Ek Barish!

gulabjamun_4_u · **Ek Barish! -** 1st March 2005, 08:26 PM

Khwaab dekha bhi nahi aur tut gaye

Woh humse mile bhi nahi aur ruth gaye

Hum jaagte rahe duniya soti rahi

Ek baarish hi thi jo saath roti rahi

azim

soni_sonal · 2nd March 2005, 08:33 PM

hi azimji

kya baat kahi hai
mazaa aa gaya
itni sachchi itni achchi baat kahi hai
daad kubul kijiye

sonal

gulabjamun_4_u · **hi sonal -** 2nd March 2005, 08:41 PM

hi sonal je

aap ko maza aya to muje bhi yeh sunke bahoot maza aya ke aap ko maza aya aap ke daad dil se kabool ke.

azim

nice_off_me · 2nd March 2005, 09:00 PM

wow its too good azim jee buhut acha likha hai

likhte rahiyega.

unforgetable simran
~*~*~*~**~~*~*~**~*~*
love is god,god is love
love is u,love is me
love is all

gulabjamun_4_u · **hi simran -** 3rd March 2005, 08:30 AM

hi simran

thanks for appreciating any ways hope u be in touch

azim

Pulkit_gupta · 3rd March 2005, 01:13 PM

Hi Azim!

Kya haal hian Dost!! Ummeed hai acche honge...

Bahut accha sher laga hai tumne... Good one.. Likhte rehna

gulabjamun_4_u · **hi pulkit -** 3rd March 2005, 02:02 PM

hi dear pulkit

salam saab lagta hai bahoot dino baad aapko time mila hai aap ke es dost ke liye chalo koi baat nahi hamein kooshi hai ke yaad to rakha nahi to hum samaj rahe the ke aap bhool gaye doosre logoon ke tarah.

thanks once again dear for ur reply and ya even ur posting good ones take care.

tumhara dost
azim

friendnidhi · 3rd March 2005, 02:40 PM

baut acha likha hai gulabji kep it up

Regards Nidhi

gulabjamun_4_u · **hi nidhi -** 3rd March 2005, 05:55 PM

hi nidhi

thanks for ur appreciation hope u be in touch

azim

pallavi_here · 4th March 2005, 12:37 AM

gulab ji....
this is tooo touchy....so sweet.... padhte hi dil ko chhu gaya...
really nice...

nehalj4u · 4th March 2005, 01:59 AM

dear azim ji,

dil ki baton ko hothon se nahi kahte
yeh fasana to nigahon se bayan hota hai

and my experience is

sapne sach hote hai

gulabjamun_4_u · **hi nehal -** 4th March 2005, 11:12 AM

hi nehal je

thanks for ur reply yeh baat bih sach hai jo aap ne kahe hai waise muje kabhi sapne aate he nahi hai ke sach hone ka sawal ho

just kidding waise thanks for ur appreciation.

azim

gulabjamun_4_u · **hi pallavi -** 4th March 2005, 11:14 AM

hi pallavi je

thanks for ur appreciationg aur aap ke reply ke liye waise aap ko pasand aaye yeh sunke muje kooshi hooe chalo accha hai meine itne shayri post ke hai oos mein se aap ko ek to pasand aaye

any ways take care and hope u be in touch wais mera yahoo ka id hai azim_0072002@yahoo.co.in

mera real name azim hai.

pallavi_here · 4th March 2005, 01:03 PM

hello again azim ji...
aapne to bahut badi baat keh di...hum aapki sabhi post padhte hain..but reply abhi kiya tha...aur sach me bahut achha likhte hain, ye hum bahut pehle maan chuke the...but aaj majboor ho gayi thi reply karne ke liye..hope i 'll c u again..
take care
bye

gulabjamun_4_u · **hi pallavi -** 4th March 2005, 03:22 PM

hi pallavi

Maafi chata hoon Gustakhi ke

kyoon ke muje nahi pata tha ke tum meri saari shyries padte ho aur ha agar nahi bhi padte to koi baat nahi the kyoon ke kissi ke saath mein zabardasti to nahi karsakta

just kidding hope ke aap meri baat ka boora naih manegein and hopefully u will be in touch.

