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9th November 2005, 07:54 AM
For a special person...
I Love You
If my eyes could ever show the depth of my love for you
I would have never blinked an eyelid when ever I saw you.
If only words could help me express what ever I felt for you
I would have never been at a loss of words when I met you.
If my heart could beat untiringly when ever I think of you
I would have never skipped a hartbeat when ever I miss you
If my soul could epitomize the immortality of my love for you
I would have never sworn of eternal love between I and you
If there was some way to express my feeling of love for you
I would have never had to repeat the three words I love you
-- Rohin Bhargava
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hi -
9th November 2005, 08:23 AM
Dear ROhin,
This is such a romantic and beautiful poem, I lack the words to say how romantic it is! very very nice! very adorable! very touchy and very sweet!
aapki feelings.....bahut romantic hai! that spl person is really very Special! and Lucky!
luv
Priya
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
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10th November 2005, 07:22 AM
rohin...........
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10th November 2005, 08:05 AM
Rohin,
Beautiful feelings expressed beautifully
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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10th November 2005, 09:07 AM
hey rohin ...nice one...i liked it
take care
Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...
Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun
I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
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11th November 2005, 12:12 PM
hi Rohin ji..
If there was some way to express my feeling of love for it.....
I would have never had to write here that this is a great composition
bye take care......
An idea of being in love is better than actually falling in love........
bhupendra
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11th November 2005, 12:48 PM
ek dam mast likha hai bhaiya.. sweet sweet
aapki lallu
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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11th November 2005, 11:38 PM
very nice rohin....
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
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12th November 2005, 09:05 AM
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Originally posted by LuvPriya
Dear ROhin,
This is such a romantic and beautiful poem, I lack the words to say how romantic it is! very very nice! very adorable! very touchy and very sweet!
aapki feelings.....bahut romantic hai! that spl person is really very Special! and Lucky!
luv
Priya
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i lacked lot more here to say to the love of my life... i just remember words.. kitna? ... i have no answer sweetu....
Take Care
Rohin
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12th November 2005, 09:08 AM
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rohin...........
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Smile it is worth a lot more.... right?
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12th November 2005, 09:10 AM
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Rohin,
Beautiful feelings expressed beautifully
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There are only two ways to express... either say a lot or say nothing... right?
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12th November 2005, 09:11 AM
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hey rohin ...nice one...i liked it
take care
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Thanks yaar...I am glad u did....
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12th November 2005, 09:12 AM
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hi Rohin ji..
If there was some way to express my feeling of love for it.....
I would have never had to write here that this is a great composition
bye take care......
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I am humbled.....
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12th November 2005, 09:13 AM
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ek dam mast likha hai bhaiya.. sweet sweet
aapki lallu
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Sweetu....
Sweet sweet hai na... bilkul tumhari tarah....
Sweet
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12th November 2005, 09:14 AM
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very nice rohin....
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I am glad you liked it dear...
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12th November 2005, 07:27 PM
hey. this is a poem that would fascinate and occupy any ones heart. its marvelusly ritten!!!
keep it up..
god bless, good luk.
Reema.
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hi -
13th November 2005, 12:28 AM
Hi,
Very nice poem.Specially this lines :
" If my heart could beat untiringly when ever I think of you
I would have never skipped a hartbeat when ever I miss you "
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Take Care,Bye.
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13th November 2005, 12:51 AM
Hi,
Very nice poem. Specially :
" If my heart could beat untiringly when ever I think of you
I would have never skipped a hartbeat when ever I miss you "
Take Care,Bye.
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13th November 2005, 05:19 PM
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hey. this is a poem that would fascinate and occupy any ones heart. its marvelusly ritten!!!
keep it up..
god bless, good luk.
Reema.
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Reema,
i am glad you found it fascinating... and well written... thanks for reading me always...
Take Care
Rohin
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14th November 2005, 04:12 AM
Simply Beautiful! Rohin...
Your feelings are oozing out of every line in this wonderful piece of poetry...she has to be a very special, very worthy gal...hai na?
If there was some way to express my feeling of love for you
I would have never had to repeat the three words I love you
hmmn...if you put it this way...who would have a heart not to forgive you anything...luv di
but come to think of it, "I love you" has to be repeated no matter what...and millions, zillions of times...and still it might not be enough...lol
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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14th November 2005, 08:30 AM
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Simply Beautiful! Rohin...
Your feelings are oozing out of every line in this wonderful piece of poetry...she has to be a very special, very worthy gal...hai na?
If there was some way to express my feeling of love for you
I would have never had to repeat the three words I love you
hmmn...if you put it this way...who would have a heart not to forgive you anything...luv di
but come to think of it, "I love you" has to be repeated no matter what...and millions, zillions of times...and still it might not be enough...lol
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Paras di,
bus pyaar ka asar hai samjho... jo pyaar yunh jhalak raha hai... umeed hai bus ek din aisa aayega... ki koi humare pyaar se bhi kahega...u are lucky... hehehehe....
Yeah the truth u said is what i wanted to say thru the poem... no matter how many times u say it its not enough....
right?
Take Care
Rohin
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22nd November 2005, 05:38 AM
did i ever tell u i love this poem? did i ever tell u u are one of my fav. writers on this site?
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»~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~«
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I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life,
marveling at the different plants and flowers
on the way....some hurt, yet some love...
~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~
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22nd November 2005, 07:40 AM
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did i ever tell u i love this poem? did i ever tell u u are one of my fav. writers on this site?
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No You haven't so why don't you tell me... Will be waiting... hehehehehe
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23rd November 2005, 01:31 AM
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No You haven't so why don't you tell me... Will be waiting... hehehehehe
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okie dokie
mr. rohin bhargava....i love this poem...and u are one of my fav. writers on this site
hmmm...lagta hai big b ko apni tareef sunni pasand hai...hehe
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I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life,
marveling at the different plants and flowers
on the way....some hurt, yet some love...
~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~
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28th November 2005, 07:14 AM
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okie dokie
mr. rohin bhargava....i love this poem...and u are one of my fav. writers on this site
hmmm...lagta hai big b ko apni tareef sunni pasand hai...hehe
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Well sister.... kabhi kabhi... big b... ki tareef kardo... fayde mein rahogi... kab kya pata koi gift mil jaaye.... hehehehe
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