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Yeh Bhi To Ho Sakta Hai... -
31st May 2010, 09:08 AM
Namaskaar Dosto.N,
Aaj bazm me.N hazir hooN ek choti si koshish le kar. Meri ye rachna adhoori hai,kacchi hai aur is layak nahi.N hai ke SDC par post ki jaye par fir bhi maiN aap sabke samne apni ye koshish "yeh bhi to ho sakta hai.." rakh rahi hooN. Galtiya.N jaruur bataiyega. ~##~ Pesh hai : Yeh bhi to ho sakta hai…. Chupke chupke mujhe dekhna adat me shamil uski, Mujhko apna maan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai…. Meri khushiyo.N ki parwaah mujhse jyada karta hai, Jajbaato.n ko jaan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… Kal tak mujhse laDna milna itna hi to kaam tha uska, Mera sapna dekh liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… Aj suna hai dilli(Delhi) ko jaanewala hai vo shehjada, Kuch man me.N Thaan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… Uske baad kaise jee pauNgi darti rehti hooN, Vo bhi meri yaad me.N taDpe,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… Ek jhalak pane ko pahunchi uske ghar chupke se, Usne mujhko dekh liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… -Ritu ......Ek Mausam Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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31st May 2010, 10:10 AM
Ritu Ji....Namaste ! Aapki tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoobsurat bane hai...padhke apne se lage....aapki iss peshkash ke Lafz ......kahi mann me Ghar saa kar jaate hai.....
bahut umdaa khayalon ko......seedhe-saadhe lafzon me bayaani .....asardaar lagi mujhe.....aise hi aur bhi behtar ehsaason ke saath likhti rahen..... Yeh do khayaal ... bahut khaas lage mujhe Uske baad kaise jee pauNgi darti rehti hooN, Vo bhi meri yaad me.N taDpe,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… Ek jhalak pane ko pahunchi uske ghar chupke se, Usne mujhko dekh liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… dil se daad hazir hai......qubuul farmaayen.... khush rahen.... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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31st May 2010, 10:19 AM
hmmmm.........
likha theek ho.......ye bhi ho sakta hai..  nahi yehi hai...likha theeek hai mai galat hu........ye bhi to ho sakta hai magar mai to kabhi galat hota hi nahi  ab shehzaade sahab dilli pahuch gaye hai....vikasji ko numbar unka de dijiyega... unhe spevial invitation dena hai meeting ka.... dekhte hai tumhari kavita se kitna dimag bhrasT hua hau...damage access karte hai phir kahenge tumhare layak hai ke nahi ya badal gaye hai |
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31st May 2010, 10:20 AM
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Keep writing and sharing... Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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31st May 2010, 10:28 AM
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Arrey kaha.N aap mujhe chane ke jhaaD per chaDha rahe hai.N..........??? bahut jyada keh diya aapne. Aapne paDha,Reply kiya accha laga... God Bless You But, Chane ke jhaaD par mat chaDaya kijiye. Aapki Dost, Ritu  Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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31st May 2010, 10:43 AM
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 Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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31st May 2010, 10:59 AM
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radhe radhe ahsaas bahut sundar hai.......dil se daad hazir hai kubul karen....yun hi likhti rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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31st May 2010, 11:44 AM
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Bahut hi acha likha hai aapne,,,,,,,dil ko chu gai aapki ye koshish...... Ek jhalak pane ko pahunchi uske ghar chupke se, Usne mujhko dekh liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… ye uprokat panktiya mujhe behad pasand aai Aise hi likhte rahiye......!!!! Aapki dost Kavita Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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31st May 2010, 12:06 PM
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Bahut Bahut shukriya Apki Dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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2nd June 2010, 09:50 AM
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Hosla afja'ii ka dilse shukriya Khush rahiye, God Bless You apki dost, Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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2nd June 2010, 10:29 AM
Aj suna hai dilli(Delhi) ko jaanewala hai vo shehjada,
Kuch man me.N Thaan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… This one is best one ................... baki bhi achey hai khayal lekin beech mai kafiyaa hi change kar diyaa aapne .. fir bhi i like really this one .... natural sa thougth hai , mujeh aise sher abhut achy lagte hai, |
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2nd June 2010, 07:23 PM
lagta hai tuje kisi se pyar ho gaya hai
tabhi to itni achi achi baate bayan karti hai bahut acha likha hai tune khush rehna hamesha tera bhai dinu AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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3rd June 2010, 02:14 AM
Aj suna hai dilli(Delhi) ko jaanewala hai vo shehjada,
Kuch man me.N Thaan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… AHAAAAN...........hahahaha............ Does this couplet has something to do with the thread..."lets meet everyone".....  Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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3rd June 2010, 11:28 AM
yeh bhi to ho sakta hai…
ji nice creation......................... Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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4th June 2010, 03:22 AM
Ritu Jee Aadab!
Bhai wah wah aur bus wah kahne ko jee chaha raha hai..... Kya ahsaas kya andaaz aur kya khoob bayani ki hia aapne.... Behad khoob khayaaloN ko lafzoN mein dhala hai aapne....... wakai aap ki is peshkash per dil shaad ho gaya..... Dil se daad nikli hia kabool kijiye...... Aise hi khubsurat kalaam likhati rahiye..... Khush rahiye... Khuda Hafez...... 
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4th June 2010, 08:58 AM
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Khush rahiye God Bless You Aapki dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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4th June 2010, 09:01 AM
Apni kaamzaab koshish ko yuN hi adhura maan lia,yeh bhii to ho sakta hai........