azim

pallavi_here · 4th March 2005, 05:10 PM

maafi maangne ki jarurat nahi thi azim ji....ye kehkar to dil dukha diya..its okkk plzz.... & i 'll b in touch no doubt..bahut baar aisa hota hai ki hum padhte sab kuchh hain but jaweaab nahi de paate...but jaada der rukna humne munasib nahi samjha...aur aapko likhna hi padha..
nice to meet uu
take care bye

komal5 · **hi! -** 4th March 2005, 05:14 PM

Azim ji....

apki post par nazar theher zarur jati hai
padhkar kashish koi chhukar guzar jarur jati hai..!
its cute..!
keep writing
tc
komal

gulabjamun_4_u · **hi pallavi -** 4th March 2005, 06:05 PM

hi pallavi

hmmmmmmm

kafi intereseting jawab diya hia aap ne waise aap ke feeling ke kadr karta hoon mein aur ha meine aap ka dil dukhaya hai ooske liye bhi maffi chata hoon hope ke aap muje maaf kardegein

any ways its really nice that ur in touch with me .

azim

gulabjamun_4_u · **hi komal -** 4th March 2005, 06:06 PM

hi komal je

aapne jis andaz mein reply likha hia hamein padke hamare dil mein utar jata hai pata nahi itne pyare lafz kaise use karletein hai lagta hia aap instant shayr hai.

azim

dard_thesorrow · **Re: Ek Barish! -** 5th March 2005, 11:21 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by gulabjamun_4_u
Khwaab dekha bhi nahi aur tut gaye

Woh humse mile bhi nahi aur ruth gaye

Hum jaagte rahe duniya soti rahi

Ek baarish hi thi jo saath roti rahi

azim

wah azim ji
now just click the link which i have posted please its importanthttp://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...threadid=29332

ruhani · 5th March 2005, 11:43 AM

dear jubin,
aap ne pm karke yeh link check karne ko bola n i did it. well buddy i m srry no comments as i knw no action wud be taken. i am srry for u bt just to tell u something in open. take it lightly as i knw no action wud be taken n u wud be hurted. so plz forget this issue here only. yahan hum jaiso ki koi bhi sunwayi nahi hai. infact actions wud be taken in wrong ways. so plz its a request to forget it n leave it here n then. i hope u understand wat i mean to say. take care. god bless u.

shadow · 12:07 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ruhani
dear jubin,
aap ne pm karke yeh link check karne ko bola n i did it. well buddy i m srry no comments as i knw no action wud be taken. i am srry for u bt just to tell u something in open. take it lightly as i knw no action wud be taken n u wud be hurted. so plz forget this issue here only. yahan hum jaiso ki koi bhi sunwayi nahi hai. infact actions wud be taken in wrong ways. so plz its a request to forget it n leave it here n then. i hope u understand wat i mean to say. take care. god bless u.

Ruhaniji please do not comment in negative manner and action is taken for such matters AFAIK. Advice would be to the person who copied, to mention the author or make a note that this is copied. These mistakes are repeated inspite of warnings, rules need to be followed by each individual since each post could not be checked by moderators. Let us not trigger an debate here again, want to tell that please check the rules of the forum before posting.

gulabjamun_4_u · **hi shadow -** 6th March 2005, 12:09 PM

hi shadow and ruhani

this shyrie is posted by me come friends plzz no fight so forget every thing and miss ruhani plzzz hope u should be softhearted while talking and shadow even u too plzzzz this is my humble request to u both.

azim

ruhani · **Re: hi shadow -** 6th March 2005, 12:15 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by gulabjamun_4_u
hi shadow and ruhani

this shyrie is posted by me come friends plzz no fight so forget every thing and miss ruhani plzzz hope u should be softhearted while talking and shadow even u too plzzzz this is my humble request to u both.

azim

well friend i m not here to discuss anything. i was invited through pm by jubin n i just requested him to leave this matter here n then. well i have not said anything to shashi n u. so i m not here for any debate. thx so much buddy for replying. take care n god bless u with his fine glitters

gulabjamun_4_u · **hi ruhani -** 6th March 2005, 04:58 PM

hi ruhani

its was really nice seeing ur reply its its ok my mistake ok i just wanted that every one should be very friendly thats it .

sorry if i have hurted u

azim