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hai muhabbat saza to saza dijiye - 10th September 2016, 10:52 PM

hai muhabbat saza to saza dijiye
warna yadon ko meri bhoola dijiye

har taraf phool hi phool khil jayenge
aap ek baar to muskura dijiye

pyaar aankhon men hans ke sawanr jayega
pyaar ke geet kuch gunguna di jiye

bhool payenge kya aap hum ko kabhi
pooch kar apne dil se bata di jiye

koi mousam nahi hum badal jayen ge
hum pe ilzaam kuch bhi laga di jiye

aap thandi hawa ka hi jhonka lagen
apne chehre se ghussa hata di jiye

dekhiye phir hamari wafa ka asar
faasle darmiyan ke mita di jiye

ek samundar ne Parwaaz aawaaz di
thoda pani mujhe bhi pila di jiye


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hai muhabbat saza to saza dijiye
warna yadon ko meri bhoola dijiye

har taraf phool hi phool khil jayenge
aap ek baar to muskura dijiye

pyaar aankhon men hans ke sawanr jayega
pyaar ke geet kuch gunguna di jiye

bhool payenge kya aap hum ko kabhi
pooch kar apne dil se bata di jiye

koi mousam nahi hum badal jayen ge
hum pe ilzaam kuch bhi laga di jiye

aap thandi hawa ka hi jhonka lagen
apne chehre se ghussa hata di jiye

dekhiye phir hamari wafa ka asar
faasle darmiyan ke mita di jiye

ek samundar ne Parwaaz aawaaz di
thoda pani mujhe bhi pila di jiye


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Mujeeb bhai behtareen ghazal pesh ki hai aapne...mazaa aa gaya padhkar...bahut seedhi kya rawaangi nazar aayi hai is mein har sher pehle sher ko hairaan karta chala gaya....

aate rahiye taaki humhe aisi haseen ghazalein padne ka maukaa milta rahe...



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11th September 2016, 01:49 PM

koi mousam nahi hum badal jayen ge
hum pe ilzaam kuch bhi laga di jiye

aap thandi hawa ka hi jhonka lagen
apne chehre se ghussa hata di jiye

dekhiye phir hamari wafa ka asar
faasle darmiyan ke mita di jiye

mujib sahab...kaise hain aap..aapke ehsaas hamesha hee dil ko bahot pasand aate hain..par aapne aajkal aana kam kar diya hai ..lejkin chaliye kabhi kabhi hee sahi apne kalaam padhne ka mauka dete hain bahot shukriya..aage bhi aate rahiyega....

quoted ashaar bahot pasand aaye..padhkar ek muskaan aa gayi labon pe....bahot sari daad is khoobsoorat ghazal par ...

salamat rahein......



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Mujiib ji....bahut khoobsurat ehsaas padne ka mokka diya aapne, pyar har lafz mein jhalak rha hai...yu hi likhte rhiye, khush rhiye...yeh 2 ashiyaar muje behad acche lge:

har taraf phool hi phool khil jayenge
aap ek baar to muskura dijiye

bhool payenge kya aap hum ko kabhi
pooch kar apne dil se bata di jiye




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Adaab Madhuji,

Badi inayat hai aap ki .Bohut bohut shukriya.Malik ka karam hai ke main kheriyat aur afiyat se hun. Dua karta hun ke aap bhi hamesha khush aur aabaad rahen.
Waqt na milne ke bais is bazm men meri shirkat kam hoti hai. Magar meri her haazri aap qubool fermati hain aur mere kalaam bhi aap ko pasand aate hain...eh hamesha se qabile massarat he mere liye....

Age bhi inshallah mouqa milte hi kalaam peshe khidmet karunga.

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Shukriya Sagar shab.

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Adaab Sunitaji

Aap ki daad ka teh dil se shukriya ada karta hun.
is nacheez ke pyar o muhabbat ke kalaam aap ko pasand aye .....bohut achha laga.

aap inshallah mere kalaam ke aise hi rang se age bhi lutf uthaengi.

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hai muhabbat saza to saza dijiye
warna yadon ko meri bhoola dijiye

har taraf phool hi phool khil jayenge
aap ek baar to muskura dijiye

pyaar aankhon men hans ke sawanr jayega
pyaar ke geet kuch gunguna di jiye

bhool payenge kya aap hum ko kabhi
pooch kar apne dil se bata di jiye

koi mousam nahi hum badal jayen ge
hum pe ilzaam kuch bhi laga di jiye

aap thandi hawa ka hi jhonka lagen
apne chehre se ghussa hata di jiye

dekhiye phir hamari wafa ka asar
faasle darmiyan ke mita di jiye

ek samundar ne Parwaaz aawaaz di
thoda pani mujhe bhi pila di jiye


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buhet achi ghazal buhet umda ....

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hai muhabbat saza to saza dijiye
warna yadon ko meri bhoola dijiye

har taraf phool hi phool khil jayenge
aap ek baar to muskura dijiye

pyaar aankhon men hans ke sawanr jayega
pyaar ke geet kuch gunguna di jiye

bhool payenge kya aap hum ko kabhi
pooch kar apne dil se bata di jiye

koi mousam nahi hum badal jayen ge
hum pe ilzaam kuch bhi laga di jiye

aap thandi hawa ka hi jhonka lagen
apne chehre se ghussa hata di jiye

dekhiye phir hamari wafa ka asar
faasle darmiyan ke mita di jiye

ek samundar ne Parwaaz aawaaz di
thoda pani mujhe bhi pila di jiye


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Adaab Madhuji,

Badi inayat hai aap ki .Bohut bohut shukriya.Malik ka karam hai ke main kheriyat aur afiyat se hun. Dua karta hun ke aap bhi hamesha khush aur aabaad rahen.
Waqt na milne ke bais is bazm men meri shirkat kam hoti hai. Magar meri her haazri aap qubool fermati hain aur mere kalaam bhi aap ko pasand aate hain...eh hamesha se qabile massarat he mere liye....

Age bhi inshallah mouqa milte hi kalaam peshe khidmet karunga.

Duaon ke saath
Aap ka dost
Mujeeb
Duaon ka behad shukriya mujeeb sahab.......

Salamat rahein..



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