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"Woh mujhe Yaad to Karti hogi" -
12th April 2005, 11:14 AM
Badli saawan ki koi jab bhi barasti hogi.
Dil hi dil mein woh mujhe yaad to karti hogi.
Theek se so na saki hogi khayalon se mere.
Karvatein raat bhar bistar pe badalti hogi.
Koshishen jitni bhi ki hongi bhulaane ki mujhe.
Yaad utni hi meri aur ubharti hogi.
Dar pe aahat si hui hogi hawa se jab bhi.
Dhadkanen dil ki bahot tez dhadakti hogi.
Khat na aane ka sabab jaan liya hai maine.
Kahin ruswai na ho jaye, wo darti hogi.
Poochti hogi hawaon se mera haal e dil woh
Uski galiyon se hawa jab bhi guzarti hogi.
Apne seene se laga kar meri tasveer ko woh
Aahen raaton ko mere pyar mein bharti hogi.
Jhooti aane ki khabar paake woh meri ajmal.
Kabhi sajti to kabhi aur sanwarti hogi.
Dil to kya Cheez hai, Hum Rooh mein Utre Hote...
Tumne Chaha hi nahin Chahne Walon ki Tarha...
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12th April 2005, 11:03 PM
very nice bohat acha likha hai keep it up
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13th April 2005, 10:21 AM
Hi Ajmal Ji,
Hmmmm very presumptuous aren't u!!
Lekin, bohot hi khoob likha hai aapne bhai. Bohot acchha laga parhke. Humari daad qabool kare aur umeed hai aage bhi aise hi kalaam parhne ko milenge aap ki oor se.
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hi. -
13th April 2005, 02:22 PM
Hi Moon...
Thanks for reply...
Aapne meri Gazal pasand ki uske liye shukriya...
Agar aap log aise hi haosla badhate rahenge to mujhe aur achcha likhne ki himmat milti rahegiii....
Thanks once again....
Awaiting
Ajmal
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13th April 2005, 02:24 PM
Assalamoalaekum Salim Bhai....
Khaeriyat se to hain????????
Daad dene k liye shukriya....
Keep in touch yaar....
Awaiting
Ajmal
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hi -
14th April 2005, 01:54 PM
Hi Ajmal ji
Bahot hi khoobsoorti se aapne apne words bayan kiye hain...
Vakai tareef ke kaabil hain...
Keep it up friend....
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14th April 2005, 05:44 PM
Nice one dear.
I m Impressed.
Keep it up.
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15th April 2005, 11:03 AM
Thanks Ajju_ji
May i know ur full name plz...
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15th April 2005, 05:00 PM
Badli saawan ki koi jab bhi barasti hogi.
Dil hi dil mein woh mujhe yaad to karti hogi.
Theek se so na saki hogi khayalon se mere.
Karvatein raat bhar bistar pe badalti hogi.
Very Nice........
Koshishen jitni bhi ki hongi bhulaane ki mujhe.
Yaad utni hi meri aur ubharti hogi.
Dar pe aahat si hui hogi hawa se jab bhi.
Dhadkanen dil ki bahot tez dhadakti hogi.
Waahhh!
Khat na aane ka sabab jaan liya hai maine.
Kahin ruswai na ho jaye, wo darti hogi.
Poochti hogi hawaon se mera haal e dil woh
Uski galiyon se hawa jab bhi guzarti hogi.
man....his one is simply beautifulll......
Apne seene se laga kar meri tasveer ko woh
Aahen raaton ko mere pyar mein bharti hogi.
Jhooti aane ki khabar paake woh meri ajmal.
Kabhi sajti to kabhi aur sanwarti hogi.
Kyaa baaat haiii!!
Hi!
Aapke khayaall aur unko bayaan karne ka andaaz dono ne mujhe bahut hi prabhavit kiya hai.... meri daad kubool lijiyega.. plz doo keep writing
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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Bahut Khoob Ajmal sahib -
15th April 2005, 08:35 PM
Khat na aane ka sabab jaan liya hai maine.
Kahin ruswai na ho jaye, wo darti hogi.
Poochti hogi hawaon se mera haal e dil woh
Uski galiyon se hawa jab bhi guzarti hogi.
Apne seene se laga kar meri tasveer ko woh
Aahen raaton ko mere pyar mein bharti hogi.
Jhooti aane ki khabar paake woh meri ajmal.
Kabhi sajti to kabhi aur sanwarti hogi.
Bahut Khoob Ajmal Sahib Daad kabool keejiye aur aise hi achhe achhe kalaam likhte rahiye
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16th April 2005, 05:44 PM
Thank you very much Pulkit Gupta and Naresh....
