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Chalo Aaj Dard Bante................!
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Love Chalo Aaj Dard Bante................! - 26th July 2007, 07:54 PM

DOSTON,
kehte hai khushi bantne se badhati hai,aur DARD bantne se kam ho jata hai.........hum chahte hai ki is jahan mai har ek insaan khush rahe.......aur is ke liye hum ek dusre ka dard bant le............hum apne doston ke liye itna to zaroor kar sakte hai........hai na?............
to chaliye yaha is GAME ke zariye hum sher-o-shayri main ek dusre ka dard bante............
is SHAYRI .COM ka har member apna dard yaha bayan kar sakta hai........humare paas kisi DARD ka MARHAM to nahi,par ek waada zaroor kar sakte hai ki aap apna dard bantege to woh zaroor kam ho jayega aur yakeenan aap ke dil ka booj halka ho jayega...............
shart ye hai ki hum jo bhi bayan kare SHER-O-SHAYRI mai kare............
chaliye shuruwat mai karti hoooooo.........

na jane kyon ye ankhen udaas rehti hai,
in ankhon mai kisi ki pyaas rehti hai,
ye jankar bhi ki woh meri kismat mai nahi,
phir bhi kyon unhe paane ki aas rehti hai...





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26th July 2007, 09:18 PM

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DOSTON,
kehte hai khushi bantne se badhati hai,aur DARD bantne se kam ho jata hai.........hum chahte hai ki is jahan mai har ek insaan khush rahe.......aur is ke liye hum ek dusre ka dard bant le............hum apne doston ke liye itna to zaroor kar sakte hai........hai na?............
to chaliye yaha is GAME ke zariye hum sher-o-shayri main ek dusre ka dard bante............
is SHAYRI .COM ka har member apna dard yaha bayan kar sakta hai........humare paas kisi DARD ka MARHAM to nahi,par ek waada zaroor kar sakte hai ki aap apna dard bantege to woh zaroor kam ho jayega aur yakeenan aap ke dil ka booj halka ho jayega...............
shart ye hai ki hum jo bhi bayan kare SHER-O-SHAYRI mai kare............
chaliye shuruwat mai karti hoooooo.........

na jane kyon ye ankhen udaas rehti hai,
in ankhon mai kisi ki pyaas rehti hai,
ye jankar bhi ki woh meri kismat mai nahi,
phir bhi kyon unhe paane ki aas rehti hai...

Lamha Mein Apka Naam To Nahin Jaanta Per Mujhe Aapke Khayal Bahut Pasand Aye aur Aisa Laga Ki Mere Dil Ki Baat Kisi Ne Mjhse Pehle Pehchanli Ho....I Like It Very Much...Shayad Hi Isse Pehle Mujhe Kisi Aur Ki Shayri Pasand Aye Ho Sach...Rahul


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Lamha Mein Apka Naam To Nahin Jaanta Per Mujhe Aapke Khayal Bahut Pasand Aye aur Aisa Laga Ki Mere Dil Ki Baat Kisi Ne Mjhse Pehle Pehchanli Ho....I Like It Very Much...Shayad Hi Isse Pehle Mujhe Kisi Aur Ki Shayri Pasand Aye Ho Sach..Rahul
HEY RAHUL,
dost, mera naam "LAMHA" hi hai.........shukriya aap ko mera khayal pasand aaya...........par sirf tarif karne se nahi chalega........aap ko is GAME ko aage badhana hoga.........meri likhi shayri ke jawab main koi sher likhana hoga........is silsile ko continue karna hoga...........aap samaj rahe hai na?..........to chaliye apna koi zabardast sher ya shayri hume bhi sunaye.................
aap ki dost,
LAMHA................
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26th July 2007, 09:34 PM

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DOSTON,
kehte hai khushi bantne se badhati hai,aur DARD bantne se kam ho jata hai.........hum chahte hai ki is jahan mai har ek insaan khush rahe.......aur is ke liye hum ek dusre ka dard bant le............hum apne doston ke liye itna to zaroor kar sakte hai........hai na?............
to chaliye yaha is GAME ke zariye hum sher-o-shayri main ek dusre ka dard bante............
is SHAYRI .COM ka har member apna dard yaha bayan kar sakta hai........humare paas kisi DARD ka MARHAM to nahi,par ek waada zaroor kar sakte hai ki aap apna dard bantege to woh zaroor kam ho jayega aur yakeenan aap ke dil ka booj halka ho jayega...............
shart ye hai ki hum jo bhi bayan kare SHER-O-SHAYRI mai kare............
chaliye shuruwat mai karti hoooooo.........

