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beautiful moment.........
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22nd May 2009, 11:30 PM
doston.......mere dost BAQZ ko to aap sab jaante hi hoge...use yaha kaun nahi jaanta....main jaanti hu ki wo bahut blunt hai...jo uske dimaag me aata hai wo keh deta hai...uski baatein bahut se logo ko kadwi lagti hai..par koi ye nahi jaanta ke wo dil ka bahut achcha hai...ek achcha dost hai...
BAQZ..............this one is for u..............
is duniya se nahi darta hai wo,
ek dum bindaas sa rehta hai wo,
yu banta hai jaise ho koi begana,
neem sa kadwaa lagta hai wo,
baat karte karte ruk jata hai,
aksar kuch aisa karta hai wo,
dard hai dil me koi to kehdo,
mujse yehi bas kehta hai wo,
kisi ka rona use ganvara nahi,
hasta hai aur hasata hai wo,
jo bhi mile usse jeen sikha de,
kuch aisi hi hasti rakhta hai wo,
jane kya baat hai us paagal me,
ek pyaara dost sa lagta hai wo,
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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23rd May 2009, 09:28 AM
@ LAMHA JI, bahut khub likha hai, apne toh baqz ko bahut aacche se samjha hai..
@Baqz , Baqz bhai, yaar apki toh nikal padi hai, star ban gaye ho aap toh, aapke huzur me kavita likhi gayi hai................Kripya apne experts comments dijiye, is poem ke baare main.............
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
doston.......mere dost BAQZ ko to aap sab jaante hi hoge...use yaha kaun nahi jaanta....main jaanti hu ki wo bahut blunt hai...jo uske dimaag me aata hai wo keh deta hai...uski baatein bahut se logo ko kadwi lagti hai..par koi ye nahi jaanta ke wo dil ka bahut achcha hai...ek achcha dost hai...
BAQZ..............this one is for u..............
is duniya se nahi darta hai wo,
ek dum bindaas sa rehta hai wo,
yu banta hai jaise ho koi begana,
neem sa kadwaa lagta hai wo,
baat karte karte ruk jata hai,
aksar kuch aisa karta hai wo,
dard hai dil me koi to kehdo,
mujse yehi bas kehta hai wo,
kisi ka rona use ganvara nahi,
hasta hai aur hasata hai wo,
jo bhi mile usse jeen sikha de,
kuch aisi hi hasti rakhta hai wo,
jane kya baat hai us paagal me,
ek pyaara dost sa lagta hai wo,
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com
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23rd May 2009, 01:18 PM
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Originally Posted by LAMHA
doston.......mere dost BAQZ ko to aap sab jaante hi hoge...use yaha kaun nahi jaanta....main jaanti hu ki wo bahut blunt hai...jo uske dimaag me aata hai wo keh deta hai...uski baatein bahut se logo ko kadwi lagti hai..par koi ye nahi jaanta ke wo dil ka bahut achcha hai...ek achcha dost hai...
BAQZ..............this one is for u..............
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is duniya se nahi darta hai wo,
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......... bindaas to hippo rehta hai....... kya usi ki baat kar rahi ho
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yu banta hai jaise ho koi begana,
neem sa kadwaa lagta hai wo,
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baat karte karte ruk jata hai,
aksar kuch aisa karta hai wo,
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haklata hoga..................
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dard hai dil me koi to kehdo,
mujse yehi bas kehta hai wo,
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kisi ka rona use ganvara nahi,
hasta hai aur hasata hai wo,
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Gud job........ joker
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jo bhi mile usse jeena sikha de,
kuch aisi hi hasti rakhta hai wo,
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hhhhmmmm......................! yeh kabse ho gaya
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jane kya baat hai us paagal me,
ek pyaara dost sa lagta hai wo,[/quote]
pagalon mein bhi kuch hota hai kya......
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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beautiful moment.........
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23rd May 2009, 07:35 PM
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Originally Posted by nalinmehra
@ LAMHA JI, bahut khub likha hai, apne toh baqz ko bahut aacche se samjha hai..
