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kuch haseeN khwaab saja bethe haiN tere sung ae koyal!
yeH qafas ab humeN jaaN se bhi piyaara lagne laga hai!
Waaaaaahhhh !!!!! Behad hi khoobsurat khayaal !!! Beautifullllll !!! Qafas mein kisi se pyaar ho jaaye to qafas se dilkash jagah aur kaun si hogi !!! Dheron daad Hassan bhai !!!


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Change of mood zarraa saheb…

qafas meiN beetay sitam, tumhe dikhaa to nahi saktay!
bas itnaa jaan loH, andar se toot ke chhuur ho chukka hooN….


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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Change of mood zarraa saheb…

qafas meiN beetay sitam, tumhe dikhaa to nahi saktay!
bas itnaa jaan loH, andar se toot ke chhuur ho chukka hooN….
Ye to pooraa 180 degree U-turn maar diya hai Hassan bhai !! Par waah !! Kya turn hai waah !! jo sitam andar se torh dein unhein koyee kaise dikhaaye !! Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !!


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Ye to pooraa 180 degree U-turn maar diya hai Hassan bhai !! Par waah !! Kya turn hai waah !! jo sitam andar se torh dein unhein koyee kaise dikhaaye !! Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !!
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kuch iss taraH ki kafiyat shair meiN biyaaN karne ki koshish ki hai..
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lafz "qafas" par members ke aashaar ... - 20th August 2014, 09:29 PM

doston ... lafz "qafas"par members ke khud ke kahe huwe aashaar ...

na qafas kaa kHauf jinko na chaman kii chaah rakhte
maiN guloN se puchhtaa hooN wo parinde ab kahaaN hai
Aadeil

ye qafas hai raen-basera aur maiN taaIr e dil
jo chaman se uD ke khud aa mila sayyaad se
Aadeil

kamar se baandh ke wo khinch rahaa suunaa qafas e ruuh
kise uthaanee hai azaab is sard murde baar ki
Aadeil

ab sabaa bhii azaab lagne lagii
ye qafas aashiyaanaa lagne lagaa
Aadeil

naye naye ashiyaane ko maiN saraab samjhaa
qafas qafas-aaraa samjhe maiN to azaab samjhaa
Aadeil

jabiin e khaaksii meN ek jabiin e saNg bhii aisa
yahaaN nazr e qafas jaaN aur safhaa e dahr dikhaataa hai
Aadeil

chaman meN baith ke jo kar rahaa thaa roz guloN se baat
qafas kii tiiliyoN ke saath baaNtoo wo puraani yaad
Aadeil

teri yaadoN ke qafas meiN aise jakray haiN jese
zanjeereN jo lipti haiN paaoN se humeN virsaa meiN mili hooN
Hassan

pade saiyyaad jab piichhe parinde ko samajh aaya
Qafas me'n hi raha hota bhala hota bura hota
Ufaq

mujhko rahane hi De baaho.n me yu apni daayam
Tu qafas kholke panchhi ko udaata kyun hai
Ufaq

deed e falak navardee ki lazzat chali gayi
To kyaa huya qafas me'n agar andliib hai
Ufaq

Qafas meiN qaid panchi ki khaber rakhna, ae saheb!
mazloom ki aah farsh to kia arsh tak hilaa deti hai
Hassan

Rooh ka dard kisiii ko nazar nahii aataa
Qafas me qaid ye bulbul bahot tadaptee hai
Shaad

shaq o gumaaN ke qafas khud bana liye hum ne
falak ko choomte girne ka jo n dar hota
Zarraa

sabhi hum nasheen e chaman mere deiN qafas ki haNs ke mubaarakeiN
mujhe baaghbaaN saiyaad ki hai barhe jatan se safaayee de
Zarraa

shehar meiN badhati khusk saali ko dekhte
parindoN ka aik tolaa sir joD ke betha hai
num aankhoN se kar raha hai aah o fugaaN
Qafas meiN do waQt ka rizQ to naseeb ho jata tha
Hassan

ik khooon me bheege qafas ko dekh kar sochaa kiye
Mar mar miTey kitne parinde zindagee ke waaste
Shaad

ae insaan hum haiN aadi e qafas azaadi nahi humeN matloob
yeHi guzar basar hai apna! bahir nikle to mar na jayeN gay
Hassan

