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Thumbs up Rules for Ghazal Of The Month - 28th December 2008, 12:22 PM

Sabhi doston ko zainy ka salaam......

Title se hi aap sab ko pata chal gaya hoga ke yahan kya hone waala hai..hamare naye doston ko...jo is baare me nahi jaante, main unke liye .. bataa deti hoon...doston yahan per har mahine ek dostaana muqabla hoga...aysa yahan pehle bhi ho chuka hai,hum ne ye socha hai ki yeh silsila dubaara shuru kiya jaye...

yahan apko har mahine ki ek word diya jayega jo apko apni ghazal ke qaafiye me istemaal karna hai...apko apni ghazal likhne aur pesh karne ke liye 15 din ka waqt diya jayega....aapko apni ghazal likh kar mayank ji + ek aur moderator(any one)..dono ko ek saath mail karna hoga...phir..aap sab ki ghazalon ko yahan ek seperate thread me "ghazal section "forum me display kiya jayega,aur polling hogi ... 15 days tak polling ka silsila jaari rahega..aur 15 din ke baad results declare ho jayenge..aur jis Ghazal ko "Ghazal of the month "chuna jaayega, usay ek mahine tak Ghazal sec me.n sticky kiya jaayega....

Rules me.n is baar thodi bahut tabdiliyan ki gayi hai, jaise ke results 100% polling per nirbhar rahega..


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1) Ghazal should be your own creation .

2) Ghazal submitted for the competition should be an unpublished one.

3) Only those members can participate who have more then fifty posts.

4)Aap ko ek lafz diya jaayega, jise aap qaafiye me istemaal karenge.. radiif aap koi bhi apne pasand ka istemaal kar sakte hain

5)Aap ek baar ghazal submit karne ke baad us me phir koi radd-o-badal nahi kar sakte

6)Ghazalein "ghazal section" forum me ek sticky thread bana kar post kii jaayegi

7)Is baar multiple polling bhi allowed hogi..matlab aap, ek se zyada ghazal ko bhi poll kar sakte hain.

Hamein ummiid hai is site ke sabhi shayer is muqable me poore josh ke saath hissa lenge ..


Ek baat ap sab ko bata doon,is muqable ka maqsad sirf aap sab ko protsahan dena hai.....


aap is baare me apni raey bejhijak de sakte hain.please polling karke hamein apni raey dijiye..

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29th December 2008, 02:17 PM

diya jee, dinesh jee,prashant vasl jee.. sath dene ke liye aap sab ka bahut bahut shukriya....ummid hai aur bhi doston ka hame saath milega......

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meri ek guzarish rahegi is muqaable me jo sabse ahchi ghazal chuni jaayegi, use poll se nahiN kiya jaaye, balki mods ko ya ek panel bana kar decide kiya jaaye, kyuNki polling me kayi baar yari dosti aati hai, maiN jaanta hun meri ye baat kayi logoN ko bur lagegi, par fir bhe mere khayaal se behtar hoga....!! aage aap logoN ki marzi...

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30th December 2008, 03:26 PM

Lucky jee...aapka bahut bahut shukriya aapne polling karke hamara sath diya...isse bhi zyada khushi hame is baat ki hai aapne apna shak zaahir kiya...aur bhi doston ko zarur aysa shak dil me aaya hoga....to aap sab ko hum ye batane chahenge...aap log is baat ki bilkul fikr na kare , ke yaari dosti ke aade, polling me hera pheri hogi.......inshallah aysa kuch nahi hoga...iski 2 wajah hai

1...Is baar multiple polling allowed, jisse agar koi banda dosti ke aade apne dost ko vote karega to bhi, jo sab se acchi ghazal hai usay bhi wo vote zarur dega...isse khud ba khud sab se acchi ghazal hi "ghazal of the month" chuni jaayegi

2...hum har vote karne waale member ki ip addresses per nazar rakhenge to isse koi bhi alag alag ids banakar, jeetne ya jetaane ki koshish nahi kar sakta...

yakeen maniye, humari nazar har pal is thread per rahegi aur hame yakeen hai Inshallah sahi faisla hi hoga.

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Lucky jee...aapka bahut bahut shukriya aapne polling karke hamara sath diya...isse bhi zyada khushi hame is baat ki hai aapne apna shak zaahir kiya...aur bhi doston ko zarur aysa shak dil me aaya hoga....to aap sab ko hum ye batane chahenge...aap log is baat ki bilkul fikr na kare , ke yaari dosti ke aade, polling me hera pheri hogi.......inshallah aysa kuch nahi hoga...iski 2 wajah hai

1...Is baar multiple polling allowed, jisse agar koi banda dosti ke aade apne dost ko vote karega to bhi, jo sab se acchi ghazal hai usay bhi wo vote zarur dega...isse khud ba khud sab se acchi ghazal hi "ghazal of the month" chuni jaayegi

2...hum har vote karne waale member ki ip addresses per nazar rakhenge to isse koi bhi alag alag ids banakar, jeetne ya jetaane ki koshish nahi kar sakta...

yakeen maniye, humari nazar har pal is thread per rahegi aur hame yakeen hai Inshallah sahi faisla hi hoga.