na jane kyon ye ankhen udaas rehti hai,
in ankhon mai kisi ki pyaas rehti hai,
ye jankar bhi ki woh meri kismat mai nahi,
phir bhi kyon unhe paane ki aas rehti hai...
bahut khoob lamha ji accha likha hai apne dard ko bahut ki khobsurti ke saath bayan kiya hai unhi likhti rahiye.............aap ka dost


"Do Pal Ruka Khushio.n ka Karwan"


Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko,
wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain.
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bahut khoob lamha ji accha likha hai apne dard ko bahut ki khobsurti ke saath bayan kiya hai unhi likhti rahiye.............aap ka dost
hey KASHIF,
aap ko mera likha acha laga ,is ke liye shukriya.............par ye kya baat hui KASHIF......aap ko is ke jawab mai kuch likhana hai..........aap aise nahi chut sakte hai........aap ko dard ka ye silsila zaari rakhana hai..........to ho jaye.........aap ki taraf se koi dil ko chu jane wala sher ya shayri......................
aap ki dost,
LAMHA............
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Bahut khoob Lamha ji.....mujhe apka khayaal kaafi pasand aaya ...
to leejiye hum is bazm mein ise aage badhaate hain is sher ke saath:

Wahi mahsoos kerte hain mohabbat ki tadap apne DIL mein...
Jo apne aap se badhker kisi ko PYAAR kerte hain.....

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Bahut khoob Lamha ji.....mujhe apka khayaal kaafi pasand aaya ...
to leejiye hum is bazm mein ise aage badhaate hain is sher ke saath:

Wahi mahsoos kerte hain mohabbat ki tadap apne DIL mein...
Jo apne aap se badhker kisi ko PYAAR kerte hain.....

Jawed....
HEY JAWED,
aap ke is sher ka jawab dena chahungi..........gaur farmaye.........

tumne na kiya yaad kabhi bhulkar humein,
hum ne to teri yaad mein sub kuch bhula diya,
mitne lagi hai dil se tere ab to parchaiya humari,
par ho saka na dur tu humse,humne khud ko mita diya..........
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HEY JAWED,
aap ke is sher ka jawab dena chahungi..........gaur farmaye.........

tumne na kiya yaad kabhi bhulkar humein,
hum ne to teri yaad mein sub kuch bhula diya,
mitne lagi hai dil se tere ab to parchaiya humari,
par ho saka na dur tu humse,humne khud ko mita diya..........

bahut khub lamha ji. aapki soch humein achi lagi.

dard ke barre mein hum likh nah payenge
ek aansu baha...to dariya ko rock nah payenge
tumhara daman geela ho jayega
aur sharm se hum kuch bol nah payenge

mohabaat mein ibadaat ki thi uski
hooton par naam uska, dil mein tasveer thi uski
par mohabaat k badle mein humein mohabaat nahi mili
jiss mehfil mein khade khade lut gaye.......wo mehfil thi uski........


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



Darkness falls on me like rain...
just
one drop at a time....

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bahut khub lamha ji. aapki soch humein achi lagi.

dard ke barre mein hum likh nah payenge
ek aansu baha...to dariya ko rock nah payenge
tumhara daman geela ho jayega
aur sharm se hum kuch bol nah payenge

mohabaat mein ibadaat ki thi uski
hooton par naam uska, dil mein tasveer thi uski
par mohabaat k badle mein humein mohabaat nahi mili
jiss mehfil mein khade khade lut gaye.......wo mehfil thi uski........
Wah......... kya baat hai...........MANISH,
daad kabul kijiye.................aap ka koi jawab nahi.................yu hi is dard -e -mehfil ko aage badhate rahiyega.......
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Well........i m quite new here

but.....after reading all this.....i got to knw that how friendly you all here.....!

Glad to be a member here.......


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chale aao yahan, gum-e-ibadat main,
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but.....after reading all this.....i got to knw that how friendly you all here.....!

Glad to be a member here.......


Gumo ko baatne ki zaroorat hai jinko,
chale aao yahan, gum-e-ibadat main,
duaon ki zarurat hai jinki......!




