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31st July 2014, 07:49 PM
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Naaz, this is dedicated to you
shokHii-e-tifl* si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n
*tifl = child
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Waah !! Kya khoobsurat sher N@zneen ji ke naam kiya hai !! Bahut khoob Aadeil bhai !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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31st July 2014, 07:52 PM
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Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
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Wwwaaaahhhh !!!!!! Beintehaayee khoobsurat khayaal !!! Waah !! Deed par mizhgaan ka pehra !! Kya haseen fiqr hai, kya khoobsurat sher !! Dheron daad N@zneen ji !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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31st July 2014, 08:05 PM
abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN* par haiN aa rahe
-zarraa
* abroo = eyebrow, itaab = anger, kamaaN = bow
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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1st August 2014, 02:02 AM
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mushtaaq*-e-deed*-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman* bana diya
-zarraa
mushtaaq = longing for, deed = sight, chilman = curtain
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wahhhhh!!! Zarraa saheb,, nihayat khooob...
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lafz-e-mizhgaa.n pe hamaarii kosish....
nok-e-mizhgaa.n* pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n* gham jo manaate rehte
*nok-e-mizhgaa.n = tip of eyelashes
*tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n = under the hidden eyelashes
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wahhhhh!! Aadil bhai,,, aik umdaaH khiyaal... dherooN daad!
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mizhgaan-e-tar* kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim* rahe
lekin saraab-zaar* nazar se adiim* rahe
*mizhgaan-e-tar = wet eyelids
*niyaaz-e-qadiim = long-term wish
*saraab-zaar = like mirage
*adiim = deprived of
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nazar se adim .... ..wahhhh!!! wahhhh! wahhhh! boht khoob...
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Originally Posted by zarraa
teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha
-zarraa
(kham = curl, ghamza = a flirtatious glance)
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zarra saheb... wahhhh... aik khobsorat peshkash..
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Naaz, this is dedicated to you
shokHii-e-tifl* si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n
*tifl = child
~Adil
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hahaha!.... you made her day!
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Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
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ahaan... kia kehne! .. Naaz.... that was brilliant!
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Originally Posted by zarraa
abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN* par haiN aa rahe
-zarraa
* abroo = eyebrow, itaab = anger, kamaaN = bow
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wahhh! Zarra saheb... kamal per kamal kiye jatay haiN aap ...
behad umdaH khiyaal.... dherooN daad
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Sipar* liye khade the saf* meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah* thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN*
Sipar=shield
Saf=line
barq-e-nigaah=flash/lightening of sight.
NihaaN=concealed.
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wahhhh! wahhh! Naaz.... superb!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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1st August 2014, 02:34 AM
tere nainooN k talism meiN koi kese giraftaar na ho?
jheel si aankhON ko chaar chaand lagaaye mizhgaan jo haiN...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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1st August 2014, 12:53 PM
Naaz,,
Ab khud hi jawab do....
hum shair kehte
ya Eid karte ??
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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1st August 2014, 03:07 PM
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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1st August 2014, 04:02 PM
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Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
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awesome!!! Naaz,
behteriin sher pesh kiya hai........ bahot hi khubsurti se mizhgaan lafz ka istemaal kiya hai..... too good
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st August 2014, 04:03 PM
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Waah !! Kya khoobsurat sher N@zneen ji ke naam kiya hai !! Bahut khoob Aadeil bhai !!
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aapka teh-e-dil se shukr guzaar hoo.n
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st August 2014, 04:06 PM
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abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN* par haiN aa rahe
-zarraa
* abroo = eyebrow, itaab = anger, kamaaN = bow
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
zarraasaab, kya kamaal kiya hai aapne iis sher me.n.... waaah hi waaah nikaltii hai.... dheroN dheroN daad hamaari jaanib se
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st August 2014, 04:08 PM
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Sipar* liye khade the saf* meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah* thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN*
Sipar=shield
Saf=line
barq-e-nigaah=flash/lightening of sight.
NihaaN=concealed.
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waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Naaz, you are doing an outstanding job, dear...
behad hi khubsurat khayaalaat pesh kiye haiN....
dheroN dheroN daad....................
