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Haan tum sach hi kehte ho....... - 21st December 2012, 01:48 PM

Haan tum sach hi kehte ho




Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun
Kabhi khamosh rehti hun
Kabhi chupke se roti hun
Kabhi akele kamre me
Deewaron se jhagadti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun….

Main chahun ke sunaun main
Tumhe apne dil ki sab baatein
Kabhi bolun zuban se kuch
Kabhi nazron se sab baatein
Main dil ka raaz har tumse
Jaan ab kehna chahti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Mere dil me dukhta hai
Jab tum baat nahin karte
Meri aankhein num ho to
Mera deedar nahin karte
Main kaise kahun tumse
Teri udaasi se main darti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Kabhi to smjho tum mujhko
Kabhi to thaam lo baahein
Kabhi pochhon mere aansun
Kabhi roko meri raahein
Magar main tumhe samjhti hun
Isi liye ye tumse kehti hun
Main ek pagal si ladki hun
Bas yunhi ulajhti rehti hun
Tum sach hi to kehte ho
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aahna jee:

namaste!

aapki kisii peshkash ko aaj pehli baar padh rahaa huun... aur itnaa hi kahuungaa ki waah waah! iehsaason ko ba-Khoobee bayaan kiyaa hai aapne

yuunhi bazm ko sajaate rahiye... dil se daad aur duaaen

Khush rahiye

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Haan tum sach hi kehte ho




Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun
Kabhi khamosh rehti hun
Kabhi chupke se roti hun
Kabhi akele kamre me
Deewaron se jhagadti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hunů.

Main chahun ke sunaun main
Tumhe apne dil ki sab baatein
Kabhi bolun zuban se kuch
Kabhi nazron se sab baatein
Main dil ka raaz har tumse
Jaan ab kehna chahti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Mere dil me dukhta hai
Jab tum baat nahin karte
Meri aankhein num ho to
Mera deedar nahin karte
Main kaise kahun tumse
Teri udaasi se main darti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Kabhi to smjho tum mujhko
Kabhi to thaam lo baahein
Kabhi pochhon mere aansun
Kabhi roko meri raahein
Magar main tumhe samjhti hun
Isi liye ye tumse kehti hun
Main ek pagal si ladki hun
Bas yunhi ulajhti rehti hun
Tum sach hi to kehte ho
Tumse be baat pe ladti hun

Adaab Aahna behen,
First of all aapko ayk confession kerna padayga....... ki aapko shayree ka prior tajurba haye....... coz itni pukhta nazm likhna koee ma'mooli baat nahee! Buhat aala darjay ka takhauyyul wa adaaygee haye ismsyn.... its a gem! In short.....great work......keep it up and keep sharing ya works it can only get better as far as we can see!! Daad hee daad Sis!

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Waaah kya andaaze-Bayaan hai Aahnaa ..... bahot khoob baat kahi aapne... har ek baat se jazbaat tapaktey hain... masha allah...

bas jahaan pe thodi kami lagi wo aapko bataana chaunga...

aapne kuch aisa likha hai... "mere dil me dukhta hai"

ye sentence kuch sahi nahi baithtaa... yaa to aise kareN, mera dil dukhta hai....
ya mere dil me kuch dukhta hai... aisi bahot si tara se aap apni baat keh sakti hain..

Mujhe jo sahi na laga to socha apko bata doon.. ummeed hai aapko bura na laga hogaa.. aur aage bhi aap choti choti cheezon pe pahle bareeq nazar daaleN ek baar to mere khayal se ye galtiyaan bhi door hone lagengi... shukriyaa

likhti raho..... khush raho...

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aahna jee:

namaste!

aapki kisii peshkash ko aaj pehli baar padh rahaa huun... aur itnaa hi kahuungaa ki waah waah! iehsaason ko ba-Khoobee bayaan kiyaa hai aapne

yuunhi bazm ko sajaate rahiye... dil se daad aur duaaen

Khush rahiye

aapka

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bas aap sabko padhkar kuch koshish ki hai... aur aapko pasand aai ye to meri khush naseebi hai... koshish kar rahi hun kuch sikhne ki umeed hai sath bana rahega aapka ....