Agar aap logon ki duaaen saath rahin aur ooper wale ka karam raha to main aisi hi khoobsoorat Gazlein aap ke saamne pesh karta rahoonga....
Thanks again....
Awaiting/Regards
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18th April 2005, 12:16 PM
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Badli saawan ki koi jab bhi barasti hogi.
Dil hi dil mein woh mujhe yaad to karti hogi.
Theek se so na saki hogi khayalon se mere.
Karvatein raat bhar bistar pe badalti hogi.
Koshishen jitni bhi ki hongi bhulaane ki mujhe.
Yaad utni hi meri aur ubharti hogi.
Dar pe aahat si hui hogi hawa se jab bhi.
Dhadkanen dil ki bahot tez dhadakti hogi.
Khat na aane ka sabab jaan liya hai maine.
Kahin ruswai na ho jaye, wo darti hogi.
Poochti hogi hawaon se mera haal e dil woh
Uski galiyon se hawa jab bhi guzarti hogi.
Apne seene se laga kar meri tasveer ko woh
Aahen raaton ko mere pyar mein bharti hogi.
Jhooti aane ki khabar paake woh meri ajmal.
Kabhi sajti to kabhi aur sanwarti hogi.
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Janaab Ajmal saheb...
Hum to aapki Gazal ke fan ho gaye...
Bahot hi khoobsurat gazal hai....
Thanks 4 gazal and keep it up...
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18th April 2005, 02:27 PM
Janaab Ajmal saheb...
Hum to aapki Gazal ke fan ho gaye...
Bahot hi khoobsurat gazal hai....
Thanks 4 gazal and keep it up...
Bahot bahot shukriya Shalu jiii ki aapne meri Gazal ko itna pasand kiya....
Khuda ne chaha to isse bhi khoobsurat gazlon se aapse mukhaatib hota rahoonga.....
Ajmal
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20th April 2005, 11:03 AM
Ajmal Ji,
My name is Izhar... and my nick name is Ajju....
My girlfriend call me Ajju_ji so that i register my name in this forum as Ajju_ji....
Thanks for reply
Ajju_ji
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21st April 2005, 09:54 AM
Hi Ajju_ji,
I think u r new in this forum.....
M i right dear....
Plz pm me if u want to more about me....
Thanks...
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Ajmal
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26th April 2005, 12:48 PM
Hi Ajmal Ji,
Aapki shayri ki jitni bhi taareef ki jaye kam hai....
Maine aapke sher padhe, bahot pasand aaye....
Sachmuch aap daad ke haqdaar hain....
Aise hi likhte rahiye...
Awaara Baadal
Main aur meri Aawaargi....
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27th April 2005, 04:04 PM
Hi,
Nice Id dear...
Thanks for reply....
Ajmal
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28th April 2005, 01:52 AM
Wah..........Wah........Wah.........
Bahut khoob Ajmal ji, aaise hi likhte rehna!
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30th April 2005, 12:16 PM
Shukriya Parul jiii,
Agar aap jaise log himmat badhate rahenge to insha allah is se bhi behtar gazal likhoonga.....
Aap ki haosla afzai ke liye shukriya...
Ajmal
Dil to kya Cheez hai, Hum Rooh mein Utre Hote...
Tumne Chaha hi nahin Chahne Walon ki Tarha...
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30th April 2005, 06:26 PM
ajmalji
kamal kar diya aapne
very nice
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2nd May 2005, 02:56 PM
Hi,
Haosla afzai k liye bahot bahot shukriya Sonal jiii.....
Main soch raha tha k shayad aapko meri yeh gazal pasand nahin aayi shayad isi liye aapne reply nahin kiya.....
Aapka reply ye bayan kar raha hai ke aapko gazal pasand aayi....
Shukriya....for Encouragement....
Ajmal
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Tumne Chaha hi nahin Chahne Walon ki Tarha...
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4th May 2005, 02:46 PM
Hi Ajmal Jii,
Badli saawan ki koi jab bhi barasti hogi.
Dil hi dil mein woh mujhe yaad to karti hogi.
Theek se so na saki hogi khayalon se mere.
Karvatein raat bhar bistar pe badalti hogi.
Koshishen jitni bhi ki hongi bhulaane ki mujhe.
Yaad utni hi meri aur ubharti hogi.
Dar pe aahat si hui hogi hawa se jab bhi.
Dhadkanen dil ki bahot tez dhadakti hogi.
Khat na aane ka sabab jaan liya hai maine.
Kahin ruswai na ho jaye, wo darti hogi.
Poochti hogi hawaon se mera haal e dil woh
Uski galiyon se hawa jab bhi guzarti hogi.