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sabhi polling se voting to kerieNge , aur voting hi result ho ga mager voting kerne waale ko ghazal ki techniques pata haeN ?

app is baat se anjaan to nahi haen k kitne members theek likhte hai aur kitne theek hi likhte haen ?

polling ka duration kitna hoga ?

ip change ker ke voting kerna konsa mushkil kaam hai aj kal ?




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Janaab collection saheb,
Aapka review dekhkar bahut khushi hui,,,,aapke sawalon ke jawaab dene se pehle main sab members se kuch arz karna chahungi.....is muqable ke maqsad:

1..Dekha gaya hai ke log yahan aate hain apni apni ghazalein post karte hain, phir kuch members unhe quote karte hain,bas kuch reviews aur replies ka baad wo post ander kisi panno me kho jaati hai...aur log bhool jaate hain...kisne kya likha, kyu likha,kitni mehnat ki,sab bhool jaate hai,per is tarah ke muqable se logon ke hunar khul kar sabke saame aayenge, kaun kitna qabil hai,kisko kitna ilm hai,kon wakay mehnat karta hai, isse sabko pata chalega..

2..yeh bhi dekha gaya hai ke log yahan darzanon ghazalein post karte hain, aur unhe ghazal likhne ke techniques ke baare me bilkul pata nahi hota, is thread se unhe aahista aahista rehnumaai hogi, kaafiya kya hai, matla, makta, shayed yeh muqabla dekhkar unme bhi kuch seekhna ka jazba paida ho...

3..yahan muqable karne ka hamara maqsad , kisi ko jeetana ya harana nahi hai...is muqable ke zariye hum sirf is site ke accha aur qabil shayeron ka hunar aap sab tak pahunchana chahte hain, unhe kuch zyada naam aur izzat dena chahte hain, jiske wo haqdaar hain...

ab chalte aapke sawaalon ke jawabon ki taraf::...
jee aapne bilkul sahi farmaya..voting se hi results declare honge...janaab ghazal aur shayri to ehsaason se banti hai, techniques to badme aate hain,aur haan aapko batadoon, ke humne kahin bhi zikr nahi kiya hai ki hissa lena waale member ya voting karne waale members ko ghazal ki techniques ka pata hona chahiye.....shayed jab log in ghazalon ko padhenge to ahista ahista seekhne ke koshish bhi karenge...

dosre sawaal ka jawaab:.....sahi kaha aapne, har kisi ki apni apni limitations hoti hain,koi bahut accha likhta hai, koi kam, jo log zara kam accha likhte hain, shayed is muqable ke karan ab zyada waqt de paaye apne hunar ko aur accha likhne ki koshish kare....."think positive"

polling ka duration humne upar mention kiya hai,phir bhi aapko dubaara bata deti hoon,ye 15 din ka hoga

rahi ip change karke voting karne ki baat,mere khayal me ye sirf junooni ya bewakoof log hi karenge,aur hamein yakeen is site per aysa koi member nahi.....humne jaan buj kar is muqable ka inaam zyada bada nahi rakha, taaki logon ko jeetne ka junoon sawaar na hojaye...

is muqable ko sirf ek homely game ki tarah kheliye jis tarah aap apne ghar waalon ke sath khelte, jeetna ka housla zarur ho per haarne per afsos nahi.....aur dubaara agle mahine phir hissa lijiye,agar aapme josh aur hunar hai , to phir kamiyabi ek din aapke qadam zarur chumegi,

maine kahin suna hain "think positive and be positive"...her baat ko dekhne aur samajhne ke alag alag pehlu hote hain..aap ho sake to is muqable se hone waale faydon ka sochiye...naaki inke nuqsaano ka..aur haan duniye me dhoka fareb sab maujood hain,ab ham inke dar se jeena ya khelna to nahi chhod sakte...inshallah hamesha jeet acchai ki hi hoti hai..

ummiid hai aap ye sab ghalat fehmiya apne dil se nikaal kar, khud bhi khushi khushi is muqable me hissa lenge..

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Aapka review dekhkar bahut khushi hui,,,,aapke sawalon ke jawaab dene se pehle main sab members se kuch arz karna chahungi.....is muqable ke maqsad:
Zainy Jee,

bahut khushi huwi itna bada review pedh ker , izzat afzai ke liye mamnoon ho.

