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Love Garmi ho ya sardi... - 7th July 2004, 09:01 PM

Garmi ho chaahe sardi ho,
Sab kudrat ke nazaare hain...
Pyase to woh bhi hain,
Jinke ghar samander ke kinare hain..

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~Priya



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8th July 2004, 02:20 PM

I like the last line specially.. Pyaase to woh bhi hain jo wsamundar ke kinare hain..... Do Keep the good work up.. TC


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9th July 2004, 12:00 AM

Pulkit ji,
Aapne yeh sher padha aur pasand kiya, jaan ke bahut khushi hui..

lekin yeh sher mera likha nahi hai... meri zindagi ne kal yeh sher gungunaaya tha, to maine socha aap sab ke saath share karun.

Writer kaun hai main bhi nahi jaanti... par bahut achi lines hain..

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9th July 2004, 10:55 AM

Priya,

Zaroori yeh nahi ki aapne likha hai ya nahi... but u shared a good work with us and thats important......

So.. kee writing and keep posting.... Apni Zindagi se kahiye aise hi gungunati rahe

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9th July 2004, 09:52 PM

Thankyou so much for your wishes Pulkit ji!

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11th July 2004, 12:31 AM

hi, priya ji jsk
Garmi ho ya sardi ho vix lagalo

hahahaha

Garmi ho chaahe sardi ho,
Sab kudrat ke nazaare hain...
Pyase to woh bhi hain,
Jinke ghar samander ke kinare hain..


aapka bahut shukriiiya aapne ye sher yaha pesh kiya
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Meeta ji aur trufellings ji,
Bahut bahut shukriya reply karne ke liye!

Khush rahiye!

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