Ritu ji......bahut badia qabilay tareef.aisi adhuri gazleiN or nazmeiN agar kuch aur bhii heiN to jhat se post kar deiN. rajinderseep |
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5th June 2010, 12:39 PM
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Ehsaaso.N ko likhen me.N kafiye par itna dhyan hi nahi.N diya. Next time dhyan rakhuNgi. Shukriya apna kimti waqt aur ra'i dene ke liye. Dil se shukriya, God Bless You Apki Dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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5th June 2010, 04:25 PM
bahut khub
ahsas ko bahut hi acha likha dil ko choo gaya daad hajir he sada khush rahe |
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7th June 2010, 09:17 AM
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koi hume.N chahe tab to kuch baat bhi ho..." Choti si koShiSh aapko pasaNd aayi,accha laga. Aise hi aate rahiye, God Bless You. Apki Choti Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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7th June 2010, 03:43 PM
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bahut khub AHSAS KO ACHE AUR SARAL SABDO ME LIKHA SADA KHUSH RAHO APKI DIDI SHAKUNTALA |
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9th June 2010, 02:08 PM
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M damn sure about it......   Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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9th June 2010, 02:10 PM
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God Bless You Thanks again. Apki Dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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10th June 2010, 04:50 PM
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Aap bhi outstanding reply dene lage..... Keep it up...... bahut bahut shukriya........ Apki daad aur daad dene ka style dono.N hi bahut khoob rahe. Khush rahiye God Bless You Apki Dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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12th June 2010, 11:40 AM
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aapka khayal toh n'ek hai aadhi adhuri ghazals post karne ka par kya karu.N har aadhi adhuri ghazal ko post karna accha nahi.N hota... kaash Ajay jee aur Ghayel sahab ki najar is post par paDhe.. Apke sath ka dil se shukriya, GOd Bless You Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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14th June 2010, 09:59 AM
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Kaisi ho? Aapka reply dekh kar bahut khushi hui aur 2-2 reply dekh kar to aseemit khushi hui KyoNki aisa bahut kam hota hai ke meri post par koi 2 baar reply kare....... Sada khush rahiye. Bahut si duao.N ke sath, Apki choti Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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14th June 2010, 10:59 AM
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Choo gaye aapke jazbaat-e-dil .. padhke laga shayad aapne apni koi adhuri si chahat likhi ho main ye hi dua karta hoon ke jo aap chahti hain vo aapko mil jaye !! Khuda salamat rakhe.. keep writting !! " Mushkil Bahut hai har waqt 'Rubru-e-Haqeeqat' rehna
Jeene ke liye kuch 'VEHAM' zaruri hain ! " ~ A B H I N A V ~ |
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14th June 2010, 01:42 PM
Nice work...............................
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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15th June 2010, 02:08 AM
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 To mohtarma humare sare reply's outstanding hi hote hai....... Par is reply mein kahiN aur ke jalne ki buu aa rahi hai..... Achcha hai! Par aaplog jagaa per badlaa nahi lete yeh bura hai..... Jee shukriyaa ......
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15th June 2010, 10:24 AM
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bahut hee badiya lines hain.......... too nice keep it up एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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15th June 2010, 10:37 AM
Chupke chupke mujhe dekhna adat me shamil uski,
Mujhko apna maan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai…. Meri khushiyo.N ki parwaah mujhse jyada karta hai, Jajbaato.n ko jaan liya ho,yeh bhi to ho sakta hai… ye hi hua hoga pakka... khoob likha afsana . good |
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15th June 2010, 02:40 PM
Dear Ritu ma'am
hone ko to kuch bhi ho sakta hai, aapki khush-fahmi bhi aur galatfahmi bhi  khair, aapne likha khoobsurat hai dil ki be-qaraari bayaaN ki hai aapne, aapki es confusion ko "yeh bhi to ho sakta hai" woh aakar clear kar hi deN to behtar hai aur haan aapki es confusion par woh aapni "HAAN" ki stamp laga deN to hume bhi accha lagega, vaise yeh Mohtarm hai kauN jinka zikar opper kuch dostoN ne bhi kiya hai meri baat ka bura mat maniyega, sabke review padkar hamara bhi dil kiya ki aapse kuch chuhalbaazi ho jaye pyar bahre ahsaas hamesha bane raheN....ameeN .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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24th June 2010, 03:45 PM
So very well written Ritu ji. Well expressed..
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3rd July 2010, 12:23 PM
achchhi gazal hai ritu ji ...aisa hi ho
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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3rd July 2010, 01:32 PM
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bahut bahut shukriya apka. Quote:
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hosla-afja'ii ka dil se shukriya. yun hi sath dete rahe.N. Quote:
bahut naTkhat ho aap.......... thanks for reply. God bless you all. Aapki dost, Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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3rd July 2010, 01:34 PM
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Ab koi khush ho ya ho khafa.......... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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7th July 2010, 01:11 PM
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aksar bahte hue aansu bhi bat kiya karte hain...!" Tarang |
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19th July 2010, 08:33 PM
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Aap to baksh do....  Vaise abhi tak confusion state hi hai.................... Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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19th July 2010, 08:38 PM
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yun hi waqt dete rahjiye Duao.N ke sath, Apki dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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23rd July 2010, 01:44 AM
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Apne ehsaason ko badi khoobsoorti ke saath jis andaaz mein aapne alfaazon mei taraasha hai taareef-e-qabil hai... mohabbat bhari is rachna ko humaare saath share karne ka bahut bahut shukriya... Duaaon k saath.... |
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