na chaman rahaa na qafas rahe ye parinde aaj yateem hue
mere saamne ye ujaR gayaa mere saamne wo tabaah hue
Aadeil

par katartaa kyuN hai ae saiyaad tu
jab qafas hi hai thikaanaa ban gayaa
Aadeil

sajaane do qafas-aaraa ko phir aaj
qafas meN bhii zaraa si taazgii ho
Aadeil

qafas-ba-dosh hi to saiyaad ka azaab rahaa
mera to aaj qafas-zaad phir khitaab rahaa
Aadeil

tiiliyaaN ginte ginte chaman tang hue
waaN bayaabaaN hue yaaN qafas zang hue
Aadeil

shor-e-parind sun, ki kahiN ittihaam mera
leke qafas na aaye ho saiyaad baaG meN
Aadeil


Kis tarah maiN todta qafas ka aasraa
Aye kaash key yaad hota ghar ka raastaa
N@zneen

kuch haseeN khwaab saja bethe haiN tere sung ae koyal
yeH qafas ab humeN jaaN se bhi piyaara lagne laga hai
Hassan

qafas meiN beetay sitam, tumhe dikhaa to nahi saktay
bas itnaa jaan loH, andar se toot ke chhuur ho chukka hooN
Hassan

aap sabhi shora ka behad mamnoon o mashqoor hoon ki aap ke khoobsurat qalaam se "qafas" ko bhi gulshan bana diya Aadeil bhai ne phir se aashaar ki ek anjuman bana di, unhone 13 aashaar farmaaye.

jin meherbaanon ne tashreef laakar hum shora ki hausla afzaayee kari aur jin saathiyon ne is koshish ko pardhne ki izzat bakshi, un ka bhi tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon !!


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dostoN ... is baar hum 1 naheen balki 2 lafzon par ek saath ghaur karenge ye donon lafz saath mil kar ek jumle ki shakl ikhtiyaar kar lete hain, so hum us jumle par bhi ghaur karenge

ye 2 lafz hain "nasheb" aur "faraaz" aur in se jumla banta hai "nasheb-o-faraaz".

chaliye, is mushkil se dikhne waale jumle ko deconstruct karte hain ... ye asal mein bilkul hi aasaan sa hai


nasheb = descent / lows / downward slope / utaar / neeche jaana

o = and / aur

faraaz = ascent / highs / upward slope / chardhaav / oopar aana



hence, "nasheb-o-faraaz" simply means "descent and ascent", "lows and highs", "utaar aur chardhaav"

hum "nasheb-o-faraaz" ke equivalent jumlon ko hindi aur english mein aam bolchaal mein istemaal karte rehte hain, jaise "lows and highs" ya "utaar-chardhaav".

ye jumla kis khoobsurti se kisi bhi safar ya raah ki daastaan keh jaata hai.

ye jumla aksar metaphorically use hota hai, zindagi ke safar ya zindagi ki raah ke liye .... ya zindagi se jurhe pehluon ke safar/raah ke liye .... jaise ki mohabbat ka, junoon ka, hayaat ka, rishton ka, hasraton ka, armaanon ka wagairah wagairah wagairah ....

kisi bhi safar ke nasheb-o-faraaz hi use kathin bhi banaate hain magar dilchasp bhi ... maayoos bhi karte hain magar umeed bhi jagaate hain ... nasheb-o-faraaz se kuchh log dar bhi jaate hain par kuchh usey chunauti ki tarah lete hain ... nasheb-o-faraaz thakan bhi paida karte hain magar hausla bhi mazboot karte hain ... kuchh logon ko nasheb-o-faraaz ki fikr sataati hai aur kuchh log us se beparwaah rehte hain ...

par jo kuchh bhi ho ...nasheb-o-faraaz se guzar ke hi insaan ko zindagi aur us ke pehluon ki asli pehchaan ho paati hai, asli samajh aa paati hai.

is baar hum "nasheb-o-faraaz" par shayari karenge aur saath saath shayari par guftagoo bhi karenge har baar ki tarah.

aap apne qalaam mein "nasheb" aur "faraaz" ka alag alag istemaal bhi kar sakte hain, bas donon lafz qalaam mein shaamil hone chaahiye. aap in lafz ke natural variations jaise "nasheboN","faraazoN" ka bhi istemaal kar sakte haiN. aur ya phir in 2 lafzon ko "nasheb-o-faraaz" ke jumle ki shakl mein istemaal kar sakte hain.