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st August 2014, 04:12 PM
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tere nainooN k talism meiN koi kese giraftaar na ho?
jheel si aankhON ko chaar chaand lagaaye mizhgaan jo haiN...
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! ala tariin khayaalaat, Hassanbhai....
bahot hi khubsurat............. beshkimmatii sher hai yeh........
dilse dheroN dheroN daad...............
Adil
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st August 2014, 05:25 PM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! ala tariin khayaalaat, Hassanbhai....
bahot hi khubsurat............. beshkimmatii sher hai yeh........
dilse dheroN dheroN daad...............
Adil
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teh-e-dil se manooN hooN Aadil bhai...
milte rahiye ga,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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1st August 2014, 08:25 PM
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Sipar* liye khade the saf* meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah* thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN*
Sipar=shield
Saf=line
barq-e-nigaah=flash/lightening of sight.
NihaaN=concealed.
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Wwwwaaaaahhhhh!!! Barq-e-nigaah mizhgaan meiN nihaaN .... kya khoob takhayyul hai !! Bahaut khoob N@zneen ji !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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1st August 2014, 08:27 PM
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tere nainooN k talism meiN koi kese giraftaar na ho?
jheel si aankhON ko chaar chaand lagaaye mizhgaan jo haiN...
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Wah wah Hassan sahab !! Chaand jaise sher par daad !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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1st August 2014, 08:30 PM
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Wah! Zarraji bahot khoob...bahot khoobsurat tasveer pesh ki hai apne..abroo aur mizhgaaN ko teer kamaan ki misaal de dii....bahot khoob.
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya N@zneen ji
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Hassan bhai !!
QUOTE=Hassan;463754] wahhhhh!!! Zarraa saheb,, nihayat khooob...
wahhhhh!! Aadil bhai,,, aik umdaaH khiyaal... dherooN daad!
nazar se adim .... ..wahhhh!!! wahhhh! wahhhh! boht khoob...
zarra saheb... wahhhh... aik khobsorat peshkash..
hahaha!.... you made her day!
ahaan... kia kehne! .. Naaz.... that was brilliant!
wahhh! Zarra saheb... kamal per kamal kiye jatay haiN aap ...
behad umdaH khiyaal.... dherooN daad
wahhhh! wahhh! Naaz.... superb! [/QUOTE]
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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1st August 2014, 08:33 PM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
zarraasaab, kya kamaal kiya hai aapne iis sher me.n.... waaah hi waaah nikaltii hai.... dheroN dheroN daad hamaari jaanib se
Adil
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Aadeil bhai !!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
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1st August 2014, 09:11 PM
DostoN, lafz "mizhgaan" par members ke khud ke kahe aashaar ....
Apno.n Ka gham-e-marg na gar ho to hii achcha
Ye bojh saf-e-mizhgaa.n pe tolaa nahi.n karte
Ufaq
mushtaaq-e-deed-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman bana diya
Zarraa
nok-e-mizhgaa.n pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n gham jo manaate rehte
Aadeil
mizhgaan-e-tar kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim rahe
lekin saraab-zaar nazar se adiim rahe
Aadeil
teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha
Zarraa
shokHii-e-tifl si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n
Aadeil
Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
N@zneen
abroo khiNchee itaab meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN par haiN aa rahe
Zarraa
Sipar liye khade the saf meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN
N@zneen
tere nainooN k talism meiN koi kese giraftaar na ho
jheel si aankhON ko chaar chaand lagaaye mizhgaan jo haiN
Hassan
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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1st August 2014, 10:28 PM
dostoN ... is baar ka lafz hai .... MUNTAZIR .....
"muntazir" means "one who is waiting" ya "jo intezaar mein ho"
"muntazir" meiN "t" ka pronounciation is as in teer (arrow), tees (30), taaqat (strength) ... aap samajh gaye hoNge ...
