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23rd September 2014, 05:10 PM
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sahi waqt par sahi sher...kya kehne Aadeil bhai aapke  ki koshish uski yaadeN mahv ho jaye, esi koshish meiN dil dukhaya bahut..! aadeil bhai...kya yeh sher sahi bana hai ? .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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24th September 2014, 10:10 AM
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pataa nahiN sab kahaaN khoye haiN....  aur aapke sher kii baat kare toh....... waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh.................. bilkul sahi bayaanii huii hai................ koii bhii aeb nahiN hai, iis sher meN (mere hisaab se). dheroN dheroN daad iis sher per.............. ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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24th September 2014, 10:38 AM
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lagta hai aap sabko pad pad kar ham b thoda bahut seekh hi jayeNge  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th September 2014, 11:21 AM
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yakin maaniye, aap bahot achchhaa likhtii haiN.... yuN hi likhtii rahiye, khush rahiye, aabaad rahiye.... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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24th September 2014, 12:18 PM
ek buzurg keh gaye kabhii film meN
itnaa sannaataa kyuN hai mere bhai?  mahv hai sab magar hai kiis baat pe aaj phir ye savaal meri zehn meN  itnaa sannaataa kyuN hai mere bhai? ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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26th October 2014, 03:48 AM
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to chaliye! is koshish ka phir se ek naya aaghaaz kar ke dekhte hain! Main jald hi ek naya lafz le kar haazir hounga. Let's see the response and take it from there. Duaon ke saath Zarraa mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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26th October 2014, 08:46 PM
doston ... aadaab .... pichhle kuchh hafton se is bazm-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz mein aap ko alfaaz ki kami zaroor mehsoos ho rahi hogi. magar ummeed hai is ka fusoon shayad kuchh had tak abhi bhi baaki hoga
isi ummeed par is silsile ka phir se aaghaaz kar raha hoon ... is baar ek seedha sachcha pyaara maasoom sa lafz pesh hai ... is baar ka lafz hai ....... NIK'HAT ya NAK'HAT ..... which means FRAGRANCE or PERFUME ... ya KHUSHBOO ye lafz zindagi se badi khoobsurti se juda hua hai ... kudrat, mohabbat, husn aur saare aalam se waasta hai is lafz ka ! hamaare chaaron taraf is lafz ka jaadoo mehekta hua dikhaayee deta hai ye lafz shayari mein badi khoobsurat andaaz mein dekhne ko milta hai ... romantic andaaz mein ya philosophical andaaz mein ... ek alag hi ada, nazaakat, khoobsurti, maasoomiyat mehsoos hoti hai jab ye lafz kisi haseen sher ko sajaata hai. lafz "nik'hat" / "nak'hat" ki taqti mere hisaab se hai 22. any other opinion is most welcome. is baar hum is lafz ko apni shayari mein istemaal kar ke is lafz se jude ehsaasaat aur jazbaat ka lutf uthaayenge aur saath hi shiddat se mashq-e-sukhan bhi karenge. aap "nik'hateiN" / "nik'hatoN" ka bhi istemaal kar sakte hain. chaliye ab dekhte hain is lafz par ustaad shaayar ke kuchh khoobsurat aashaar ... wahi ik baat hai jo yaaN nafas waaN nik'hat-e-gul hai chaman ka jalwa baais hai meri raNgeeN-nawaayee ka - ghalib jo koyee sun sake to nik'hat-e-gul shikast-e-raNg ki jhankaar bhi hai - jigar moradabadi nik'hat-e-zulf-e-pareeshaaN daaataan-e-raaz-e-gham sub'h hone tak isee andaaz ki baateiN karo - firaq gorakhpuri nik'hat-e-yaar se aabaad hai har kunj-e-qafas mil ke aayee hai saba is gul-e-tar se pehle - makhdoom tere neele samandar ke toofaan aur qahqahe tere dilkash mazaafaat ki sabzah-zaaroN ki khaamoshiyaaN raNgateiN nik'hateiN sab mujhe jaantee haiN - ali sardar jafri ki nazm "bambai" se bardh gaya is rut meiN shayad nik'hatoN ka aitebaar din ke aaNgan meiN lubhaaye raat ki raani mujhe - qaasir kyunki hum is koshish ka ek naya aaghaaz kar rahe hain is liye is dafa waqt is lafz par thoda ziyada waqt bitaayenge .. lafz "nik'hat" par ghaur karne ka silsila agle 12 dinon tak jaaree rakkhenge, yaani 7th Nov midnight (India time) ya 6:30 PM GMT tak. to chaliye, intezaar kis baat hai? lafz "nik'hat" ki nik'haton mein kho jaane ka silsila shuru karte hain duaon ke saath zarraa mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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28th October 2014, 01:56 AM