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bahut khub lamha ji. aapki soch humein achi lagi.

dard ke barre mein hum likh nah payenge
ek aansu baha...to dariya ko rock nah payenge
tumhara daman geela ho jayega
aur sharm se hum kuch bol nah payenge

mohabaat mein ibadaat ki thi uski
hooton par naam uska, dil mein tasveer thi uski
par mohabaat k badle mein humein mohabaat nahi mili
jiss mehfil mein khade khade lut gaye.......wo mehfil thi uski........
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28th July 2007, 07:37 AM

Beautiful thread...

Kal raat janay kya hua...

Kuch der pehlay neend say,

Kuch Ashq milnay aagaye...

Kuch khwaab bhi tootay huye,

Kuch log bhi roothay huye,

Kuch raasta bhatki hui,

Kuch gard mein lipti hui,

Kuch Be-tarha pheli hui,

Kuch khol mein simti hui,

Be-rabt si sochein kayee...

Bhooli hui batein kayee...

Aik shaks ki yaadein kayee...

Phir dair tak jaagi rahi,

Sochon mein Gum bethi rahi,

Ungli say thunday Farsh par...

aik naam hi likhti rahi,

Kal raat bhi woh raat thi...

Kuch Der pehlay neend say,

MEIN DER TAK ROTI RAHI....


Ek se musaafir hain, Ek sa muqaddar hai...
Main zameen pe tanha, aur woh aasmaano mein...
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Beautiful thread...

Kal raat janay kya hua...

Kuch der pehlay neend say,

Kuch Ashq milnay aagaye...

Kuch khwaab bhi tootay huye,

Kuch log bhi roothay huye,

Kuch raasta bhatki hui,

Kuch gard mein lipti hui,

Kuch Be-tarha pheli hui,

Kuch khol mein simti hui,

Be-rabt si sochein kayee...

Bhooli hui batein kayee...

Aik shaks ki yaadein kayee...

Phir dair tak jaagi rahi,

Sochon mein Gum bethi rahi,

Ungli say thunday Farsh par...

aik naam hi likhti rahi,

Kal raat bhi woh raat thi...

Kuch Der pehlay neend say,

MEIN DER TAK ROTI RAHI....



HI NAINA,
thanx a lot for joining us..........aap ke ehsaas bahut pyaare hai..........bahut saadgi hai inmein...............par phir bhi dil ko ajeeb sa dard de gaye................great job.........keep it up................
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Beautiful thread...

Kal raat janay kya hua...

Kuch der pehlay neend say,

Kuch Ashq milnay aagaye...

Kuch khwaab bhi tootay huye,

Kuch log bhi roothay huye,

Kuch raasta bhatki hui,

Kuch gard mein lipti hui,

Kuch Be-tarha pheli hui,

Kuch khol mein simti hui,

Be-rabt si sochein kayee...

Bhooli hui batein kayee...

Aik shaks ki yaadein kayee...

Phir dair tak jaagi rahi,

Sochon mein Gum bethi rahi,

Ungli say thunday Farsh par...

aik naam hi likhti rahi,

Kal raat bhi woh raat thi...

Kuch Der pehlay neend say,

MEIN DER TAK ROTI RAHI....

Bahut hi khoooooooob hai naina ji, bahut hi pyari poem, pyari jihi halki jihi, sach bolu to bahut hi aachha likha hai aapne



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Beautiful thread...

Kal raat janay kya hua...

Kuch der pehlay neend say,

Kuch Ashq milnay aagaye...

Kuch khwaab bhi tootay huye,

Kuch log bhi roothay huye,

Kuch raasta bhatki hui,

Kuch gard mein lipti hui,

Kuch Be-tarha pheli hui,

Kuch khol mein simti hui,

Be-rabt si sochein kayee...

Bhooli hui batein kayee...

Aik shaks ki yaadein kayee...

Phir dair tak jaagi rahi,

Sochon mein Gum bethi rahi,

Ungli say thunday Farsh par...

aik naam hi likhti rahi,

Kal raat bhi woh raat thi...

Kuch Der pehlay neend say,

MEIN DER TAK ROTI RAHI....

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28th July 2007, 09:35 AM

helo lamha ji aap muje nahi janti lekin yaha k bahut purane memb. muje acchhi tareh jaante he..vaise me yaha bahut arse baad laut k aayi hu..aur khud se hi umeed karti hu ki ab shayed ye aana-jana laga rahega.

lol lamha ji apka idea muje bahut pasand aaya aur ab me ise aage badate hue apne khayaal kuchh u paish karti hu...

Din Bher ki udaasi u nikli ki aankho ka sagar chhalak gaya..
dil aaj toot kar u bikhra ki dard chhalak chhalak k roya kiya..