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1..Dekha gaya hai ke log yahan aate hain apni apni ghazalein post karte hain, phir kuch members unhe quote karte hain,bas kuch reviews aur replies ka baad wo post ander kisi panno me kho jaati hai...aur log bhool jaate hain...kisne kya likha, kyu likha,kitni mehnat ki,sab bhool jaate hai,per is tarah ke muqable se logon ke hunar khul kar sabke saame aayenge, kaun kitna qabil hai,kisko kitna ilm hai,kon wakay mehnat karta hai, isse sabko pata chalega..



baat to appki theek hai keh sabki mehnat bus kuch din hi nazar aati hai uske bad sab bhool jaate hain , aik baat arz kerni hai .

zainy jee mehnat to sabhi kerte hain mager ye alag baat hai ke app ko kiski mehnat passand aaye lakin iska matlab ye to nahi hai k baaqiyon ne mehnat kam ki hai to baaqi sabki mehnat bekaat ki hai jo usko sticky nahi kiya jaaey ga ?

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2..yeh bhi dekha gaya hai ke log yahan darzanon ghazalein post karte hain, aur unhe ghazal likhne ke techniques ke baare me bilkul pata nahi hota, is thread se unhe aahista aahista rehnumaai hogi, kaafiya kya hai, matla, makta, shayed yeh muqabla dekhkar unme bhi kuch seekhna ka jazba paida ho...


is baat per kuch hairaani huwi hai ik taraf app ne kaha ke
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yahan apko har mahine ki ek word diya jayega jo apko apni ghazal ke qaafiye me istemaal karna hai
aur doosri jaanib kehti hain ke is se pata chale ga ke kaafiya , matla , makta , radeef etc , jab logon ko is baare mai awareness nhi hai to wo likhege kiya ???

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3..yahan muqable karne ka hamara maqsad , kisi ko jeetana ya harana nahi hai...is muqable ke zariye hum sirf is site ke accha aur qabil shayeron ka hunar aap sab tak pahunchana chahte hain, unhe kuch zyada naam aur izzat dena chahte hain, jiske wo haqdaar hain...
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ab chalte aapke sawaalon ke jawabon ki taraf::...
jee aapne bilkul sahi farmaya..voting se hi results declare honge...janaab ghazal aur shayri to ehsaason se banti hai, techniques to badme aate hain,aur haan aapko batadoon, ke humne kahin bhi zikr nahi kiya hai ki hissa lena waale member ya voting karne waale members ko ghazal ki techniques ka pata hona chahiye.....shayed jab log in ghazalon ko padhenge to ahista ahista seekhne ke koshish bhi karenge...
mere khaayal se muqaabla unka hota hai jo barabar ke hon , aik taraf app jaise mahaan shayar hon aur dosri jaanib mere jaisa koi naya likhne wala to zahri se bat hai app hi jeetiengi , to faaida mere likhne kaa ??? aur ager mere ahsaas ache lage aur farz kijiye ma jeet bhi gaya to faaida us jeetne ka jab main ghazal ke rules ko hi follow na keron ???

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dosre sawaal ka jawaab:.....sahi kaha aapne, har kisi ki apni apni limitations hoti hain,koi bahut accha likhta hai, koi kam, jo log zara kam accha likhte hain, shayed is muqable ke karan ab zyada waqt de paaye apne hunar ko aur accha likhne ki koshish kare....."think positive"


ghazal waqt zyada dene se likhi jaati hai app se suna hai
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rahi ip change karke voting karne ki baat,mere khayal me ye sirf junooni ya bewakoof log hi karenge,aur hamein yakeen is site per aysa koi member nahi.....humne jaan buj kar is muqable ka inaam zyada bada nahi rakha, taaki logon ko jeetne ka junoon sawaar na hojaye...


SDC per already grouping chal rahi to jiske dost zyada wohi jeete ga
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is muqable ko sirf ek homely game ki tarah kheliye jis tarah aap apne ghar waalon ke sath khelte, jeetna ka housla zarur ho per haarne per afsos nahi.....aur dubaara agle mahine phir hissa lijiye,agar aapme josh aur hunar hai , to phir kamiyabi ek din aapke qadam zarur chumegi,

josh ho aur honar na ho to hisa laina mana hai ?
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maine kahin suna hain "think positive and be positive"...her baat ko dekhne aur samajhne ke alag alag pehlu hote hain..aap ho sake to is muqable se hone waale faydon ka sochiye...naaki inke nuqsaano ka..aur haan duniye me dhoka fareb sab maujood hain,ab ham inke dar se jeena ya khelna to nahi chhod sakte...inshallah hamesha jeet acchai ki hi hoti hai..


aik dum perfect suna hai , mager mai ne suna hai ager kaamyaab hona hai to her kaam keh kerne se pehle socho ke is men nuqsaan kiyaa aur faida kiyaa hai takeh khud ko nakaamyaabi se pehle sambhaal sako .

aur haan yaad rahe nuqsaan sochne ka pehle kaha gaya hai
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ummiid hai aap ye sab ghalat fehmiya apne dil se nikaal kar, khud bhi khushi khushi is muqable me hissa lenge..

