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Wwwwwaaaahhhhhh !!!!! Sundar aur nirmal sher !!! Dheron daad Aadeil bhai !!
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Ab ye sher pardh ke misra-e-saanee se to sehmat hona hi pardhega waah bahaut hi umdah sher !! Bahaut si daad Aadeil sahab aap ko !!!!!
haa haa haa.....
iis qadr navaazish ke liye aapka mamnoon hooN, Zarraasaab

hamaari jaanibse dheroN duaaeN qubul farmaaiye
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27th August 2014, 09:17 AM

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Wah wah wah wah Ananthpak sahab !!! Bahaut hi khoobsurat qit'a farmaaya hai !!! Aap ke qalaam mein barjastagi, thehraav aur gehraayee hoti hai jo inhein dilkash bana deti hai !!! Bahaut si daad .... aur aap ko aur Pari ji ko dheron duaein aur anekon sunhkaamnaaein !!!
Bohat bohat shukriya Zarraa sahab...aap ki in alfaazo mere hausla aur bulandh kar diya..thanx for the wishes for both of us





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waaaaaaaaaaaaaahh! waaaaaaaaaaaaah!

Adil bhai.. bohat bohat khoob.... daad ka nazraana qabool kejiye!
Aapka bahot bahot shukriya, Hassanbhai.. milte rahiye
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Wah wah wah wah Ananthpak sahab !!! Bahaut hi khoobsurat qit'a farmaaya hai !!! Aap ke qalaam mein barjastagi, thehraav aur gehraayee hoti hai jo inhein dilkash bana deti hai !!! Bahaut si daad .... aur aap ko aur Pari ji ko dheron duaein aur anekon sunhkaamnaaein !!!
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wwwwwwwwwaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh !!!!!

bahaaaaauuuuuuut hi khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki hai Hassan bhai !!

ye ek prem geet bhi hai, ek afsaana-e-ulfat bhi, ek kahaani bhi, ek tasweer bhi, ek mahakta huwa phool bhi aur bahaar-e-gulshan bhi !!!

is ke fusoon se mehfil-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz charaaghaan ho uthee aur bazm-e-SDC naghmon mein doob gayee !!

bahaut se pyaar ke saath dheron dheron daad aap ko Hassan bhai !!! ummeed hai isee tarah sher-o-sukhan ke panghat par aap hunar ki pyaas bujhaate bhi rahein aur us ki tishnagi bardhaate bhi rahein !!

Zarraa saheb..

aap ne na-cheez ke kalaam ko jitni pazeeraayi bakhshi hai,
shayed maiN is ke qaabil nahi tha...
aur jis andaaz se aap ne khaak alfaazoN ki tareef ki hai..
dil khushi se baagh baagh ho gaya...

bas younhi humeN milte rahiye,
aap ka saaaya sir pe aik ghanay shajar sa lagta hai!

Apna bohat ziyada khiyaal rakhiye ga,

DuaooN ke saath,


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Muhabbat kii nasheb-o-faraaz se guzraa
Kabhii raah par tha dil kabhii gumraah
Naazuk!... mohabbat meiN dil kabhi be-raaH-ravi ka shikaar ho jata hai,
yeH to soola aanay sacch baat keH di tum ne.......
iss khoobsorat khiyaal ke liye dherooN daad-o-mubarakbaad


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reshmi poshaak zeyb tan kiye aik husn-e-be-naqaab!
humeN dekhte hi khil uthaa uss ka rukh-e-mahtaab
baad us ke! na nasheeb ki fikr rahi na faraaz ki..
mozu-e-sukhan tab se ab tak bas ik gul-e-gulaab


poshaak : clothes
zeyb tan : wear
mozu-e-shukhan : topic of speech


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27th August 2014, 02:22 PM

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reshmi poshaak zeyb tan kiye aik husn-e-be-naqaab!
humeN dekhte hi khil uthaa uss ka rukh-e-mahtaab
baad us ke! na nasheeb ki fikr rahi na faraaz ki..
mozu-e-sukhan tab se ab tak bas ik gul-e-gulaab


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behad khubsurat qi'ta, Hassanbhai.... kya nazaakat hai, kya shokhii aur kya adaayegiii.... waaaaaaaah hi waaaaaah nikaltii hai dilse.....