hence, you can say shayari with the phrase "nasheb-o-faraaz" in it, or the words "nasheb" and "faraaz" can come separately as well (along with its natural variations) but both the words should be present in your shayari.


in case of any doubts or clarification or counter point, request you to please express the same.

jo dost in 2 lafzon / jumle par aur roshni daal sakte hain, ya is ke kuchh aur pehloo saamne laa sakte hain, un se guzaarish hai ki wo aisa kar ke seekhne ka aur bhi zyada mauka dein hum sab ko.

ab dekhte hain ki kaise kuchh maane huwe shora ne apne aashaar mein in ka istemaal kiya hai ...


"NASHEB-O-FARAAZ" EK JUMLE KI TARAH


ik tum ke tum ko fikr-e-nasheb-o-faraaz hai
ik hum ke chal parhe to baharhaal chal parhe
- Kaifi Azmi


jo rah-e-ishq meiN qadam rakkheiN
wo nasheb-o-faraaz kya jaaneiN
- Daagh Dehlevi


rah-e-junooN ke nasheb-o-faraaz meiN "mohsin"
khirad ka phool bhi saNg-e-giraaN se kam to n tha
- Mohsin Naqvi


uljhe to sab nasheb-o-faraaz-e-hayaat meiN
hum the ki un ki zulfoN ke kham dekhte rahe
- Naushad Ali


kya nasheb-o-faraaz thi "tanveer"
zindagi aap ne guzaar hi di
- Habeeb Tanveer


raah-e-ulat n jis ne tay ki ho
wo nasheb-o-faraaz kya jaane
- Jaleel Manikpuri


ise vaasta kya kam-o-besh se
nasheb-o-faraaz-o-pas-o-pesh se
- Iqbaal ki nazm "saaqi-naamah" se


ranjish-o-iltifaat-o-naaz-o-niyaaz
hum ne dekhe bahaut nasheb-o-faraaz
- Hali


"NASHEB" AUR "FARAAZ" ... 2 ALAG LAFZ KE TAUR PE


nasheb-e-hasti se afsos hum ubhar n sake
faraaz-e-daar se paighaam aaye haiN kya kya
- Kaifi Aazmi


nasheb-e-dar ki mahek raaste sajaane lagi
faraaz-e-baam ke mahtaab dil meiN dhalne lage
- Nasir Kazmi


Khuda kare ki mile tujh ko manzil-e-maqsood
faraaz pa ke nasheboN pe bhi nazar rakhna
- Rasikh Irfani


is jumle / 2 lafzon par ghaur karne ka silsila hum agle 6 din tak jaari rakkhenge ... yani 26 August raat 9:00 PM India time ya 3:30 PM GMT

to chaliye, ab hum "nasheb-o-faraaz" ke nasheb-o-faraaz se guzar jaate hain ek doosre ka haath thaam kar


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Aye kaash key yaad hota ghar ka raastaa
Waaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! Naaz,
kitnii khubsurti se aur asaan lafzoN meN ek gehrii baat bayaaN kii hai......
dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad.

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kuch haseeN khwaab saja bethe haiN tere sung ae koyal!
yeH qafas ab humeN jaaN se bhi piyaara lagne laga hai!
waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!! laajawaab, kya khub bayaani huii hai...
dheroN daad, Hassanbhai

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Change of mood zarraa saheb…

qafas meiN beetay sitam, tumhe dikhaa to nahi saktay!
bas itnaa jaan loH, andar se toot ke chhuur ho chukka hooN….
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! behad khubsurat, Hassanbhai....
hamaari jaanib se dheroN daad aapko.....

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shab ke hone tak yahaaN aaftaab nasheb meN Garq huva
maah na niklaa, tum na aaye, ye samaa taarik* rahaa

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nasheb-e-chashm-e-tamaashaa* mujhe banaaye kyuN?
faraaz-e-daar-o-rasan* kii havas jagaaye kyuN?

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nasheb-e-chashm-e-tamaashaa* mujhe banaaye kyuN?
faraaz-e-daar-o-rasan* kii havas jagaaye kyuN?

