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Ghazal: apnii raateN uske fasaane... - 16th May 2003, 02:54 AM

dosto, Adaab!

ik Ghazal pesh kar rahaa huuN.. aap sab ke aaraa ka intezaar rahegaa.

apnii raateN uske fasaane
jaane kaise hai ye zamaane

uskii Qudrat uskii rahmat
jhuTe haiN sab mere bahaane

jin ke haathoN dard milaa tha
woh bhii aaye mujhko manaane

aatii ham ko niind kabhii gar
jaate ham bhii sapne sajaane

dil ki hasrat dil meN lekar
jaate haiN phir ashk bahaane

Gham ki gaThrii sar pe rakkhe
phirte haiN sab log sayaane

chashm-e-tar se aag lagaaye
kaise aashiQ haiN ye diwaane

ye bhii koii riit nayii hai
apnii koshish un ke bahaane

josh-e-giryaaN dil meN rakkar
ham bhii aaye naGhmeN sunaane

ab to "Alam" ponchdo aaNsuu
dekho chamke taare suhaane

terii yaadeN "Alam" sach hai
aatii haiN bas dil ko rulaane

shukriya!

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Re: Ghazal: apnii raateN uske fasaane... - 17th May 2003, 12:45 AM

Alam Sahab

Adaab!

Aapko is nayee kavish ke saath yahaN dekh kar bohat achcha laga. Aapne phir ek baar aik achchi ghazal suna kar bazm ko lutf-andoz kiya. Aapka shukria.

Issi ke saath is umda ghazal ke liye mubarak baad bhii qubuul farmaiyega.

Waqt kii tangii ki wajah se iss par tafseel se baateN nahiN kar paaoNga. Lekin mauqa milte hi aapse muKhatib ho jaoNga aur apni haqiir rae aapke saamne pesh karuuNga. Tab tak aatey rahiye aur bazm ko roshan banatey rahiye.

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18th May 2003, 02:33 AM

Praveen Sb, aadaab!

aapkii tawajjo aur sitaaish ka maiN bahut shukrguzaar huuN! bahut nawaazish! aapne naachiiz kii adnaa si koshish ko Ghazal tasliim karke bahut nawaaza hai, shukriyaa!

ummid kartaa huuN ke bazm meN aapse muKhaatibat hotii rahegii.

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hi...alam sahab - 3rd June 2003, 05:31 PM

hi..alam sahab..very well written piece of urdu poetry...made very compelling and compulsive reading....keep up the good effort....yrs truly......fersahab
   
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