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apnaa ashiyana lut te hue dekha hai....
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apnaa ashiyana lut te hue dekha hai.... - 28th August 2003, 01:14 AM

ajj meine apni akhon se... apnaa ashiyana lut te hue dekha hai....
eh zindagi tujhe ajj... khule assmaan mein ghut te hue dekha hai....
dekhe the jiske sapne... ajj usko dusre ka hote hue dekha hai....
zamane ne ajj kisi koo... apni mout ke liye gid gidate hue dekha hai....

apne hathon se banaye hue gharonde.. ko meine.. tut te hue dekha hai...
eh..zindagi ajj.. meine...tujhe mujh per haste hue dekha hai...
dekha tha joo sapno ka mahel...ajj usko..tut te hue dekha hai...
ajj meine... apni hi mout ko apne karib.... aate hue dekha hai...


Lamha Lamha...saSein Khatam hoo rai hai...
Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah...
Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai...
   
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28th August 2003, 01:18 AM

tanhai

naam bata yaar, apna naam bata yaarrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Grat u r. ham to diwane ho gaye tumhare yara. behtareen. badhawas se lag rahe ho. kya hua mere yaar..

ajj meine apni akhon se... apnaa ashiyana lut te hue dekha hai....
eh zindagi tujhe ajj... khule assmaan mein ghut te hue dekha hai....
dekhe the jiske sapne... ajj usko dusre ka hote hue dekha hai....
zamane ne ajj kisi koo... apni mout ke liye gid gidate hue dekha hai....


arre yaar behtareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen.
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kya kahu? - 28th August 2003, 01:29 AM

tanhaai mere aaine mere dost,
tanhaai..... jab bhi tumne kuchh likha hai........ muje mere ahesaas se alag nahi laga. fark sirf yah hai k tum bayaan kar lete ho maie nahi kar paati.
to ab meri hi baat hai to ab kya taarif karu? khud k ahesaas ki bhala kya tarif ho?
par fir bhi tum ne mere ahesaaso ko shabd diyae to tum taarif k haq bhi rakhte ho.
meri sari khushi tumhaare naam
   
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28th August 2003, 06:48 PM

tanhaayi ji,

bahut kuchh dekha aapne..aur bahut kuchh ehsaas karaaya hamen..zara apne chahne waalon ki taraf bhi dekho...tumhaari shayri ki chahat tumhe har taraf dikhegii

bahut achha likha yaar


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chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...
   
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Re: apnaa ashiyana lut te hue dekha hai.... - 28th August 2003, 07:07 PM

janab tanhai saheb..

kya baat hai....aisa laga jaise hamare hi zazbaat ko aap ne apni kalam se likh diya...hamare hi dard ko apni aawaz baksh di...hamare hi zindagi ko apni aankhon se dekha.....bahot kuch hai kehne ko magar kya kya likhe....bas yehi kahenge ki behtreen likha hai...aise hi likhte rahiye aur hamare saath gam ke kafile badhate chaliye.....

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28th August 2003, 07:47 PM

Tanha bhai ...

janab tumare dard ki kasish ko samjh NahiN sakte Par hum us ko Mahsoos kar sakte hai ... Har baar Aap ke Naye Qalaam mein Ek naya dard Dekhta hai...

Dost bahut hi gahra hai ye Qalaam .. aur is ko kis tarah se Tareef kare Ye hi hum Soch rahe hai .... aur Bahut SochNe ke baad bus Yehi kahna chahege .. ki ye Ek nayab aur behaD Almol Qalaam rahega.... Bahut hi khob likha hai aap ne

Tareef Qabool kare..

Aap ka Dost


ChalTa Hoon.....

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28th August 2003, 11:01 PM

tanhaaee dost

behad khoobsoorat magar bohat mushkil behar mein itni achchi ghazal kehne per mubarakbaad qubool karein.

tanhai dost aap kam likhte ho magar khoob likhte ho.

wishing you all the best

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bahot khub - 29th August 2003, 11:46 AM

ajj meine apni akhon se... apnaa ashiyana lut te hue dekha hai....
eh zindagi tujhe ajj... khule assmaan mein ghut te hue dekha hai....
dekhe the jiske sapne... ajj usko dusre ka hote hue dekha hai....
zamane ne ajj kisi koo... apni mout ke liye gid gidate hue dekha hai....

TANHAI JI
hamesha ki tarah aaj bhi bahot khoosurati se apne jazbaat bayan kiye hai hamesha hi maut aur kabar kahan se le aate hai dard bhare kalam?take care.


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30th August 2003, 02:26 PM

ajj meine apni akhon se... apnaa ashiyana lut te hue dekha hai....
eh zindagi tujhe ajj... khule assmaan mein ghut te hue dekha hai....
dekhe the jiske sapne... ajj usko dusre ka hote hue dekha hai....
zamane ne ajj kisi koo... apni mout ke liye gid gidate hue dekha hai....


M.A.T. ji..

Dil me dard hai ya, Dard me dil hai.
Zindagi mari hui si hai ya, Maut me zindagi hasil hai.

Waqai dost.. dard me dooba hua ye kalaam tumhara.. dard e dil ko aur baRa gaya.. yun to kabhi unka khayaal na gaya is dil se.. tumhari baat ne ek naya zakhm laga diya. Bohat khoob!


Tum chale jaaoge to sochenge... Humne kya khoya, humne kya paaya...
   
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kaha ho??? - 30th August 2003, 02:51 PM

tanhai mere aaine.. mere dost,
hey dost kaha ho? ab yah to had hoti hai....
haa... woh baat alag hai k maine kaha k tum mere aaine ho... tumne mere hi ahesaas bayaan kiyae....
par reply muje thhodi na dene hai.... sabhi dosto ko pasand aayi hai tumhari nazam
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ek nayi nazam ko le kar.......
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tanhaai mere dost,
kaha ho????????????
pahlaey to dard ko sajaate ho apne ahesaso se,
fir yunh door ho jaate ho, jaise kisi aur ki baat ho...

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.. - 17th September 2003, 11:37 PM

Ruth ke hamse kabhi jab chale jaoge tum,
ye na socha tha kabhi itna yaad aaoge tum


Ab laut bhi aao yaar


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18th September 2003, 01:20 AM

dardji,
kaash aapki duwaa kubul ho jaaye........ thanxxxxx
   
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