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helo lamha ji aap muje nahi janti lekin yaha k bahut purane memb. muje acchhi tareh jaante he..vaise me yaha bahut arse baad laut k aayi hu..aur khud se hi umeed karti hu ki ab shayed ye aana-jana laga rahega.

lol lamha ji apka idea muje bahut pasand aaya aur ab me ise aage badate hue apne khayaal kuchh u paish karti hu...

Din Bher ki udaasi u nikli ki aankho ka sagar chhalak gaya..
dil aaj toot kar u bikhra ki dard chhalak chhalak k roya kiya..

kya baat hai..........main aap ko nahi janti,par aap ke ehsaas bahut khubsurat lage..........



chale is silsile ko aage badhaye.....................



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Awww!!! Aaooo dostooo DARDDD BAATEE (great idea LAMHA dear *hugs*)

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Awww!!! Aaooo dostooo DARDDD BAATEE (great idea LAMHA dear *hugs*)

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thanx ALBELI,




thanx u so much .....aap ko ye idea acha laga......yu hi dosti barkaraar rakhiyega............
aap ki dost,
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thanx ALBELI,




thanx u so much .....aap ko ye idea acha laga......yu hi dosti barkaraar rakhiyega............
aap ki dost,
LAMHA..............
wah lamha bahot khub likha he, me to aapka deewana ho gaya, mer e taraf se bhi ye suniye

usne jo mera sath na diya,
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wah lamha bahot khub likha he, me to aapka deewana ho gaya, mer e taraf se bhi ye suniye

usne jo mera sath na diya,
shayad uski bhi koi majburi rahi hogi. bewafaa to vo ho nahi sakti,
shayad meri mahhobbat hi adhuri rahi hogi.


bahut khub MIT...........

wo mile humse kahani bankar,
dil me rahe pyaar ki nishani bankar,
hum jinhe jagah dete hai aankho ke andar,
wo aksar nikal jate hai paani bankar...............


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thanx ALBELI,




thanx u so much .....aap ko ye idea acha laga......yu hi dosti barkaraar rakhiyega............
aap ki dost,
LAMHA..............
wah lamha bahot khub likha he, me to aapka deewana ho gaya, mer e taraf se bhi ye suniye

usne jo mera sath na diya,
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humare likhe ka jwab kahan hai????????????


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humare likhe ka jwab kahan hai????????????
sorry baba............ye raha aap ka jawab............

jab jab tumhe bhulaya,tum aur yaad aaye,
jaate nahi hai dil se abtak tumhare saaye,
tumse bichadne ka jab bhi khayal aaya,
tanhai to kya ,hum mehfil mai bhi ghabaraye..............
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hi lamha ji mujhe aapke khayal bhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut jyada pasnd aaye main bhi apke saath dard baatna chahti hoon
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hi lamha ji mujhe aapke khayal bhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut jyada pasnd aaye main bhi apke saath dard baatna chahti hoon
thanx nice to meet u lamha ji
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thank u SIMRAN..................welcome to sdc.....


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tumhari aankhon mein ek alag sa raaz hai
dil ki baat ya mohabaat ka khwaab hai
hum to nahi samaj payenge
tum hi batayo ...........LAMHA..........yhe kya baat hai


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tumhari aankhon mein ek alag sa raaz hai
dil ki baat ya mohabaat ka khwaab hai
hum to nahi samaj payenge
tum hi batayo ...........LAMHA..........yhe kya baat hai
HEY,MANISH,
aap janna chahte hai na ki kya baat hai,to lijiye suniye.....................


saamne na ho tum, to tarasti hai ankhen,
yaad mai teri barsti hai ankhen,
mere liye na sahi,inke liye aa jao,MANISH,
aap ka bepanah intezar karti hai ankhen............



MANISH,
ye sirf sher hai ok..............dont mind...........
aap ke sher ka jawab hai,is liye aap ka naam use kiya maine................i know u understand....................
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HEY,MANISH,
aap janna chahte hai na ki kya baat hai,to lijiye suniye.....................


saamne na ho tum, to tarasti hai ankhen,
yaad mai teri barsti hai ankhen,
mere liye na sahi,inke liye aa jao,MANISH,
aap ka bepanah intezar karti hai ankhen............



