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Thumbs up Yaad - 13th February 2004, 01:55 PM

1.Raat hui jab shaam ke baad
teri yaad aayi har baat ke baad
Humne khaamosh reh kar bhi dekha,
Teri awaaz aayi har saans ke baad!!!

2.Maana ki kabhi dil ki baat na btayoge,
Par aankho mein jo hai vo kaise chupaoge?
Vada raha humara yeh tumse
Jab bhi palke uthayoge hume saamne payoge!!!

3.Jaam tootne ka bahana na kar
Hum to teri aankho se hii pee lenge
Tu mat aa lakin aane ka vaada to kar
Hum tere intzaar mein hii jee lenge...

4.Yaad mein teri aanhe bharta hai koi
har saans ke saath tujeh yaad karta hai koi
Maut sach hai aani hai ek roz
Lekin teri judau mein har roz marta hai koi

5.Na tammana hai Sitaro ki
Na chahat hai nazaaro ki
Tum Jaisa ek dost mil jaye
to kya zroorat hai hajaaro ki

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13th February 2004, 06:42 PM

hi mohit kasay ho app? mohit app kay sab hi sher acchay hai lakin mujhay ya 3rd wala ziyada accha laga.


Jaam tootne ka bahana na kar
Hum to teri aankho se hii pee lenge
Tu mat aa lakin aane ka vaada to kar
Hum tere intzaar mein hii jee lenge



asey hi liktay rahena.. take care ..bye


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14th February 2004, 01:23 AM

this is so beautiful...good job...mohit i though u can only rite humourous shayri..but i guess i was wrong....good work


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14th February 2004, 08:37 PM

hi thanks a lot Nisar Ji And Sofia ji
keep replying
happy valentine day but abhi to raat ho gayi hai....
thori late ho gaya main...sorry for late...
   
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Thumbs up 18th February 2004, 03:45 AM

beautiful, short and sweet.
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18th February 2004, 09:41 AM

thanks Pappu ji
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4th March 2004, 07:28 PM

dearest mohit

meri mubarakbaad kabool kariye
itni aachi shayari ke liye
kafi aacha likha hai aapne
aainda bhi aaise hi umeed rahe gi


aapko aapka hi dil bhejraha hoon
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Love KYA LIKHTE HO, - 24th March 2004, 12:42 PM

MY GOD,
UR UNBELIVEABLE,
UR TOO GOOD,
HAVE U WRITTEN OWN,
IT IS EXCELLENT,
BUT ONE MISTAKE U MADE IN 4TH SHAYARI LAST LINE
SEE THROUGH IT & LET ME KNOW IT IF U CATCH UR MISTAKE.
UR FACE-------------


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24th March 2004, 03:18 PM

ya i know
"Judai" aana tha waha aur maine likh diya "judau"
hey main itna bhi confused nahi hu jitna tum keh rahai ho

   
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Smile hi mohit - 24th March 2004, 11:06 PM

Hi mohit
how r u?
wow.. such beautiful shers.. really nice keep it up! i'll be waiting for more shers from u..really they r really good!!!!
tc bye

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25th March 2004, 08:59 AM

Hi Zunera
thanks
for more shayers check out my website
http://www.geocities.com/mohiit4u
it has been updated on 25-3-2004
   
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30th May 2005, 11:57 PM

mohit...aik to aapka naam mohit hai jis naam se kabhi hamara purana rishta tha

aur,aapki poetrys acchi hoti hain
sacchi main


"sanam" chahe zindagi se bas itna
aik mutthi main kaid kar loon,
yeh aasman hai jitna!"
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