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Bahut yaad aayega... -
1st September 2009, 05:18 PM
namaskaar Dosto.n,
maaf kijiyega ek lambe ntaraal ke baad aaj kuch ehsaas le kar aapke saamne aayi hu, kabhi kabhi samay kitne rang dikhata hai ke apno.n ke liye hi apno.n se door jana paDhta hai... inhi kuch chaNd ehsaaso.n ko khud me samete main ritu... jab aage ke safar me.n koi saaya najar na aayega, yeh aakhiri dwarakht bahut yaad aayega.... chilchilati dhoop ur paav.n jalenge ret me.n, thaNdak bhara yeh aashiyana bahut yaad aayega... samay ki chaal kabhi dheemi kab huyi hi, tere sath gujra har lamha bahut yaad aayega.... suna hai babul ke kaaNtey hi hain aage raastey me.n, kal phoolo.n ka yeh baagh bahut yad aayega... taaleem ki bhooN.kh rukne kaha.n deti hai,maa mujhe mera yeh bachpan bahut yaad aayega.... kal mere paas sab kuch hoga siva samay ke, kal ghaDiyo.n ka tik-tik bajna bahut yaad aayega... hoNge makhmali bistar aalishaan vaha.n fir bhi, mujhe apna yeh tuta takht bahut yaad aayega... mat sochna bhool gaye tujhe ghar chhoDte hi, har saaNs ke sth tera pyar bahut yaad aayega.... -aapki dost ritu. Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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1st September 2009, 07:14 PM
Bahut khoob.
Aapke jajbaaton me dhale alfaazo mai kaafi saadgee or sanjeedgee hai. Bahut khoob. God bless you. |
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2nd September 2009, 01:23 PM
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welcome on SDC yun hi sath dete rahiye.. khush rahiye.... (purane dosto.n ko to humari yaad bhi nahi...  )aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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2nd September 2009, 01:51 PM
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bohat khuub.. dil ko chhu gaye yeh ehsaas.. behad asardaar likha hai tum ne... daad ka koii moal nahii.n hai, in jazbaato.n ke saamne.... likhti raho yuu.n hee... apna khayaal rakhana.... mayank reps + + |
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2nd September 2009, 05:41 PM
rutu ji
kya lika hai apne main to ite b sher samja bahut ache lage ek ek sher o meri samj me aya wo bho acha laga.. jab aage ke safar me.n koi saaya najar na aayega, yeh aakhiri dwarakht bahut yaad aayega.... wa mai kya bolu is sher ke bare me ek dum sahi hai taaleem ki bhooN.kh rukne kaha.n deti hai,maa mujhe mera yeh bachpan bahut yaad aayega.... apki bachpan prem ki yaad aur taleem ki baat gazab hai sachi apne yeh sher bho gehra lika hai. kal mere paas sab kuch hoga siva samay ke, kal ghaDiyo.n ka tik-tik bajna bahut yaad aayega... is sher ki kasam se tarif b kar nai pau mai sach hai jab fursat hi nai hungi to gadiyon ke tik tik bajne ki awaz kese suna dengi.. mat sochna bhool gaye tujhe ghar chhoDte hi, har saaNs ke sth tera pyar bahut yaad aayega.... apke is sher ne mere mummy ki yaad dila di muze bhot acha mai apki tarif dil se kya hun acha lika hai apne dil ko sukn mila apko padke. Abed Farooqui Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun |
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3rd September 2009, 12:17 AM
Ritu ji.....Aapki Yeh naveentam rachna zindgi ke kareeb ka ehsaas hai....iski parstuti ...shabd rachna....jazbaat...dil ki gehraai se bahut andar tak chhu jaate hai......mujhe aapki rachna ka ek ek sher itna behtreen laga ....sabhi ko tahe dil se daad deta hu.....hamesha ki tarha aise hi likhte rahiye.....khush rahiye.....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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3rd September 2009, 08:15 AM
Ritu jee,
Kaise hain aap? aapki ghazal padhna aachA lagta hai .. mujhe nahi lagta koi bhi beete kal bhul sakta hai ... beeta hua kal toh humara saaya hai ..shayad aaj hum jo bhi hai kuch uski wajah se .. ehsaas bahut khoobsuraat lagey .. aur bahut khoobsurti ke saath aapne pesh kiya hai .. Umeed aur dua karti hu ki aap yuhi pyaari yaadien humari nazar karte rahe .... take care Duaon ke saath aapki mandeep  ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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3rd September 2009, 01:36 PM
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bus yun hi sath dete rahiye aapke dil ko chhoo gaye agar yeh ehsaas toh sach me.n ye humare liye bahut faqr ki baat hai. bahut bahut shukriya! khush rahiye aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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3rd September 2009, 01:43 PM
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par kaafi mashaqqat karni paDhi aapka reply samajhne me.n  par sach me.n bahut bahut accha laga aapne mamuli se ehsaaso.n ki gehrayii ko samjha uske liye bahut bahut shukriya... khush rahiye aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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3rd September 2009, 02:02 PM
