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26th June 2009, 04:32 PM
DostoN yahan aaj kal dekha ke insprital post dekhne bahut mil rahe hai socha main bhi
apni aur se kuch inspiraton de dun... yeh Ishq ki bazam mein isliye post ker raha hun kyun
ki ism ishq karne walon ke liye hi inspration hai......... Ya samjhiye yeh meri salah hai mere ahsaas hai...
To arz karta huN
Aapne dil mein gile shikwe daba liya karo
Baat bigade to mohobbat se bana liya karo
Rishton ki mithas waqt ke saath kaam hoti hai
Roothe jo yaar to foran hi mana liya karo
Dard jab bade dil ka to yunhi tanha na raho
Mile koyi humdard to hale dil suna liya karo
Khafa hua mehboob to tum bhi khafa na hona
Jhui hi sahi muskaan hoton per saja liya karo
Mehfooz nahi hai mohobbat tanz aur shubhe me
Khushmijazi se hi lutf e mohobbat ka maza liya karo
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29th June 2009, 08:45 PM
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To arz karta huN
Aapne dil mein gile shikwe daba liya karo
Baat bigade to mohobbat se bana liya karo
Rishton ki mithas waqt ke saath kaam hoti hai
Roothe jo yaar to foran hi mana liya karo
Dard jab bade dil ka to yunhi tanha na raho
Mile koyi humdard to hale dil suna liya karo
Khafa hua mehboob to tum bhi khafa na hona
Jhuta hi sahi muskaan hoton per saja liya karo
Mehfooz nahi hai mohobbat tanz aur shubhe me
Khushmijazi se hi lutf e mohobbat ka maza liya karo
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wah Sameer jee,
bahot achhi ghazal hai,saath saath itne aache tips bhi
jee hum jarur yaad rakhenge ..........
aap youN hi kahte rahiye
khus rahiye
dua'oN ke saath
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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30th June 2009, 12:39 AM
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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30th June 2009, 05:08 PM
Diyaa jii shukriyaa......
Gazal per daad dene ke liye tahe dil se shukra guzar huN..
Well yeh tip's real experience hai....... to zarur yaad rakhiye..
Koshish Jari hai....
Aap bhi khush rahiye...
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2nd July 2009, 04:02 PM
Hey Omi thanks Bro.....
Tumhara replly dekhker khushi hui......
But tumhara sher dimag ke uper se gaya plz define what are you saying By that..
Bhai jo samjh aaya usse kuch replly dene ki kohish ker raha hun..
Kisi ka dil dukhane ki hume aadat nahi
KankaroN uthane ki hume zarurat nahi
Nahi lagti kabhi aag pani me gehrai tak
Satah per lagi aagse hume masarrat nahi
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3rd July 2009, 07:01 PM
Sameer ji.....aapki mohabbat shikhati nazm ka humne bhi padhkar bahut luft uthaya...bahut acha laga....nazm ke sabhi sher nasihat baate karte hi nahi balki umda hone ki numaindgi bhi karte hai....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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3rd July 2009, 07:02 PM
Sameer ji.....aapki mohabbat shikhati nazm ka humne bhi padhkar bahut luft uthaya...bahut acha laga....nazm ke sabhi sher nasihat baate karte hi nahi balki umda hone ki numaindgi bhi karte hai....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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6th July 2009, 03:13 PM
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Sameer ji.....aapki mohabbat shikhati nazm ka humne bhi padhkar bahut luft uthaya...bahut acha laga....nazm ke sabhi sher nasihat baate karte hi nahi balki umda hone ki numaindgi bhi karte hai....
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Naresh Jii...
Aapne humari nasihaton wali nazam ko padhker lutf uthaya...
Iske liye hum aapke tahe dil se abhar mante hai...
aate rahiye aur apne pyar bhare vicharon se hume avagat karate rahiye..
Dhanya-wad,
Khush rahiye...
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6th July 2009, 08:17 PM
Aapne dil mein gile shikwe daba liya karo
Baat bigade to mohobbat se bana liya karo
Bohat khoobsurat peshkash Khwaish Saheb, Sach kaha hain aapne baat banane se hi banti hain. Par afsos har koi kaha is imtehaan me khara utar pata hain.
