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Aapse ham rooth jayein... - 29th June 2016, 05:11 PM

Pesh e khidmat hai Ek aur koshish...
Aapse ham rooth jayein
fasle aao miTayei.n

dhadkano me qaid hai jo
nagma vo ab gungunayei.n

aasmaa.n bhi muntzir hai
chahtei.n ab sar uthayei.n.

har girah khole zabaa.n to
kyun bhala tala lagayei.n

galtiyaan mana huyi hai.n
kya saza hai ye batayei.n?

kya koi takta hai rahei.n
kya kaha? ab lauT aayei.n..

ba'nTna mushkil hai gham to
khushyon ke pal ba'nTe jayei.n..

rang khushboo tazgi ho
ghar 'madhu' aise sajayei.n..

Madhu...



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Pesh e khidmat hai Ek aur koshish...
Aapse ham rooth jayein
Fasle aao mitayein

Dhadkano me qaid hai jo
Nagma vo ab gungunayein

Aasmaa.n bhi muntzir hai
Chahtein ab sar uthayein.

Har girah khole zabaan to
Kyun bhala tala lagayein

Galtiyaan mana huyi hain
Kya saza hai ye batayein?

Kya koi takta hai rahein
kya kaha? ab laut aayein..

Ba'ntna mushkil hai gham to
Khushyon ke pal ba'nte jayein..

Rang khushboo tazgi ho
Ghar 'madhu'aise sajayein..

Madhu...

wah madhu jee bahut khoob
likhti rahen


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Pesh e khidmat hai Ek aur koshish...
Aapse ham rooth jayein
Fasle aao mitayein

Dhadkano me qaid hai jo
Nagma vo ab gungunayein

Aasmaa.n bhi muntzir hai
Chahtein ab sar uthayein.

Har girah khole zabaan to
Kyun bhala tala lagayein

Galtiyaan mana huyi hain
Kya saza hai ye batayein?

Kya koi takta hai rahein
kya kaha? ab laut aayein..

Ba'ntna mushkil hai gham to
Khushyon ke pal ba'nte jayein..

Rang khushboo tazgi ho
Ghar 'madhu'aise sajayein..

Madhu...
Bahut umdaa Madhu - chote behr mein likhna mushkil hai yeh baat yahan laa'ilm si nazr aa rahi hai, aisi ghazalon se kaafi logon ko aur mujhe bhi kaafi seekhne ko milegaa yunhi bazm roshan rakhiye



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vaah madhu ji buhet achi ghazal likhee hey aap ney daad qubul kariye ji

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Pesh e khidmat hai Ek aur koshish...
Aapse ham rooth jayein
Fasle aao mitayein

Dhadkano me qaid hai jo
Nagma vo ab gungunayein

Aasmaa.n bhi muntzir hai
Chahtein ab sar uthayein.

Har girah khole zabaan to
Kyun bhala tala lagayein

Galtiyaan mana huyi hain
Kya saza hai ye batayein?

Kya koi takta hai rahein
kya kaha? ab laut aayein..

Ba'ntna mushkil hai gham to
Khushyon ke pal ba'nte jayein..

Rang khushboo tazgi ho
Ghar 'madhu'aise sajayein..

Madhu...


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Bahut umdaa Madhu - chote behr mein likhna mushkil hai yeh baat yahan laa'ilm si nazr aa rahi hai, aisi ghazalon se kaafi logon ko aur mujhe bhi kaafi seekhne ko milegaa yunhi bazm roshan rakhiye
Anu aap aise likhkar mujhe sharminda na karein.....aapse khud bahut kuch seekhne ki koshish karti rahti hun main...
Aapke sath ke liye shukriya shabd bhi kafi nhi lag raha mujhe......

Bas ye sath banaye rakhein....

Salamat rahein...

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Pesh e khidmat hai Ek aur koshish...
Aapse ham rooth jayein
Fasle aao mitayein

Dhadkano me qaid hai jo
Nagma vo ab gungunayein

Aasmaa.n bhi muntzir hai
Chahtein ab sar uthayein.

Har girah khole zabaan to
Kyun bhala tala lagayein

Galtiyaan mana huyi hain
Kya saza hai ye batayein?

