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I Love You - 9th November 2005, 07:54 AM

For a special person...

I Love You

If my eyes could ever show the depth of my love for you
I would have never blinked an eyelid when ever I saw you.

If only words could help me express what ever I felt for you
I would have never been at a loss of words when I met you.

If my heart could beat untiringly when ever I think of you
I would have never skipped a hartbeat when ever I miss you

If my soul could epitomize the immortality of my love for you
I would have never sworn of eternal love between I and you

If there was some way to express my feeling of love for you
I would have never had to repeat the three words I love you

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hi - 9th November 2005, 08:23 AM

Dear ROhin,

This is such a romantic and beautiful poem, I lack the words to say how romantic it is! very very nice! very adorable! very touchy and very sweet!

aapki feelings.....bahut romantic hai! that spl person is really very Special! and Lucky!

luv
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10th November 2005, 07:22 AM

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10th November 2005, 08:05 AM

Rohin,

Beautiful feelings expressed beautifully


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10th November 2005, 09:07 AM

hey rohin ...nice one...i liked it
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
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11th November 2005, 12:12 PM

hi Rohin ji..

If there was some way to express my feeling of love for it.....
I would have never had to write here that this is a great composition

bye take care......


An idea of being in love is better than actually falling in love........

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11th November 2005, 12:48 PM

ek dam mast likha hai bhaiya.. sweet sweet

aapki lallu


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11th November 2005, 11:38 PM

very nice rohin....


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Re: hi - 12th November 2005, 09:05 AM

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Dear ROhin,

This is such a romantic and beautiful poem, I lack the words to say how romantic it is! very very nice! very adorable! very touchy and very sweet!

aapki feelings.....bahut romantic hai! that spl person is really very Special! and Lucky!

luv
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i lacked lot more here to say to the love of my life... i just remember words.. kitna? ... i have no answer sweetu....

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12th November 2005, 09:08 AM

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Smile it is worth a lot more.... right?


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12th November 2005, 09:10 AM

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Beautiful feelings expressed beautifully

There are only two ways to express... either say a lot or say nothing... right?


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12th November 2005, 09:11 AM

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hey rohin ...nice one...i liked it
take care
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12th November 2005, 09:12 AM

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hi Rohin ji..

If there was some way to express my feeling of love for it.....
I would have never had to write here that this is a great composition

bye take care......

I am humbled.....


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12th November 2005, 09:13 AM

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ek dam mast likha hai bhaiya.. sweet sweet

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Sweet sweet hai na... bilkul tumhari tarah....

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very nice rohin....

I am glad you liked it dear...


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12th November 2005, 07:27 PM

hey. this is a poem that would fascinate and occupy any ones heart. its marvelusly ritten!!!

keep it up..

god bless, good luk.

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Arrow hi - 13th November 2005, 12:28 AM

Hi,
Very nice poem.Specially this lines :

" If my heart could beat untiringly when ever I think of you
I would have never skipped a hartbeat when ever I miss you "

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Arrow hi - 13th November 2005, 12:51 AM

Hi,
Very nice poem. Specially :
" If my heart could beat untiringly when ever I think of you
I would have never skipped a hartbeat when ever I miss you "

Take Care,Bye.


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13th November 2005, 05:19 PM

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hey. this is a poem that would fascinate and occupy any ones heart. its marvelusly ritten!!!

keep it up..

god bless, good luk.

Reema.
Reema,

i am glad you found it fascinating... and well written... thanks for reading me always...

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14th November 2005, 04:12 AM

Simply Beautiful! Rohin...

Your feelings are oozing out of every line in this wonderful piece of poetry...she has to be a very special, very worthy gal...hai na?

If there was some way to express my feeling of love for you
I would have never had to repeat the three words I love you

hmmn...if you put it this way...who would have a heart not to forgive you anything...luv di

but come to think of it, "I love you" has to be repeated no matter what...and millions, zillions of times...and still it might not be enough...lol


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gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho

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14th November 2005, 08:30 AM

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Simply Beautiful! Rohin...

Your feelings are oozing out of every line in this wonderful piece of poetry...she has to be a very special, very worthy gal...hai na?

If there was some way to express my feeling of love for you
I would have never had to repeat the three words I love you

hmmn...if you put it this way...who would have a heart not to forgive you anything...luv di

but come to think of it, "I love you" has to be repeated no matter what...and millions, zillions of times...and still it might not be enough...lol
Paras di,

bus pyaar ka asar hai samjho... jo pyaar yunh jhalak raha hai... umeed hai bus ek din aisa aayega... ki koi humare pyaar se bhi kahega...u are lucky... hehehehe....

Yeah the truth u said is what i wanted to say thru the poem... no matter how many times u say it its not enough....

right?

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22nd November 2005, 05:38 AM

did i ever tell u i love this poem? did i ever tell u u are one of my fav. writers on this site?


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did i ever tell u i love this poem? did i ever tell u u are one of my fav. writers on this site?
No You haven't so why don't you tell me... Will be waiting... hehehehehe


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No You haven't so why don't you tell me... Will be waiting... hehehehehe
okie dokie

mr. rohin bhargava....i love this poem...and u are one of my fav. writers on this site

hmmm...lagta hai big b ko apni tareef sunni pasand hai...hehe


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okie dokie

mr. rohin bhargava....i love this poem...and u are one of my fav. writers on this site

hmmm...lagta hai big b ko apni tareef sunni pasand hai...hehe
Well sister.... kabhi kabhi... big b... ki tareef kardo... fayde mein rahogi... kab kya pata koi gift mil jaaye.... hehehehe


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