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Sher pe Sher.... - 13th February 2013, 03:53 PM

Doston...

Jis tarah se shayri ki pathshala section khulne ke baad hum logon ke chchere pe khushiyon ki laher daud padii hai, aur kai tarah se pahle ho rahi hai shayari ki technicalities seekhne ki...

Isi lihaaz se ek nayaa khel hum shuru karne ja rahe hain.. jisme hame kuch khaas nahi, bas ghazal ki baareekiyaan, jaise, qaafiyaa, radeef, behr etc ko dhyaan me rakh kar sher pe sher kehnaa hoga...

Rules neeche de deta hoon...

1) Kisi shaayar ki ghazal ka ek misraa liyaa jaegaa. (khas kar matla) aur usi ko aage badhaate hue members apne apne sher kahenge.
member ek baar me sirf ek hi sher kahe.... repeat kar sakte hain magar kisi dusre member ke post ke baad...


2) Qaafiya badlaa jaaega, aur radeef same rahega...

3) Aap log use kiyaa huaa qaafiyaa istemaal kar sakte hain, magar shart ye hai ke ek hi qaafiya lagatar istemaal na kiya jaae. lafz "agar" ke baad, "magar", "dagar", "thahar" kuch ek baar aa jaae uske baad aap waapas "agar" use kar sakte hain.

4) Behr ki paabandii hai, aap usi behr me sher kahenge jis behr me upar likhe shaayr ka sher hoga.

5) beech beech me shuruaati (shayar ka origional) sher badalte rahenge.. jisse hame alag alag behr aur khayaal ka lutf milta rahegaa...




to aaiye shuru karte hain is khel ko jiska naam hai "Sher pe Sher"

shuruaat karte hain Daag ke is khoobsurat se sher ke saath....





Ajab apanaa haal hotaa jo visaal-e-yaar hotaa
kabhii jaan sadaqe hotii kabhii dil nisaar hotaa





Ab jaise ki hum is sher me dekhte hain ke radeef hai "hota" aur qaafiya hai "aar"

behr kuch yooN hai....

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(Agar main Ghalat houn to durust kareN...................

to aaiye, aapke sher ka intzaar hai..


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13th February 2013, 04:08 PM

Meri taraf se aglaa sher hai.......


yoon na dekhiye kasam se, mera dil fisal na jaae,
yahi khel khel me hi, hai Pehla pyaar hotaa..
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13th February 2013, 07:20 PM

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Meri taraf se aglaa sher hai.......


yoon na dekhiye kasam se, mera dil fisal na jaae,
yahi khel khel me hi, hai Pehla pyaar hotaa..
.
ye game bhi accha laga bhai....
waise is zameen par maine ek ghazal kahi thi....so usi ka ek sher yaha tika deta hu....
( shaad sahab ,aapke saani me typo hai..koi lafz bhool gaye hain likhna aap)

tum agar davaa bhi hote ,mere dard e laadavaa ki
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13th February 2013, 07:59 PM

Sher changed:

yoon na dekhiye kasam se, mera dil fisal na jaae,
yahi khel khel me hi, shuru Pehla pyaar hotaa...


thanks Zidd bhai for correction and what a lovely sher u shared......


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14th February 2013, 10:22 AM

Next Sher Pleezzzzzzzz...................................... .............................


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14th February 2013, 07:50 PM

Bhai logo meeri pehli koshish behr mein likhne ki , agar bouncer maar du to maaf karna

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14th February 2013, 08:29 PM

Sanjay bhai, muaafi maangne ki koi baat nahi hai.... aapne baqaayda behr me likhaa hai... aur bahot khoob sher bhi kahaa hai Masha Allaah... daad hi daad......
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TanhaaiyaaN na hotiiN kismat me gar hamaare,
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Khona aur pana dono ka apna wajood hai,
Jaise din aur raat saath saath maujood hai.



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Sanjay bhai, muaafi maangne ki koi baat nahi hai.... aapne baqaayda behr me likhaa hai... aur bahot khoob sher bhi kahaa hai Masha Allaah... daad hi daad......
likhte raheN...

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TanhaaiyaaN na hotiiN kismat me gar hamaare,
koi dost saath hotaa, koii jaaN nisaar hotaa..........


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toh yeh dil bhi har pal uske liye bekaraar hotaa . . .


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