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Adaab Aahna behen,
First of all aapko ayk confession kerna padayga....... ki aapko shayree ka prior tajurba haye....... coz itni pukhta nazm likhna koee ma'mooli baat nahee! Buhat aala darjay ka takhauyyul wa adaaygee haye ismsyn.... its a gem! In short.....great work......keep it up and keep sharing ya works it can only get better as far as we can see!! Daad hee daad Sis!

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Ahmad bhai...

ye to aapki zarranawazi hai k aap is mamuli sikoshish ko itna pasand kar rahe hain... warna main to itna dar rahi thi k kya kahenge sab k .kya likh diya hai.... bas kahin kuch padha tha aur uske bad jo dl me aaya likhti chali gai... natiza aapke samne hai..
aur confession to ye k haan padhti hun koshish bhi karti hun par jab wo khud padhti hn to itna kharab ban hota hai k delete kar deti hun...

aapki tareef ka aur iss tarah hausla afzai ka behad shukriya ..yunhi saath bane rahyega..

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Waaah kya andaaze-Bayaan hai Aahnaa ..... bahot khoob baat kahi aapne... har ek baat se jazbaat tapaktey hain... masha allah...

bas jahaan pe thodi kami lagi wo aapko bataana chaunga...

aapne kuch aisa likha hai... "mere dil me dukhta hai"

ye sentence kuch sahi nahi baithtaa... yaa to aise kareN, mera dil dukhta hai....
ya mere dil me kuch dukhta hai... aisi bahot si tara se aap apni baat keh sakti hain..

Mujhe jo sahi na laga to socha apko bata doon.. ummeed hai aapko bura na laga hogaa.. aur aage bhi aap choti choti cheezon pe pahle bareeq nazar daaleN ek baar to mere khayal se ye galtiyaan bhi door hone lagengi... shukriyaa

likhti raho..... khush raho...

Shaad...

shaad ji...

mujhe bahot achha lag raha hai aapne meri galti batai aur use correct bhi kiya... main yahan sikhne hi to aai hun... aur isi tarah to improve kar paungi khudko...
bas isi tarah sikhate rahiyega...

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subhan allah.............aap to bahut khoob likhti hai ............bahut achchhi nazm huyi hai................dhero daad
   
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shaad ji...

mujhe bahot achha lag raha hai aapne meri galti batai aur use correct bhi kiya... main yahan sikhne hi to aai hun... aur isi tarah to improve kar paungi khudko...
bas isi tarah sikhate rahiyega...

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wah aahana ji wah, itni khoob nazm itne shuruaati dinoN meN, u r a born writer, subhaan allah... bahut khoob, poori umeed hai mujhe ki aane wale waqt me aapki aur bhi behtar qalamkaari dekhne ko milegi hume, yuNhi likhti rahiye....



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Haan tum sach hi kehte ho




Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun
Kabhi khamosh rehti hun
Kabhi chupke se roti hun
Kabhi akele kamre me
Deewaron se jhagadti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hunů.

Main chahun ke sunaun main
Tumhe apne dil ki sab baatein
Kabhi bolun zuban se kuch
Kabhi nazron se sab baatein
Main dil ka raaz har tumse
Jaan ab kehna chahti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Mere dil me dukhta hai
Jab tum baat nahin karte
Meri aankhein num ho to
Mera deedar nahin karte
Main kaise kahun tumse
Teri udaasi se main darti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Kabhi to smjho tum mujhko
Kabhi to thaam lo baahein
Kabhi pochhon mere aansun
Kabhi roko meri raahein
Magar main tumhe samjhti hun
Isi liye ye tumse kehti hun
Main ek pagal si ladki hun
Bas yunhi ulajhti rehti hun
Tum sach hi to kehte ho
Tumse be baat pe ladti hun
WaaH ! Kyaa Khayaalaat Nazm Hue HaiN ... BehtareeN !!

Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!




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subhan allah.............aap to bahut khoob likhti hai ............bahut achchhi nazm huyi hai................dhero daad
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Masha Allah Aahnaa ... behad khushi hui ye jaan kar ke aap na to naraaz huin na to kuch galat kahaa... bas jo bhi kaha gaya use sunaa aur chupchaap qubool kar liyaa .... Asal me insaan wahi seekhta aur aage badhta hai jo sune sabki.. aur har insaan se kuch na kuch seekhe... meri duaaen aapke saath hain... khush rahiye....