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kaise hai aap? mere in chaNd jajbaato.n ko ek pehchaan dene ke liye bahut baht shukriya. ab aapne huqm diya hai to humara bhi farz banta hai ke koshish karte rahe acche se accha likhne ka... bahut bahut shukriya sath dene ke liye khush rahiye aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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3rd September 2009, 02:07 PM
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main bilkul theek..mast as always..!! aap batao aap kaisi ho? bahut baht shukriya apna kimti waqt mere in chaNd ehsaaso.n ko dene ke liye.. bahut accha laga aapka reply paDh ker... aise hi sath deti rahiye khush rahiye aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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10th September 2009, 10:04 AM
Ritu Ji,
Aap ke ehsaast aur jazbaat aap ki shayri se jhalak rahe hain, Boht kamal likha aap ne, Wesy to saray hi shair achay hain lekin yeh 2 shair mujhe zaberdast lagey, hoNge makhmali bistar aalishaan vaha.n fir bhi, mujhe apna yeh tuta takht bahut yaad aayega... mat sochna bhool gaye tujhe ghar chhoDte hi, har saaNs ke sth tera pyar bahut yaad aayega.... Aisey hi likhtey rahiye, KHush Rahiye, Take care, Rep + + tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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11th September 2009, 03:46 PM
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take care khush rahiye aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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11th September 2009, 04:11 PM
Namaste Ritu jii
kaisi hain aap Aapne apne jazbaat ka izhaar behad khoobsurti se apni is nazm mein kiya hai ............................. alfaaz lateef aur ehsaas purasar hain........................... dil se daad qubool kijiye................. thanks for sharing such nice work.................. aise hi likhti rahiye khush rahiye apka dost Fezan . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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14th September 2009, 11:47 AM
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hum theek hai,infact bahut theek... aap kaise hain? aapki daad humesha ki tarah sir-ankho.n per.... yun hio sath dete rahiye khush rahiye God bless you aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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14th September 2009, 03:36 PM
Ritu jii AadaaB.......
Wakai behad lambe antaral ke bad apki koi post aayi hai but realy bahut hi umda aur gehri soch ko apne bayan kiya hai, Excellent thought and feelings and your observation is too much good.... Bahut barik soch hai aapki issay hi likhate rahiye,, Khush rahiye.. Khuda Hafez... 
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15th September 2009, 11:34 AM
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humesha ki tarah sath dene ka bahut bahut shukriya... khush rahiye God bless you khuda hafiz. aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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15th September 2009, 01:30 PM
hello Ritu dear
achchi koshish par meri daad qabul kare Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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16th September 2009, 04:18 PM
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aapki daad sir ankho.n par..... bahut bahut shukriya aapka........... take care aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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17th September 2009, 12:22 AM
Hamare bhi daad kabuul karein...! Accha likha hai aapne...!
Yunhi likhte rahein Duaaon ke saath Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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17th September 2009, 07:43 AM
Adarniya Ritu Ji
daad kabul kijiyega wakai me aapne alfajo ke maydhaym se apne bhawana ko bahut khub shabdo se bayaan kiya hai. sach me tareef ke kabil hai. bahut aacha .. aise hi koshish karte rahiyega. khus rahe kaamyaab hote rahe........ Ajay nidaan http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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17th September 2009, 01:29 PM
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God Bless you aapki dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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17th September 2009, 04:26 PM
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thank you so much for giving ur precious time to my thoughts.. Aate rahiye... God bless you aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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14th October 2009, 05:13 PM
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khush rahiye God bless you aate rahiye aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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