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12th October 2009, 08:05 AM
Salaam doston...........
 kayi dino se aap sabhi mujhe kahte the ki kuch ishq par likho, dard par aur nahi. main kaheti thi ye mere bas mein nahi. par aaj aap sabhi ke encouragement ko dekhte hue kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai...shayad pasand aaye. agar achcha na lage toh maaf kijiyega ye soch kar ki abhi main seekh rahi hun aur ishq se pyara mujhe dard hai. toh lijiyen hazhir hai meri chhoti si koshish.... woh kahete hai tujhe itna pyaar dunga chaahte aaye dilbar beshumaar dunga main boli ki ujdi hai meri yeh zindagi woh bole teri zindagi ko sawaar dunga kaha maine mumkin nahi muskurana toh bole har khushi tujh pe vaar dunga tadapoge sang mere kyu samajhte nahi kaha tadap kar bhi tujhe qaraar dunga na chhodi zid maine kaha tum chale jao bole zindagi tere dar par guzaar dunga bharosa karu tujh par kya maine jo pucha kaha usne teri yakin par zindagi haar dunga _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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12th October 2009, 09:28 AM
na chhodi zid maine kaha tum chale jao
bole zindagi tere dar par guzaar dunga bharosa karu tujh par kya maine jo pucha kaha usne teri yakin par zindagi haar dunga Pari Jii,, Kia baat hai Janab....... Aap ki yeh ISHQ se bharpooor ghazal mujhe boht achi lagi..... Khas kar ke oper quote kiye shair dil ko chu gaye,,, Aisay hi pyar bhari shayri karti rahien.... Apna khiyaal rakhiye,, GOD BLESS YOU,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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12th October 2009, 09:43 AM
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dil se daad....kabul kare... aur apna khayal rakhiyega... duaaon ke saath  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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12th October 2009, 09:55 AM
Oye SoNiye.........
Ki gal hai ? .. Tussi ek dam romentic mood meiN. Pari agar tum dil se kuch likhna chaho to na-mumkin kuch bhi nahi... ab dekh lo tumhari yeh ghazal hee.............. mashallah................... are yaar dard thread par jab 2 ghazal post karo kam se kam 1 ghazal Ishq par bhi karo............... Ummid karti hoon bahot jald ek aur Ishq ke rango.N se bhari ghazal padhne milegi Tumhari Dost  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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12th October 2009, 09:59 AM
hmmmm........PARI
tum to chupi rustam nilki  tum to kahti thi, main ishq par nahi likha sakti.....areee agar ishq par likhna abhi seekh rahi to  to ab khair nahi ishq ki  ab to hume bahut umda, pyar bhare ahsaas, jo dil ko be-qaraar kar jayeN padne ko mileyNge muje behad acche lage ahsaas aur pyar par bharosa ho to aisa ho. muje tum mil gaye hum dum, sahara ho to aisa ho, jidhar dekhuN udhar tum ho, nazara ho to aisa ho. yeh 2 sher to dil ke khaas kareeb rahe na chhodi zid maine kaha tum chale jao bole zindagi tere dar par guzaar dunga bharosa karu tujh par kya maine jo pucha kaha usne teri yakin par zindagi haar dunga pyar bhare ahsaaso.n par kush kar hume tumhe reps +++ de rahe haiN, kabool kijiye Dear abhi points add nahi ho rahe...par mileNge jaroor, pending rahe meri taraf .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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12th October 2009, 10:14 AM
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12th October 2009, 03:57 PM
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kul mila kar ye meri dusri post hai ishq par kamiyan toh zarur hai aap ne fir bhi issay pasand kiya....shukrguzar hun aap ki take care Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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14th October 2009, 08:18 AM
woh kahete hai tujhe itna pyaar dunga
