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Saanse aapki jaan hai hamari...... -
19th December 2004, 04:56 PM
Nigahe aapki,
Pehechan hai hamari......... Muskurahat aapki, shaan hai hamari........... Karna hifajat tum apni, kyonki............ Saanse aapki JAAN hai hamari..........Aashi.........  tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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19th December 2004, 06:45 PM
Hi Aashika Ji,
WOW. So simple, subtle n sweet. Really good. Humari daad qabool karein. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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hi -
20th December 2004, 11:06 AM
hi, salimji,
kaise ho, aapki daad hamein kubul hai, post reply ke liye bahot bahot SHUKRIYA......  Sweet Aashi......tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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20th December 2004, 05:28 PM
Hi,
Bahoot khoob farmaya aapne ! Regards |
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21st December 2004, 10:32 AM
hi, Dhavalji,
shukriya reply deneke liye........ aaisehi saath dete rehena.....tnx tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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27th December 2004, 11:01 PM
Nigahe aapki,
Pehechan hai hamari......... Muskurahat aapki, shaan hai hamari........... Karna hifajat tum apni, kyonki............ Saanse aapki JAAN hai hamari... aashika..... kya khoob kaha hai..... magar jab vo apni hifajat kisi aur ke haathon mein de de to in saanso ka kya hoga? jawab ka intezaar rahega..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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29th December 2004, 12:42 PM
hi, Amanji....muje aaphika intjaar tha...........
Nigahe aapki, Pehechan hai hamari......... Muskurahat aapki, shaan hai hamari........... Karna hifajat tum apni, kyonki............ Saanse aapki JAAN hai hamari... magar jab vo apni hifajat kisi aur ke haathon mein de de to in saanso ka kya hoga? Jab saanse aapki jaan hui hai hamari, i mean jabki humne aapki saanso ko apni jaan banai hai.......to ye baat to teh hai, hum bhi to deewmne huye hai tumhare, ab aap apni jaan hamare haaton main de ya kisi aur ke haaton...........ye to aap pe nirbhar hai.. par yaad rakhna humsa koi nahi hoga....aur nahi8 tumhe milega tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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29th December 2004, 02:56 PM
HI aashika,
Aap ne bahut hi accha likha hai..... Aur mujhe yeah lines bahut hi acchi lagi.... Karna hifajat tum apni, kyonki............ Saanse aapki JAAN hai hamari Baadiya.... Keep writing........ Have a nice time... bye.....take care : : Dost har lamha saath tumhare hai hum : : Listen to your mind...but follow your heart. "Anyone who believes sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain." ---------------------------------------------- : : Yogesh : : |
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29th December 2004, 08:35 PM
Aashika ji.....
jawab aacha tha..... lekin dil ko thokaren iti mili ke yakeen mera jaata raha hai.... dil se dillgai to na karogi..? **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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30th December 2004, 12:02 PM
Dear Amanji,...............
dilse dillagi to nahi karungi, par 1 baat jarro kehena chahungi...... har manjil ko mushkil na samjho, dil ko dard nahi, darad ko dil samjho................. tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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Re: Saanse aapki jaan hai hamari...... -
30th December 2004, 03:51 PM
Nigahe aapki,
Pehechan hai hamari......... Muskurahat aapki, shaan hai hamari........... Karna hifajat tum apni, kyonki............ Saanse aapki JAAN hai hamari.......... Aashi......... Wow aashi ji... simple ,decent... aur ghraai tak apani chhap chhodati hai.. likhati rahiye... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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13th January 2005, 02:37 PM
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aknatji, SHUKRIYA meri post pasand karne ke liye, tnx so much for u r reply....... tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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Sweet aashi....... sach kahooon....... kuch samajh nahi aaya ki aap kehna kya chaahti hai....... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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14th January 2005, 11:14 AM
dear amanji,
aap itne nasamajh bhi to nahi, ki hamari baat na samjho............. guar kijiyega.............. bye, take care...................... tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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14th January 2005, 05:32 PM
Sweet Aashi.....
jaane kitni baaten dabe hoton se keh jaate hain....... koshish karte hain, lekin jaane kyun samajh nahi paate hain...... yahi kehte rahe ki samjhaoo apni baaton ko..... phir sun.Na ^AMAN^-e- jasbaaton ko...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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14th January 2005, 05:36 PM
jaane kitni baaten dabe hoton se keh jaate hain.......
koshish karte hain, lekin jaane kyun samajh nahi paate hain...... yahi kehte rahe ki samjhaoo apni baaton ko..... phir sun.Na ^AMAN^-e- jasbaaton ko...... __________________________________________ dear amanji, aapko pata hai na... kisine kha hai......... samjh samjh ke samjh ko samjho, samjh samjhna bhi 1 samjh hai............... samjh samjh ko jo na samjh je, sach main woh nasamjh hai hai  bye, take care............... tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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15th January 2005, 01:12 PM
ashika ji
bahoot khubh likha hai aacha laga padhke aise hi likhte rahiyega bye take care cu pallavi you don't need to have anything else. If you don't have it, it doesn't matter much what else you do have. |
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15th January 2005, 01:38 PM
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dear pallavi, SHUKRIYA...... mujhe accha laga aapko meri POST pasand aayi, tnx so much......................... tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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18th January 2005, 04:01 PM
Sweet Aashi.....
vaisa kaha jaata hai kutch baaten aakhon se samajh jaaye to aacha hai..... kehne ki zaroorat nahi padti....... lekin humne aapki aankhon mein abhi dekha hi nahi..... to behtar yahi hai ki ye baaten keh kar ki samjhi jaayen...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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18th January 2005, 04:45 PM
Bahuut hi pyra likha
Nigahe aapki, Pehechan hai hamari......... Muskurahat aapki, shaan hai hamari........... Karna hifajat tum apni, kyonki............ Saanse aapki JAAN hai hamari ISKE AGE LIKHNE KI GUSTAKHI KAR RAHE HAI Nigahe aapki pehchan hai humari, Bena apke duniya VIRAN hai humari. Juda ho to gaye hum apse par lagta hai Jindagi ab apke bina SHAMSHAAN hai humari KHILONA, |
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19th January 2005, 12:19 PM
hi, khilonaji..............
reply deneke liye bahot bahot bahot Shukriya.......... aapne aage jo likha hai.......... humein pasand hai....tnx for that............. bye............ tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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19th January 2005, 03:35 PM
Very very congrates for this shayri.
Aapka shayri mijaj or biodata donome bahot fark najar aata he, thoda aapka biodata thik karle. Awara pagal deewani. Bahot khob |
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20th January 2005, 01:18 PM
Wah, Kya baat ha, Humne Kaha aur Aapne sun liya.
Aise sunne wale log kam hote ha, Hamari baat pe gour karne ke liye Sukriya. Per usme Benefit aapka hi ha. Take care By frainds. |
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21st January 2005, 06:34 PM
hi,
irfan_sh_27 ji, reply deneke liye bahot bahot bahot Shukriya tnx so much.............. tune pyaar u sikhake Jindgi ho jindagi badal di....... **~ Aashi ~** |
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