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ghalat fehmi to pehle bhi koi nahi thi aur ab bhi koi nahi hai

ghazal main kiya ghaltiyan hain kon check kere ga ?

aik baar pehle bhi maikaash jee ne aisa kerna chaha tha mager kiyaa huwa app bhi daikh laiN to achi baat hai

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57049

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Zainy Jee,

bahut khushi huwi itna bada review pedh ker , izzat afzai ke liye mamnoon ho.




baat to appki theek hai keh sabki mehnat bus kuch din hi nazar aati hai uske bad sab bhool jaate hain , aik baat arz kerni hai .

zainy jee mehnat to sabhi kerte hain mager ye alag baat hai ke app ko kiski mehnat passand aaye lakin iska matlab ye to nahi hai k baaqiyon ne mehnat kam ki hai to baaqi sabki mehnat bekaat ki hai jo usko sticky nahi kiya jaaey ga ?



is baat per kuch hairaani huwi hai ik taraf app ne kaha ke
aur doosri jaanib kehti hain ke is se pata chale ga ke kaafiya , matla , makta , radeef etc , jab logon ko is baare mai awareness nhi hai to wo likhege kiya ???


mere khaayal se muqaabla unka hota hai jo barabar ke hon , aik taraf app jaise mahaan shayar hon aur dosri jaanib mere jaisa koi naya likhne wala to zahri se bat hai app hi jeetiengi , to faaida mere likhne kaa ??? aur ager mere ahsaas ache lage aur farz kijiye ma jeet bhi gaya to faaida us jeetne ka jab main ghazal ke rules ko hi follow na keron ???



ghazal waqt zyada dene se likhi jaati hai app se suna hai


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SDC per already grouping chal rahi to jiske dost zyada wohi jeete ga

josh ho aur honar na ho to hisa laina mana hai ?


aik dum perfect suna hai , mager mai ne suna hai ager kaamyaab hona hai to her kaam keh kerne se pehle socho ke is men nuqsaan kiyaa aur faida kiyaa hai takeh khud ko nakaamyaabi se pehle sambhaal sako .

aur haan yaad rahe nuqsaan sochne ka pehle kaha gaya hai

ghalat fehmi to pehle bhi koi nahi thi aur ab bhi koi nahi hai

ghazal main kiya ghaltiyan hain kon check kere ga ?

aik baar pehle bhi maikaash jee ne aisa kerna chaha tha mager kiyaa huwa app bhi daikh laiN to achi baat hai

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57049

maiN yeh to nahi keh sakta "Think postive and be postive" mager itna zaroor kaho ga ke sochye ga zaroor
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aap ne apni raa'ey dii, is ke liye, tah-e-dil se shurkiyah.. format wohii hai, jo oopar bataaya gaya hai.. aur mere khayaal se sab Theek hoi hoga, dekhate hai.n baaqi members ki kyaa raa'ey hai, is ke baad hi is baare me.n kuchh socha jaayegaa..

ek baar phir se shukriyah!

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5th January 2009, 03:26 AM

Well meri rai kisi kaam ki to nahi par ...

bas yahi ki ye ek acha kadam hai . likhne ko protsahn milta hai ......

lekin likhen pe jayda pabandi an lagaye .. jaise ek word denge uspe ghazal ... ya use kafiya banana ......

ispe kuch aur bhi ad kar le .......... ya koe b situation ho .........
ya current situation like ... kuch b humari life mai ho raha ho ......
aur nazm ko bhi shamil kare ........

maksad achi poetry se hai mera haar jeet se nahi ..........
har koe is bajah se acha likh sake bas

mai yaha naya hun ......... jayda nahi janta kisi ko bhi

maien ye threaD DEKGHA
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=57049

mayank ne jis tarah se sabko commnt diye hai . its really gr8 work .. haan lekin agar ye suggestion pm kiye jaye jo shayed confusion se bacha ja sakta hai ......

poem achi buri to poll se sabit ho jayegi .........
lekin jo achye se samhna chahte ho unko is tarah se samjhna . its really gr8 work

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na ki haar jeet ...........