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reshmi poshaak zeyb tan kiye aik husn-e-be-naqaab!
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mozu-e-sukhan tab se ab tak bas ik gul-e-gulaab

poshaak : clothes
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Waaaahhhhhhh....kya baat hai Hassan bhai...bohat umda...dheron daad





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27th August 2014, 02:44 PM

grr na guzarta ishq jo kabhi nasheb-o-faraaz se

heer ranjhe se mil gayi hoti, shirin, farhaad se





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grr na guzarta ishq jo kabhi nasheb-o-faraaz se

heer ranjhe se mil gayi hoti, shirin, farhaad se
waaah! Ananthji,
bahot khub...



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grr na guzarta ishq jo kabhi nasheb-o-faraaz se

heer ranjhe se mil gayi hoti, shirin, farhaad se
waaaaaaaaaaaaah!!
Kia andaaz e bayaaN hai Ananth sir..... Bohat bohat khoob!

Daad hi daad is besh-qeemati shair ke liye!


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27th August 2014, 04:33 PM

guzar rahii hai nasheboN se aaj
merii faraaz-e-muhabbat phir se
zaraa sambhal, ke kahiN dil-shikan*
daraaz-e-shab** na mile but*** phir se

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guzar rahii hai nasheboN se aaj
merii faraaz-e-muhabbat phir se
zaraa sambhal, ke kahiN dil-shikan*
daraaz-e-shab** na mile but*** phir se

(*heart-breaking; **long night; ***lover [metaphorical])
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!

Adil bhai... kamal ka kamal hai... yeH khiyaal khoob raha..
DherooN daad ka toHfaa qabool kejiye...!

DuaooN ke saath,,


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Zaraasaab,
aapme hum flaws kya nikaalenge? , bas hamaari koshish thi ki kahiN 'faraazoN' lafz miil jaaye ya phir sahi plural form mil jaaye. aur aapne bilkul sahi farmaayaa ki kaii lafz hote haiN jisme hum 'oN' lagaa ke plural form banaa sakte haiN.. aur usii ko zehn meN rakhaa tha jab 'faraaz' kii plural dhund rahe the

aapka bahot bahot shukriya aur Ananthji ka bhii iis mudde pe discussion karne ke liye. waakaii is thread pe hameN bahot kuchh sikhne ko mila hai aur uske liye Zarraasaab aapka jitna bhii shukriya adaa kareN utna kam hoga.

duaaoN ke saath,
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mujhe zyada nahi maloom,magar meri soch hai ki bhasha ek behti nadi ki tarah hain jo jahan se guzarti hai wahan ke paani ko apne me shamil kar leti hai. agar woh naye paani ko apne me shamil karne se daregi aur behna band kar degi toh uss talaab mein taabdeel ho jayegi jiska paani kabhi na kabhi sad jata hai. so waqt ke saath bhasha mein naye shabdon ka shamil hona uski progress ki nishani hai as long as words are conveying it's meaning.

jaise ki faraazon ka matlab hum sab ko samajh bhi aa raha hai aur sher ki khoobsoorti bhi badaa raha hai toh phir sochna kya? let's include this word.

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27th August 2014, 10:00 PM

Doston ... behad maazrat ke saath arz kar raha hoon ki aaj naya lafz pesh naheen kar pa raha hoon ... main ne naya lafz identify kar liya hai ... par ain waqt par kuchh kaam aa gaya hai that needs immediate and urgent attention ...to tafseel se us par aaj baat naheen kar paoonga ... kal raat lafz le kar haazir hounga ... tab tak aap nasheb o faraaz par guftagoo jaaree rakh sakte hain ... sorry again and thanks for understanding !!


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mujhe zyada nahi maloom,magar meri soch hai ki bhasha ek behti nadi ki tarah hain jo jahan se guzarti hai wahan ke paani ko apne me shamil kar leti hai. agar woh naye paani ko apne me shamil karne se daregi aur behna band kar degi toh uss talaab mein taabdeel ho jayegi jiska paani kabhi na kabhi sad jata hai. so waqt ke saath bhasha mein naye shabdon ka shamil hona uski progress ki nishani hai as long as words are conveying it's meaning.

jaise ki faraazon ka matlab hum sab ko samajh bhi aa raha hai aur sher ki khoobsoorti bhi badaa raha hai toh phir sochna kya? let's include this word.

kuch baat galat lagi ho to maaf karna.

