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First Wedding Anniversary!!! -
22nd February 2006, 10:43 PM
hello friends...i'm back...with a new post...
some thin different actually...its about how a couple spend their first wedding anniversary...i tried my best...i would love to have ur suggestions n comments...and one more thing...in this post...i've used a couple of stanzas written by rohin... bhaiyaa...i thought i'll take ur permission...but ur not online right now...so...hopin tht u wouldnt really mind...plzz...don mind ok... Rohit and nisha in their apartment on their first wedding anniversary… Its been a year since you came in to my life…and just dint seem like it.-rohit. Yes…I know…we’ve been so busy with our daily life…and we even forgot that we are a newly married couple- nisha with a smile. The day when I proposed you, our first date…all those memories are still fresh on my mind…it was heaven…- rohit. Well…more than heaven sweetu…shall we get back to those days…shall we go on a date again?- nisha trying to be romantic. “Well…sure, but common not with you again!!!” rohit with a sarcastic smile. “I never asked you on a date…I did mean some one else…mr rohit…just forget it… You don’t know how to flirt anyways, so try to be a bit romantic at least…its our wedding anniversary damn it.” Nisha gave a defiant look…as if she had just conquered the world. And the next moment, rohit fell on his knees with a rose in his hand… Saanso.N mein basa tere Mein hoon Dhadkano.N mein mere basi tu hai ab Qayamat bhi aa jaaye to kya gum hai Khuda karega juda ab hummein Kaise? Rab se meri ek hi dua Tere saare gum mere Meri saari khushi teri Tum khush raho sada kyonki...? Teri Hassi hai zindagi meri Nisha was deeply touched… She was about to speak out…rohit jumped out of his chair “I’ll be right back…wait a second darling” rohit. “what …where are you going”-nisha had no clue what rohit was up to. Darkness surrounded the place…and after a while rohit came with a torch. “come hold my hand…” said rohit in a tone full of love. “but… where”said nisha, who had no idea of things happening around her. “I’ll show you heaven my sweetheart” said rohit, and he was as romantic as he can be. Both of them…hand in hand moved quietly though with so many things going through their mind… Finally they arrived at the dining table… A candle light dinner with exquisite food… They both sat down…and then rohit said… “ now take a look at the roof…honey”. Nisha was amazed at what she saw… Artificial sky and stars shining so bright…perhaps more than the real one’s. “amazing…rohit…this looks gorgeous” nisha was really excited now… “not more than you sweetheart…I thought the moon and the stars would shy away when they look at the glow of my princess…and so I made this for you” said rohit… nisha smiled at rohit…she was too short of words then…and said these words… “ I love you…I really do…”-nisha. “ I love you more than any thing else in this world…you made my life so special and worthwhile…and I promise you that I’ll hold your hand forever and ever”-rohit. They dined together… First wedding anniversary gave them some of the most memorable moments of their life… thanks Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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23rd February 2006, 02:24 AM
karthik!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
saw u after a loooooooooooooooooooooooong time...and ooooooooooooo...look wht mr. dard has written! chooooooooo chweet......hehe.... and wow...wht a moment...haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....so nice...raat k andhere mein....the hum akele mein! hehe and wht else to say...other than!! kool to c ya in a romantic mood...kya huaaaa?? tell me ok  take care bye »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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hi -
23rd February 2006, 03:29 AM
Hi Karthik
How r u bro been a whole..hey u know what this was so beautiful writing i loved it  Saanso.N mein basa tere Mein hoon Dhadkano.N mein mere basi tu hai ab Qayamat bhi aa jaaye to kya gum hai Khuda karega juda ab hummein Kaise? Rab se meri ek hi dua Tere saare gum mere Meri saari khushi teri Tum khush raho sada kyonki...? Teri hasi zindagi meri....... jaane kyu tumare shabd Rohin ke sparash se lage Karthik u write so well, i am a fan of yours luv ya Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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23rd February 2006, 07:00 AM
Karthik bro,
All i can say at the moment is i am overwhelmed and honoured that you have used my lines. they are feelings for me.. which maybe just words for many... and by using them in your work you have only humbled me... God Bless you Take Care Rohin |
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23rd February 2006, 09:02 PM
wowww karthik.....i cant tel how much your post has made me feel better....
u have done a amazing job sweets...... u know what as i was reading you...i could picture evreythin...i cud feel the love and romance in the air.....it was a beautiful feeling!! u know my anniversary is coming in march and u know wat i really wish that sumthing like this cud happen to me...but...anywaz.... once again its beautiful.... god bless you honey! Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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24th February 2006, 06:15 PM
karthik i yhought that i'm in the scene for a while and decided to do same thing on my 1st year on anniversary…
 wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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24th February 2006, 10:03 PM
whwwwwwwwww bhai jab dard mai likhte ho to kamal karte ho but isaq ko chukar use bemisaal karte ho
loved it nice one , maja aa gaya shrdh 
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26th February 2006, 09:29 AM
heyy wardaa...
well...yaa...mr dard has written this romantic play... i guess u loved it...n thts nice to know... well...nothin much happ...but i can tell u tht u will get to see more of these frm me... take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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26th February 2006, 12:23 PM
Hi Karthik
How r u bro been a whole..hey u know what this was so beautiful writing i loved it Saanso.N mein basa tere Mein hoon Dhadkano.N mein mere basi tu hai ab Qayamat bhi aa jaaye to kya gum hai Khuda karega juda ab hummein Kaise? Rab se meri ek hi dua Tere saare gum mere Meri saari khushi teri Tum khush raho sada kyonki...? Teri hasi zindagi meri....... jaane kyu tumare shabd Rohin ke sparash se lage Karthik u write so well, i am a fan of yours luv ya Priya heyyy priyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa after such a long time yaaaaaaaaaarr... ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh....my words with rohins touch...... i'm honored...thnx hehehe  n wht did u say...u r my fan...ohhhhhhh...stay tht way ok... coz u r my only fan jus kiddin...thnx a lott...havin u here was my pleasure... take care luv ya Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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28th February 2006, 07:57 AM
Karthik bro,
All i can say at the moment is i am overwhelmed and honoured that you have used my lines. they are feelings for me.. which maybe just words for many... and by using them in your work you have only humbled me... God Bless you Take Care Rohin thanks a lot rohin...it was very nice to have u here... ur words in my work...well...thts an honor for me... take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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26th March 2006, 09:58 PM
Dear Karthik,
You know...I ahd kept this in my favourites ever since u first gave me the link.. just cud not read it complete brfore... As always u've expressed it beautifully in ur own style... and Rohin's lines just added ot the beauty... do keep wriitng... TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th March 2006, 11:43 PM
kartik
that is really a great thought from u it really shows the love every couple should have between them. that is really nice ..... just dn't wanna say anything .... but really want to clap on that one thanx for sahring this one bye TC cute _ Ashu Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki, Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi, Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm) *(`'·.¸(`'·.¸*¤*¸.·'´)¸.·'´)* .....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»...... *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* ------------------------------------------------ |
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