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20th September 2004, 02:48 PM
NA-UMEEDI KE KATGHARO ME KHUD KO KHARAA PAATI HU..
LOG DARAATE HAI MUJHE AUR ME DARE JAATI HU... ASHKO KI SYAHI SE BHI DARD SYAH HOTA HI NAHI.. LABO PE AAHE.N THIRAKTI HAI AUR MUTAA'SSIF HO JAATI HU.. Mutaa'ssif = sorrowful JEENE KI LALAK DIN-P-DIN KHATAM HUI JAATI HAI.. LOW HU BUJHTE DEEPAK KI..HAWAO SE BHI GHABRAATI HU.. NA-UMEEDI KE................................PAATI HU.. LOG DARAATE HAI MUJHE AUR ME DAR JAATI HU.. LAKIRO KA KHEL BAN K REH GAYI HU KATHPUTLI SI.. BE-RABT ARMAANO KI CHITA BANK K JALI JAATI HU.. Be-rabt = unfulfilled VO GUNAH DEKHO JO MAINE KIYA HI NAHI.. DUBTI KASHTI HU FIR BHI AZAAB SAHE JATI HU.. Azaab = punishment KAISI LIKH DI 'UDAS' KI ZINDGI DEKHO... BIN SHAANO K DEKHO ARTHI PE SAZE JAATI HU.. NA-UMEEDI KE KATGHARO ME KHUD KO KHARAA PAATI HU.. LOG DARAATE HAI MUJHE AUR ME DAR JAATI HU... UDAS ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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Re: Bin Shaano K Dekho Arthi Pe Saze Jaati Hu.. -
20th September 2004, 03:44 PM
HI UDAAS JI
behad dard bhara magar dil ko choo lene wala kalaam likha hai aapne,,,har kalaam ke saath aap ka fan aur bhi nikharta jata hai,,magar itna dard??? bahoot dardbhara likha hai aapne,,,aisa lag raha hai jaise "dard"par "wah" keh kar koi gunaah kar raha hoon mein...yun to poori hi gazal khubsurat hai,,magar yeh aashar dil ko cheer gaye/.... NA-UMEEDI KE KATGHARO ME KHUD KO KHARAA PAATI HU.. LOG DARAATE HAI MUJHE AUR ME DARE JAATI HU... ASHKO KI SYAHI SE BHI DARD SYAH HOTA HI NAHI.. LABO PE AAHE.N THIRAKTI HAI AUR MUTAA'SSIF HO JAATI HU.. LAKIRO KA KHEL BAN K REH GAYI HU KATHPUTLI SI.. BE-RABT ARMAANO KI CHITA BANK K JALI JAATI HU.. VO GUNAH DEKHO JO MAINE KIYA HI NAHI.. DUBTI KASHTI HU FIR BHI AZAAB SAHE JATI HU.. hamari daad kubool kijiye,,,sada khush rahiye...apna khayal rakhiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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21st September 2004, 12:24 AM
udas ji
bohat accha likha hai aapne.... kuch kehte nahi ban raha .... tareef kabool kare raj bas raj hi raj |
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21st September 2004, 12:51 AM
NA-UMEEDI KE KATGHARO ME KHUD KO KHARAA PAATI HU..
LOG DARAATE HAI MUJHE AUR ME DARE JAATI HU... ASHKO KI SYAHI SE BHI DARD SYAH HOTA HI NAHI.. LABO PE AAHE.N THIRAKTI HAI AUR MUTAA'SSIF HO JAATI HU.. aur phir LAKIRO KA KHEL BAN K REH GAYI HU KATHPUTLI SI.. BE-RABT ARMAANO KI CHITA BANK K JALI JAATI HU.. Bahut khoob sunita ji...bas kya kahunn...aapki lafzon ke aage aansun kuch rukh na paaye... aur aire-gaire lafzon ko lekar mein is nazm ki gehraayi ko kam nahi karna chahta par baat bas itni hai HAR SITAM TERA LAGE AAB MUJHE ARMAAN SA DEKH AAPNI EK TALAB PAR KITNE GHAM UTHAATI HU Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa -aapka aapna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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21st September 2004, 03:13 AM
Didi...
Itna dard... itna dard.. ki bayaan bhi na kiya jaayega mujhse.. aapka likha jab bhi padhti hun.. usmein aur bhi dard paati hun.. koshish karti hun muskuraani ki.. par padh ke yeh sab.. aansoo na rok paati hun.. Jaanti hun kaafi kuch aapke baare mein.. phir bhi yehi sawaal khuda se.. aur aapse bhi.. kyun itna dard hai aapke andar? kyun itna dard mila hai aapko jeevan bhar? kyun kaanton ki raahein milti hain humesha aapko? Kya kabhi sachi sachi muskuraahat de paaongi chehre ke aapko? pata nahi.. par koshish zaroor rahegi.. Aap apna khayaal rakho didi.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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21st September 2004, 01:21 PM
Hi udas ji (urf s....... s..... s....a)
Ay udas, kyu chalak ta hai tere har kalam say udasi kay yeh alam? Kyu tere kalam say lagti hai yeh duniya berahm? Kyu in ashqo ko rok na paate hai hum? Udas ji. Bas is kalam nay to hume rula hi diya. Pura upar say nichay tak hila kay rakh diya. Bas dua kartay hai aap jaha bhi rahay khush rahay. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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21st September 2004, 01:55 PM
JEENE KI LALAK DIN-P-DIN KHATAM HUI JAATI HAI..