@Baqz , Baqz bhai, yaar apki toh nikal padi hai, star ban gaye ho aap toh, aapke huzur me kavita likhi gayi hai................Kripya apne experts comments dijiye, is poem ke baare main.............
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NALIN.......................tum sirf LAMHA keh sakte ho.....shukriya dear aapko meri ye koshish pasand aayi....actually BAQZ bahut pyara insaan hai,par abhi bhi lagta hai ki usko puri tarah samajna bahut mushkil hai.......thank u soooooo much.....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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23rd May 2009, 07:38 PM
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......... bindaas to hippo rehta hai....... kya usi ki baat kar rahi ho
haklata hoga..................
Gud job........ joker
hhhhmmmm......................! yeh kabse ho gaya
pagalon mein bhi kuch hota hai kya......
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oyeeeeeeeeee SHAAN...................bahut maar khaoge tum ...
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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24th May 2009, 01:46 PM
Whatz with this faltoo stuff.... meri reputation karab kar rahi hoooo....
Abhi puri tarha jaanti bhi nahi ho mujhe aur afwayen pahla rahi hoooo
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24th May 2009, 01:48 PM
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@ LAMHA JI, bahut khub likha hai, apne toh baqz ko bahut aacche se samjha hai..
@Baqz , Baqz bhai, yaar apki toh nikal padi hai, star ban gaye ho aap toh, aapke huzur me kavita likhi gayi hai................Kripya apne experts comments dijiye, is poem ke baare main.............
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Konsa ..........Star... wo toot ta tara, jisko dekh kar log wish karte hai.... wo wala
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25th May 2009, 10:05 AM
dude aise mat bol.................Cmon Baqz maan................ Ur not a falling star, Tu Toh woh wala star hai...............celebrity..........star......... . got it.................. Aur waise bhi tere liye poem likhi gayihai, dude, Im sure u must be really flattered................Kyun, Hai Na????
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Konsa ..........Star... wo toot ta tara, jisko dekh kar log wish karte hai.... wo wala
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Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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25th May 2009, 10:06 AM
YEp LAmha , ur right................ Baqz is quite upredictable but in a very interesting and sweet way............................... BAQZ Rocks................
Nalin
Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe
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25th May 2009, 03:25 PM
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is duniya se nahi darta hai wo,
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yu banta hai jaise ho koi begana,
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True enough.....................
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qki ise intezarr karwana achcha lagta hai isliye............
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dard hai dil me koi to kehdo,
mujse yehi bas kehta hai wo,
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ye baat to wo har dukhi aatma se kehta hai...........
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kisi ka rona use ganvara nahi,
hasta hai aur hasata hai wo,
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hasta hai aur sabki jalata hai wo........ye correct line hai
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jo bhi mile usse jeen sikha de,
kuch aisi hi hasti rakhta hai wo,
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ye aur baat hai ki koi ussse jeena nhi seekhna chahta mere aur tere siwa
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Hmm correct jaane kya baat hai, khud use bhi nhi pata..........
Great work lekin tumne sab zahiri baateiN likhi haiN jo sab jaante haiN aur Baqz ne bhi sahi kaha uske baare mein koi kuch nhi jaanta
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26th May 2009, 06:36 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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26th May 2009, 06:37 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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26th May 2009, 06:38 PM
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YEp LAmha , ur right................ Baqz is quite upredictable but in a very interesting and sweet way............................... BAQZ Rocks................
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"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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26th May 2009, 06:41 PM
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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24th January 2010, 05:05 PM
Aihai.............................Lamha........... ..
Chal jane dey ... tujhe nahi satata.... bechari yahan aana hi chhod di...
kyun ke log usko bahut sata rahe hai....
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28th January 2010, 05:16 PM
abe ye kya ho raha hai... Baqs yaar tere mein itna kuchh hai?? tujhe khud nahin pata tha na....
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31st January 2010, 11:59 AM
Waise Lamha tere barey mein kuch kuch jaanti hai... usne Private msg mein Naaz ko bataya hai tere barey mein ............hahahaha
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