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pehle to aapka shukriya adaa karnaa chaahungaa jo aapne iis discussion ko jaari rakhaa. ek tarah se aapkii baat sahi hai ki kisii bhii boli ya zabaan meN naye alfaazoN kaa samaavesh acceptable hai. magar jab koii nayaa lafz include kiya jaa rahaa ho to hameN uus bolii kii tahziib kaa khayaal hona zarurii hai. kaii lafz kisii dusrii boli se hi liye jaate haiN, jaise faraaz farsi (Persian) lafz hai. to uske muul roop ko bhii dhyaan meN rakhnaa hota hai. shaayad faraazoN sahi lafz na ho aur faraazaaN sahi lafz ho? ye bhii ek sochne wali baat hai . kaii lafz aise hote haiN jiis meN agar galat istemaal ho to uske maanii bhii badal jaate haiN. misaal ke taur pe kuch lafz dekhte haiN jo farsi se urdu meN liye gaye haiN aur unpe aage bhii discusion isii thread pe huii bhii hai.

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fasaanaa ka plural afsaanaa ho ya fusuun (magic) ka plural afsun ho. These words interchangeable. vaise hi kaii aise lafz hote haiN jiske plurals 'oN' se plural bante haiN aur kaii lafz 'aaN' se plural bante haiN. Zarraasaab aur maiN ye nahi kehte haiN ki hum nayaa lafz banaa nahi sakte, magar hamaaraa ye kehna hai ki jab tak hameN thos example na mile tab tak hum use na kareN.

'faraaz' lafz ke lihaaz me dekheN to Zarraasaab ne ek unknown shaayar kii misaal dii hai jisne lafz 'faraazoN' ka istemaal kiya hai jo uskii khud kii tehriir hai aur usne FB pe post kii thii, magar kisii shura ne aise lafz ka istemaal nahi kiya hai. aur maine ek misaal di thii 'Betaab' saab ke ek sher kii jahaaN unhoN ne 'faraaz' lafz ko hi plural meN bhii use kiya hai. uske alaavaa ek persian link pe mujhe 'faraazaaN' lafz dekhne ko mila hai. I am unable to post that link here because wo ek download link hai aur jo file download hoti hai uskii extn. alag hai. actual word istemaal huaa hai 'sar-faraazaaN'. to agar hum galat lafz ka istemaal kareN to wo us boli kii tehziib meN nahi hoga. aur isii wajah se hamaaraa maannaa hai ki jab tak hameN koii thos example na mile, hum iiska istemaal nahi karenge.

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hum mile ek zan* se jiskii hansii bhii kamaal thii
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Waaaahhhhhhh....kya baat hai Hassan bhai...bohat umda...dheron daad
Jiss taraH aap dostoN ne hausla afzaai ki hai,
mere paas alfaaz nahi haiN shukriyaaH ke liye ..
bas Allah se dua hai ke aise hi mujhe milte raheN aap sabhi! (ameen)

DuaooN ke saath,


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hum mile ek zan* se jiskii hansii bhii kamaal thii
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(*woman)
waaahh.. wahhh!... be-had umdaH..... lajawaab..... dherooN daad is ba-kamaal shair ke liye!


kathiN nasheeb-o-faraaz se guzartay mehsoos tak na hua!
ghar pohanche to be-hisaab dukhne lagay paaoN ke chaalay..!



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na nasheeb hai na faraaz hai...
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bohat oonchhi meri parwaaz hai..



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bazm-e-yaaraaN se uth aaye haiN yeH soch kar ke!
faraaz ke to hum laaiQ nahi, nasheyb meiN hi jeete haiN!

nasheyb : low, down.. (pasti)



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ae mere maseeha, chaara-gar-o-ghum-khwaar!
mera yaar faraaz pe hai aur maiN pasti meiN
in halaat meiN tu hi bata maiN kia karooN
hansooN ya jee bhar ke aankheN bhigo.oN?



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bazm-e-yaaraaN se uth aaye haiN yeH soch kar ke!
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na nasheeb hai na faraaz hai...
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zindagi mujhe raas nahi shayed!
bohat oonchhi meri parwaaz hai..