chaahte aaye dilbar beshumaar dunga main boli ki ujdi hai meri yeh zindagi woh bole teri zindagi ko sawaar dunga kaha maine mumkin nahi muskurana toh bole har khushi tujh pe vaar dunga tadapoge sang mere kyu samajhte nahi kaha tadap kar bhi tujhe qaraar dunga na chhodi zid maine kaha tum chale jao bole zindagi tere dar par guzaar dunga bharosa karu tujh par kya maine jo pucha kaha usne teri yakin par zindagi haar dunga[/QUOTE] woh kahete hai tujhe itna pyaar dunga chaahte aaye dilbar beshumaar dunga pari dear..2nd line ka meaning mujhe kuch clear nahi hua.. ya mere samjhne me kami ho sakti.. but really mujhe samjh nahi aaya is line ka meaning...  plzz clear kijiye...main boli ki ujdi hai meri yeh zindagi woh bole teri zindagi ko sawaar dunga kaha maine mumkin nahi muskurana toh bole har khushi tujh pe vaar dunga tadapoge sang mere kyu samajhte nahi kaha tadap kar bhi tujhe qaraar dunga na chhodi zid maine kaha tum chale jao bole zindagi tere dar par guzaar dunga baaki saari ghazal ke ehsaas laajawaab hain..har sher poora or masoom laga jaise koi sacha pyar karne wala kisi duniya ke sitmo se sataya hua ho or apne aap hi ek image aanhon ke samne dodne lagti hai ummid hai apse or bhi aisi hi romantic ghazal padhne ko milengi... ummid hai aapko meri koi baat buri na lagi ho.. agar lagi hai to sorry... aap khush rahein... urs frnd vicky = |
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14th October 2009, 03:39 PM
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Naresh ji.....Namaste...kahena padega ki aap meri koi bhi thread par comment karna nahi bhulte...iske liye main aap ki tah-e-dil se shukrguzaar hu...saath banaye rakhiyen....aap ki nayi ghazal ki intezaar rahegi hume Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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16th October 2009, 02:27 PM
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areah dost.......kya kahu main?! aap ki guzarish sun sun kar socha chalo kuch likh hi leti hun...shayad pasand aa jaye achcha laga aap ki comments padh kar ab aur kya kahu bas samajh lo tussi... Love n Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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16th October 2009, 08:31 PM
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apki ghazal par nazar padi........thodi der se padi isliye muafi chahta hu...... ek baat pahle hi kah du ke ye ghazal bahut jyada dard bhari hai............ aisa mahsoos hua ki koi apna dil jala jala ke diwali mana raha ho.......... ap kahti hai ye ishq par hai????????????????????? mere khayal se ye apki sab se dard bhari ghazal hai. dard ka ehsaans to dard me koi bhi bayaa kar dega.......... magar yaha dard ka ehsaans ishq me bayaa hua hai........bahut hi jyada raw emotions ke saath.............mujhe lagta nahi ki apne is ghazal ko likhne ke baad, ek baar bhi, kisi bhi tarah se,isko durust karne ki koshish bhi ki hai apne...... is ghazal me adaigi dekhne ka koi faida nahi..............is ghazal ko kisi tecnical maap dand par taulne ka bhi koi faida nahi........ ye shayri ke hisab se likhi hi nahi gayi thi..... mujhe pata hai. bahut acche regards |
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3rd November 2009, 01:36 PM
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pyari dii sorry for late response par aap bhi mujhe ab tease mat karo pliz...  chupi rustum aur main??....nahi toh!! bas aap doston ne jo order diya hai ussay pura karne ki koshish ki hai maine khushi hui aap ki reply dekh kar ab agla ghazal ishq par na jaane kab likh paungi iss poetry ko padhne ke liye shukriya dii..reps ke liya bhi Love n Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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3rd November 2009, 01:41 PM
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shukriya Shipra ji..............bahot bahot shukriya meri rachna ko padhne ke liye aur itna pyara reply dene ke liye Regards dost _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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3rd November 2009, 01:50 PM
pranita ji
tumne bhot acha lika kuch kuch samjh me aya mere kuch kuch nai, jo samjha bhot acha laga.... Abed Farooqui Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun |
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