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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7th July 2009, 09:18 AM
bahut khoob kwahish jee...... mazaa aa gaya padkar...aise hee likhte rahhiye aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye.............
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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10th July 2009, 03:46 PM
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Aapne dil mein gile shikwe daba liya karo
Baat bigade to mohobbat se bana liya karo
Bohat khoobsurat peshkash Khwaish Saheb, Sach kaha hain aapne baat banane se hi banti hain. Par afsos har koi kaha is imtehaan me khara utar pata hain.
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Shukriya Sajid sahaB...
Yeh to waqt waqt ki baat hoti hai Sajid sahab, apne alfazon mein aur ahtemad mein gar kami na aaye to beshak har baat bigadne se pahele hi sawar sakti hai...
Aur haan wakai yeh ek inehan ki hi ghadi hoti hai aur sach mein ismein har koi khara nahi uar pata hai........ even main bhi nahi utar paya isliye yeh sher aap logoN ke samne hai...
Well aate rahiye aur hounsla afzai karte rahiye..
Khush rahiye...
Khuda Hafez,,,,,
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11th July 2009, 06:52 AM
BAHUT KLHUB LIKHA HAI, DIL SE DAAD KUBUL KIJIYE..........
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Originally Posted by kwahish
DostoN yahan aaj kal dekha ke insprital post dekhne bahut mil rahe hai socha main bhi
apni aur se kuch inspiraton de dun... yeh Ishq ki bazam mein isliye post ker raha hun kyun
ki ism ishq karne walon ke liye hi inspration hai......... Ya samjhiye yeh meri salah hai mere ahsaas hai...
To arz karta huN
Aapne dil mein gile shikwe daba liya karo
Baat bigade to mohobbat se bana liya karo
Rishton ki mithas waqt ke saath kaam hoti hai
Roothe jo yaar to foran hi mana liya karo
Dard jab bade dil ka to yunhi tanha na raho
Mile koyi humdard to hale dil suna liya karo
Khafa hua mehboob to tum bhi khafa na hona
Jhui hi sahi muskaan hoton per saja liya karo
Mehfooz nahi hai mohobbat tanz aur shubhe me
Khushmijazi se hi lutf e mohobbat ka maza liya karo
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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13th July 2009, 05:45 PM
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bahut khoob kwahish jee...... mazaa aa gaya padkar...aise hee likhte rahhiye aur bazm ko roshan karte rahiye.............
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Shukriya Arvind Jii...
Aapko padhker maza aaya mano humari mehnat kamyaab hui...
Aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe yehi ummid...
Khush rahiye..
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16th July 2009, 03:27 PM
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BAHUT KLHUB LIKHA HAI, DIL SE DAAD KUBUL KIJIYE..........
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Thank you Very much Nalin jii......
Aage bhi aapka saath bana rahe aur aap yunhi mehil mein aate rahe..
Aapki daad dilse kabool hai..
Keep smiling......
God Bles you..
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18th July 2009, 09:48 AM
bahut khooobsurat salah janaab, vakai amal karne layak..
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18th July 2009, 11:29 PM
Very nice .......
DostoN yahan aaj kal dekha ke insprital post dekhne bahut mil rahe hai socha main bhi
apni aur se kuch inspiraton de dun... yeh Ishq ki bazam mein isliye post ker raha hun kyun
ki ism ishq karne walon ke liye hi inspration hai......... Ya samjhiye yeh meri salah hai mere ahsaas hai...
To arz karta huN
Aapne dil mein gile shikwe daba liya karo
Baat bigade to mohobbat se bana liya karo
Rishton ki mithas waqt ke saath kaam hoti hai
Roothe jo yaar to foran hi mana liya karo
Dard jab bade dil ka to yunhi tanha na raho
Mile koyi humdard to hale dil suna liya karo
Khafa hua mehboob to tum bhi khafa na hona
Jhui hi sahi muskaan hoton per saja liya karo
Mehfooz nahi hai mohobbat tanz aur shubhe me
Khushmijazi se hi lutf e mohobbat ka maza liya karo
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22nd July 2009, 04:47 PM
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bahut khooobsurat salah janaab, vakai amal karne layak..
