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24th November 2008, 07:42 PM
tujh se doori seh nahi paate dil hota bezaar bahot gam ke din aur raatein hain do lekin hai dushwaar bahot aksar aisa hota hai tu aata hai khwabon mein mere sargoshi se raaton ko karta hai awaaz bahot muskaate phoolon se lab aur shabnabi aankhon ki jhalak husn tera hai ek jalwa hai jis ke hain andaaz bahot kitne zamaane beet gaye din jo yeh guzra hai ishq mein haalat hai hi aisi jeet mein hai haar bahot tishna kaise tum rehte ho tanhai aur yaadon ke beech hum to guzarein mushkil se par lete hain parwaaz bahot |
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29th November 2008, 09:07 PM
very well written tishnaaaa.................................
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30th November 2008, 11:32 AM
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Very nice tishna...bohat khoob ayse he acha acha likhte rahen...khush rahen..apna khayal rakhna... |
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30th November 2008, 07:39 PM
thankx a lot sapna ji
aap ko pehli baar pada hai thankx a lot aap ne apna qeemti waqt diya |
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30th November 2008, 07:40 PM
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1st December 2008, 11:09 AM
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Ji zarur Janab INSAHALLAH..ate rahen gy....ji haan main kafi dino baad SDC per aya hon....ab ata he raho ga....khush rahen.... |
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