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raat ko koyee bante kaise - 4th February 2006, 06:45 PM

pyar ko koyee bante kaise
tera mera chhante kaise

chubhta nahee kuch bhee chhoo lo
pyar main kante kante kaise

seene se lag agar na rote
dil kee aag bujhate kaise

ansu kee gar rah na bantee
khabon main woh aate kaise

neend bhee mange khab bhee mangen
raat ko koyee bante kaise

chand se sundar kah to dete
chand ko par samjhate kaise
chand khafa ho jata gar to
ghar kee chhat par jate kaise
ghar kee chhat pa na jate to
un se nazar milate kaise
un se nazar nahee miltee to
chand ko chand dikhate kaise
chand se sundar kah to dete
chand ko par samjhate kaise

ro kar un ko wida jo karte
mera nam bhulate kaise

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Re: raat ko koyee bante kaise - 4th February 2006, 06:55 PM

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pyar ko koyee bante kaise
tera mera chhante kaise

chubhta nahee kuch bhee chhoo lo
pyar main kante kante kaise

seene se lag agar na rote
dil kee aag bujhate kaise

ansu kee gar rah na bantee
khabon main woh aate kaise

neend bhee mange khab bhee mangen
raat ko koyee bante kaise

chand se sundar kah to dete
chand ko par samjhate kaise
chand khafa ho jata gar to
ghar kee chhat par jate kaise
ghar kee chhat pa na jate to
un se nazar milate kaise
un se nazar nahee miltee to
chand ko chand dikhate kaise
chand se sundar kah to dete
chand ko par samjhate kaise

ro kar un ko wida jo karte
mera nam bhulate kaise

Anil
anil ji
bhaut hi sunder pyar ko jatatne ka khubsurat ehsas ,pyar main kaaten par wo chubhte nahi .
sahi kahe rahe hain un chubhan mai bhi meeta sakun hai
likhte rahiye
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4th February 2006, 07:14 PM

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4th February 2006, 07:58 PM

Anil ji ....

aapko koi compliment kya duN jis ko padh kar maiN bhi sur maiN aa gaya .. aise nagme ko salaam ... mere sur aapko kaise lage nahi janta ... par mujhe woh behtreen lage .. aapki aazmaish hai aur kabhi ikatthe hue to jaroor sabko maiN iski wo dhun jaroor sunauNga ... aur woh bhi poori gazal ke sath ...

aap yuN hi rang bharte rahiye... is aalam maiN...

aapka apna

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4th February 2006, 08:06 PM

Anil ji,

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shukriya - 5th February 2006, 06:31 AM

shradhha shukriya dil se shrddha se mujhe parhne ke liye
devangi tumhara bhee bahut bahut shukriya is ghazal ko parhne ke liye. mujhe hosla detee rahana
kunal tum bahut alag ho bahut achee bahut pyare is liye tumhe mera likha pyar lag jata hai

ab atee hain meena g aap ke alfaz jis shayree ke sath yahan jur jate hain woh baree ho jatee hai 2 din kee masoom bhee ho apane pairon pe kharee ho jatee hai thanks use apane pairon pe khara karane ke liye

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Re: raat ko koyee bante kaise - 5th March 2006, 06:17 PM

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pyar ko koyee bante kaise
tera mera chhante kaise

chubhta nahee kuch bhee chhoo lo
pyar main kante kante kaise

seene se lag agar na rote
dil kee aag bujhate kaise

ansu kee gar rah na bantee
khabon main woh aate kaise

neend bhee mange khab bhee mangen
raat ko koyee bante kaise

chand se sundar kah to dete
chand ko par samjhate kaise
chand khafa ho jata gar to
ghar kee chhat par jate kaise
ghar kee chhat pa na jate to
un se nazar milate kaise
un se nazar nahee miltee to
chand ko chand dikhate kaise
chand se sundar kah to dete
chand ko par samjhate kaise

ro kar un ko wida jo karte
mera nam bhulate kaise

Anil
pyar ko nibha nahi paye hum
kisi se rishta jod nahi paye hum
sochte the sahi hai hum
asar mai galat hi galat the hum......................

bahut badiya bahut pasand aayi yeh kavita


meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
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5th March 2006, 06:26 PM

anil ji
aap sach mein gr8 ho
aapki rachnayein padh ke sach mein ek alag hi aabhaas hota hai

aise hi likhte rahiye
aapka apna
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thanks - 5th March 2006, 08:56 PM

ashu bahut bahut shukiya meree shayree main itana sab achah dekhne ke liye mera utsah bahut barha hai
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Hi - 5th March 2006, 09:08 PM

Hi anil bhai

I wanna tell u openly, that aap ki is poetry mai itna dam nahi hai jitna aap ki baaki kavitao mai hota hai.

mujhe maza nahi aaya is baar aap ki ye rachna padh k.

