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23rd May 2016, 11:36 AM
SDC ki Mahefil ko Ghazal ka salaam.... ek lambe arse baad maine kuch likha hai... jo aap sab ki nazar kar rahi hooN...
Hum sabhi ne aksar yeh chaha hai k hum jise chahte hai... unse hamare rishte ko koi naam mile ...benaam sa rishta koi nahi chahta... pr hum hamesha yeh bhool jaate hai k... naam dene se risteiN umr k daayre me bandh jaate hai... in ristoN ki umr tab tak hee hai jab tak hum inheN nibhate hai... Bina naam k rishteiN .... koi umr k mohtaaz nahi... dil k ahessas se yeh zinda rahete hai... ************************************************* KyuN aksar hum chahte hai ? .. K rishte ko koi Naam Mile Duniya ki nazaroN me ise bhi sanmaan mile … Hai mahaz yeh chahat ? Ya apne matalab ki koi baat Sochkar dekho zara tum bhi ise aaj …. Nibhaate hai aksar jo rishtoN ko hai naam diya Kitni dafa hum ne un rishtoN ko hai jiya? Jeene k liye rishteN… Koi naam ke mohtaaj nahi Benaam se rishteiN koi nayi si toh baat nahi.. Suraj ka roshni se… chand ka jo chandni se .. Aasmaan ka hai baadaloN se .. rista bhi kuch aisa hai Benaam hee hai yeh sabhi…. Par mahesus inhe karte hai KyuN fir aksar rishteiN ko naam dene ko marte hai.. Naam de kar rishta ek matalb se hee chalta hai rishteiN se judi ummidoN ka karwaa’ sa banta hai.. Bina naam k rishte ko jee k dekho ek baar Mahekega jeevan bhi jaise ho koi gulzaar…  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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23rd May 2016, 12:17 PM
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Daad qubool kijiye aur aise hee bazm ki raunak badhati rahiye....... Khush rahein.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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23rd May 2016, 01:31 PM
Khyal bahot hi umda h aapka... Bahot badhiya...
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24th May 2016, 10:41 AM
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bahot hi dil se likhaa hai aapne Purvi ji, isiliye ye kalaam bhi utnaa hi asar daar hai jitnaa ke aapke alfaaz...... sach kahiye to doob sa gaya tha main aapke ek ek lafz ki gahraai me aur un ehsaason me jo kaagaz me utne bayaan na ho sakejiyne us dil me rahe honge jisne ineh likhaa hai..... meri taraf se bahut saari daad aur mubaarakbaad aapke is pahal ke liye.... barbas hi khichaa chala aaya aapke is title ko padhte hi.. kyonki iske peeeche bhi koi baat hai..... waqt mile to is link ko dekhiegaa..... http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=72412 shukriyaa Shaad.... |
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24th May 2016, 11:54 AM
......sach kahun...shaad ki tarah meri nazar bhi aapke kalaam ke title par atak gayi thi....
 ..zaruur dekhiyega ye link...अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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24th May 2016, 01:01 PM
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Shaad Sahab... sab se pahele toh meri kalam padhne aur use sarhaaNe k liye main aap ki tah-e-dil se shukra guzaar hoon... Mujhe behad khushi ho rahi hai k SDC par kuch puraane dost abhi bhi maujood hai jinko mere parichay ki zarurat nahi hai... aap ki yeh post main zaroor padhungi... maufi chahti hoon k itni puraani post padhne k liye aap ko mujhe batana pad raha hai... yeh yakinan mera hee gairfaida hai ka itne saal tak main yahan se gayab rahi... Aage koshish yahi karti rahungi k aisi galati dobaara na ho..~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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1st June 2016, 05:29 PM
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Meri chhoti si koshish ko padhne aur pasand karne ka bahot bahot shukriya Khush raheN.. Purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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1st June 2016, 11:41 PM
buhet achaa likhaa hey aap ney purvi ji vaah likhti rahe |
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2nd June 2016, 10:25 AM
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meri kalam ko pasand krne ka bahot bahot shukriya Purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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1st July 2016, 10:48 PM
Bohut achi koshish purvi ji
Aaise hi likhti rahiye... Sarika |
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2nd July 2016, 03:43 PM
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Bahut khoob Purvi jee.......................................... Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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