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Ghazal of the Month jo bhi ho , hoga to humare hi SDC family ka koi member....fir is baat pe itna sochne ki kya jarurat hai ....
Mujhe to khusi is baat ki ho rahi hai ...yahaN ek Qafiya main kitne ghazal dekhne ko milega aur sabke soch bhi padhne ko milega

Zainy ji sukriya good idea...................


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Janumanu jee,

Ye ek public event hai...is site ke har member ko yaha apni apni raey dene ka poora haq hai...

aapki kahi har baat ko humne note kiya hai..jaise ke aapne raey dee, nazm ko shamil kiya jaye aur ek topic per ghazal likhi jaey...hum aane waale mahino me ye saare shamil karne ki koshish karenge.....abhi to ye shuruat hai,to filhaal hum ise kaafiye se hi shuru karenge jaise ke hum pehle hi declare kar chuke hai....

..kuch members jo kaafiye ke baare me nahi jaante....hum neeche ek link de rahe hai..ise padhiye aapko kaafiye ke baare me sab kuch pata chal jayega...bahut hi asaan hai...

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2125

..bilkul sahi kaha aapne hamara maqsad haar jeet nahi hai...sirf aur sirf, members ko protsahan deno hai taaki wo acche se accha likhe aur seekhe..

..saath dene ka bahut bahut shukriya..


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I like your spirit diya...bahut accha laga aapka review padhkar...bilkul sahi kaha aapne.....jeete koi bhi...hoga to hamari hi sdc family ka ek member na ....

Plan ke mutabiq.... ye muqabla 15th january se start kiya jaayega....is baare me aur bhi details hum jald hi post karenge

phir bhi hum tab tak is baare me .aur bhi members ki raey janna chahenge........


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Jeetne wale ke liye koi prize bhi hai kya Zainy Ji??????????



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all the best
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Jee Amit ji... ..offcourse jeetne waale ko prize diya jayega......

"jis Ghazal ko "Ghazal of the month "chuna jaayega, usay ek mahine tak Ghazal sec me.n sticky kiya jaayega.... "


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Sabhi ko mera pyar bhara namaskaar

hume es baat ki bahut khushi hai ke aap sab ne polling karke hamara saath diya,ummid hai ke isi josh ke saath aap sab apni apni ghazalein bhi hume bhejenge...yaad rahe hum "word for ghazal of the month" 15th Jan. ko dene wale hain...poora vishwaas hai hume ki aap bhi 15th Jan. ka besabri se intzaar kar rahe hoNge.....to bas chand roz aur intzaar kijiye....

pyar aur duao.n ke saath


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Title se hi aap sab ko pata chal gaya hoga ke yahan kya hone waala hai..hamare naye doston ko...jo is baare me nahi jaante, main unke liye .. bataa deti hoon...doston yahan per har mahine ek dostaana muqabla hoga...aysa yahan pehle bhi ho chuka hai,hum ne ye socha hai ki yeh silsila dubaara shuru kiya jaye...
yahan apko har mahine ki ek word diya jayega jo apko apni ghazal ke qaafiye me istemaal karna hai...apko apni ghazal likhne aur pesh karne ke liye 15 din ka waqt diya jayega....aapko apni ghazal likh kar mayank ji + ek aur moderator(any one)..dono ko ek saath mail karna hoga...phir..aap sab ki ghazalon ko yahan ek seperate thread me "ghazal section "forum me display kiya jayega,aur polling hogi ... 15 days tak polling ka silsila jaari rahega..aur 15 din ke baad results declare ho jayenge..aur jis Ghazal ko "Ghazal of the month "chuna jaayega, usay ek mahine tak Ghazal sec me.n sticky kiya jaayega....

Rules me.n is baar thodi bahut tabdiliyan ki gayi hai, jaise ke results 100% polling per nirbhar rahega..

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2) Ghazal submitted for the competition should be an unpublished one.

3) Only those members can participate who have more then fifty posts.

4)Aap ko ek lafz diya jaayega, jise aap qaafiye me istemaal karenge.. radiif aap koi bhi apne pasand ka istemaal kar sakte hain

5)Aap ek baar ghazal submit karne ke baad us me phir koi radd-o-badal nahi kar sakte

6)Ghazalein "ghazal section" forum me ek sticky thread bana kar post kii jaayegi

7)Is baar multiple polling bhi allowed hogi..matlab aap, ek se zyada ghazal ko bhi poll kar sakte hain.

Hamein ummiid hai is site ke sabhi shayer is muqable me poore josh ke saath hissa lenge ..


Ek baat ap sab ko bata doon,is muqable ka maqsad sirf aap sab ko protsahan dena hai.....


aap is baare me apni raey bejhijak de sakte hain.please polling karke hamein apni raey dijiye..

