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Aadaab bhaeeo wa behno... sorry jaldee mayn boo boo hogaya... kal... bay-bahr shayr post kar diya.. but anyways.. am trying my best to move forward with you guys.. hoping it would continue the process ..yielding more knowledge on us seekers..... please help in moving ahead...



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Main huN jaaNbaaz karuN jaan kii kyuN mayN parwah,
Ki meri jaan, meri jaan to jaanee haye ye!

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Nahi maamooli koee gul jo din mayn khil jaaye
Karay mad-hosh ye shab raat ki raanee haye ye!



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Aadaab bhaeeo wa behno... sorry jaldee mayn boo boo hogaya... kal... bay-bahr shayr post kar diya.. but anyways.. am trying my best to move forward with you guys.. hoping it would continue the process ..yielding more knowledge on us seekers..... please help in moving ahead...



please help choose which one to go ahead with...


Main huN jaaNbaaz karuN jaan kii kyuN mayN parwah,
Ki meri jaan, meri jaan to jaanee haye ye!

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Nahi maamooli koee gul jo din mayn khil jaaye
Karay mad-hosh ye shab raat ki raanee haye ye!



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Waise kamaal hai yahan humse ek sher nahin ban rahi aapne do-do bana diye.......

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Zidd sahab aapse guzarish hai ke jo ashaar aapne accept kar liye hain unhe ek jagah post kijiye. ..taaki hame kafiya chunne me aasani ho...




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abhi 6 days baqi hai ..................................
ye ghazal month end khatm hogi.
after that all editing /cutting/choosing will be done.
the final ghazal will be posted on 15 july.
but on 1 july we will start a new ghazal, with a new radeef /qafiya.

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My sher!

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waaah waaah....
bahot hi khub sher hai, Zainyji..

ab baaki ke 7 ashaar market meN rakh dijiye auctioning achchhee hogi LOLzzz



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Maine to ek sher post bhi kar di lekin ladkon ka hazma kharab hogaya
arrey! aapka sher achchha tha, Nazneen.. agar aapko lagtaa hai ki thoda zyada rumaanee ho gayaa hai toh dusra misra thoda change kar lo? vaise bhii tishnagi lafz beher men fit nahi baith rahaa hai

aur jaldi post karo.. aapka sher abhii bhii baaki hai...



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waaah waaah....
bahot hi khub sher hai, Zainyji..

ab baaki ke 7 ashaar market meN rakh dijiye auctioning achchhee hogi LOLzzz
Hahaha ..jee zaroor aadil sahab. ..ab inhi bikwaane ki zimmedaari aapki...ek ek sher ka ek lakh se kam nahi lungi..lol


Khaab ab din ko bhi, aankhoN mai utr aate haiN*
Raaz ki baat magr unko bataani hai ye

Meri palkoN pe sitaaroaN ko wo sajenyega
Dil e khushfehm ko ummeed jataani hai ye

Sard lehjo mai bhi tufaan utha sakta hai*
Ishq mai aankh se behta hua paani hai ye

Ishaq ki aag har ek dil mein laga jayega*
aesi barsaat ka jalta hua paani hai yeh

Wasl hai jheel se, kis darja ki khamoshi mai
Ishq ke jharney ka behta hua paani hai ye

Surkh, narangi, hara aur gulaabi sa bhi
Ishq ke rangoN se milta hua paani hai ye

Sard mausam mai bhi ye aag laga sakta hai
Aaye barsaat tou jalta hua paani hai ye




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Hahaha ..jee zaroor aadil sahab. ..ab inhi bikwaane ki zimmedaari aapki...ek ek sher ka ek lakh se kam nahi lungi..lol


Khaab ab din ko bhi, aankhoN mai utr aate haiN*
Raaz ki baat magr unko bataani hai ye

Meri palkoN pe sitaaroaN ko wo sajenyega
Dil e khushfehm ko ummeed jataani hai ye

Sard lehjo mai bhi tufaan utha sakta hai*
Ishq mai aankh se behta hua paani hai ye

Ishaq ki aag har ek dil mein laga jayega*
aesi barsaat ka jalta hua paani hai yeh

Wasl hai jheel se, kis darja ki khamoshi mai
Ishq ke jharney ka behta hua paani hai ye

Surkh, narangi, hara aur gulaabi sa bhi
Ishq ke rangoN se milta hua paani hai ye

Sard mausam mai bhi ye aag laga sakta hai
Aaye barsaat tou jalta hua paani hai ye

waahhhh zainy kahaan to ek sher nahi ban rahaa thaa kahaaan poorii ghazal likh ke baithii ho... kamaaal hai yaar..

wese ek baat bataaiye is ghazal ka matlaaa kahaan hai, hame nazar hi nhi aa raha, kya pata ho mujhe hi na dikh raha ho, ab umr bhii to itnee ho gayee hai.... uhhu uhhhuuu....