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wah aahana ji wah, itni khoob nazm itne shuruaati dinoN meN, u r a born writer, subhaan allah... bahut khoob, poori umeed hai mujhe ki aane wale waqt me aapki aur bhi behtar qalamkaari dekhne ko milegi hume, yuNhi likhti rahiye....
taish ji.....

thanx ji......

yahan aakar hi to kuch sikhne ki umeed jagi hai aur ichha bhi... bas sabko padhkar samjhkar jo ban pada wo likh diya.....
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Haan tum sach hi kehte ho




Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun
Kabhi khamosh rehti hun
Kabhi chupke se roti hun
Kabhi akele kamre me
Deewaron se jhagadti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hunů.

Main chahun ke sunaun main
Tumhe apne dil ki sab baatein
Kabhi bolun zuban se kuch
Kabhi nazron se sab baatein
Main dil ka raaz har tumse
Jaan ab kehna chahti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Mere dil me dukhta hai
Jab tum baat nahin karte
Meri aankhein num ho to
Mera deedar nahin karte
Main kaise kahun tumse
Teri udaasi se main darti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Kabhi to smjho tum mujhko
Kabhi to thaam lo baahein
Kabhi pochhon mere aansun
Kabhi roko meri raahein
Magar main tumhe samjhti hun
Isi liye ye tumse kehti hun
Main ek pagal si ladki hun
Bas yunhi ulajhti rehti hun
Tum sach hi to kehte ho
Tumse be baat pe ladti hun
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Haan tum sach hi kehte ho




Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun
Kabhi khamosh rehti hun
Kabhi chupke se roti hun
Kabhi akele kamre me
Deewaron se jhagadti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hunů.

Main chahun ke sunaun main
Tumhe apne dil ki sab baatein
Kabhi bolun zuban se kuch
Kabhi nazron se sab baatein
Main dil ka raaz har tumse
Jaan ab kehna chahti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Mere dil me dukhta hai
Jab tum baat nahin karte
Meri aankhein num ho to
Mera deedar nahin karte
Main kaise kahun tumse
Teri udaasi se main darti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Kabhi to smjho tum mujhko
Kabhi to thaam lo baahein
Kabhi pochhon mere aansun
Kabhi roko meri raahein
Magar main tumhe samjhti hun
Isi liye ye tumse kehti hun
Main ek pagal si ladki hun
Bas yunhi ulajhti rehti hun
Tum sach hi to kehte ho
Tumse be baat pe ladti hun
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6th January 2013, 05:06 PM

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Haan tum sach hi kehte ho




Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun
Kabhi khamosh rehti hun
Kabhi chupke se roti hun
Kabhi akele kamre me
Deewaron se jhagadti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hunů.

Main chahun ke sunaun main
Tumhe apne dil ki sab baatein
Kabhi bolun zuban se kuch
Kabhi nazron se sab baatein
Main dil ka raaz har tumse
Jaan ab kehna chahti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Mere dil me dukhta hai
Jab tum baat nahin karte
Meri aankhein num ho to
Mera deedar nahin karte
Main kaise kahun tumse
Teri udaasi se main darti hun
Haan tum sach hi kehte ho
Main aise hi ulajhti rehti hun

Kabhi to smjho tum mujhko
Kabhi to thaam lo baahein
Kabhi pochhon mere aansun
Kabhi roko meri raahein
Magar main tumhe samjhti hun
Isi liye ye tumse kehti hun
Main ek pagal si ladki hun
Bas yunhi ulajhti rehti hun
Tum sach hi to kehte ho
Tumse be baat pe ladti hun
Main jaanta hu mere jane k baad khud ki baato me uljhi rehti ho
Diwaro se ulajh ke apne dil ka gubar nikalti ho
Mujhe apna samajh ke bhi mere apni uljhan baant-ti nahi ho


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Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai?
   
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27th March 2013, 01:42 PM

wah! bahut khoob aahna ji!! bahut hi khoobsoorti se aap ne ehsasaat ko alfaaz ka libaas pahnaya hai.
   
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