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chalo ab jaldi se koi topic de do gazal likhne k liyein, mujhe pata hai, yeh compition jeetne k liye mujhe koi khaas mehnat nahi kerni padengi.ok mazaak khatam. mein aapse sehmat hu, aap ne bahut achchha socha,mujhe intizaar rahenga.khuda haafiz


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hume es baat ki bahut khushi hai ke aap sab ne polling karke hamara saath diya,ummid hai ke isi josh ke saath aap sab apni apni ghazalein bhi hume bhejenge...yaad rahe hum "word for ghazal of the month" 15th Jan. ko dene wale hain...poora vishwaas hai hume ki aap bhi 15th Jan. ka besabri se intzaar kar rahe hoNge.....to bas chand roz aur intzaar kijiye....

pyar aur duao.n ke saath
fikar mat karo sisiter khan .inshallah yeh compition sabse zyada baar mein hi jeetoonga.


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fikar mat karo sisiter khan .inshallah yeh compition sabse zyada baar mein hi jeetoonga.
good luck khan bhai......khud par bharosa hona bahut acchi baat hai....par ek baat yaad rakhna kabhi bhi over confident mat hona....kyuNki es pariwaar mein ek se badkar ek HEERA hai........



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good luck khan bhai......khud par bharosa hona bahut acchi baat hai....par ek baat yaad rakhna kabhi bhi over confident mat hona....kyuNki es pariwaar mein ek se badkar ek HEERA hai........



sabhi members ko meri taraf se shub-kaamnaye.....ab to bas 2 roz ki aur baat hai aur phir khel shuru....



GOOD LUCK DOSTO
AREY sister khan mujhe likhna kaha aata hai,woh toh ANAA ki yaad hai jo likhne per majboor kerti hai, mein toh sirf apne dil ko tasalli dene k liye hi ghazal likhta hu, mein koi itna bada shayer nahi hu,meine toh yeh word yaha aapko hasaane k liye likhe ,meine jaanta hu,mein yaha bahut shayer'o ko padha wakai'atan sabke sab QABIL-E-TAREEF hai,

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sabhi members ko meri taraf se shub-kaamnaye.....ab to bas 2 roz ki aur baat hai aur phir khel shuru....



GOOD LUCK DOSTO
arey sister khan yeh word toh meine aapko haasane k liye likhe the mujhe kaha shayri ki samajh hai,mei toh apni ANAA k saath bahut kush hu,aap jitni behetreeen shayri toh saari zindagi mehnat kerke bhie nahi likh sakta,ksam se,mein toh sirf isiliye likhta hu ki kabhi toh ANAA ko meri koi ghazal pasand aayeengi,aur woh khud kahengi ki use meri ghazal sunni hai, bas yahi mera khwaab hai,aur ANAA hi meri shayri meri ghazal hai ANAA.

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I M Sorry To Say Ye Sab Achha Nahi Laga..mera Matlab Hai Ke Yaha Pe Gazal Kisi Mod Ke Throw Nahi Balki Origenel Writer Ke Throw Post Ki Jaani Chaahiye Thhi..haa Mana Ke Naam Likha Gaya Hai Har Writer Ka Lekin Maine To Socha Thha Ke Yaha Gazal Wahi Post Karenge Jisne Likhi Hai....

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Ummid Hai Sdc Ki Member Hote Hue Apne Haq Ke Hisaab Se Kuch Likhaa Yaha To Kisi Ko Bura Nahi Laga Hoga...

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I M Sorry To Say Ye Sab Achha Nahi Laga..mera Matlab Hai Ke Yaha Pe Gazal Kisi Mod Ke Throw Nahi Balki Origenel Writer Ke Throw Post Ki Jaani Chaahiye Thhi..haa Mana Ke Naam Likha Gaya Hai Har Writer Ka Lekin Maine To Socha Thha Ke Yaha Gazal Wahi Post Karenge Jisne Likhi Hai....

Yaha Ki Ek Pooraani Member Hone Ke Naate Main Mod. Se Request Karti Hu Ki Aage Se Jo Likhe Wahi Post Kare...

Ummid Hai Sdc Ki Member Hote Hue Apne Haq Ke Hisaab Se Kuch Likhaa Yaha To Kisi Ko Bura Nahi Laga Hoga...

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dear puuja jee,

baat yahaa.n achchha ya bura lagne ki nahii.n hai!

lekin har cheez ka ek format banaa,na paDta hai, jis ko aage nibhaaya jaata hai.. pahli baat to yeh hai ki aap ne Ghalat jagah par apni baat rakkhi hai..is se pahle in sab ke liye ek poll bhi tha, aap ko tab apne haq ka istemaal karna tha...

aur duusri baat, aap ne jo sawaal uThaaya hai, Ghazal kisii mod ko nahii.n member ko post karna chaaiye...... to mujhe lagta hai us se kuchh farq nahii paDta hai kyun ki yeh zeyadah transparent hai aur agar ham chaahte hai.n ki ek hi din me.n sab ki Ghazle.n saamne aaye to Ghazal mod ke through post karna zaruuri hai!

ummed hai meri baat aap ko buri nahii.n lagegii..