Kya koi takta hai rahein
kya kaha? ab laut aayein..

Ba'ntna mushkil hai gham to
Khushyon ke pal ba'nte jayein..

Rang khushboo tazgi ho
Ghar 'madhu'aise sajayein..

Madhu...
Madhu ji waqai itni mukhtasar behar badi baat keh jaana

Qabil-e-sataish hai
Iss behtareen ghazal pe khaaksaar ki daad qubool karey
   
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vaah madhu ji buhet achi ghazal likhee hey aap ney daad qubul kariye ji
bahut shukriya saba ji...

aati rahein.......

salamat rahein...



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Pesh e khidmat hai Ek aur koshish...
Aapse ham rooth jayein
fasle aao miTayei.n

dhadkano me qaid hai jo
nagma vo ab gungunayei.n

aasmaa.n bhi muntzir hai
chahtei.n ab sar uthayei.n.

har girah khole zabaa.n to
kyun bhala tala lagayei.n

galtiyaan mana huyi hai.n
kya saza hai ye batayei.n?

kya koi takta hai rahei.n
kya kaha? ab lauT aayei.n..

ba'nTna mushkil hai gham to
khushyon ke pal ba'nTe jayei.n..

rang khushboo tazgi ho
ghar 'madhu' aise sajayei.n..

Madhu...

bahut acchaa.. bahut bahut acchaa likhaa ha aapne madhu ji....

har baar hi ki tarah ekdam ... beautiful.... likhtee rahen

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Bahut khushi huyi ki aap ko meri koshish pasand aayi

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bahut acchaa.. bahut bahut acchaa likhaa ha aapne madhu ji....

har baar hi ki tarah ekdam ... beautiful.... likhtee rahen

Shaad.........
Bahut bahut shukriya aapka..

Hausla afzai karte rahiyega. ...

Salamat rahein..



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Madhuji bohut hi kamiyaab koshish hai aap ki.
isse zahir hota hai ke shayeri men aap ki pakad kafi mazboot hai.

choti beher " fayelatun fayelatun" men umdah kalaam...lajawab.

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Pesh e khidmat hai Ek aur koshish...
Aapse ham rooth jayein
fasle aao miTayei.n

dhadkano me qaid hai jo
nagma vo ab gungunayei.n

aasmaa.n bhi muntzir hai
chahtei.n ab sar uthayei.n.

har girah khole zabaa.n to
kyun bhala tala lagayei.n

galtiyaan mana huyi hai.n
kya saza hai ye batayei.n?

kya koi takta hai rahei.n
kya kaha? ab lauT aayei.n..

ba'nTna mushkil hai gham to
khushyon ke pal ba'nTe jayei.n..

rang khushboo tazgi ho
ghar 'madhu' aise sajayei.n..

Madhu...


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Aapse ham rooth jayein
fasle aao miTayei.n

kya rooth jane se faasle kam hote hai yu hi na behlao madam ji, kahin faasle kam karne ke chakkar meiN rooth kar aur faasle bda liye jaayeN majaak kar rhi hu...accha likha hai

meri khaas pasand es poetry se :

ba'nTna mushkil hai gham to
khushyon ke pal ba'nTe jayei.n..




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Madhuji bohut hi kamiyaab koshish hai aap ki.
isse zahir hota hai ke shayeri men aap ki pakad kafi mazboot hai.

choti beher " fayelatun fayelatun" men umdah kalaam...lajawab.

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Aapse ham rooth jayein
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kya rooth jane se faasle kam hote hai yu hi na behlao madam ji, kahin faasle kam karne ke chakkar meiN rooth kar aur faasle bda liye jaayeN majaak kar rhi hu...accha likha hai

meri khaas pasand es poetry se :

ba'nTna mushkil hai gham to
khushyon ke pal ba'nTe jayei.n..


Shukriya di.....
kabhi kabhi jo kaam hans k nahi hota vo nakhre dikha k vo jata hai.... ...
Apko koshish pasand aayi Khushi huyi...

Aati rahiyega
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Khushi huyi aapko pasand aaya

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