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Hahaha ..jee zaroor aadil sahab. ..ab inhi bikwaane ki zimmedaari aapki...ek ek sher ka ek lakh se kam nahi lungi..lol


Khaab ab din ko bhi, aankhoN mai utr aate haiN*
Raaz ki baat magr unko bataani hai ye

Meri palkoN pe sitaaroaN ko wo sajenyega
Dil e khushfehm ko ummeed jataani hai ye

Sard lehjo mai bhi tufaan utha sakta hai*
Ishq mai aankh se behta hua paani hai ye

Ishaq ki aag har ek dil mein laga jayega*
aesi barsaat ka jalta hua paani hai yeh

Wasl hai jheel se, kis darja ki khamoshi mai
Ishq ke jharney ka behta hua paani hai ye

Surkh, narangi, hara aur gulaabi sa bhi
Ishq ke rangoN se milta hua paani hai ye

Sard mausam mai bhi ye aag laga sakta hai
Aaye barsaat tou jalta hua paani hai ye
arey waaaaah.. waaah.. sahi meN ek ek sher 1-1 lakh ka hai, Zainyji....
par sirf 3 hi sher bech paaoonga.. aur phir!...........................

kyuN na Nazneen se hi shuruaat kii jaaye?

Nazneen, kahaN kho gayee? Zainyji se a/c no leke 1 peti trf karlo.. aur mera 10% commission rahega



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waahhhh zainy kahaan to ek sher nahi ban rahaa thaa kahaaan poorii ghazal likh ke baithii ho... kamaaal hai yaar..

wese ek baat bataaiye is ghazal ka matlaaa kahaan hai, hame nazar hi nhi aa raha, kya pata ho mujhe hi na dikh raha ho, ab umr bhii to itnee ho gayee hai.... uhhu uhhhuuu....

Sahi kahaa...lagta hai sach me umar ho gayi hai...

.Uffffff....is ghazal ka matla to aapne likha tha na first post me......lol...


yeh bas ashaar hain...ek banane ki koshish me 8 ban gaye...lolzzz..




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arey waaaaah.. waaah.. sahi meN ek ek sher 1-1 lakh ka hai, Zainyji....
par sirf 3 hi sher bech paaoonga.. aur phir!...........................

kyuN na Nazneen se hi shuruaat kii jaaye?

Nazneen, kahaN kho gayee? Zainyji se a/c no leke 1 peti trf karlo.. aur mera 10% commission rahega

Chaliye 3 hi sahi....ac/no bhijwa dungi..jamaa kara dijiyega...




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Sahi kahaa...lagta hai sach me umar ho gayi hai...

.Uffffff....is ghazal ka matla to aapne likha tha na first post me......lol...


yeh bas ashaar hain...ek banane ki koshish me 8 ban gaye...lolzzz..
ufffff.... paani, paani, paani, paani, paani... lagtaa hai, sher banaate banaate 5 glass paani pii gayeeN aap LOLzzz.. samjhe kyuN sirf 3 sher bikenge yahaan?



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wwwaaahhhh zainy ji bahaut khoobsurat sher kahe haiN aapne !!!


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Hahaha ..jee zaroor aadil sahab. ..ab inhi bikwaane ki zimmedaari aapki...ek ek sher ka ek lakh se kam nahi lungi..lol


Khaab ab din ko bhi, aankhoN mai utr aate haiN*
Raaz ki baat magr unko bataani hai ye

Meri palkoN pe sitaaroaN ko wo sajenyega
Dil e khushfehm ko ummeed jataani hai ye

Sard lehjo mai bhi tufaan utha sakta hai*
Ishq mai aankh se behta hua paani hai ye

Ishaq ki aag har ek dil mein laga jayega*
aesi barsaat ka jalta hua paani hai yeh

Wasl hai jheel se, kis darja ki khamoshi mai
Ishq ke jharney ka behta hua paani hai ye

Surkh, narangi, hara aur gulaabi sa bhi
Ishq ke rangoN se milta hua paani hai ye

Sard mausam mai bhi ye aag laga sakta hai
Aaye barsaat tou jalta hua paani hai ye


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1st July 2014, 10:18 AM

Shaad sahab ke matle wali ghazal ka silsila kal khatm hua.

15 july ke din SDC GHAZAL -1 , post hogi.

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Nayi ghazal ke silsile ka aaghaaz karte hai ab.

Ab zainy sahiba se request hai ke vo matla bana kar den sabko.

zainyji - please shuru kijiye...aapke matla diye bina ye thread shuru nahi ho sakta.

ye silsila khatm hoga 15 july 2014 ke din.

regards

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Zidd saahab i think before moving ahead with new matlaa and new ghazal, lets consolidate the shers submitted for this ghazal...

I have collected these as per my understanding, agar kuch fer badal karnaa hai to members please inform us... agar kuch chhoot gaya hai ho to please let me know.


Mirii AaGhaaze muhabbat ki kahaanii hai ye,
kisii gulposh haseenaa ki nishaanii hai ye..... (shaad)

roz karte ho mohabbat meiN jo marne ki ye baat
ya mohabbat hai puraanii ya jawaanii hai ye.... (zarraa)

hai chaman unse hi roshan hai ye mehfil bhii jawaaN,
hai karishma ki adaa unki suhaani hai ye........ (aadeil)

Mai bhi ashiq ,nahi hone ka, bharam rakh lunga
Tum bhi kah dena ke afwaah puraani hai ye ....... (zidd)

Le rahiin hain imtehaan ye shabaab ye shokhiiyaan
Unki qurbat se tishnagii ab mitaanii hai ye......... (naaz)

Har ik gul kee tarha khiltee nahee ujaalaon mayn,
Karay mad-hosh ye shab, raat kee raani hai ye!... (Ahmad hyderabadi)

Ishq ki raah meiN wo tod ke taare laaye
Dil e khushfehm ko ummeed jataani hai yeH... (zainy)
   
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