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~~~Must Read...Wo Raat~~~~ -
17th August 2008, 08:02 PM
Doston aaj phir kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai......
shayad aap sab ko pasand aaye....galtiyon k liye maafi ka haqdaar hu.... Kaise guzri kayamat ki wo raat na pucho...... Tha unka mere haathon me haath na pucho....... Chal rahi thi dhadhkan par ruki hui thi saanse..... Madhoshi me hui wo karamaat na pucho....... Anzaane the wo,hum bhi the naadan se...... Kaise hue zaahir dono k zazbaat na pucho...... Chuu le unhe ya kare thoda intzaar...... Bekhud se ho gaye humare khyalaat na pucho...... Seene se lag kar pighlne lage the wo...... Unki nigaahon ne kiye kya kya sawalat na pucho...... Khuda ka raham tha ya tha mere ishq ka asar...... Kis tarah hui haasil ye saugaat na pucho...... Kaise guzri kayamat ki wo raat na pucho...... Tha unka mere haathon me haath na pucho..... |
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18th August 2008, 01:47 AM
Bahut khubsoorat tareekhey se bayaan kiya hai....
US RAAT HI KOI MAR JAYEN TOH ACCHA HAI |
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hey good shyri,,, -
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[hey u look emotional guy ,,,,shyri 4 u
guzri ghui zindgi ko kabhi yaad na kar, taqdeer mein ju likha hai uski fariyaad na kar,,jo likha hai uski faryaad na kar,jo hoga woh hoker rahega,,fikar mein tu apni hasi barbaad na kar |
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18th August 2008, 11:15 AM
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shukriya mehar..... takdeer dehne ki zarurat hi mehsus nahi hoti...... mere ishq ki lakeer jo dekhi hai unke haathon me....... |
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raj........hum kuch bhi nahi poochNge....  kyuNki yeh raaz ki baate.n poochni wali bhi nahi haiN  just kidding  bahut accha likha hai aapne....majja aa gaya padkar...yoon hi likhtey rahiye, kush rahiye. aapki diiii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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18th August 2008, 02:51 PM
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jaan se jyada woh mere jaan lagte hain......... bahat khoob Dr raj ......eheshash bahat achha hai ...........  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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18th August 2008, 03:11 PM
raj bhai kaafi siddat bhari dastan hai yeh isey yoon hi sabko nahin bataya karte
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18th August 2008, 06:04 PM
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shukriya sunita di...... waise bhi ya raaz ki baaten batayi nahi jati sirf mehsus hoti hai..... |
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18th August 2008, 06:06 PM
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aapka shukriya......humari mehfil ki shaan sirf aap hi k aaane se badh jati hai..... |
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18th August 2008, 06:08 PM
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bhaijaan...ye daastan sirf unhi ko samaj me aayegi jo ye samjte hai ki tadap kya hoti hai.....jaise aapko aa gayi na.... |
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18th August 2008, 06:10 PM
hi, raj bhai ,
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18th August 2008, 06:17 PM
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hum to bas ek eheshash hai jo tumne mehesush kiya apne dil main Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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18th August 2008, 06:37 PM
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aap taarif k kaabil hai ya nahi....ye faisla aap hume hi lene de....agar humara haq samjhe.... Zubaan to sirf ek zariya hai,bayanbaazi ka....... Ehsaas-e-alfaaz to dil se paida hote hai...... |
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19th August 2008, 12:35 AM
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Tu ne yun dekha hae jaisey kabi dekha he nehi tha Main toh DIL mein tere qadmoon k nishaan tak dekhun Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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19th August 2008, 11:33 AM
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Us k dil me mera basera ho jaye........ Yehi baahon ka ghar ab mera ho jaye...... Raat ko godd me uski sar rakhkar so jau main..... Jane kab raat guzre,aur kab savera ho jaye....... |
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19th August 2008, 05:15 PM
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Kehney pe jab hum aa jain gaey sari haqiqat keh dain gaey DIL tham k tum reh jao gaey , HUm ko woh fasana aata hae Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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20th August 2008, 01:33 PM
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Mere dil me sirf yehi takat baaki hai.... Aayegi tu nazar yehi rahat baaki hai..... Kisi aur se sunn ne ki khwahish nahi ab.... Tere hoontho se wo fasana sunn ne ki chahat baaki hai...... |
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24th August 2008, 02:48 AM
HI... app ki shayri buhat achi hai kia app proffesional hain yaa copy kar k likte hein plz answer me if this is persnal soo dont tell i never mind ....... shukriya
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25th August 2008, 07:38 PM
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Raj tabahi macha di hai yaar kya baat hai bohat bohat acha likha hai muje to parhte hue he maza aa raha tha bas ab kya bataon na pouch......... thx for sharing..apna khayal rakhna, |
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26th August 2008, 11:00 AM
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Shukriya mariya.... waise m doctor by profession,,,,,,but shayri likhne aur padhne ka shauk hai....copy nahi ki hai ji.... dil k ehsaas hai...alfaazon se beh gaye..... |