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Shukriya Babbu sahab........
Aapko humari salah khubsuraat aur amal karne layak lagi iske hum tahe dil se shukraguzar hai,
Aage bhi aapka saath milenga ummid karta hun..
aate rahiye aur apni salah se nawazte rahiye..
Khush rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..
Aapke sigy se mujhe apna ek sigy yaad aaya...
"Love Bigins but never ends"
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9th August 2009, 05:05 PM
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Very nice .......
DostoN yahan aaj kal dekha ke insprital post dekhne bahut mil rahe hai socha main bhi
apni aur se kuch inspiraton de dun... yeh Ishq ki bazam mein isliye post ker raha hun kyun
ki ism ishq karne walon ke liye hi inspration hai......... Ya samjhiye yeh meri salah hai mere ahsaas hai...
To arz karta huN
Aapne dil mein gile shikwe daba liya karo
Baat bigade to mohobbat se bana liya karo
Rishton ki mithas waqt ke saath kaam hoti hai
Roothe jo yaar to foran hi mana liya karo
Dard jab bade dil ka to yunhi tanha na raho
Mile koyi humdard to hale dil suna liya karo
Khafa hua mehboob to tum bhi khafa na hona
Jhui hi sahi muskaan hoton per saja liya karo
Mehfooz nahi hai mohobbat tanz aur shubhe me
Khushmijazi se hi lutf e mohobbat ka maza liya karo
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Thanks for your replly........ Hope aage bhi aapka saath milta rahenga...
Keep reading...
Keep smiling....
May God Bless you..
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9th August 2009, 11:36 PM
Sir,
Simply Great,
Wakai bahut pasand aayi mujhe aapki ye rachnaa, Padh kar sukun saa milaa
Aise hi mahfil ko ronak karte rahiye
With best wishes
Rashid
Quote:
Originally Posted by kwahish
DostoN yahan aaj kal dekha ke insprital post dekhne bahut mil rahe hai socha main bhi
apni aur se kuch inspiraton de dun... yeh Ishq ki bazam mein isliye post ker raha hun kyun
ki ism ishq karne walon ke liye hi inspration hai......... Ya samjhiye yeh meri salah hai mere ahsaas hai...
To arz karta huN
Aapne dil mein gile shikwe daba liya karo
Baat bigade to mohobbat se bana liya karo
Rishton ki mithas waqt ke saath kaam hoti hai
Roothe jo yaar to foran hi mana liya karo
Dard jab bade dil ka to yunhi tanha na raho
Mile koyi humdard to hale dil suna liya karo
Khafa hua mehboob to tum bhi khafa na hona
Jhui hi sahi muskaan hoton per saja liya karo
Mehfooz nahi hai mohobbat tanz aur shubhe me
Khushmijazi se hi lutf e mohobbat ka maza liya karo
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Tu AndheroN -ujaaloN me mila kar mujhko
Zindagi ab to sawaloN me mila kar mujhko
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13th August 2009, 04:37 PM
Aadaab !
moHteram appki koshish achi lagi ... meHnat aur koshish jaari rakhieN aur meHfil ko sajate rahieN ...
Mujeeb
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16th August 2009, 05:02 PM
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Sir,
Simply Great,
Wakai bahut pasand aayi mujhe aapki ye rachnaa, Padh kar sukun saa milaa
Aise hi mahfil ko ronak karte rahiye
With best wishes
Rashid
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Rashid sahab .... AadaaB..
Jii aap logoN ki hounsla afzai milti rahe to mehfil roshoN hoti hi rahengii....
Thanks for best wishes...
Be happy .
May God Bless You..
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20th September 2009, 03:49 PM
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Aadaab !
moHteram appki koshish achi lagi ... meHnat aur koshish jaari rakhieN aur meHfil ko sajate rahieN ...