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baat yahaa.n achchha ya bura lagne ki nahii.n hai!

lekin har cheez ka ek format banaa,na paDta hai, jis ko aage nibhaaya jaata hai.. pahli baat to yeh hai ki aap ne Ghalat jagah par apni baat rakkhi hai..is se pahle in sab ke liye ek poll bhi tha, aap ko tab apne haq ka istemaal karna tha...

aur duusri baat, aap ne jo sawaal uThaaya hai, Ghazal kisii mod ko nahii.n member ko post karna chaaiye...... to mujhe lagta hai us se kuchh farq nahii paDta hai kyun ki yeh zeyadah transparent hai aur agar ham chaahte hai.n ki ek hi din me.n sab ki Ghazle.n saamne aaye to Ghazal mod ke through post karna zaruuri hai!

ummed hai meri baat aap ko buri nahii.n lagegii..

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MUJHE BURA NAHI LAGA...LEKIN SHAAYAD AAPKO LAGAA...


WAISE FARQ TO KUCH NAHI PARTA..LEKIN VO ACHHA HOTA AGAR WRITER POST KARTE...JAHA TAK SAB GAZAL EK SAATH POST KARNE KA SAVAAL HAI AAP TIME LIMIT KAR SAKTE THHE...10 DIN ME GAZAL LIKHIYE..5 DIN ME EK THREAD PE POST KAR DIJIYE...EK OR BAAT..HUMESHA SE DEKHA HAI KE SITE PE MOD. HI SAB DICIDE KARTE HAIN..MEMBERS KO BAS FOLOW KARNA HOTA HAI...THIS IS NOT FAIR..KYA AAP MEMBERS SE RAY NAHI LE SAKTE?..AGAR KOI RAY DE BHI DE TO USME KOI NA KOI NUSK NIKAL KE ALAG KAR DIYA JAATA HAI....AAP APNI JAGHA SAHI HO SAKTE HAIN..OR APKO JO LAGA SAHI..APNE LIKHAA...HUME RULS KO EDIT KARNA SAHI LAGA TO LIKH DIYA...BAAKI MOD. PE HAI..

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MUJHE BURA NAHI LAGA...
khuda ka shukr hai!

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LEKIN SHAAYAD AAPKO LAGAA...
haa.n, par pahle nahii.n ab....... tiikha kuchh zeyadah ho gaya.....

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JAISE JAISE SAB SAMNE AA RAHA HAI..HAQ BHI JATAAYE JAA RAHE HAIN...
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last time bhi yahii format thaa, aur 'jaise jaise' kuchh nahii ho raha hai.... sab kuchh pahle se bataaya gaya hai......aap beshaq apna haq jataaiye..... coz. we can never satisfy everyone around us and It is not needed too.

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WAISE FARQ TO KUCH NAHI PARTA..LEKIN VO ACHHA HOTA AGAR WRITER POST KARTE...JAHA TAK SAB GAZAL EK SAATH POST KARNE KA SAVAAL HAI AAP TIME LIMIT KAR SAKTE THHE...10 DIN ME GAZAL LIKHIYE..5 DIN ME EK THREAD PE POST KAR DIJIYE...
agar sab apnii post karte hain to us ke liye poll invite karna na-mumkim hai.. technically....
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EK OR BAAT..HUMESHA SE DEKHA HAI KE SITE PE MOD. HI SAB DICIDE KARTE HAIN..MEMBERS KO BAS FOLOW KARNA HOTA HAI...THIS IS NOT FAIR..KYA AAP MEMBERS SE RAY NAHI LE SAKTE?..AGAR KOI RAY DE BHI DE TO USME KOI NA KOI NUSK NIKAL KE ALAG KAR DIYA JAATA HAI....
is baat ka jawaab baaqi members hi de.n to behtar hai..... kyun ki already 'Ghazal of the month' event shuru karne ke liye poll invite kiya gaya tha, jis par 23 members ne favour me.n vote kiya tha aur 2 member ne against me.n.... aur gar phir bhi baaqi members ko aitraaz hai aap hi ki tarah to, main apni marzee se ek mod nahii.n ek member hi ban, ke rahna chaahunga.........

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is ka jawaab to pahel hi de chuka huu.n...

we can never satisfy everyone around us and It is not needed too. if u can satisfy everyone around you then please.............................

