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Ae ghazal aa.... - 16th April 2015, 09:09 PM

Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...


Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....
Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mein mana lun tuje.…

Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…

Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….

Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….


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16th April 2015, 10:27 PM

Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….
waaaaah..
Bahut khoob...gyan jee.



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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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17th April 2015, 08:58 AM

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Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...


Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....
Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mein mana lun tuje.…

Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…

Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….

Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….


kyaa baat hai janaab.... kyaa andaaz hai aur kyaa khoob ghazalgoii hai....
ke bas padhte hi bantaa hai.... aapka har kalaam khud apne aap me ek misaal hai..... hamaaraa naseeb jo aap hamaare saath hain Gyaan ji....

aate raha kijiye.... aur dher saari mubaarakbaad is khoobsurat ghazal ki tameer ke liye..... shukriyaa

Shaad....


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17th April 2015, 02:01 PM

Saxena saaheb

Dil se daad ees nafees koshish ke liye

Aapka

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17th April 2015, 02:31 PM

Gyan Saxena jee..

waaah waaah ... bohat khoob...

daad qabool kejiye!


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17th April 2015, 08:23 PM

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Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….
waaaaah..
Bahut khoob...gyan jee.

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Shukriya Madhu ji.

Iss ghazal ko type karte waqt typing error ho gayi thi so I am reposting the correct words as below:

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Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...


Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....

Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mana lun tuje.…

Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…

Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….

Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….

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...............Aapka- Gyan Saxena


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Gyan Saxena jee..

waaah waaah ... bohat khoob...

daad qabool kejiye!

Shukriya Hassan ji.

Iss ghazal ko type karte waqt typing error ho gayi thi so I am reposting the correct words as below:

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Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...


Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....

Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mana lun tuje.…

Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…

Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….

Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….

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...............Aapka- Gyan Saxena


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Saxena saaheb

Dil se daad ees nafees koshish ke liye

Aapka

Dhaval
Shukriya Dhaval ji.

Iss ghazal ko type karte waqt typing error ho gayi thi so I am reposting the correct words as below:

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Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...


Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....

Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mana lun tuje.…

Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…

Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….

Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….

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...............Aapka- Gyan Saxena


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kyaa baat hai janaab.... kyaa andaaz hai aur kyaa khoob ghazalgoii hai....
ke bas padhte hi bantaa hai.... aapka har kalaam khud apne aap me ek misaal hai..... hamaaraa naseeb jo aap hamaare saath hain Gyaan ji....

aate raha kijiye.... aur dher saari mubaarakbaad is khoobsurat ghazal ki tameer ke liye..... shukriyaa

Shaad....
Shukriya Shaad ji.

Iss ghazal ko type karte waqt typing error ho gayi thi so I am reposting the correct words as below:

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Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...


Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....

Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mana lun tuje.…

Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…

Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….

Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….

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...............Aapka- Gyan Saxena


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