jab urhaatee hai gesuoN ko hawaa
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28th October 2014, 12:56 PM
nak'hat-e-gul rahe na rahe KHaar to haiN yahaaN
KHizaaN bhii kya puraane hisaab le ke baiTH gayii ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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28th October 2014, 01:26 PM
mere dil meN khuuN na rahaa na nik'hat-e-naaz* rahii na sadaa-e-ghum
hai magar ye ziist-fasaane** aaj mere gavaah jo KHalish*** ke haiN (*fragrance of love; **life story; ***pain/wound) ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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28th October 2014, 01:27 PM
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dheroN daad !!mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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28th October 2014, 01:44 PM
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kya aaghaaz kiya hai.............. bahot khub......... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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28th October 2014, 04:42 PM
gul-e-nak.hat jahaaN gulaab rahaa
gesuuoN meN vo hii savaab rahaa ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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28th October 2014, 04:58 PM
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Wahhhh...kya baat hai................ .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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29th October 2014, 08:54 AM
wwaaah kya khoobsurata lafz ka intekhaab kiyaa hai aapne zarraa saahab .... waahh kya kahne...
aur aadeil bhai aapne jo apne aashar se is mahfil ko sajaaya hai uske baare me kyaa kahun... bahot bahot mubaarakbaad aap dono ko.... aate rahiye |
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29th October 2014, 09:27 AM
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mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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29th October 2014, 09:29 AM
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Waise aap ke sher ka bhi intezaar rahega mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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29th October 2014, 11:10 PM
apni nazm "raat bhar" ka ek tukda pesh kar raha hoon ...
kis ke hone ka ehsaas hota hai ye kis ko aawaaz deteeN haiN tanhaaiyaaN kis ke qadmoN ki aahat sunaayee si de kaNpkapaatee si kis ki ye sargoshiyaaN nak'hat-e-zulf kis ki hawa meiN urhe kaun haule se hai uNgliyoN se chhuwe paas kya door bhi tum naheeN ab rahe ho raha phir hamaare ye kya darmiyaaN raat bhar thandi thandi hawa jo chali ... mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
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30th October 2014, 11:04 AM
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ummdaah bahot shaandaar ppeshhkash Zarraa saahab.. waahh kyaa kahne..... likhte rahiye Shaad.... |
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30th October 2014, 11:27 AM
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Zarraa saab, iis nazm ne toh iis bazm meN nak-hat failaa dii..... yuN hii kuchh gauhar-e-yaktaa pesh karte rahiye..... duaaoN ke saath ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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1st November 2014, 05:28 PM
Namaskaar mere pyaare classmates and urdu guru Zarra ji
bohut dino baat aayi hun lekin yeh dekh kr khushi hui ki iss mehfil mein abhi bhi raunak hai. haan mere kuch pyaare dost nahi hain lekin show must go on ki tarz par hum phir bhi dua karenge ki humari chaheti Shayri.com humesha khoobsoorat kalaamon se saji rahe aur jo panchi aashiyana chod kar udd gaye woh bhi apne ghar wapas aa jaaien. ek choti si koshish main bhi karna chahungi, kuch galti ho to theek kar dijiyega. Nak.hat e yaar se mehki hui thi bazm meri Jane kyun zulmaton mein mahv hui khushiyaan meri Apki dost Sarika Sarika |
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1st November 2014, 08:41 PM
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main bhi aapke saath yahi duaa karunga sarika ji...... aur dusri baat ke ye mahfil ham sab se hi roshan hai.. aur ummeed karta hooon ke aage bhi ye sadaa roshan rahe.... aapka sher kamaal ka rahaa..... seedha dil tak utartaa chalaa gayaa... bahot khoob ... likhti rahen Shaad... |
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1st November 2014, 11:21 PM
dosto yeh mehfil aap jaise umda shayroN se haseen banti hai, aap sab bahut accha likhte hai, aap sabko padkar dil khush ho jata hai.... !
