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Talking Khushiyon ke registan mein.... - 1st October 2008, 11:16 AM
Khushiyo ke registan mein ek aandhi aayi thi,tod gyi dil mod gyi rukh,kehne aayi thi.Na ashq bache na dard hai koi ek tanhai hai jo sath sath chalne aayi thi....

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Khushiyo ke registan mein ek aandhi aayi thi,
tod gyi dil mod gyi rukh,kehne aayi thi.
Na ashq bache na dard hai koi
ek tanhai hai jo sath sath chalne aayi thi...

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Khushiyo ke registan mein ek aandhi aayi thi,
tod gyi dil mod gyi rukh,kehne aayi thi.
Na ashq bache na dard hai koi
ek tanhai hai jo sath sath chalne aayi thi....

Ritu jee aapka SDC pariwaar mein tah-e-dil se suwagat hai....

aapki koshish hume acchi lagi.....mayank ji ne jo mashwara diya hai hum bhi us se sahmat haiN, aise hi likha kijiye......kush rahiye aur aate raha kijiye


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Talking Thanking you... - 2nd October 2008, 09:26 AM
Thanks a lot mayank ji aur sunita ji.Aise hi margdarshan karte rahiyega..Anek anek dhanyvad!!Koshish rahegi isse acchi rachna pesh kar saku...Ritu

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