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7th December 2007, 08:55 PM
Har Koyi Pyar Ke Liye Tarapta Hai…
Har Koyi Pyar Ke Liye Rota Hai….
Mere Pyar Ko Galat Mat Samajh Na….
Ek pal ki ye baat nahi,
Do pal ka ye sath nahi
Waise to zindagi ek safar sa ban gayi hai mere liye
Par wo safar hi kya jisme tum saath nahi…..
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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7th December 2007, 09:42 PM
Hi Dinesh,
Good to see your post... Accha likha hai tumne... aage bhi aise hi likhte rehna aur sabke saath share karte rehna...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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8th December 2007, 02:44 PM
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Har Koyi Pyar Ke Liye Tarapta Hai…
Har Koyi Pyar Ke Liye Rota Hai….
Mere Pyar Ko Galat Mat Samajh Na….
Ek pal ki ye baat nahi,
Do pal ka ye sath nahi
Waise to zindagi ek safar sa ban gayi hai mere liye
Par wo safar hi kya jisme tum saath nahi…..
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Very nice, Dinesh Ji...!
Eisse hi likha karein, ok...?
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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8th December 2007, 06:35 PM
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10th December 2007, 12:08 PM
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Hi Dinesh,
Good to see your post... Accha likha hai tumne... aage bhi aise hi likhte rehna aur sabke saath share karte rehna...
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haan bhai agar apki dua aise hi humare sath bani rahegi to inse bhi aur acha likh payege.
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10th December 2007, 12:11 PM
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Very nice, Dinesh Ji...!
Eisse hi likha karein, ok...?
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thanks yaar
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10th December 2007, 12:15 PM
Hota kaise unhe gam Hamari ruswai ka
jab ferk pada hi nahi use humari juday ka
khamoshi se saha jab humne har dard
to ilzaam laga diya hum per bewfai ka
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15th December 2007, 08:30 PM
Mayoos mat hona ye ek gunah hota hai
Milta wahi hai jo kismat main likha hota hai
Har cheez miley humre ye zaroori to nahi
Kuch cheezon ka zikar doosre jahan main bhi hota hai
Jo khud ko koste hain woh shayed bekhabar hain
Kuch pa lene ka intzaar khud pe bhi hota hai
Har ek ko bewafa -e-ilzam kyun thehraye hum
hamare samne bhi to ek aayena hota hai
Hum apni zindagi se kyu haar jayein
agar doobta hai suraj to dubne do kal bhi ujala hota hai
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15th December 2007, 10:23 PM
Sabhi ko kuchhnahi milta,
Nadi ki har lehar ko sahil nahi milta,
ye dil walo ki duniya hai dost,
kisi ko dil nahi milta , to koi dil se nahi milta
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16th December 2007, 04:33 PM
sahi kaha bhai aapne
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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16th December 2007, 04:39 PM
Jisko bhi chaho who bewafa ho jata hai
Sir agar jukavo to sanam khuda ho jata hai
Jab tak kaam aate raho, hum safar kehlata raho,
Kaam nikal jane ke baad hum safar, koi doosra ho jata hai,
Gum nahi tha kabhi humko zamaane ki ruswaayo ka
Taklif hoti hai jab koi apna khafa ho jaata hai,
Dil ki khalish akshar jaan leva ho jati hai lekin
Dard –e dil ek had ke baad dard –e dawa ho jati hai,
Hara bhara hai gulshan ye yaar,ye bahar ke din hai,
Khizen aane per dekho ek ek patta kaise juda ho jata hai,
Yehi suchai hai hakikat hai,yahi dastoor ye- zindagi hai,
Kuch der milte hai humrahi,phir har koi tanha ho jata hai,
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18th December 2007, 09:47 PM
Khuda bhi na jaane kaise kaise rishte banaa deta hai, Jin ko hum kabhi jaante bhi nahi the...
Unko jaan se bhi pyaara bana deta hai...