Zarra ji, aapka behad shukriya jo aapne yeh thread banaya hua hai .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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3rd November 2014, 01:13 PM
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Sarikaji, bahot umda sher..... dehorN daad ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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3rd November 2014, 01:14 PM
baatoN se nak-hat bhii aayii Gum mahakne bhii lage
phuloN ne kisse sunaaye zaKHm bharne bhii lage ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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5th November 2014, 06:46 AM
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6th November 2014, 12:02 PM
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6th November 2014, 08:28 PM
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6th November 2014, 08:29 PM
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6th November 2014, 08:32 PM
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7th November 2014, 07:50 AM
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aap ki nazm "raat bhar" kaa yeh band pasand aayaa,Zarraa saahab! kyaa yeh puurii nazm aap yahaaN pesh kar ke hameN shukriyaa kaa mauqaa 'inaayat kereNge, baRii navaazish hogi. ~B.G.M. ================================ |
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7th November 2014, 10:04 AM
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bajaa farmaaya aapne zarraa saahab...... mahfil ko roshan rakhne ka jimmaa ham sab par baraabar ka hai.... main guzaarish karunga aapse , aadeil bhai aur baaki sabhi membbraa se ke fir se bazm ko roshan karne ka mauqa naseeb kareN..... tashreef laate rahiye... mujhe ummeed hai fir se ye bazm chamak uthegii.... nawaazish Shaad.. |
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7th November 2014, 10:54 AM
Zarra ji...maine bahut baar koshish ki Nak-hat par sher likhne ki, baar baar likh kar mitati rhi maiN, par sher sahi nahi lag rha tha...muje yeh lafz bahut mushkil sa lga
 thoda easy lafz dijiye agli baar taaki ham bhi kuch likh sake......Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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7th November 2014, 11:10 PM
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Sdc par ye mera pasandida thread hai aur iski ek bohut badi wajah aap hain, aapse bohut seekhne ko milta hai aur apki saafgoi mujhe bohut achi lagti hai. Yunhi humein sikhate rahiye. Ek choti si koshish aur, aap sab bezhizhak ismein nuks bataiye mujhe acha lagega. Nikhat.e.jaana se mehakti hain saanse meri Mujhe ab gul.o.gulistaan ki zaroorat he nahi Sarika |
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7th November 2014, 11:23 PM
Bahut sochaa ki is mehfil mein shirkat karuuN par itne umda sher dekhkar himmat nahi kar paaya..
aapke yeh lafz behad dilchasp hai bhai isliyee ek adnaa si gustakhi ke saath haazir hooN... guzar gaya tha main teri gali se *bad-bakht aye humdum nik'hat-e-yaar ne *makhmoor ko phir se bulaa liya bad-bakht = unfortunate makhmoor = intoxicated Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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7th November 2014, 11:26 PM
Shukriya shaad ji and adil ji.
Aap humesha mera housla badaate rehte hain, jo mujhe bohut acha lagta hai..�� Sarika |
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8th November 2014, 07:57 AM
do she'r lafz -nik'hat- par kabhii jo nik'hat-e-zulf-e-nigaar aa'ii hai fazaa-e-murdah-e-dil meN bahaar aa'ii hai ~Kausar Niyaazi ---------------------------------------------------- ab tak to nuur-o-nik'hat-o-rang-o-sadaa kahuuN maiN tujh ko Chhuu sakuuN to Khudaa jaane kyaa kahuuN ! ~Ahmad Nadeem Kaasmi ================================================= |
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9th November 2014, 02:58 AM
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B.G.M saahab, aadaab Zarraa bhai ki jo nazm aapne talab ki hai voh aapki khidmat meiN haazir hai raat bhar thandi thandi hawa jo chalee soz-e-gham se charaaghaaN ye dil ho utha lab pe aane lagee khud-ba-khud tishnagee koyee naghma bhi hothoN pe khulne laga kis qadar ghaibat-e-yaar khalne lagee (soz = burning, ghaibat = absence) yaad aaye puraane naye kuchh rafeeq haadse kuchh puraane bhi yaad aa gaye kuchh nayee ranjishoN ke naye waaqye ab shikaayat bhi kis se kahaaN tak kareiN jab puraane hoN khanjar naye haathoN meiN dhooNdhtee reh gayeeN aaNkheiN chehra shafeeq (rafeeq = companions, shafeeq = compassionate) kis ke hone ka ehsaas hota hai ye kis ko deti hai aawaaz tanhaaiyaaN kis ke qadmoN ki aahat sunaayee si de kaNpkapaatee si kis ki ye sargoshiyaaN nak’hat-e-zulf kis ki hawa meiN urhe kaun haule se hai uNgliyoN se chhuwe paas kya door bhi tum naheeN ab rahe ho raha phir hamaare ye kya darmiyaaN (sargoshiyaaN = whisperings, nak’hat = fragrance) ZARRAA is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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