Sab ne taarif ki but maine sach kaha , kyoki mai jhoothi taarif nahi karta aur bura laga ho to maafi chahta hu.

take care

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manu - 5th March 2006, 09:46 PM

jhoothee taraaf kisee ne nahee keee tumhe achee nahee lagee mujeh is baat ka dukh nahee tum ne sab kee tareef ko jhootha kaha is baat pe aitaraz hai mujeh khud pasand hai meree ye ghazal aur mujeh napasand bhee hotee hai meree shayree bahut baar is ghazal ko parhte hee kunal ka phone aya tha mere pas tareef ke liye woh phone jhooth nahee tha tum agar usee roh se parhte jis rooh se maien likha to achha lagata tumhe bhee agar nahee parh sake to bhee mujhe marg darshan milta hai par tareef ko jhooth na kaho nahee to shayed mujeh sab jhooth lagane lage aur main remarks parhne band kar doon mujhe bahut sakht aitarz hai is baat se ki jhoothee tareef na ye baat galat kah dee tum ne

tumahree agar kamee nikalana sachha hai to un kee tareef bhee mujeh pata hai tum mujeh bahut dil se parhte ho aur jo dil kahata hai wahee batate hai tabhee maine tumhre pm main bahut pyar se kaha tha ke agar ache enahee lagee to koyee baat nahee lekin jinhone ise achha bataya un se poochana unhone jhooth kaha tha? agar haan to main unhe rok doonnga remarks dene se mujeh jhooth nahee chahiye main bhee janana chahta hoon meree kamiya par kisee aur kee taraf ko jhooth nahee kaho na aaj ye baat tumne shayron walee nahee kee mera wihswas dadmaga diya sach main jhoothee tareef bhee kar dete hain log? meree shayree pe kam hee log ate hain aur main dobara alag se poochata hoon un se ke kaheen tareef mujeh khush karane ke liye to nahee kee ? mujhe feed back milta rahata hai main khud jana chahat hoon maien kya galat kaha meree shayree ko kam galat chota kah lo par mehul farhana ashu in sab ke lafzon ko kam na kaho tum ne sach kaha hai tumhe achah nahee laga agar nahe elaga to shayree main kamee hai sab ko na achee lage to shayree kaisee par samjho kya chubh gaya mujhe plz samjho
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sanb ke liye - 5th March 2006, 10:20 PM

ye ooper wala re,mark mere aur mere bhayee manu ke beech kee pyaree see nokjhonk ka hissa hai ham log pyar karte hain to thora sa larne ka bhee hak rakhte hain us ne kuch kaha kuch mujeh samjhne main dikkat huyee kuch use samjhane main par bas apas kee baat thee to jo is kavita ko parhe bas kavita par ray de hamree dono kee baton par nahee hame jab gussa ayega ek dosore ke gireban pakar ke sauljah lenege baat

haan manu kee baat nahee manana kavita pyaree hee hai hehehehhehe manu kidding
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hi anil - 5th March 2006, 10:28 PM

Bhaiyaa aapne ant mai mujhe hasa hi diyaa

chhote bhaayi ki khinchte (Kuchh aur mat samajhna) hue sharm nahi aatii.....
Maine to jaan bujh ke kiya tha aap ko sataaane ke liye

Jyaada fenko mat tum kuchh roye boye nahi ho bhai,chhota jaan ke ullu mat banao, mujhe sab pata chalta hai
Aur bura laga ho to......do char jhuthi taarif hi kar deta hu

Sab jaan hi jaayege manu ku man ki baat....ab karo heeeeeee haaaaaaaa........... (jhuthi Taarifffffffff) hahaha

ok brother
goodnite tumara reply aane se pahele so jaata hu varna rat yunhi kat jaayegi

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good morning - 6th March 2006, 06:16 AM

ab neend khule to meethe vicharon ke sath jagana manu. bakee mere chote doston ke liye, ye manu shayree main chota nahee hai is se seekh sakte ho samjh sakte ho salah le sakte ho ye achha likhta hai zaldee likhta hai kabhee kaheen atak jayo to kahana is se samjha dega mera nam loge to aur zaldee samjha dega
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Re: raat ko koyee bante kaise - 6th March 2006, 10:04 AM

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pyar ko koyee bante kaise
tera mera chhante kaise

chubhta nahee kuch bhee chhoo lo
pyar main kante kante kaise

seene se lag agar na rote
dil kee aag bujhate kaise

ansu kee gar rah na bantee
khabon main woh aate kaise

neend bhee mange khab bhee mangen
raat ko koyee bante kaise

chand se sundar kah to dete
chand ko par samjhate kaise
chand khafa ho jata gar to
ghar kee chhat par jate kaise
ghar kee chhat pa na jate to
un se nazar milate kaise
un se nazar nahee miltee to
chand ko chand dikhate kaise
chand se sundar kah to dete
chand ko par samjhate kaise

ro kar un ko wida jo karte
mera nam bhulate kaise

Anil

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ish bar itni gehrai li hui nahi lagti sidhe sade dhang se hai lekin lagta hai dil se likhi hui hai bcoz shayad main mehsoos kar paa raha hu...


ye bhi hamesha ki tarah bohat achi rahi


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shukriya - 7th March 2006, 06:12 AM

tumahree is raay ke liye bahut bahut shukriya diggaz i liked it
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