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pata nahi tumhe yaad bhi hoon ki nahi - 1st July 2011, 11:52 PM
pata nahi tumhe yaad bhi hoon ki nahi
yaad aane ki koi wajah bhi to nahi
bas ek baat karni thi tumse
mujhe maloom hai tum naraz ho
shayad mudkar bhi na dekho
shayad yahi sahi hoga
aakhir main yehi to chaahta tha
phir pata nahi kyun dard hai
ek aakhri baar kehna tha
jo kabhi na keh sakka
magar kehna chaahta hoon
tujhe paane ki khwaaish
chaand ko chune si lagti hai
khahir ab bahut der ho chuki hai
ab to kuch lamhe hi hain baaki
kal shayad subha na hogi
raat ki chaadar oodh so raha hoon
Koshish karunga na yaad aaon tumhe
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2nd July 2011, 12:28 AM
aaj bhi yaad hai apki yeh line ''tujhe paane ki khwaish chand ko choone si lagti hai''
sach mein jisk liye likkha hai unk paas tak pohonch hi gaya hoga
aap khush rahein or apna khayaal rakhein


taecaer rohin

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jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
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aaj bhi yaad hai apki yeh line ''tujhe paane ki khwaish chand ko choone si lagti hai''
sach mein jisk liye likkha hai unk paas tak pohonch hi gaya hoga
aap khush rahein or apna khayaal rakhein


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thanks Shweta...

i appreciate ur words... but the one for whom it is intended ..... i hope does not read it....

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2nd July 2011, 11:53 AM
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pata nahi tumhe yaad bhi hoon ki nahi
yaad aane ki koi wajah bhi to nahi
bas ek baat karni thi tumse
mujhe maloom hai tum naraz ho
shayad mudkar bhi na dekho
shayad yahi sahi hoga
aakhir main yehi to chaahta tha
phir pata nahi kyun dard hai
ek aakhri baar kehna tha
jo kabhi na keh sakka
magar kehna chaahta hoon
tujhe paane ki khwaaish
chaand ko chune si lagti hai
khahir ab bahut der ho chuki hai
ab to kuch lamhe hi hain baaki
kal shayad subha na hogi
raat ki chaadar oodh so raha hoon
Koshish karunga na yaad aaon tumhe
agar aa gaya to soch lena
koi bura khwaab hoon
aankh khulne pe beet jayega
Rohin,

I loved your poem, I felt the pain in your lines...indeed a great work...

Vikram

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2nd July 2011, 12:17 PM
Good Expressions ... Very Touching .... Rohin Ji



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pata nahi tumhe yaad bhi hoon ki nahi
yaad aane ki koi wajah bhi to nahi
bas ek baat karni thi tumse
mujhe maloom hai tum naraz ho
shayad mudkar bhi na dekho
shayad yahi sahi hoga
aakhir main yehi to chaahta tha
phir pata nahi kyun dard hai
ek aakhri baar kehna tha
jo kabhi na keh sakka
magar kehna chaahta hoon
tujhe paane ki khwaaish
chaand ko chune si lagti hai
khahir ab bahut der ho chuki hai
ab to kuch lamhe hi hain baaki
kal shayad subha na hogi
raat ki chaadar oodh so raha hoon
Koshish karunga na yaad aaon tumhe
agar aa gaya to soch lena
koi bura khwaab hoon
aankh khulne pe beet jayega
Rohin ji... ye apki peshkash bahut hi acha laga,
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yaad aane ki koi wajah bhi to nahi
bas ek baat karni thi tumse
mujhe maloom hai tum naraz ho
shayad mudkar bhi na dekho
shayad yahi sahi hoga
aakhir main yehi to chaahta tha
phir pata nahi kyun dard hai
ek aakhri baar kehna tha
jo kabhi na keh sakka
magar kehna chaahta hoon
tujhe paane ki khwaaish
chaand ko chune si lagti hai
khahir ab bahut der ho chuki hai
ab to kuch lamhe hi hain baaki
kal shayad subha na hogi
raat ki chaadar oodh so raha hoon
Koshish karunga na yaad aaon tumhe
agar aa gaya to soch lena
koi bura khwaab hoon
aankh khulne pe beet jayega
itana acha likha he apane

daad hajir he

sabdo me bahut dard he

likhate rahe

yah lines bahut hi achi lagy mujhe

khahir ab bahut der ho chuki hai
ab to kuch lamhe hi hain baaki
kal shayad subha na hogi
raat ki chaadar oodh so raha hoon
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Rohin,

I loved your poem, I felt the pain in your lines...indeed a great work...

Vikram
Vikram,

thanks for reading... it is very rough at the edges.... so not sure it is great work.

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Rohin ji... ye apki peshkash bahut hi acha laga,
lagata hai apki khwaaish untak pahunji gayihogi
umeed hai.... aur umeed pe duniya kayam hai....

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itana acha likha he apane

daad hajir he

sabdo me bahut dard he

likhate rahe

yah lines bahut hi achi lagy mujhe

khahir ab bahut der ho chuki hai
ab to kuch lamhe hi hain baaki
kal shayad subha na hogi
raat ki chaadar oodh so raha hoon
Koshish karunga na yaad aaon tumhe
agar aa gaya to soch lena
koi bura khwaab hoon
aankh khulne pe beet jayega
Shukriya shakuntala ji.... isse padhne ke liye....

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Thank you musharraf sahab... aur aapka sher bahut hi khoob hai.... isski poori gazal jaroor padhna chahunga....

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11th July 2011, 11:13 PM
very impressive......accha lga aapke ahsaas padna...keep posting.

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