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Aamaj kya koi naathi kai pan lakhay che -
21st January 2009, 12:24 PM
mara wachak mitro ne nihar na jay shree krishna tatha jay jala ram, aaje fari tamari samax kaik navu laine aavvani koshish kari che umeed karu chu ke tamo ne aa koshish mari pehlao ni koshish karta thodik wadhare gamshe. tamara amulya abhipray ni raah taakto tamaro mitra nihar.
Aamaj kya koi naathi kai pan lakhay che Rove che man pan aashu kya dekhay che Lakho game tetlu chopada o bhari bhari ne Aksharo ma kya maru astitwa wanchay che Suraj pan male che chand ne grahaan samay Mara thi tamaro chehro pan kya jowaay che Have to tarasya aame tuj ne Nihar waa mate Joya ta tamne, mirgjal samo aabhas thay che Lakhiu nathi kai te chata badhu lakhi nakhiyu Spast kahi nakhiyu toy tamne kya samjaay che Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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21st January 2009, 01:43 PM
Khub khuh sundar rachana chhe....Nihar...
Malvane ene man banyu chhe bavru.. jena thaki aaj-kal aa duniya dekhay chhe.... Ghazal...  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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21st January 2009, 01:44 PM
Pujnara e pujya chhe patthar etla Devta..
Man ma hoy Visvass to Band aankhe, prabhu dekhay chhe....  Ghazal ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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18th August 2009, 12:48 PM
wah wah didi tamari be lino e to mari rachna ma tarla uumeri didha
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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23rd August 2009, 11:43 AM
wow. nice liines and specially the extensions
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