"muntazir" ki taqti, mere opinion mein, hai 212. any other opinion is welcome.
to ab hum lafz "muntazir" par ghaur kareNge, koyee sher, qit'ta, nazm, rubaayee ya aur kuchh jise shayari kaha ja sake, keh kar. behr ki koyee bandish naheeN hai, n hi aashaar par koyee gintee, jitne chaaheiN aashaar kaheiN ..... more the merrier
shayari ke saath saath SDC style guftagoo bhi jaaree rakkheNge, seekhne sikhaane ke maqsad se. members se darkhwaast hai ki is lafz par apne khayaalaat aur ilm bhi baaNtte raheiN aur is ki nuances aur is ki usage par roshni daaleiN, jis se hum sab saath saath seekh sakeiN.
ab is lafz par kuchh khoobsurat aashaar ka lutf lete haiN ...
jin ke hum muntazir rahe un ko
mil gaye aur hum safar shaayad
-Faraaz
sab apne apne qareene se muntazir us ke
kisi ko shukr kisi ko shikaayateiN karni
-Faraaz
muntazir kab se tahayyur hai teri taqreer ka
baat kar tujh par gumaaN hone laga tasweer ka
-Faraaz
qaasidoN ke muntazir rehne lage
parh gaye un ko maze paigaam ke
-Daagh Dehlevi
ab kaun muntazir hai hamaare liye wahaaN
shaam aa gayee hai laut ke ghar jaayeiN bhi to kya
-Muneer Niyazi
jo pyaas paani ki muntazir hai
wo sooliyoN par taNgi huwee hai
-Ali Sardar Jaafri
muntazir hai ek toofaan-e-bala mere liye
ab bhi jaane kitne darwaaze haiN wa mere liye
par museebat hai mera ahd-e-wafa mere liye
ai gham-e-dil kya karooN ai wahshat-e-dil kya karooN
-Majaz ki nazm se
jo muntazir n mila wo to hum haiN sharminda
ki hum ne der laga di palat ke aane meiN
-Javed Akhtar
hawas-naseeb nazar ko kaheeN qaraar naheeN
maiN muntazir hooN magar tera intezaar naheeN
-Saahir Ludhianvi
faiz kya jaaniye yaar kis aas par muntazir haiN ke laayega koyee khabar
maykashoN par huwa mohtasib meherbaaN dil-figaaroN pe qaatil ko pyaar aa gaya
-Faiz
jo teri muntazir theeN wo aaNkheiN hi bujh gayeeN
ab kyooN saja raha hai charaaghoN se shaam ko
-name of shayar not known by me, NM
is lafz par ghaur karne ka silsila hum agle 5 din tak chalaayenge, yaani Friday, 6th August, 10:00 PM India time ya 4:30 PM GMT.
to ab aur intezaar mat karwaaiye! hum muntazir haiN lafz-e-muntazir par aap ke khoobsurat aashaar ke
duaoN ke saath
zarraa
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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2nd August 2014, 12:17 AM
muntazir rahe barsoN ke woh ayeN ge
dekhte rahe sapne ke woh manayeN ge
jaante haiN lekin dil ke hathoN majboor haiN
woh aa bhi gaye to 'hSn' ko rulayeN ge...
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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2nd August 2014, 12:19 AM
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muntazir rahe barsoN ke woh ayeN ge
dekhte rahe sapne ke woh manayeN ge
jaante haiN lekin dil ke hathoN majboor haiN
woh aa bhi gaye to 'hSn' ko rulayeN ge...
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too good......................
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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too good......................
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bunch of thanks,, Pari.........
You are so supportive since we met...
Take care,
Regards,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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2nd August 2014, 03:42 AM
mere dil k har haal main tum ho
mere har khayaal main tum ho
na hoon muntazir kisi aur jawab ka
k ab mere har sawaal main tum ho
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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2nd August 2014, 06:17 AM
hoon muntazir ke hoga deedaar-e-yaar ek din
faqat ye ehsaas hi bohat hai sukoon-e-rooh ke liye
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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Bahot khoob hSn.....very touching
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behad shukriyaaH... Naaz!
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*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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2nd August 2014, 12:09 PM
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muntazir rahe barsoN ke woh ayeN ge
dekhte rahe sapne ke woh manayeN ge
jaante haiN lekin dil ke hathoN majboor haiN
woh aa bhi gaye to 'hSn' ko rulayeN ge...