Mujeeb
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Mujeeb sahab Aadaab,
Aapne ki hui honsla afzai wakai ek behad dil ko pur-sukun karne wali lagi...
Aage bhi mehnat karta rahunga aur Insha Allah ek din aapko dil se pasand aane wali
gazal kahunga...
Khush rahiye,
Aur apni kimti rai se aage bhi nawzte rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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20th September 2009, 10:34 PM
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Originally Posted by kwahish
DostoN yahan aaj kal dekha ke insprital post dekhne bahut mil rahe hai socha main bhi
apni aur se kuch inspiraton de dun... yeh Ishq ki bazam mein isliye post ker raha hun kyun
ki ism ishq karne walon ke liye hi inspration hai......... Ya samjhiye yeh meri salah hai mere ahsaas hai...
To arz karta huN
Aapne dil mein gile shikwe daba liya karo
Baat bigade to mohobbat se bana liya karo
Rishton ki mithas waqt ke saath kaam hoti hai
Roothe jo yaar to foran hi mana liya karo
Dard jab bade dil ka to yunhi tanha na raho
Mile koyi humdard to hale dil suna liya karo
Khafa hua mehboob to tum bhi khafa na hona
Jhui hi sahi muskaan hoton per saja liya karo
Mehfooz nahi hai mohobbat tanz aur shubhe me
Khushmijazi se hi lutf e mohobbat ka maza liya karo
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Sameer Bhaiya
kita mast lika hai apne ek ek sher sachi me sacha laga muze aur acha bi kunse sher ko pand karu ye bi samj nai aara sabi sher ache hai bhot mast...........
PARWANA
Abed Farooqui
Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar
Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun
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26th September 2009, 09:02 AM
Sameer ji aadaab
mafi chahata hoon ki aapki is gazal ko padnay main dair ho gaye chalo dekhtay hai kya likha hai aapnay...............
Aapne dil mein gile shikwe daba liya karo
Baat bigade to mohobbat se bana liya karo
waha waha kya likha hai............
Rishton ki mithas waqt ke saath kaam hoti hai
Roothe jo yaar to foran hi mana liya karo
bhout achchay..............
Dard jab bade dil ka to yunhi tanha na raho
Mile koyi humdard to hale dil suna liya karo
janaab yeh sher waki main dil ko bhata hai..........
Khafa hua mehboob to tum bhi khafa na hona
Jhui hi sahi muskaan hoton per saja liya karo
aafreen daad kabool kijiyega.................
Mehfooz nahi hai mohobbat tanz aur shubhe me
Khushmijazi se hi lutf e mohobbat ka maza liya karo waha waha dil say
daad daita hoon janaab kabool kijyega achcha likha hai aapnay aisay hi liktay rahiyega aapki aglai gazal ka intzaar main
aapka
VICHITRA[/quote]
Yeh manjilen yeh rastay mushkilo bhari yeh dager.....
Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer......
Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi.....
Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............
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26th September 2009, 09:28 AM
kwahish g.
Just love to read this one,kaash aisa ho jae.
By th way ,thanx to u 4 this
unko hame satane ka bahana mil gya, hme hmari maut ka thikana mil gya, hme to unke saath ki umid thi jo na mila , unko to sara jamana mil gya, hmari juban ko khamoshi ka kinara mil gya, meri ankho me ashko ka najara khil gya,
Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,,
Kya malum hqiqat me sath dega khuda,
Khwab aya k hmara ek jakham sil gya...M
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26th September 2009, 03:06 PM
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Originally Posted by abed_farooqui
Sameer Bhaiya
kita mast lika hai apne ek ek sher sachi me sacha laga muze aur acha bi kunse sher ko pand karu ye bi samj nai aara sabi sher ache hai bhot mast...........
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Aabed Bhai shukriya.........
Aji janab itni tarif ke kabil yeh post nahi hai par aapne ise itna taref e qabil samjha shukriya.. aapko mere gazal ke tamam sher pand aaye mujhe masarrat hui..........
Aage bhi apka saath bana rahe yehi ummid...
Khush rahiye..
Aate rahiye....
Khudaa Hafez..
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