Apne seene se laga kar meri tasveer ko woh
Aahen raaton ko mere pyar mein bharti hogi.
Jhooti aane ki khabar paake woh meri ajmal.
Kabhi sajti to kabhi aur sanwarti hogi.
Bahot hi khoobsurat gazal hai. Lagta hai yeh kalaam aapne dil ki gehraiyon se likha hai. Sachmuch mujhe bahot pasand aaya.
Post karne ke liye shukriya.
Shaela Khan
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6th May 2005, 12:28 PM
Hi Shaela Khan,
Bahot hi khoobsurat gazal hai. Lagta hai yeh kalaam aapne dil ki gehraiyon se likha hai. Sachmuch mujhe bahot pasand aaya.
Post karne ke liye shukriya.
Shaela Khan
Thanks for Encourage me...
Yeh meri khushnaseebi hai k aapko mera kalaam pasand aaya.....
Bas yun hi saath nibhaati rahiyega.....
Ajmal
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Tumne Chaha hi nahin Chahne Walon ki Tarha...
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9th May 2005, 11:04 AM
Good Gazal dear.
Waise to main is site ka new member hoon magar aapki gazal ne mujhe bahot mutaassir kiya isliye tareef kiye bina na reh saka.....
Bye and Take Care.
Ameer Sarwar
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Good Gazal dear.
Waise to main is site ka new member hoon magar aapki gazal ne mujhe bahot mutaassir kiya isliye tareef kiye bina na reh saka.....
Bye and Take Care.
Ameer Sarwar
Thank u so much for reply....
Khuda ne chaha to aap sab doston ka saath yun hi nibhaata rahoonga....
Bye & Take care.
Dil to kya Cheez hai, Hum Rooh mein Utre Hote...
Tumne Chaha hi nahin Chahne Walon ki Tarha...
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20th September 2005, 11:28 AM
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Nice one dear.
I m Impressed.
Keep it up.
Sahil
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Thanks for reply Sahil dear...
Keep reading...
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Hi Ajmal Ji,
Aapki shayri ki jitni bhi taareef ki jaye kam hai....
Maine aapke sher padhe, bahot pasand aaye....
Sachmuch aap daad ke haqdaar hain....
Aise hi likhte rahiye...
Awaara Baadal
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Thank u so much dear...
May i know ur real name plz....
Dil to kya Cheez hai, Hum Rooh mein Utre Hote...
Tumne Chaha hi nahin Chahne Walon ki Tarha...
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ajmalji
kamal kar diya aapne
very nice
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This is for some one very special.....
Woh sookhe phool tum apni kitaabon se hata dena....
Jahan tak ho sake har naksh Chahat ka mita dena....
Tumhari Bewafai doosron par kyon ujaagar ho....
Mere kuch khat tumhare paas hain unko Jala dena....
Dil to kya Cheez hai, Hum Rooh mein Utre Hote...
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hi ajmal jee,its really very nice one,keep it up
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चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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Thank u so much Dost....
Keep reading....
Shayars.com
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hi ajmal jee,its really very nice one,keep it up
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Thank u so much dear for reading....
Keep up ur great work...
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kya baat he,khoobsurat kalpna,accha laga,likhte rahe,dhanyabaad......
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3rd May 2008, 10:03 PM
Badli saawan ki koi jab bhi barasti hogi.
Dil hi dil mein woh mujhe yaad to karti hogi.
Theek se so na saki hogi khayalon se mere.
Karvatein raat bhar bistar pe badalti hogi.
Koshishen jitni bhi ki hongi bhulaane ki mujhe.
Yaad utni hi meri aur ubharti hogi.
Dar pe aahat si hui hogi hawa se jab bhi.
Dhadkanen dil ki bahot tez dhadakti hogi.
Khat na aane ka sabab jaan liya hai maine.
Kahin ruswai na ho jaye, wo darti hogi.
Poochti hogi hawaon se mera haal e dil woh
Uski galiyon se hawa jab bhi guzarti hogi.
Apne seene se laga kar meri tasveer ko woh
Aahen raaton ko mere pyar mein bharti hogi.
Jhooti aane ki khabar paake woh meri ajmal.
Kabhi sajti to kabhi aur sanwarti hogi.
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Daad dene ke liye Bahot Bahot Shukriya mere Dost...
Keep Reading...
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23rd August 2008, 02:51 PM
wow.....bahut khoob...keep it up
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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wow.....bahut khoob...keep it up
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Hi Sunita....
Glad u like it dear..
Thanx for reply over here....
Take Care n Keep SMiling Always...
Dil to kya Cheez hai, Hum Rooh mein Utre Hote...
Tumne Chaha hi nahin Chahne Walon ki Tarha...
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