MANISH,
ye sirf sher hai ok..............dont mind...........
aap ke sher ka jawab hai,is liye aap ka naam use kiya maine................i know u understand....................

janab, aapki 150th post likh raha hun, i m honoured. congrats.....

chalo aab humari baari hai likne ki...zaara gaur farmayein:

aayein hain unki mehfil mein
kuch lafz aab keh kar jayenge
aaye the unhe kuch dene k liye
abb unka dil, saath le-kar jayenge

shor mein samjo tum khamosi humari
labon par ruki samjo baat humari
keh nahi sakte haal-e-dil mehfil mein
LAMHA samjo tum majboori humari...


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janab, aapki 150th post likh raha hun, i m honoured. congrats.....

chalo aab humari baari hai likne ki...zaara gaur farmayein:

aayein hain unki mehfil mein
kuch lafz aab keh kar jayenge
aaye the unhe kuch dene k liye
abb unka dil, saath le-kar jayenge

shor mein samjo tum khamosi humari
labon par ruki samjo baat humari
keh nahi sakte haal-e-dil mehfil mein
LAMHA samjo tum majboori humari...


hey MANISH,
thanx .........humari post par aane keliye aur ye pyare ehsaas share karne keliye..........aap mere shayri.com ke sabse pehle ( 1st ) dost hai........mera ye jawaab humari dosti ke naam............

koi itna chahe tumhe to batana,
koi tumhare itne naaz uthaye to batana,
DOSTI to kar lega har koi tumse,
koi humari tarah nibhaye to batana................



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hey MANISH,
thanx .........humari post par aane keliye aur ye pyare ehsaas share karne keliye..........aap mere shayri.com ke sabse pehle ( 1st ) dost hai........mera ye jawaab humari dosti ke naam............

koi itna chahe tumhe to batana,
koi tumhare itne naaz uthaye to batana,
DOSTI to kar lega har koi tumse,
koi humari tarah nibhaye to batana................

bahut khub..doctor sahiba...

dard...ruswai..bewaffai..
bass yahi humara naseeb hai
jeenek liye zindagi nahi mili
yeh dosto kya cheez hai...

dnt mind yaar, dard section hai nah, to aisha likna pada....


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hey MANISH,
thanx .........humari post par aane keliye aur ye pyare ehsaas share karne keliye..........aap mere shayri.com ke sabse pehle ( 1st ) dost hai........mera ye jawaab humari dosti ke naam............

koi itna chahe tumhe to batana,
koi tumhare itne naaz uthaye to batana,
DOSTI to kar lega har koi tumse,
koi humari tarah nibhaye to batana................

bahut khub..doctor sahiba...

dard...ruswai..bewaffai..
bass yahi humara naseeb hai
jeene k liye zindagi nahi mili
yeh dosti kya cheez hai...

humare pass dene ko kuch nahi
tere chehre bass mushkarahat chahiye
tumhe mill jayen yeh jahan saara
humein sirf do beega zameen aur ek kafan chahiye.......

.....


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bahut khub..doctor sahiba...

dard...ruswai..bewaffai..
bass yahi humara naseeb hai
jeene k liye zindagi nahi mili
yeh dosti kya cheez hai...

humare pass dene ko kuch nahi
tere chehre bass mushkarahat chahiye
tumhe mill jayen yeh jahan saara
humein sirf do beega zameen aur ek kafan chahiye.......

.....



WAH YAAR KYA BAAT HE



KHUSHI DEKHNE SE PEHLE KYO

DOOR BHAG NE KI BAAT KARTE HO

JIYE NAHI ZINDAGI JI BHAR KAR AABHI

FIR KYO MARNE KI BAAT KARTE HO

MILEGI DO GAZ ZAMIN MARNE KE BAAD

AABHI SE KYO UNKI TAIYAARI KARTE HO

KHUSH RAKHNA CHATE HE HUM AAPNE DOSTO KO

FIR AAP KYO JUDAI KI BAAT KARTE HO


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HEY JAWED,
aap ke is sher ka jawab dena chahungi..........gaur farmaye.........

tumne na kiya yaad kabhi bhulkar humein,
hum ne to teri yaad mein sub kuch bhula diya,
mitne lagi hai dil se tere ab to parchaiya humari,
par ho saka na dur tu humse,humne khud ko mita diya..........
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Bahut khoob Lamha ji ....

Hamien aapka jawab bahut pasand aaya.......per yeh raahen yahan khatm nahin hoti hain....aakhir is bazm ko hamein aage bhi to badhana hai.....to leejiye is silsile ko aage badhhate hain is sher ke saath....

Woh na sahi unki yaad hi sahi
kam se kam itna to mere naseeb mein tha
Tamam umre kati hai unki yaad mein
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