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Love mere dil ka vo haal karte ho... - 9th October 2014, 11:11 AM

Jab bhi tum ye sawaal karte ho..
Mere dil ka vo haal karte ho...

Yaad karke sukoon nhi aata
Bhoolu.n to phir behaal karte ho...

Ishq karna meri khaya thi to..
Tum kyon uska malaal karte ho..

Dekho tumko na pyaar ho jaye..
itna mera khyaal karte ho.

mushkile meri hain meri adat..
Apni dunya javaal karte ho..

Mujhko samjha ke farz khud bhatke.
Tum bhi kaisa kamaal karte ho.

Rang jazbaat ka na feeka ho..
Ghahra har ek saal karte ho.

Jab bhi tum ye sawaal karte ho..
Mere dil ka vo haal karte ho...

Madhu..



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9th October 2014, 11:14 AM

kya baat hai madhu jee......kon hai vo jo aapko pareshaaN karta hai sawaal karke.... bahut hee umda shayri....



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waah waaah bahot hi sunder panktiyaaN likhi hain aapne Madhu saahiba.....

ab mujhe yaqeen hone laga hai ke aapki mehnat zoron shoron se ho rahii hai.... aapka kalaam kaafii had tak rawaani yaani ke flow me hai...... bahot hi acchii aur dil se nikli hui kavitaa lag rahi hai ye..... likhtii raheN, merii duaaen hain aapke saath....

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9th October 2014, 01:09 PM

Mohabbat tumko na ho jaye..
kyon mera itna khyaal karte ho....


Ye sher to bas kya kehne....bahut umdaaH.... quoted sher bahut pasand aaya


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kya baat hai madhu jee......kon hai vo jo aapko pareshaaN karta hai sawaal karke.... bahut hee umda shayri....
bahut shukriya aru ji...aapne apna keemti vaqt nikal kar meri nazm padi aur ise pasand kiya..
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waah waaah bahot hi sunder panktiyaaN likhi hain aapne Madhu saahiba.....

ab mujhe yaqeen hone laga hai ke aapki mehnat zoron shoron se ho rahii hai.... aapka kalaam kaafii had tak rawaani yaani ke flow me hai...... bahot hi acchii aur dil se nikli hui kavitaa lag rahi hai ye..... likhtii raheN, merii duaaen hain aapke saath....

Shaad....
Bahut bahut shukriya shaad ji..bahut khushi huyi ki aapko meri koshish pasand aayi..yoon hi sath dete rahiyega....



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Mohabbat tumko na ho jaye..
kyon mera itna khyaal karte ho....


Ye sher to bas kya kehne....bahut umdaaH.... quoted sher bahut pasand aaya
Thank u very much pankaj ji...aapko mera sher pasand aaya..
yoon hi aate rahein...



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Madhu ji ..

aap ka flow bahut achcha hota hai ....itna hi kahunga..

Doobna chahte ho jheel si ankhoN meiN ,
per uterne se pehle gehrai pe sawal karte ho

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14th November 2014, 12:43 AM

Mohabbat tumko na ho jaye..
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2nd December 2014, 02:55 PM

adat ban gayi ab ye mushkile meri..
kyon khud zindgi bawaal karte ho.

wahhhh wahh.. Madhu jee..

kia kehne.. bohat umdaH ghazal huii hai ...

dil se dherooN daad qabool kejiye


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Madhu ji......bohot khoob likha aapne......
Puri peshkash ek lay me hai......aur labzo ki jagah bohot dhyan se chuni hai aapne......
Dheero daad.

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Madhu ji ..

aap ka flow bahut achcha hota hai ....itna hi kahunga..

Doobna chahte ho jheel si ankhoN meiN ,
per uterne se pehle gehrai pe sawal karte ho

Sanjay Sehgal
Shukriya..sanjay jii...
aur bahut khoob sher kaha aapne......

Aate rahein..



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[QUOTE=m.mayoos;471680]Mohabbat tumko na ho jaye..
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Bahut Shukriya mayoos ji..
aate rahiye ...........



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Jab bhi tum ye sawaal karte ho..
Mere dil ka vo haal karte ho...

Yaad karke sukoon nhi aata
Bhool jaun to behaal karte ho...

Maine ki thi khata haan ye.
Tum kyon uska malaal karte ho..

Mohabbat tumko na ho jaye..
kyon mera itna khyaal karte ho

adat ban gayi ab ye mushkile meri..
kyon khud zindgi bawaal karte ho.

Mujhe mera farz samjhaane wale..
Bhagte duniya se tum kamaal karte ho.

Rang jazbaat ka nahi padta feeka..
Ghahra isko saal dar saal karte ho.

Jab bhi tum ye sawaal karte ho..
Mere dil ka vo haal karte ho.
wah wah bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh rachna madhu jee
likhti rahen
duaon ke saath


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wahhhh wahh.. Madhu jee..

kia kehne.. bohat umdaH ghazal huii hai ...

dil se dherooN daad qabool kejiye
Bahut bahut shukriya hassan ji......aapka sath yoon hee bana rahe yahi dua hai.......
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Jab bhi tum ye sawaal karte ho..
Mere dil ka vo haal karte ho...

Yaad karke sukoon nhi aata
Bhool jaun to behaal karte ho...

Maine ki thi khata haan ye.
Tum kyon uska malaal karte ho..

Mohabbat tumko na ho jaye..
kyon mera itna khyaal karte ho

adat ban gayi ab ye mushkile meri..
kyon khud zindgi bawaal karte ho.

Mujhe mera farz samjhaane wale..
Bhagte duniya se tum kamaal karte ho.

Rang jazbaat ka nahi padta feeka..
Ghahra isko saal dar saal karte ho.

Jab bhi tum ye sawaal karte ho..
Mere dil ka vo haal karte ho.
Behad khoobsurat khayal aur aashaar. Bahut khoobsurati se aapne sab kashmakash keh daali hai aur mujhe bahut pasand aayi. Meri dil se daad kubool kijiye, yunhi likhti rahiye.


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Madhu ji......bohot khoob likha aapne......
Puri peshkash ek lay me hai......aur labzo ki jagah bohot dhyan se chuni hai aapne......
Dheero daad.

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Yoon hee sath banaye rakhiyga.....
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