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intezaar - 1st May 2015, 12:13 PM

Teri khwaaish ki khaamoshi
zaar-o-nizaar* deti hai

Main yun mar mar ke jeeta hooN
Mujhe phir maar deti hai

mast aankhon ki baichaaini
bhi kya khumaar deti hai

jab main khwaabidaa hota hooN
mujhe deedaar deti hai

bahut bebas si halat mein
qaul-o-qaraar** deti hai

tere baare mein likhtaa hooN
aur yeh ashaar deti hai

* weakening/kamzoor kar dena
** acceptance


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4th May 2015, 12:39 PM

mast aankhon ki baichaaini
bhi kya khumaar deti hai

jab main khwaabidaa hota hooN
mujhe deedaar deti hai

bahut bebas si halat mein
qaul-o-qaraar** deti hai

tere baare mein likhtaa hooN
aur yeh ashaar deti hai


arrry waaaaaaaaaaaah...

kamal hii kamal hy Mast bhai ...

kia baat hy ... jawab nahi aap ka ...

dilli daad qabool kejiye


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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4th May 2015, 12:56 PM

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mast aankhon ki baichaaini
bhi kya khumaar deti hai

jab main khwaabidaa hota hooN
mujhe deedaar deti hai

bahut bebas si halat mein
qaul-o-qaraar** deti hai

tere baare mein likhtaa hooN
aur yeh ashaar deti hai


arrry waaaaaaaaaaaah...

kamal hii kamal hy Mast bhai ...

kia baat hy ... jawab nahi aap ka ...

dilli daad qabool kejiye
Khaaksaar ki koshish aapko pas and aayi mamnoon hooN janaab. Yunhi saath dete rahiyeGaa.



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तेरे बारे में लिखता हूँ
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waah...
....apne mere dil ki baat likh di ho jaise...bahut khoob mast jii.....



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waah...
....apne mere dil ki baat likh di ho jaise...bahut khoob mast jii.....
Shayron ki dil ki hadd ammoman ek jaisi hi hoti hai. Saath ka behad shukrguzaar hoon madhu Ji



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Teri khwaaish ki khaamoshi
zaar-o-nizaar* deti hai

Main yun mar mar ke jeeta hooN
Mujhe phir maar deti hai

mast aankhon ki baichaaini
bhi kya khumaar deti hai

jab main khwaabidaa hota hooN
mujhe deedaar deti hai

bahut bebas si halat mein
qaul-o-qaraar** deti hai

tere baare mein likhtaa hooN
aur yeh ashaar deti hai

* weakening/kamzoor kar dena
** acceptance


तेरी ख्वाइश की खामोशी
ज़ार-ओ-निज़ार* देती है

मैं यूँ मर मर के जीता हूँ
मुझे फिर मार देती है

मस्त आँखों की बैचैनी
भी क्या खुमार देती है

जब मैं ख्वाबिदा होता हूँ
मुझे दीदार देती है

बहुत बेबस सी हालत में
कॉल-ओ-क़रार** देती है

तेरे बारे में लिखता हूँ
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waaahhh anu bhai.... kya baat hai..... ummmdah peshkash is baar bhi.....


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waaahhh anu bhai.... kya baat hai..... ummmdah peshkash is baar bhi.....
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