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waaahh.. wahhh!... be-had umdaH..... lajawaab..... dherooN daad is ba-kamaal shair ke liye!


kathiN nasheeb-o-faraaz se guzartay mehsoos tak na hua!
ghar pohanche to be-hisaab dukhne lagay paaoN ke chaalay..!

Hasanbhai,

waah! kya ek ke baad ek nazraane pesh kiye haiN! laajavaab....

aur aapkii pyar bharii daad ke liye shukriya


sunaatii rahii wo suhaane fasaane
ghamoN ko jo apne chhipaanaa tha usko
jahaaN gham faraaz pe, ragoN meN, nigaah meN,
nasheboN meN laRnaa gavaaraa tha usko



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Thanks dear............................



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waah! kya ek ke baad ek nazraane pesh kiye haiN! laajavaab....

aur aapkii pyar bharii daad ke liye shukriya


sunaatii rahii wo suhaane fasaane
ghamoN ko jo apne chhipaanaa tha usko
jahaaN gham faraaz pe, ragoN meN, nigaah meN,
nasheboN meN laRnaa gavaaraa tha usko


Waaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh.....bohat khoob Aadeil sahab....dheron daad





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kathiN nasheeb-o-faraaz se guzartay mehsoos tak na hua!
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bazm-e-yaaraaN se uth aaye haiN yeH soch kar ke!
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in halaat meiN tu hi bata maiN kia karooN
hansooN ya jee bhar ke aankheN bhigo.oN?




waaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!wwaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!! Hassan bhai...ek badhkar ek nayaab heere pesh kiyen hain aap ne...dheron daad





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28th August 2014, 09:18 PM

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reshmi poshaak zeyb tan kiye aik husn-e-be-naqaab!
humeN dekhte hi khil uthaa uss ka rukh-e-mahtaab
baad us ke! na nasheeb ki fikr rahi na faraaz ki..
mozu-e-sukhan tab se ab tak bas ik gul-e-gulaab


poshaak : clothes
zeyb tan : wear
mozu-e-shukhan : topic of speech


Wwwwwaaaahhhhh !!!!! Behad hi khoobsurat aur roomaaniyat se bhare alfaaz !!! Bahaut si daad Hassan bhai !!!


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guzar rahii hai nasheboN se aaj
merii faraaz-e-muhabbat phir se
zaraa sambhal, ke kahiN dil-shikan*
daraaz-e-shab** na mile but*** phir se

(*heart-breaking; **long night; ***lover [metaphorical])
Waaaahhh !!!! Gehree fiqr aur khoobsurat alfaaz !!! Khaas baat ye lagi ki nasheb aur faraaz ke beech jo connection banaya hai aap ne, wo ekdum naya sa laga !!! Behad hi khoob Aadeil sahab !!!


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grr na guzarta ishq jo kabhi nasheb-o-faraaz se

heer ranjhe se mil gayi hoti, shirin, farhaad se
WWWWWWAAAAAHHHHHH !!!!! kya soch pesh ki hai Ananthpak sahab !!!! ghazab !!! bahaut si daad !!!


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hum mile ek zan* se jiskii hansii bhii kamaal thii
wo nasheb-o-faraaz kii ek sachchii misaal thii

(*woman)
Wah wah wah

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waaahh.. wahhh!... be-had umdaH..... lajawaab..... dherooN daad is ba-kamaal shair ke liye!


kathiN nasheeb-o-faraaz se guzartay mehsoos tak na hua!
ghar pohanche to be-hisaab dukhne lagay paaoN ke chaalay..!

Wwwwwwwwaaaaaaahhhhhhhh !!!!!!!! Ye mujhe ek dum taaza khayaal laga .... Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai !!!!!!!


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na nasheeb hai na faraaz hai...
nahi aati kahiN se us ki awaaz hai
zindagi mujhe raas nahi shayed!
bohat oonchhi meri parwaaz hai..

Wah wah wah

Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai

Dher si daad


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bazm-e-yaaraaN se uth aaye haiN yeH soch kar ke!
faraaz ke to hum laaiQ nahi, nasheyb meiN hi jeete haiN!

nasheyb : low, down.. (pasti)


Waah

Kya baat kahi

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