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** eminence of crucifixion
waaaaaaaaaaah!

Adil bhai! Aik ke baad aik khoobsorat ashaar pesh kiye aap ne!

Daad beshumaar ka tohfaa qabool kejiye!

Younhi fusoon meiN jalwa-gar hoty rahiye!

DuaooN ke saath,


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Adil bhai! Aik ke baad aik khoobsorat ashaar pesh kiye aap ne!

Daad beshumaar ka tohfaa qabool kejiye!

Younhi fusoon meiN jalwa-gar hoty rahiye!

DuaooN ke saath,
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aapka teh-e-dil se shukr guzaar hooN....

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safeer, nasheb-o-faraaz to hai umr kii haqiiqat
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wo bachpan tha faraaz aur nasheb javaani thii
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Ek koshish ...main ye pehli baar try kar raha hoon..corrections and suggestions are most welcome


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waah waah wahh sir!

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Dil se nikli dherooN daad pesh-e-khidmat hai,

MeHfil ki rounaQ younhi badhaatay rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,


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fareb ye bhii, ki budhaape kii zindagaanii thii
waaaaaaaaaaaah!

Adil bhai... Kamaal hai lajawaab hai bemisaal hai yeH verse!

Daad hi daad,


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Comarade ,what is life without them ?
English version ne ziada mazaa diya saaheb!

You must try some English poetry...


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Ek koshish ...main ye pehli baar try kar raha hoon..corrections and suggestions are most welcome


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Musaahib, zindagi inke baghair kya hai ?
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
Ananthji,
kya khub kahaa....
sahi meN ye sab cheezoN ke bagair zindagii be-zaar hoti.......

waaahhhh... behadd khubsurat khayaal se aapne iis mehfil ko navaazaa hai.

daad hi daad meri jaanib se...
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haa haaa haaa... Naaz,
daad dene ka ye andaaz bhii pasand aayaa.. Thanks dear
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Superb, Ananthji....
very true...



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Adil bhai... Kamaal hai lajawaab hai bemisaal hai yeH verse!

Daad hi daad,
aapka bahot bahot shukriya, Hassanbhai.....



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Maine tumhara ye sher offline mein padhi thi...its just unbeatable...jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai simply outstanding.


reps nahin deparahi hun i've to spread some.
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Waaaaaahhhhhh!!!! Aadeil sahab ...kya baat hai...mindblowing
Ananthbhai,

aapka bahot bahot shukriya, jo aapko hamaaraa ye sher pasand aaya..

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kya khub kahaa....
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daad hi daad meri jaanib se...
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arz-o-samaa* haiN naqsh nasheb-o-faraaz ke
milke ufaq pe de jo sabaq irtikaaz** ke

* earth & sky
** convergence (moving toward union from different directions)



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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता



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21st August 2014, 03:09 PM

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uDaa, to faraaz meN paroN ne sambhaalaa
nasheb meN, sabaa kaa sahaaraa nahi tha


Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! Ek se badhkar ek...great lines Aadeil sahab





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Waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! Bohat khoob dheron daad Aadeil sahab
bahot bahot shukriya aapka, Ananthji...

hamaari jaanibse dheroN duaaeN....
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21st August 2014, 03:13 PM

zindagi yuhi imtihaan leti rahegi aksar

kabhi zindagi jeena ka koi falsafa mil jaaye

Faraaz aaye to sabr na kho dena yaaroN

Na jaane nasheb ka saath fhir kahan mil jaaye





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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!! Ek se badhkar ek...great lines Aadeil sahab
Thanks a lot, bhaisaab .............



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zindagi yuhi imtihaan leti rahegi aksar

kabhi zindagi jeena ka koi falsafa mil jaaye

Faraaz aaye to sabr na kho dena yaaroN

Na jaane nasheb ka saath fhir kahan mil jaaye
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!

aapne to jaise hamaare sher ka interpretation hi kar diya

laajavaab........... bahot khub....
dheroN dheroN daad, hamaari jaanibse, Ananthji.....



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21st August 2014, 03:52 PM

irtikaaz-e-zaat* meN kiskaa faraaz kiskaa nasheb
aaj wo uncha hua kal jo maa-tahtii** tha tera

*convergence of castes
** subordinate (मा-तहती)



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