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Tumhaara hi suroor hai !!! -
30th October 2002, 05:31 AM
Doston,
Ek nayi nazm pesh-e-khidmat hai. Aapki rai kaa humeshaan muntazir hoon...... Shab-e-ghum ke hum nahin kaayal, kuch baat to zaroor hai, Har pal, har lamha, har waqt, tumhaara hi suroor hai !!! Chadhte din ka aaftaab, yaa dhalti shaam ka tu noor hai, Deewane hue jaate hain, Muhobbat hai ya fatoor hai !!! Haqueeqat hai ya khwaab hai, pari hai ya tu hoor hai, Jitni is dil ke paas hai, utni hi aankhon se door hai !!! Husn tumhaara kayaamat sahi, siqaahat humein zaroor hai, Ishq humaara kum to nahin, is baat ka humein guroor hai !!! Deewangi meri fitrat hai, yeh kissa to mash-hoor hai, Youn shor hua jo galiyon mein, to mera kya kasoor hai !!! Shab-e-ghum ke hum nahin kaayal, kuch baat to zaroor hai, Har pal, har lamha, har waqt, tumhaara hi suroor hai !!! |
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30th October 2002, 09:07 AM
Deepa Ji,
Tasleem ! Kaisi hain aap ? Ek baar phir meri nazm par nazar daalnein kaa aur apni keemti rai se humein nawaaznein ka shukriya. Main aapka muntazir hoon ki aap meri koshishon ko is kadar tareef ke kabil samajhti hain. Aap ki kuch ghazalein bhi zaroor padh kar jald hi apne khayaal bayaan karne ka waada karta hoon.... Achin ( Ehsaas ) |
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20th May 2003, 04:00 PM
Lajawaab Achin Miya,
Dil khush kar diya aapke in khayaalon ne... This is one of your best work... Please translate it for Pooja as it's just out of this world... Kaash.... mein tere jaisey thoda bahut bhi likh paata.... to zindagi kahin aur, kisi aur ke saath hoti... Main to aapka mureed ho gaya hoon is ke baad.... Thodi bahut urdu hamein bhi sikha do huzoor  These lines were surely written before your marriage when you were in US and Pooja in India.... "Haqueeqat hai ya khwaab hai, pari hai ya tu hoor hai, Jitni is dil ke paas hai, utni hi aankhon se door hai !!!" Hai Na ? Good Work, Seriously... Riki |
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20th May 2003, 04:06 PM
Wow..
aaj aapke itne saare aalaa kalaam paDe hain, behad khushi hui!.. Itne achhe shayar humare beech hain.. wah janaab, aapka andaaze bayaan to kamaaal hai!.. kisi ek sher ki tareef karna theek nahi hoga, har ek sher lajawaab hai, aur ghazal apne aap me kaamil!.. Bohat khoob!.. umeed hai aap aise hi likhte rahenge.. |
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