurat jazbaat aur ehsaasaat per mushtamil dosti aur pyaar ka ek masoom sa izhaar hai. Aur masoom sa sawaal hai jo her zabaan e aam per hai. Itne khoobsurat pairaayee mein meena hi is ko bayan ker sakti hain. Meri pur khaloos daad meena aap ke liye aur sab saathiyon ke liye jo is post per aap ke ham-nawaa huey. Meri dua hai ke aap ka qalam isi tarah aap ke zehan ke khoobsurat khayalaat ko likhta rahe aur ham parhte rahen. musharrafhusain |
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27th July 2004, 12:12 PM
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banno, haan.... zindgi kab kya rang dikhayegi nahi samaj paaya koi aaj tak... kabhi jo rang berang se lagte hai oon maie n jaane kaha se rango ki buochhaar aa jaati hai .... to kahi rangeenta bhi achanak berang ban jaati hai........... sab kuchh khali khali sa ho jaata hai........ meena |
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27th July 2004, 12:15 PM
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mere mushi dost, aap ne humesaha ki tarah meri rachna ko saraha or aapki duwaa bhi muje yaha mili......... aapki aabhari bhi nahi ho paati kabhi..... aapka aana mere ahesaas ko jivan milna barabar hota hai. aapki dost meena |
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