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24th December 2007, 08:13 PM
hum ne pyaar kiya tha tumse
tum dil tod doge pata nahi tha
kiya tha bharosa sirf tumpe hi
tum hamara bharosa to d jaoge pata nahi tha
hame to aas thi aapki dosti ki
par tum dushmani kar jaoge pata nahi tha
main to sirf tumko hi chahta tha dil se
tum bhi kisi ko chahoge dil se pata nahi tha
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dinesh je -
28th December 2007, 01:30 PM
hello dinesh je appke sabh nazme apddi bhot achi laggi aise hi likhte rehna
Tanhai hai pyar
mein,
barbadi hai pyar mein,
aasu hai pyar mein,
bebasi hai pyar mein,
gum bhi hai pyar mein,
haar bhi hai pyar mein,
hamein sab pata hai
lekin kya kare hum bhi hai pyar mein.
kaisa lagga dost
bename se hoghe hai hum
bename hai hamari zindghi
koi to hume koi name de do
varna bename si mout ho jaeghi hamari
Main Ne Poocha
Keh...
Zindagi kya hai???
Hanss Parray PHOOL
Ro Parri Shabnam !!!
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28th December 2007, 05:46 PM
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hello dinesh je appke sabh nazme apddi bhot achi laggi aise hi likhte rehna
Tanhai hai pyar
mein,
barbadi hai pyar mein,
aasu hai pyar mein,
bebasi hai pyar mein,
gum bhi hai pyar mein,
haar bhi hai pyar mein,
hamein sab pata hai
lekin kya kare hum bhi hai pyar mein.
kaisa lagga dost
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hi dost bahut acha hai laga apka jawab sunkar me yahi dua karta hu app hume aise hi reply karte rahiye aur humse bhi kahi acha likhe app. bhagvaan kabhi apko aisa moka na jab app pareshan ho aur apki pareshan du na ho.
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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28th December 2007, 05:59 PM
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hi dost bahut acha hai laga apka jawab sunkar me yahi dua karta hu app hume aise hi reply karte rahiye aur humse bhi kahi acha likhe app. bhagvaan kabhi apko aisa moka na jab app pareshan ho aur apki pareshan du na ho.
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aisi kabhi koi dua na karna jo puri hune ki umid bhi na ho
hamara kabhi intzar mat karna jo huna munkin na ho
bename se hoghe hai hum
bename hai hamari zindghi
koi to hume koi name de do
varna bename si mout ho jaeghi hamari
Main Ne Poocha
Keh...
Zindagi kya hai???
Hanss Parray PHOOL
Ro Parri Shabnam !!!
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28th December 2007, 11:26 PM
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aisi kabhi koi dua na karna jo puri hune ki umid bhi na ho
hamara kabhi intzar mat karna jo huna munkin na ho
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mandir mein dua mangi hea
khuda kare tume lag jae
tum hamari jindgi jeo
tumari mot hame lag jae
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29th December 2007, 12:28 AM
bahut khub DINESH...........acha likha hai...uhi likhte rehna..........
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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29th December 2007, 12:33 AM
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bahut khub DINESH...........acha likha hai...uhi likhte rehna..........
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thanks lamha ji acha laga bahut ke apne humari baat ko samja
Apne hisse ki zindagi to hum jee chuke Ab to bas dhadkano ka lihaz karte hain Kya kahein duniya waalo ko jo Aakhri saans par bhi aitraaz karte hain
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1st January 2008, 10:52 PM
Wo Keh Ke Chali Itni Mulaqat Bahut Hai
Main Ne Kaha Ruk Jao Abhi Raat Bahut Hai
Aansoo Mere Thum Jaye To Phir Shouk Se chale Jana
Aise Main Kahan Javogi Barsaat Bahut Hai
Wo Keh Nay Lagi Jana Mera Bahut Zaruri Hai
Nahi Chahta Dil Todna Tumhara, Per Majburi Hai
AGar Huyi Ho Koi Khata To Maaf Ker Dena
Main Ney Kaha Ho javo Chup , Itni Kahi Baat Bahut Hai
Samajh Gaya Hoon Sab, Aur Kuch Kaho Zaruri Nahi
Bas Aaj Ki Raat Ruk Jao, Jana Itna Bhi Zaruri Nahi
Phir Kabhi Na Aavonga Tumhari Zindagi Mein Lout Ke
Sari Zindagi Tanhayee Ke Liye Aaj Ki Raat Bahut Hay
Tum phir bhi na ruke, palat ke na dekha, chal hi diye
Hamare jeene ke liye tumhari vo yaadein bahut hain
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2nd January 2008, 06:03 PM
buhat acha likha hai dinesh ji.