LOW HU BUJHTE DEEPAK KI..HAWAO SE BHI GHABRAATI HU.. LAKIRO KA KHEL BAN K REH GAYI HU KATHPUTLI SI.. BE-RABT ARMAANO KI CHITA BANK K JALI JAATI HU.. KAISI LIKH DI 'UDAS' KI ZINDGI DEKHO... BIN SHAANO K DEKHO ARTHI PE SAZE JAATI HU.. Di….kya kahoon…kitna dard hai issmein….aur uss dard ko kitni khoobi se alfaazon mein piroya hai aapne…..meri daad kabool kijiyega… Take care tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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Re: Re: Bin Shaano K Dekho Arthi Pe Saze Jaati Hu.. |
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Re: Re: Bin Shaano K Dekho Arthi Pe Saze Jaati Hu.. -
21st September 2004, 03:45 PM
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 baaki baat rahi fan k nikhar ki...to paras aur aap jaise guru ho mast jaiso ka saath ho..to kuchh to parenge na..kuchh to urdu juban ko seekhenge..nahi to aap hi kahoge...kaise nalayak shishye hai..  wah mat kariye...app aate rahiye...wah me khud keh lungi...anyways...thanx u jawab deker main kallam ki seriousness ko kam karne ki koshish kar rahi thi.. thanx aapko sab pasand aaya...thanx...u hi aa ker hamare kalaam ki shobha barate rahiye... urs-udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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21st September 2004, 03:47 PM
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bhai roz aaya kariye...aapka aana acchha lagta hai bhai... thanx aapko ye accha laga...beshak kuchh mat kahiye... thanx -----urs udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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21st September 2004, 03:52 PM
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aapko dekh yaha dekh kar ek geet yaad aa gaya.. dair hui....per vo aaye to....bhai mujhe pura nahi yaad aa raha.. bas mast ji...aap logo ka saath paaker ham is mukaam par pahunch paaye hai ki...hamara likha kuchh aapko aachha laga aur sabse jyada khushi ki baat to tab hoti hai jab aap meri post per aaker resp.dete hai..u lagta hai jaise andhe ko aankhe mil gayi ho... DEKH APNI EK TALAB PAR KITNE GAM UTHATI HU... Bahut khoob likha hai aapne...tareef to kya likhu bas yahi kahungi ki u jawab deker meri koshish ko aapne roshni de di... urs-udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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21st September 2004, 03:58 PM
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anyways..dekhte hai zor kitna bazue-dard me hai..dekhte hai..sehen kitna aur udas ki taqat me hai.. urs udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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21st September 2004, 04:01 PM
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ye teen lines bahut hi acchi lagi aapki...dil kar raha hai..diary kar le.. aapki tareef aur duae dono kabool dekho main has rahi hu.. udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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21st September 2004, 04:03 PM
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thanx roop...mera dil kehta hai..baar baar tumhe roop roop keh kar pukaro aur tum shayad mere saamne aa jao...kya aisa chamtkaar ho sakta hai...pls. mujhse milo na roop....ya mujhe bula lo...dilli jyada door nahi hai... tumhe ye likha pasand aaya...thanx ...tareef kabool urs-di.udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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21st September 2004, 06:11 PM
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sorry jara busy hun isliye net par nahi aa pati hun aaj kal .aaj kai dino baad aai to apki post par aai bhut hi acha likha hai apne. daad kubul karein. sakhi khyaal rakhnana apna ok शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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22nd September 2004, 02:30 PM
arey Di.....main bahut haiaran hui....ki koi mujhse milne ko itna aatur bhi ho skata hai...iss layak bhi nahin hoon main...khair aapko baad mein pm karoongi....abhi chalti hoon
take care tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon (NM) |
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22nd September 2004, 02:34 PM
sakhi meri pyari si guriya..
kaha.n busy ho gai meri guriya..jara ham bhi to jaane...anyways..chalo tumne yaha aaker apni attendance lagayi...dekho mere gam khushiyo me badal gaye....thanx tumhe ye kalaam acchha laga... pls. jara jaldi aaya karo...mana ki parne me busy ho...per tumare yaha aaye bina ghar me jaise koi kami si mehsoos hoti hai.. urs-udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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22nd September 2004, 02:44 PM
Meri pyari behna UDAS (urf s....... s..... s....a)
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Hoti hai jo tu Udas, Dil mera bhar aata hai. Chalak ta hai tera ek aasu Hazar maut yeh mujhe de jaata hai Khayal rakhiye Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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22nd September 2004, 02:50 PM
udas ji--^-- namaskar
sorry main aaj kal aap tak der se pahunchta hun... kya kare aap ek star ho yahan ki ... to bhai ek nacheez shrota ko aap tak pahunchne main samay to lagega hi na.... khair aapka kalam la jawab hai... phir se aapne apne shamseeri lafjo se kajag ka seena cheer diya hai... daad kabool kare... dilse ... //Sacccha_(¯¥¯)_Pyar---»(kunal) har dil main SACCHA_PYAR hota hai... phir chup ke kyun KUNAL tu rota hai ... |
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23rd September 2004, 03:06 PM
Salim Ji N Kunal ji..
thanx aapko ye kalaam bariya laga aur yaha aaker apna kimti vaqt aapne diya aur apni kalam ki roshni di...meri yahi kosish rehti hai ki aisa hi kuchh likhti rahu ki aapke dil me vo shabd sama jaye...aur mera bhi kuchh dard in shabdo me dhal kar bikhar jaye... thanx again udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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