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WAISE FARQ TO KUCH NAHI PARTA..LEKIN VO ACHHA HOTA AGAR WRITER POST KARTE...JAHA TAK SAB GAZAL EK SAATH POST KARNE KA SAVAAL HAI AAP TIME LIMIT KAR SAKTE THHE...10 DIN ME GAZAL LIKHIYE..5 DIN ME EK THREAD PE POST KAR DIJIYE...EK OR BAAT..HUMESHA SE DEKHA HAI KE SITE PE MOD. HI SAB DICIDE KARTE HAIN..MEMBERS KO BAS FOLOW KARNA HOTA HAI...THIS IS NOT FAIR..KYA AAP MEMBERS SE RAY NAHI LE SAKTE?..AGAR KOI RAY DE BHI DE TO USME KOI NA KOI NUSK NIKAL KE ALAG KAR DIYA JAATA HAI....AAP APNI JAGHA SAHI HO SAKTE HAIN..OR APKO JO LAGA SAHI..APNE LIKHAA...HUME RULS KO EDIT KARNA SAHI LAGA TO LIKH DIYA...BAAKI MOD. PE HAI..

GRAZIE

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Relax pooja ji,kyu itna gussa ho rahi hain, wo bhi apne birthday waale din...jo aapne kaha,ke writers ko apni apni ghazal post karne dein,zara practically sochiye ke ye mumkin kaise hai,jo shaqs pehle apni ghazal post karega,sirf usay poll option allowed hogi,jo baad me us thread me post karenge,wo apni ghazal ki poll option kaise denge,ayse to har member ko apni apni alag alag thread banani padegi,poll option ke liye, zara soch ke dekhiye .wo zyada better hai, ya ye zyada,better hai ,jahaan saari ghazalein ek jagah ek din post ki jaaye ,aur agar aapko kisi members ko comments dene ho to aapko aazadi hai,thread open hai,aap wahan naam ke saath comments de sakti hain,contestants aapko reply karenge,thread is open for reviews and replies..

aur aapne jo ilzaam lagaya hai ke yahan sirf moderators ki chalti hai, members ki nahi sunte,ye bilkul ghalat aur bebuniyaad ilzaam hai,aap links ke saath bataiye,kab kiski baat nahi suni gayi, phir aapko batayenge kyu nahi suni gayi, har baat ko maanna mumkin nahi,usse doosre members ko hone waale fayde aur nuqsaan bhi sochne padhta hai...agar apni hi chalana hota to ye thread post karne ki kya zarurat thi,seedhe seedhe announce kar dete competition hone waala hai,jise hissa lena hai le sakte hai,aap fursat me is thread ko padhna,baqaida humne is silsile me polling ki,aur majority milne ke baad hi ye contest shuru kiya,aur jo bhi members ki jo doubts hai,wo baqaida clear kar rahe hai..

agar aapko phir bhi aysa lagta hai ke writers ko hi apni ghazalein post karni chahiye, mods ko nahi to pls uske faide bataiye,hum dubaara is baare me soch sakte hain..

aur aapko ek baat aur batadoo.n, yahan per ek moderators forum hain, jahan per is site per kiye jaane waale har movement ki qabar baaqi saare moderators ko aur administrator ko di jaati hai,ayse hi koi apni man maani nahi karta.

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one more question pllzzzz
main ye poochna chahta hun moderators se ki kisi bhi mod ne competiton me shayri post kyun nahi ki..
kya wo sab experts hain sirf isliye...take it lightly bust answers this...
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one more question pllzzzz
main ye poochna chahta hun moderators se ki kisi bhi mod ne competiton me shayri post kyun nahi ki..

waise, ho sakta hai kuch mod busy ho.n.......... aur meri zaati raa'ey hai ki jo organize karta hai usay part nahii.n lena chaahiye!


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kya wo sab experts hain sirf isliye...take it lightly bust answers this...

taunt maar rahe ho miyaa.n........??? phir kahte ho take it lightly

mujhe pata hai ki shaayad taunt waala khayaal aap dil me.n na ho, par puuchhne waala tariqa wahii hai.. anjaane hi sahiii..........



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waise, ho sakta hai kuch mod busy ho.n.......... aur meri zaati raa'ey hai ki jo organize karta hai usay part nahii.n lena chaahiye!


taunt maar rahe ho miyaa.n........??? phir kahte ho take it lightly

mujhe pata hai ki shaayad taunt waala khayaal aap dil me.n na ho, par puuchhne waala tariqa wahii hai.. anjaane hi sahiii..........
hmmmmmmmmm...ok.... hum chup hi rehte hain ab..
mujhe to ab tak ye nahi samjh aa raha ki maine aisa kya keh diya
par agar aap sabko mera question ya tarika pasand na aaya
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