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Waah !! Bahaut khoob !! Jazbaat ke ek safar ke jaisa hai ye qita. Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai waah !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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2nd August 2014, 12:12 PM
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mere dil k har haal main tum ho
mere har khayaal main tum ho
na hoon muntazir kisi aur jawab ka
k ab mere har sawaal main tum ho
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Wwwwwwwaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!! Kya khoob daleel-e-ishq !!! Jawaab ka muntazir naheen kyunki sawaal mein tum ho !!!! Brilliant !! Beautiful thought and expression !!! Bahaut bahaut si daad Ananthpak ji !!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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2nd August 2014, 12:14 PM
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hoon muntazir ke hoga deedaar-e-yaar ek din
faqat ye ehsaas hi bohat hai sukoon-e-rooh ke liye
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wwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!! kya khayaal hai !!!! kisi ke muntazir rehne se hi sukoon mil jaata hai !!!!!! just wonderful !!! dheron dheron daad Praneeta ji !!!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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2nd August 2014, 12:21 PM
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muntazir rahe barsoN ke woh ayeN ge
dekhte rahe sapne ke woh manayeN ge
jaante haiN lekin dil ke hathoN majboor haiN
woh aa bhi gaye to 'hSn' ko rulayeN ge...
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ananthpak
mere dil k har haal main tum ho
mere har khayaal main tum ho
na hoon muntazir kisi aur jawab ka
k ab mere har sawaal main tum ho
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Praneeta
hoon muntazir ke hoga deedaar-e-yaar ek din
faqat ye ehsaas hi bohat hai sukoon-e-rooh ke liye
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Wah!...bohat khoob. ...............
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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2nd August 2014, 12:59 PM
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mere dil k har haal main tum ho
mere har khayaal main tum ho
na hoon muntazir kisi aur jawab ka
k ab mere har sawaal main tum ho
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Ananth jii,,
wahhh! wahh! kia hii baat hai... boht khoob...
DherooN daad,
DuaooN k saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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2nd August 2014, 01:01 PM
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hoon muntazir ke hoga deedaar-e-yaar ek din
faqat ye ehsaas hi bohat hai sukoon-e-rooh ke liye
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Pari,,
Wahhh!! Mohabbat ki chashni liye.. aik haseeN tamanna!.. wahh!
DherooN daad...
DuaooN k saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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2nd August 2014, 01:47 PM
n ayaaN* huweeN wo mohabbatteiN ke guzar gayeeN bhi haiN muddateiN
to hooN zikr ka tere muntazir tere naam par hooN nisaar kyooN
- zarraa
ayaaN = evident
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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2nd August 2014, 02:23 PM
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muntazir rahe barsoN ke woh ayeN ge
dekhte rahe sapne ke woh manayeN ge
jaante haiN lekin dil ke hathoN majboor haiN
woh aa bhi gaye to 'hSn' ko rulayeN ge...
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Waahhhhh!!!! Bohat khoob Hassan ji .........
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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2nd August 2014, 02:24 PM
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Wah! Jiju bahot khoob
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Bohat bohat shukriya saali sahiba..........
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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2nd August 2014, 02:26 PM
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Wwwwwwwaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!! Kya khoob daleel-e-ishq !!! Jawaab ka muntazir naheen kyunki sawaal mein tum ho !!!! Brilliant !! Beautiful thought and expression !!! Bahaut bahaut si daad Ananthpak ji !!!
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Zarraa sahab iss hausla affzayee ka behad shukrguzaar hoon ......
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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2nd August 2014, 02:27 PM
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Ananth jii,,
wahhh! wahh! kia hii baat hai... boht khoob...
DherooN daad,
DuaooN k saath,,
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Bohat bohat shukriya Hassan ji.......
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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2nd August 2014, 02:30 PM
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n ayaaN* huweeN wo mohabbatteiN ke guzar gayeeN bhi haiN muddateiN
to hooN zikr ka tere muntazir tere naam par hooN nisaar kyooN
- zarraa
ayaaN = evident
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Wahhhhhhh!!!!! Brilliant as usual Zarraa sahab.....dehron daad ....
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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Wahhhhhhh!!!!! Brilliant as usual Zarraa sahab.....dehron daad ....
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Ji bahaut bahaut shukriya Ananthpak ji
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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