Ek Parchhavan

[Dr. Preet Chhou]

Ek parchaavan hai jo menu apna lagda hi nahi,
Es parchhaven d piche piche mein chal ria han ,
Bhut kosishi kiti par oh rukda hi nahi ,

Ese nu dekh k mein hairan jea ho janda han ,
Kde kde preshan jea ho janda han ,
Parchhaven vicho v lahoo jea risda dikhda hai,
Kosish krda han k lahoo nu dekh lvan hath laa k ,
Par chal penda hai mere age age par jkhm vikhaun lae rukda hi nahi,

Meri is parchhaven di khed nu vekh lok krde ne klolan ,
Par asi mst han apni hi dunia vich ,
Sada khel Jive Chan te chkor oh mukda hi nahi

Kosish krda han k is parchhaven nu fd lavan,
Kde dil krda hai k is parchhaven nal lad lvan,
Kde kol aa k khlo janda hai eh mere ,
Dukh ki hai kde menu dsda hi nahi ,

Kiti hai pkdn di kosish mein lakh vaari ,
Pkd lenda han mein khud nu hi ,
Jhoothe jehe dilase ne dene dil nu
Preet dard hai jo dovan vichkar oh tan lukda hi nahi .

[ADHURI HEER]

Bahut hi khoooob Preet ji,
these lines are so beautiful

Kiti hai pkdn di kosish mein lakh vaari ,
Pkd lenda han mein khud nu hi ,
Jhoothe jehe dilase ne dene dil nu
Preet dard hai jo dovan vichkar oh tan lukda hi nahi .

[ABABBU]

bahut bahut hi khubsurat likheya hai tusi Dr. Preet ji.

[D33P]

woo.......gr8 wrk ji...............

[Preet Dil Di]

Preet ji tusi bahut hi khoobsoorat likhia hai.

[tilakji]

Salaam hai tuhadi kalam nu Dr Sahab. Kamaal da likhia hai.

Kosish krda han k is parchhaven nu fd lavan,
Kde dil krda hai k is parchhaven nal lad lvan,

Wasdey raho

[Dr. Preet Chhou]

thanks heer ji bht bhut shukrya sadi gali vich aun lae

Originally Posted by ADHURI HEER

Bahut hi khoooob Preet ji,
these lines are so beautiful

Kiti hai pkdn di kosish mein lakh vaari ,
Pkd lenda han mein khud nu hi ,
Jhoothe jehe dilase ne dene dil nu
Preet dard hai jo dovan vichkar oh tan lukda hi nahi .

[Dr. Preet Chhou]

Originally Posted by Preet Dil Di

Preet ji tusi bahut hi khoobsoorat likhia hai.

thank u preet ji jd preet hi preet de vehde vich aa jae ta khushi dugni ho jandi hai

[Dr. Preet Chhou]

Originally Posted by Preet Dil Di

Preet ji tusi bahut hi khoobsoorat likhia hai.

thank u preet ji jd preet hi preet de vehde vich aa jae ta khushi dugni ho jandi hai

[Dr. Preet Chhou]

Originally Posted by tilakji

Salaam hai tuhadi kalam nu Dr Sahab. Kamaal da likhia hai.

Kosish krda han k is parchhaven nu fd lavan,
Kde dil krda hai k is parchhaven nal lad lvan,

Wasdey raho

o mere khuda shukr hai mere is kadrdaan nu meri rachna pasand aa gae , smjo eh njam paas ho gae

[Dr. Preet Chhou]

Originally Posted by D33P

woo.......gr8 wrk ji...............

judge sahib shukargujar han tuhada jo chhoti jehi kosish nu pasand kita

[Dr. Preet Chhou]

Originally Posted by ABABBU

bahut bahut hi khubsurat likheya hai tusi Dr. Preet ji.

thanks a babu ji nhut skoon milda hai jd puraane puraane dost v reply krn

[yaaden_kamal]

Bahut hi sohni rachna hai Dr. Preet Ji.
Jagpal