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The Rain in Summer - 20th August 2014, 10:26 PM

The hush of the night is dark and deep
Raindrops' song, blessed sleep
Silver waters from heavens drop
Cutting across heat, hitting the roof top!


The ones lying in slumberís arm
Miss out the showering dreamsí charm
Waking souls in sheer bliss
Bathe in mirth, sweet love to remince!

Soothing petrichor,a pleasant balm
Relishing the coolness I stretch my palm
Brisk clouds,freshening droughts
Healing showers decent happiness brought!

Woes and worries washed by summer's flurry
Raindrops dance, water flowing in hurry
Dreams linger in sleepless night
Pretty rain from eaves, a lovely sight!

Some weary thoughts grasp the brain
Come round and round with rainís refrain
These heavenly showers for some a misery
Bundles on the heads a a scene so dreary!




   
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Thumbs up 21st August 2014, 02:27 AM

Adaab Mohtrma Yasmeen Jee,

Very nice depiction of your perspective on rain and it's occurring during our hot season. A beautifully captured picture in words.

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21st August 2014, 04:01 AM

Yasmine saheba!

Beautiful feelings expressed brilliantly!
Hats off!

Keep sharing,

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2nd September 2014, 12:23 PM

Very beautiful poem yasmin saheba. .....




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2nd September 2014, 08:41 PM

aha!
lovely one quill! fresh like the showers
and your rhymes drum like the tropical deluge.
i could verily whiff the "sondhee sondhee khushboo"...

its a fab ode to the ongoing "barkha"...
with the tail bit, a tinge, remembering the plight of whose lives are swept away all over the globe

nice rhymes
great content-kudos

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Love Many Thanks - 3rd September 2014, 04:34 PM

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aha!
lovely one quill! fresh like the showers
and your rhymes drum like the tropical deluge.
i could verily whiff the "sondhee sondhee khushboo"...

its a fab ode to the ongoing "barkha"...
with the tail bit, a tinge, remembering the plight of whose lives are swept away all over the globe

nice rhymes
great content-kudos

loved it
Many thanks for such beautiful words.....spontaneous and cooooool!
   
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Love Kind of you! - 3rd September 2014, 04:37 PM

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Smile Many Thanks - 3rd September 2014, 04:39 PM

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Yasmine saheba!

Beautiful feelings expressed brilliantly!
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5th December 2014, 01:29 PM

Vow Yasmeen you have depicted the rain and its affects on different beings and even touching on the less fortunate people too.. beautiful , indeed very craftly worded .. reps +

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5th December 2014, 05:36 PM

Very good work Yasmeen Sahiba....
i could feel the rain drops on my palms while reading your poem. Last stanza was touchy and it shows your kind n consederate heart.....it seems you cherished the beauty of rain in one stanza and the very next moment u worried about its wrath on the less fortunat.

Simply beautiful
Keep writing n sharing.

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Thank you kindly for praise and beautiful words.
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Thank you - 9th December 2014, 05:33 PM

Nice of you! I thank you for kind words.
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Very good work Yasmeen Sahiba....
i could feel the rain drops on my palms while reading your poem. Last stanza was touchy and it shows your kind n consederate heart.....it seems you cherished the beauty of rain in one stanza and the very next moment u worried about its wrath on the less fortunat.

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Thanks - 9th December 2014, 05:35 PM

I thank you for your nice words.
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10th December 2014, 03:42 PM

Very very nice poem yasmine ji...



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