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**... Ajnabi ...** - 24th July 2005, 02:10 AM

Lagaavat jiss se jitna hota hai
Jhagraa ouss se utna hota hai

Ajnabi Jaan se ajeez ban jaye
Eissa hi koyi ghatna hota hai

Yaad karte hi ouss sadme ko
Na poucho dard kitna hota hai

Teri ankhon main phir jhanka
Saagar bhi gehra itna hota hai

Wafaa ke kinaare par hi rehna
Saakh 'Mushkil' jeetna hota hai

Saakh :Trust


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Meri Kavi Jee, Hope You are well :) Not Feeling Good Though, Right :)
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Meri Kavi Jee, Hope You are well :) Not Feeling Good Though, Right :) - 24th July 2005, 03:25 AM

Mushkil Danny, Very Nice **Kahan Se Kahan Aa Gaye Chalte Chalte_Ke Dil Ban Gaya Dard Ki RaazDhani~Badi Cheez Hain Pyaar Mein Doub Jaana~*~Nitin Mukesh Jee & Lata Jee Ki Aawaaz Mein~~~Youn Lagne Lagi Aaj Kal Zindegani(Kitni Baar Souna Ye Mat Puchhna...Really So Beautiful**)Iss Waqt Kuchh Jiyada Nahin Keh Sakti...Tumko Pata Hain Kyun...Shayri**Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Shukriya_Daad Aur Dher Sare Phoul Kuboul Karlon **Likhhte Rehna...Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...God bless You.

Keep smilling.......**


*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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Re: **... Ajnabi ...** - 24th July 2005, 03:49 AM

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Lagaavat jiss se jitna hota hai
Jhagraa ouss se utna hota hai

Ajnabi Jaan se ajeez ban jaye
Eissa hi koyi ghatna hota hai

Yaad karte hi ouss sadme ko
Na poucho dard kitna hota hai

Teri ankhon main phir jhanka
Saagar bhi gehra itna hota hai

Wafaa ke kinaare par hi rehna
Saakh 'Mushkil' jeetna hota hai

Saakh :Trust

hi chachu

too good i really liked this one specially these lines

Teri ankhon main phir jhanka
Saagar bhi gehra itna hota hai


keep writing

luv Priya


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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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24th July 2005, 10:51 PM

hi amanspeare!!!!

lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely....very lovingly written
and another masterpiece from the master of masterpieces....i loved this one.....

keep writing

take care
bye
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Re: Meri Kavi Jee, Hope You are well :) Not Feeling Good Though, Right :) - 25th July 2005, 07:45 PM

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Mushkil Danny, Very Nice **Kahan Se Kahan Aa Gaye Chalte Chalte_Ke Dil Ban Gaya Dard Ki RaazDhani~Badi Cheez Hain Pyaar Mein Doub Jaana~*~Nitin Mukesh Jee & Lata Jee Ki Aawaaz Mein~~~Youn Lagne Lagi Aaj Kal Zindegani(Kitni Baar Souna Ye Mat Puchhna...Really So Beautiful**)Iss Waqt Kuchh Jiyada Nahin Keh Sakti...Tumko Pata Hain Kyun...Shayri**Dil Ki Gehraaion Se Shukriya_Daad Aur Dher Sare Phoul Kuboul Karlon **Likhhte Rehna...Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...God bless You.

Keep smilling.......**
Thanks for appreciating...Shimul! Geet bahout acha lagaa...!
Weisse saturday ko hum shayri na soun sake...Topfm (Mauritian Radio) soun.na pada... !

Phoul dil se kaboul kiya humne...!

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Re: Re: **... Ajnabi ...** - 25th July 2005, 07:51 PM

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hi chachu

too good i really liked this one specially these lines

Teri ankhon main phir jhanka
Saagar bhi gehra itna hota hai


keep writing

luv Priya
Thanks...Priya!

They are my favourite lines too...!

Take good care of yourself...thik hai?

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hi amanspeare!!!!

lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely....very lovingly written
and another masterpiece from the master of masterpieces....i loved this one.....

keep writing

take care
bye
warda
Thanks for liking this one too...My Lovely Friend!

Take good care of yourself...ok ?

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25th July 2005, 09:18 PM

hello bhayya....kaise hein aapp????long time na....not able to come on the site as i used to do before....but today i've taken some time out for readin....n it was awsome to read ur poetry...
ur a wonderful writer.....can rite on ne subject.....amazin.....kaash main bhi aapki tarah likhpaaouu
ok take care
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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25th July 2005, 09:19 PM

hello bhayya....kaise hein aapp????long time na....not able to come on the site as i used to do before....but today i've taken some time out for readin....n it was awsome to read ur poetry...
ur a wonderful writer.....can rite on ne subject.....amazin.....kaash main bhi aapki tarah likh sakuuu
ok take care
ur bro


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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