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Mat dhaiye khud pe koi sitam chupke chupke - 22nd October 2016, 11:38 PM

Mat dhaiye khud pe koi sitam chupke chupke
De dijiye humko saare alam chupke chupke

Milte hi kat rake hum se nikal jate ho tum
Pucho na kaise sambhalte hain hum chupke chupke

Taseer meri muhabbat ki shayad eh hi hai
Jhunjhlate ho tanha tum dum ba dum chupke chupke

aaawara badal nahin hain jo udjayenge hum
karte chalo hum pe nazre karam chupke chupke

mat soch mujh ko teri khoobsurat hain aankhen
udjayegi neend warna sanam chupke chupke

naasaaz halat ne uf kardiya jeena mushkil
aur mat badhaiye furqat ka ghum chupke chupke

Likhne kahaan deti kuch teri yadon ki jumbish
Naaashna ho raha hai qalam chupke chupke

Tark-e -taalluq karoge to mar jayenge hum
dhoka hi hoga agar do ge ghum chupke chupke

tum intezaar-e-muhabbat men mat toot jao
khao nahin tanha koi qasam chupe chupke

aye hum nasheen tuu khataon ki parwah mat kar
Parwaaz rakhte hain saare bharam chupke chupke

Some meaning
Sitam- charge
Alam- pain/ sorrow
Taseer- Impact
Dum b dum- time-to time
Naasaaz- sick
Uf- Oh
Furqat- Separation
Jumbish- Vibration
Naashna- Strange


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Mat dhaiye khud pe koi sitam chupke chupke
De dijiye humko saare alam chupke chupke

Milte hi kat rake hum se nikal jate ho tum
Pucho na kaise sambhalte hain hum chupke chupke

Taseer meri muhabbat ki shayad eh hi hai
Jhunjhlate ho tanha tum dum ba dum chupke chupke

aaawara badal nahin hain jo udjayenge hum
karte chalo hum pe nazre karam chupke chupke

mat soch mujh ko teri khoobsurat hain aankhen
udjayegi neend warna sanam chupke chupke

naasaaz halat ne uf kardiya jeena mushkil
aur mat badhaiye furqat ka ghum chupke chupke

Likhne kahaan deti kuch teri yadon ki jumbish
Naaashna ho raha hai qalam chupke chupke

Tark-e -taalluq karoge to mar jayenge hum
dhoka hi hoga agar do ge ghum chupke chupke

tum intezaar-e-muhabbat men mat toot jao
khao nahin tanha koi qasam chupe chupke

aye hum nasheen tuu khataon ki parwah mat kar
Parwaaz rakhte hain saare bharam chupke chupke

Some meaning
Sitam- charge
Alam- pain/ sorrow
Taseer- Impact
Dum b dum- time-to time
Naasaaz- sick
Uf- Oh
Furqat- Separation
Jumbish- Vibration
Naashna- Strange


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Nashna ho raha hai qalam chupke chupke.....

Waaah bahot khoob peshkash mujeeb sahab

Likhte rahein..

Aate rahein..



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Mat dhaiye khud pe koi sitam chupke chupke
De dijiye humko saare alam chupke chupke

Milte hi kat rake hum se nikal jate ho tum
Pucho na kaise sambhalte hain hum chupke chupke

Taseer meri muhabbat ki shayad eh hi hai
Jhunjhlate ho tanha tum dum ba dum chupke chupke

aaawara badal nahin hain jo udjayenge hum
karte chalo hum pe nazre karam chupke chupke

mat soch mujh ko teri khoobsurat hain aankhen
udjayegi neend warna sanam chupke chupke

naasaaz halat ne uf kardiya jeena mushkil
aur mat badhaiye furqat ka ghum chupke chupke

Likhne kahaan deti kuch teri yadon ki jumbish
Naaashna ho raha hai qalam chupke chupke

Tark-e -taalluq karoge to mar jayenge hum
dhoka hi hoga agar do ge ghum chupke chupke

tum intezaar-e-muhabbat men mat toot jao
khao nahin tanha koi qasam chupe chupke

aye hum nasheen tuu khataon ki parwah mat kar
Parwaaz rakhte hain saare bharam chupke chupke

Some meaning
Sitam- charge
Alam- pain/ sorrow
Taseer- Impact
Dum b dum- time-to time
Naasaaz- sick
Uf- Oh
Furqat- Separation
Jumbish- Vibration
Naashna- Strange


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waahh kyaa andaaz e bayaan dekhne milaa hai aapkeis kalaam me......

bahut hi dilfareb kalaam huaa hai.. daad qubol kijiye

Shaad........


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26th October 2016, 01:02 PM

Bohut bohut shukriya Madhu Saheba....Qalam bhale hi naashna hojaye...zahen aur dil shayerana bane rehna zaruri hai........kyon ke is se ghazal ya koi kavita ki soch bana kar bhi insaan cheerful reh sakta hai....mental stress se khud ko door rakh sakta hai....

aur do aashna log bhi ek duje se naashna nahin hona chahiye chahe koi bhi baat beech men kyon na hojaye......I mean matanter bhale ho mananter na ho.

huh...main kuch ziyada to nahin bolraha hun..

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Adaab Sameer Sahab....aap ki daad main ne dil se qubool ki.....bohut bohut shukriya aap ka...andaaze bayan to shayerana/ ashiqana hai...kya karen apni tabiyet aur apne mezaaj hi aise hain.

Khush rahiye...duaon men yaad rakhiye....mere kalaam padhte rahi..aur apn kalaam se hamen lutf andooz karte rahiye....

Khuda hafiz

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Mat dhaiye khud pe koi sitam chupke chupke
De dijiye humko saare alam chupke chupke

Milte hi kat rake hum se nikal jate ho tum
Pucho na kaise sambhalte hain hum chupke chupke

Taseer meri muhabbat ki shayad eh hi hai
Jhunjhlate ho tanha tum dum ba dum chupke chupke

aaawara badal nahin hain jo udjayenge hum
karte chalo hum pe nazre karam chupke chupke

mat soch mujh ko teri khoobsurat hain aankhen
udjayegi neend warna sanam chupke chupke

naasaaz halat ne uf kardiya jeena mushkil
aur mat badhaiye furqat ka ghum chupke chupke

Likhne kahaan deti kuch teri yadon ki jumbish
Naaashna ho raha hai qalam chupke chupke

Tark-e -taalluq karoge to mar jayenge hum
dhoka hi hoga agar do ge ghum chupke chupke

tum intezaar-e-muhabbat men mat toot jao
khao nahin tanha koi qasam chupe chupke

aye hum nasheen tuu khataon ki parwah mat kar
Parwaaz rakhte hain saare bharam chupke chupke

Some meaning
Sitam- charge
Alam- pain/ sorrow
Taseer- Impact
Dum b dum- time-to time
Naasaaz- sick
Uf- Oh
Furqat- Separation
Jumbish- Vibration
Naashna- Strange


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Mujiib ji...............bahut khoobsurat ehsaas aur bemisaal bayaani...!!


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Aaap ki nawazish hai Sunita ji....bohut bohut shukriya.

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