wese ap tu itne ashaar likhte hain ke kiya kehne hain apke...!
sach main tu heran hoti hoon ke apko itna kuch yaad kese rehta hai?
kiyonke mere post par bhi app reply main stanza hi likhte hain
good Luck
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2nd January 2008, 07:08 PM
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buhat acha likha hai dinesh ji.
wese ap tu itne ashaar likhte hain ke kiya kehne hain apke...!
sach main tu heran hoti hoon ke apko itna kuch yaad kese rehta hai?
kiyonke mere post par bhi app reply main stanza hi likhte hain
good Luck
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thanks neha ji apne humari chhoti si post dekhi aur reply kiya
neha ji isme yaad kuch bhi nahi hota hai bus aisa likhne me apne mann ka sath hona jaruri hai jo bhi dil me aata hai vo bayan kar dete ha. aur lafz thoda sath deti hai bus aise likh dete hai sab isme yaar kuch bhi nahi hota hai nahi kuch yaad karna padta hai
kehte hai na kuch log aise hote hai jo bahut kuch bolkar bhi kuch nahi kehte hai aur kuch log aise hote hai jo chup rehkar bhi bahut kuch kehte hai.
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22nd January 2008, 01:06 PM
............... Ek pal ki ye baat nahi,
Do pal ka ye sath nahi.................
Sirf yeh do lines Saari kAhani Keh jaati hain ...... Bahutttttt Pyaara Kalam HAi .....
Bus Rona Agaya .... Likte rahiyea ....
luking forward for more frm ur side ......
GOD BLESS U >>>>>> ALLAH HAFIZ
'Tears are words the heart cant say'
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22nd January 2008, 04:21 PM
true said dinesh
god bless you with true love
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23rd January 2008, 03:41 PM
"thanks neha ji apne humari chhoti si post dekhi aur reply kiya
neha ji isme yaad kuch bhi nahi hota hai bus aisa likhne me apne mann ka sath hona jaruri hai jo bhi dil me aata hai vo bayan kar dete ha. aur lafz thoda sath deti hai bus aise likh dete hai sab isme yaar kuch bhi nahi hota hai nahi kuch yaad karna padta hai
kehte hai na kuch log aise hote hai jo bahut kuch bolkar bhi kuch nahi kehte hai aur kuch log aise hote hai jo chup rehkar bhi bahut kuch kehte hai."
hi dinesh.
kafi gehri bateen karte hain ap...!
any ways
keep writting
bye
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25th January 2008, 11:55 AM
vo aansoo kaha se lavu jo kab ke gir chuke hai,
vo yaade kaha se lavu jo kabke beet chuke hai,
vo dard kaha se lavu jo kab ke seh chuke hai,
vo pyar kaha se lavu jo kab ke kisi aur ke ho chuke hai,
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vo aansoo kaha se lavu jo kab ke gir chuke hai,
vo yaade kaha se lavu jo kabke beet chuke hai,
vo dard kaha se lavu jo kab ke seh chuke hai,
vo pyar kaha se lavu jo kab ke kisi aur ke ho chuke hai,
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hi dinesh....
hope u will be ok
take care n bye
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28th January 2008, 10:11 PM
Yeh din to kat jaata hai yun hi,
Yeh raat kambakht jaati hi nahi,
Roz tumse milnay ki tamanna hoti hai
Par woh ghadi kambakht aati hi nahi,
Har din marte hain tumse milay bina,
Aur maut kambakht aati hi nahi......
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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