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26th August 2008, 11:04 AM
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itni taarif mat kariye bhaijaan...aaap humari shayri k liye time nikal lete hai...yehi humare liye bahut hai.... |
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26th August 2008, 01:35 PM
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Dil ne Aaj fir ik suhanaa khwaab dekha tujh ko mere saath shaad hote dekha Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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26th August 2008, 06:57 PM
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app itna acha likhen gy to hum ache comments he den gyna wayse be app ki shayri muje bohat passand ati hai apna khayal rakhna or ayse he likhte rahiye |
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27th August 2008, 07:49 PM
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Khwaabon me dekha karte hai wo chehra humara..... Kaash hume bhi neend aaye aur unka deedar ho jaye,....... |
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28th August 2008, 02:11 PM
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woh sirf khwabo ki tamanna kiye haqikat main hum unke samne the Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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28th August 2008, 08:02 PM
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Hadd se jyada jab unka intzaar ho gaya..... Aayenge wo nazar hume aitbaar ho gaya...... Chand lamhon k liye band hui thi ye aankhen..... Un lamhon me hi aaj unka deedar ho gaya..... |
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28th August 2008, 08:10 PM
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Mere dil ki yahi thi khwahish tujhe apna bana saku dard-e-dil ka haal suna saku tum ne kabhi dekha hi nahi meri taraf pyar se mauka mila hi nahi ki main dil ki baat tumhe bata saku Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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zawab haazir hai ji |
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28th August 2008, 08:26 PM
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Isi tarah pyar nibhaana hota hai.... Mauka milne ka intzaar nahi..... Pass aane ka bahaana hota hai..... |
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29th August 2008, 01:07 PM
aise hi shayer likhte raho
well done bhut acche |
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29th August 2008, 01:09 PM
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Kabhi din ki dhoop mein jhoom kar Kabhi shab k phoolon ko choom kar Yunhi saath saath chalein sada Kabhi khatam apna safar na ho Mere pass aa meray pass aa Zara or DIL k qareeb aa tujhey dharkaon ma basaon ma Ke bicharnay ka kabhi dar na ho..........nm Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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mar jaanwa~~~ |
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mar jaanwa~~~ -
29th August 2008, 03:52 PM
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Uski yaadon ne jab hume rula diya..... Hum rahe khamosh,par aankhon ne sab dikha diya.... Pucha jo humne kisi se uske ghar ka rasta..... Kambhakht humare hi dil ka pata bata diya..... |
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29th August 2008, 10:26 PM
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hum hain ik ujrrey sheher ki misal magar aankheen bata rahi hain k tum bhi veeraan ho Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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30th August 2008, 12:13 PM
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30th August 2008, 11:28 PM
Mere naseeb main tu nahin shayad Kyun khel aisa taqdeer ka hota hai Lakeerain nahin milti hain unse Jin se ye dil milta hai Dunya kehti hai Chand lamhon ka saath tha Ye dil jaanta hai Ye umr bhar ka ehsaas tha Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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31st August 2008, 01:00 PM
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Apni takdeer ko badal pana..........beshak insaan k bas ki baat nahi.... Par mere haatho me koi aur tasveeer bana de....in lakeeron ki bhi ye aukaat nahi.... |
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31st August 2008, 03:10 PM
Unhe pyar nahi humse to kya hua... Hum to bentaha mohobat karte hai... Pyar unko itna dena chahe ye dil par kambakt yeah halat sath chhod dete hai... Roz sochte hai kehde unko upna hale dil... par jo aanko ke zazbato ko na samje woh labzo ko kaha samajte hai.. Woh sochte hai kyu intezar hai hume unka... par woh kya jane usme kya maza hota hai Wohi to pyar hai mere dost jo tumse pyar na kare unhi se hume be-intaha pyar hota hai.... |
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31st August 2008, 07:14 PM
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Good work pooja ji....kaafi acche ehsaas hai....aaap bhi mehfil me shaamil ho jayiye....aur apne ehsaason ko humare saath share kariye.... yunhi likhte rahiye... |
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31st August 2008, 09:45 PM
Itni kashish hai us saks main uske yaad main khoi raheti hun yeh soch ke ki khwabo main aayega main din main bhi soti reheti hun Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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1st September 2008, 12:52 PM
Sapno me aana to aab unki aadat si ho gayi hai,
uhi nazare charana unki fitrat ho gayi hai, hum to kabhi unko mil nahi pate, par unko bhi yeah aarzoo nahi hoti hai, pyar itna bhi na karo kisi ko woh tumhari zaroorat ban jaye, kyu ki na ho woh hasrat puri to bohot chubhan hoti hai... |
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